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第一段:介绍现象 (3句,主题句(时间+事件+地点) + 支撑句(数据or 举例 or 两者结合) + 自然收尾(第三句若没有把握,也可酌情省略)

时间:当前,最近 Recently ,Presently ,Currently ,Nowadays

过去,Over/In the past decades , In the past (此时的事件里可用 used to do)

事件:好事:受到青睐。XXX has gained more and more popularity

坏事:引起关注。XXX has aroused more and more people's concern

the phenomenon that ... has aroused more and more people's concern

中性:成为普遍现象 XXX has become a very common phenomenon

地点、人物:在国内大学里 at domestic universities and colleges

在人们的日常生活里 in people‘s daily life

在我们的社会里 in our society

在青年人中 among young people 在家长中间 among parents

尤其是白领和大学生 especially white collars and college students

数据支撑: 根据最新的一个调查 According to a latest survey

根据一个最新的在1000名大学生中所做的调查 According to a latest survey of 1000 college students

相关数据显示:Related statistics show that ...

举例支撑:XXX 涵盖了很多方面,从„„到„„

It covers a lot of aspects ranging from ... to ...

其他备用表达:各种各样的,a variety of,a diversity of 一系列,a series of 丰富大量的,an abundance of 包含很多方面,aspects 领域 fields 给人们提供了很多方便和娱乐 provide a lot of convenience and entertainment for us. „ 在人们的生活中占据重要的地位 play a profoundly important role in people's life

举例:高校排名在当今社会很流行。(2010年作文)

(时间)Recently ,(事件)XXX (university rankings) have gained more and more popularity

(地点)in our society,especially among parents and high school students.

(举例法)These rankings cover a variety of aspects ranging from teaching facilities to the job prospects of graduates.

(数据法)According to a latest survey in 1000 parents, around 80% of them say they would take related rankings into consideration before they decide which school their children should enter.

Google 上一篇英语作者的文章开头两句话(现象+数据支撑)

More and more parents are allowing their pre-teen children to join social media platforms despite age restriction and danger of being exposed to objectionable content. According to a poll of 1,000 adults conducted by Liberty Mutual's Responsibility Project, around 17 percent of parents claimed that they had no problem with their pre-teen child using social media platforms, compared to 8 percent of the parents a year ago.

第二段:分析原因,利弊(6-7句,主题句 + 观点1 + 支撑 + 观点2 + 支撑。也可酌情写三个观点)

1. “某人做某事”是出于以下三个原因。 (真题:学生不重视拼写的原因,学生出于不同的原因选择选修课)

学生会考虑以下几个因素,在做某事的时候。 (真题:学生选老师时考虑的因素)

我们可以从„„当中得到诸多益处。首先,它对我们的学习有积极的影响。可以帮助我们开拓眼界,丰富我们的人生和阅历,为将来的工作打下坚实的基础,让我们的大学生活更加的丰富,精彩。提高了我们的工作效率。其次,我们可以有机会去和别人接触和交流。有助于提高我们的社交能力。

1. People do sth for the following three reasons. First, Second, Third (Last but not the least)

Students would take the following three factors into consideration when they…

We can benefit a lot from … First, it has a positive i nfluence on our study. It helps us broaden/widen our horizon, enrich our life and knowledge, lay a solid foundation for our future work, make our college life more colorful and wonderful, helps to improve people ’s work efficiency. Second, we can have opportunities / chances to contact and communicate with others and improve our social skills.(promote , strengthen , enhance )

2. ****可能会引起一些列的问题。(预测:过度上网可能引起一些列的问题。)

首先,它对我们的健康有极其不好的影响(威胁到我们的健康)。其次,它影响我们的效率,让我们无法集中精力在工作和学习上。再次,它影响了我们和他人交际的能力。(这里只有 主题 + 观点123,没有支撑的部分,大家自己酌情补充)

***may cause a series of problems. ***may give rise to a series of unpleasant / undesirable consequences. First, it has an extremely negative effect on our health, both physical and mental.(threaten ) Second, it affects our efficiency and make us fail to concentrate on our work and study. Third (Last but not the least,) it undermines our ability to communicate with others.

3. 任何事物都有两面性,****也不例外。(或者:***是一把双刃剑,它既有好处,也有坏处)一方面(好处,有助于),另一方面(坏处,影响了)

Everything has two sides —— *** is no exception. *** is a double-edged sword ---- it has both advantages and disadvantages.(---- it can be both a blessing and a curse.) On the one hand, …. On the other hand,…

第三段 你的看法,建议(3句左右,自然收尾,可准备一些套话,考试时择机使用。尤其注意第一句不要写错。)

1. 就我个人来说,我认为我们应该用一个理性的态度来对待****。我们要分清它的好处和坏处,合理的利用它。我们在做某事之前,要考虑它的好坏两个方面。

Personally ,in my view, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, I suggest that we should have a rational attitude to „ we need to distinguish between its advantages and disadvantages 。We should take both its positive and negative sides into consideration before we do sth.

2. 为了改变这个局面,我们必须采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。(鉴于它的影响,我们必须找到解决的方案)

(要解决这个问题,需要学校和学生的共同努力。一方面,学校应该制定一些规章制度来惩罚,来预防。。。另一方面,学生要加强自己的诚信,自律意识。)

To change this situation, we must take some effective measures and actions to solve the problem.

(Considering its bad influence, we must find some solutions to it.)

(To solve the problem needs the joint efforts of both school and students. On the one hand, school should establish a system or make some rules and regulations to punish / prevent „ On the other hand, students should raise their awareness of honesty and self-control)

万用模版

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....

