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第 2 页 共 2 页 三、句子扩容的技巧

利用模板

When it comes to the issue of… the majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that … However, attitudes towards…vary from person to person.

some people firmly believe that…, there are some factors contributing to this attitude as follows, in the first place,…in the second place,... On top of that,…

As a matter of fact, it is not often the case. Others have a preference of…, there are several remarkable reasons. For one thing…

四、附加成分作解释说明

方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件,目的等内容。

例一:这样更方便照顾父母。

It will be much more convenient to look after your parents.

拓展:因为父母越来越年迈。 原因

as they are getting older and older. Owing to/because

例二:因广告过多, 影片放映晚点。

There were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film,

拓展:这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。 后果

There were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed. making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed. 例三:安全出口(exit )标志不明, 存在安全隐患(potential hazard)。

The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard.

拓展:万一遇到危险, 观众难以逃脱。 条件

In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape.

例四:对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查

We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday.

拓展:为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式 目的

In order to learn about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday,

we did a survey with the help of my classmates.

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第 3 页 共 3 页 附加成分作解释说明

1. 表达不同原因的概括语

There are several reasons for this.

The reasons are as follows.

The reason for…is that…

The reason why… is that

2. 表示无需说明的事实的概括语

It goes without saying that…

It’s needless to say that…

Ne edless to say,…

It’s obvious that…

加谚语 (Proverb)

锻炼对学生有好处

It is good for us students to take exercise.

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.

集中注意力于学习

We should focus our mind on our studies.

As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should focus our mind on our studies...

怎么添加谚语?

方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件,目的等内容。

常用谚语(Proverb)

Strike the iron while it is hot. 趁热打铁。

Think twice before you do.三思而后行。

Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。

A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。

Do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。

Do it now. 机不可失,时不再来。

Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。

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第 4 页 共 4 页 It is no use crying over spilt milk. 覆水难收。

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果, 医生远离我。

All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。

举例说明法

青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy.

结尾提出倡议或号召

珍惜每一滴水

Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent to this. To protect our valuable water resources, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears.

As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do remember: we are not saving water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference.

“短话长说”方法:

1. 利用模板

2. 附加成分作解释说明

3. 加谚语(Proverb)

4. 举例说明

5. 结尾提出倡议或号召

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第 5 页 共 5 页 写作任务

现在,青少年肥胖越来越严重, 很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章。

参考词汇:肥胖:obesity 垃圾食品:junk food

要求:

1. 字数150左右。

2. 对所有要点要适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。

3. 开头已给出, 不计入总数。

Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made

a lot of parents concerned.______________________________________________________

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要点分析

1、利用模板——如何起、转、承、结

When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity, our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter?

Some are …, others are…

On my part,…

1. 缺少运动

Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before.

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Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework,

2. 饮食结构不合理

Because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many kinds of food, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.

建议1:多参加体育锻炼

In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.

建议2:多吃健康食品, 远离垃圾食品

As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food.

建议3:制定合理的计划, 时间表

Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.

合成文章

Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?

In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. Firstly, because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. Secondly, because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.

In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits, vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.