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With the development of science and technology, online shopping has become more and more popular during the young. Online shopping is not only convenient for people, but also save s much time and money. On the one hand, online shopping need n ’t spend many hours on way to find a store. In other words, we are busy studying as well as working, so that we have less time to go out for shopping. On the other hand, online customers can be easy to get various kinds of products . However, online shopping also has some disadvantages. Many customers still enjoy shopping in the store. They think that online shopping is not easy for consumers to distinguish the goods whether is a fake without looking at it. In a store, however, they can try on clothes and other goods. W hat ’ more, some customers just enjoy shopping in a store for the process.

As far as I’m concerned, shopping online has good effect on our daily life. Every coin has two sides , we may buy something wrong online because we don’t take much notice of the quality of the goods. But it is still a better for the students to buy what they like for the cheap goods. 你就一个逗号到底了?

注:红色为错的,或者我已经修改的,需要注意的,紫色为我加的。记住一句话,说话要有逻辑性,前后呼应,你说事

情有两面性,你就得把两面性说出来,不能只有一面!!! 继续加油哦……

下次话题: Is it necessary for the college students to pass the CET6?

1. 如今大学都要求学生通过英语六级考试来拿到毕业证书

2. 有些学生认为6级证书对于未来的就业没什么用处,有些人认为可以以此锻炼自己

3. 你的观点