随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。 As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.

然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come

up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....

随着社会的发展,人们开始关注............

People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting 求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。

As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. 在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that.... 最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.

人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们带来了很多问题。

...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?"

_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:" 我们该如何

Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,

现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。

作文的展开—按照三步走:

1)题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述,在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描述可以自己控制,如果第一段落字数单薄,可以适当使描述具体化)。

2)在第一步的基础上给出观点,观点视文章主旨可以分为:个人观点(包括方法、途径),和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述;在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。

3)个人观点总结点题(同意异表),简要指出方法途径,如果找不到具体的解决方法,则将话讲得圆滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突,则可以融合)。

A My view on the negative effects of some advertisements

社会上的广告现象越来越多,很多的广告对我们的社会有不良的影响-〉(广告如何多:路边大型广告,报纸一半是广告,电线杆上垃圾广告,电视商业广告频繁。)

Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much of

newspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. However pervasive they are, (尽管他们四处充斥)they always produce a negative influence.

从观点的多个层次描写:1. 白日抢劫——卖家通过弯曲夸大事实来欺骗消费者购买(化妆品);2. 种下不良消费习惯或者价值观(香烟);3. 污染环境(牛皮癣和校园商业海报)。

To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (白日抢劫每天都在发生)as a result of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore the facts. (夸大功能,歪曲事实) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(为了诱导人们消费,不择手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.(化妆品促销就是一个典型的例子) Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在脑海中植下)of consumers, especially young people, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further than cigarette selling. (香烟销售就是一个典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop star broadcast an irresistible message.(传递无法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed posters and handouts have polluted our environment.

个人认为广告负面效应不可避免,要通过严格的法律来减少危害,同时开动脑精,远离它们。

Personally, no one can avoid the negative influence. However, we need to step up law enforcement (加强执法)to minimize the harm of such ads. Meanwhile, as consumers, we need to use our head and keep our distance.

B Two-day weekend

--〉工作效率提高,物质生活富足,人们可能享受2天周末制,—〉(除了工作效率之外:人们对生活水平的期待。)

As the productivity improves, our society becomes more affluent than ever before. As a result of such social advance, a 2-day weekend seems not just possible but also feasible.

从正反两方面描写,每个方面可以从多个角度来论述:1. 有人欢呼,原因如下:1)更长的休息时间,更好的调整精力,更高的效率为新的一周做好准备;2)更长的时间与家人分享,更加融洽家庭关系;3)可以进行适当距离的旅游,更好的享受生活。2. 有人反对,原因如下:1)在某种程度上不利于生产和生活(减少产出,办事不方便);2)降低效率(周末未完之事必须拖拉两天;周末活动过多造成假期疲劳)。

The proponents (支持者)happily welcome a 2-day weekend for the following reasons. Firstly, a 2-day weekend ensures more time for rest(确保足够的时间休息). People can better recover from 5 days hard work (可以更好的从天的工作中恢复过来) and get more refreshed and productive for the coming week. Secondly, a 2-day weekend allows more time to share with one’s family. Thirdly, 2 days make possible (使—成为可能) short-distance travels, so that people needn ’t rush through a destination (在一个游玩的目的地走马观花)and can enjoy more of life(更好的享受生活). On the other hand, the opponents(反对者)argue an extended weekend

(延长了的周末) causes incontinences of some kind (某种程度的不便)to life and harm to economy, as workers in service agencies (服务行业)and in companies leave position for leisure and recreation.(离职去娱乐享受) What ’s more, a longer weekend reduces efficiency(降低效率) and does not necessarily promise (确保)more energy for a new week. Anything that happens on Friday but can ’t be finished within that day has to be delayed even longer. After people finish an ambitious travel, they feel exhausted than refueled. (他们感到很疲劳而不是充电了)

个人认为是好事,但是要多方面努力,享受好处的同时尽量避免坏处。

As for me, I readily welcome the 2-day weekend. Still, we need to make joint efforts to minimize the disadvantages while enjoying a happier life.

C Do lucky numbers really bring luck?

--〉中国这个社会长期以来的传统:喜欢吉祥的数字。数字和运气之间有必然的联系么?--〉(如何喜欢:重要事件选择黄道吉日,如婚庆,开业;手机号码选择吉祥数字等等举不胜举。)

It’s a tradition in the Chinese culture to associate lucky numbers with good luck. We select good days for big events like wedding and business ceremonies; we cast huge money for a good phone number or a car plate. Similar examples simply abound in this country(这样的例子举不胜举). However, does this magical relationship exist?

从正反两方面描写,每个方面可以从多个角度来论述:1. 有人坚信,原因如下:1)几千年的民族传统肯定有他的道理; 2)偶尔的神奇现象也能增加信心。2 .不相信的人也有自己的理由:1)数字只是人类发明的符号,与运气无关。2)如果不遵守科学规律,任何数字都不能确保幸运(车祸)。

Those who believe argue that such a tradition dates back thousands of years(这个传统有几千年的历史了). There must be a reason. In addition, occasional coincidences (偶尔的巧合) in history and in life even add to their confidence(增强了他们对这个信心). By contrast, those who don ’t believe also have their reasons. For one thing, numbers are nothing but man-made symbols. How can they have anything to do with luck? For another, however lucky the numbers are(不管这个数字都么的吉祥), accidents can’t be avoided if we turn a blind eye to science(无视科学), say, driving a car while being drunk.

个人认为数字和运气没有必然联系,因此不能当真。同时尊重这样的一个传统。

From my point of view, there is never any relation between lucky numbers and good luck. While we keep this tradition, we should never take it too seriously.