看表说话写作技巧
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看表说话写作技巧

一、 格式

1、 不写标题

2、 按表格顺序把要点全部写出来

3、 分两段按“总-分”格式写

二、内容

1、总写两句固定开头

2、按表格顺序逐个描写

3、用三种不同的句型表达

4、巧用各种介词和连词

5、总写一句固定结尾(二选一)

模板:

作文一:

Let me tell/introduce a boy to you. His name is GuoZirui and his English name is Patrick. His birthday is on February 26th .(He was born on February 26th . )His favorite food are fruit and vegetables. He thinks they are good for health. He has many toys and he likes toy cars best. He enjoys playing sports. Swimming, basketball and football are his favorite sports. He is good at playing the piano as well.

(This is him, a sunny boy.) Do you like him? /Do you want to make friends with him?

作文二:

I have a friend. Her name is Sally. She is a 13 years old (13-year-old) student. She studies in a middle school. She likes music because it’s interesting. I like P.E. because it’s relaxing. But she doesn ’t like history or math because she thinks history is boring and math is very difficult.

What about your friend?

作文三:

Come and buy your clothes in Liangli clothes store. We sell all out clothes at very good prices. Do you like trousers? We have trousers for only 10 dollars! Do you need shoes? We have trainers for only 5 dollars. How much are our socks?Only 4 dollars! For girls, we have beautiful skirts on sale for only 8 dollar. Come to Liangli’s clothes store now!

作文一:73词

1. Let me tell/introduce a boy to you. 7

2. His name is GuoZirui and his English name is Patrick. 11

3. His birthday is on February 26th .(He was born on February 26th . )6

4. His favorite food are fruit and vegetables. 7

5. He thinks they are good for health. 7

6. He has many toys and he likes toy cars best. 10

7. He enjoys playing sports.4

8. Swimming, basketball and football are his favorite sports. 8

9. He is good at playing the piano as well.9

10. Do you like him? /Do you want to make friends with him?4

作文二:55词

1. I have a friend. Her name is Sally. 8

2. She is a 13 years old (13-year-old) student.7

3. She studies in a middle school. She likes music because it’s interesting. 12

4. She likes P.E. because it’s relaxing. 6

5. But she doesn’t like history or math. 7

6. Because she thinks history is boring and math is very difficult.11

7. What about your friend?4

作文三:62词

1. Come and buy your clothes in Liangli clothes store. 9

2. We sell all out clothes at very good prices. 9

3. Do you like trousers? We have trousers for only $10 !10

4. Do you need shoes? We have trainers for only $5.10

5. How much are our socks?Only $4! 7

6. For girls, we have beautiful skirts on sale for only $8. 11

7. Come to Liangli’s clothes store now!6