2010年作文预测
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2010年作文预测——地震慰问信

A Letter of Condolence慰问信

中国青海玉树大地震灾害严重,已造成***多万人无家可归。请你代表 我校写一封慰问信向灾区人民 表示关怀和慰问。

1. 简要描述灾区的情况

2. 对灾区人民表示关怀和慰问

3. 表达灾后重建家园的信心

第一篇(范文)

Dear victims,

A powerful earthquake hit your hometown, Yushu in Qinghai province month ago. It is also a terrible natural disaster for our whole nation. It has caused both financial and life loss. Until now, approximately seventy thousand people lost their lives due to the earthquake and much more were injured seriously. Six million people have no homes to return as the majority of the buildings were collapsed.

These days we keep watching the staggering deathroll and hearing the heart-wrenching stories from the Yushu earthquake. We are so much saddened that many children lost their parents and many couples lost their lovers. I could not help but cry when hearing of the moving stories that happened during the disaster. And we are so much touched by the true outpouring of effort and emotion from all over the country. You are not alone and you won’t feel lonely. Our whole nation is a big family, and every member would like to give a helping hand by all means, such as donating money, time, energy and blood to the people in the stricken area. We, 1.3 billion Chinese people shed the same tear sharing the same hopes.

A series of actions has been taken since the earthquake happened. A majority of Chinese people are doing whatever they can to lend a hand. I believe, with the assistance of people in all walks of life, your after-disaster reconstruction will be dealt with at a fantastic speed. The stricken area will soon be restored. And I hope you can pull yourself together and muster up courage to face the future. We will overcome any difficulty, because we are Chinese. Ten thousand people beat everything with a single undying heart".

Try to look on the bright side of things. The future will be bright, cheer up!

Yours sincerely

*** 第2篇(范文)

Dear victims,

The earthquake which happened one month ago in Qinghai province is an enormous disaster for our whole nation. It has caused both financial and life loss. Until now, fifty thousand people lost their lives due to the earthquake and many more were injured seriously. Five million people have no homes to return as the majority of the buildings were collapsed

We are sorry about this accident. It’s a pity that many children lost their parents and many couples lost their lovers. I could not help but cry when hearing of the moving stories that

happened during the disaster.

Our whole nation is a big family; every member would like to give a helping hand to the people who suffered from the earthquake. We must show our warm-heartedness and make donations to the stricken area so that their broken heart can be warmed.

A series of actions has been taken since the earthquake happened. I believe the stricken area will soon be restored with the soldiers and other warm-hearted people’s help. The future will be bright, cheer up!

Yours sincerely ***

Certificate Craze On Campus

1) 近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”

2) 产生这一现象的原因

3) 你的看法

行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”; 分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因; 阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。

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Certificate Craze On Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important

standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.

[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is

[10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.

Students ’Pursuit for Famous Brands

1) 现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌

2) 产生这种现象的原因是什么

3) 你如何看待这一现象

行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象; 分析大学生热衷名牌的原因; 阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。

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Students ’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.

[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.

[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents ’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.

[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

1) 简单介绍个人情况

2) 说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额

3) 保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心

行文思路

本题属于情景式命题,要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:简单介绍自己的情况,表明写信目的:申请助学贷款; 说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额; 保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心,最后表示感谢。

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A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

Sep 12th, 2008

To whom it may concern,

I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.

My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major

operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Song Xue