2013江佛联考英语基础写作参考范文
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原参考范文:

It ’s an alarming phenomenon that with the increasingly serious air pollution, the air quality in cities is becoming worse and worse. The gases from cars and factories keep coming into the air without being absorbed by enough trees, because trees have been cut down in large quantities. People’s health will be harmed once these gases are taken in, which may cause a series of diseases like lung cancer. To improve the situation, we suggest that the number of cars should be controlled and the factories should be prevented from pouring out wastes. And when we go out, we should try to walk or take public transportations rather than drive our own cars.

自编简单版参考范文:

Nowadays the air becomes worse and worse because of serious pollution in many cities. This is because the cars and factories give off harmful gas and the trees are cut down. The gas is harmful to / does harm to

our body and may lead to many diseases like lung cancer. To improve it, we should control the number of the cars and forbid the factories to give off the polluted air or water. What ’s more, we should walk more on foot and take more buses when we go out.