2016高考英语作文
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课标全国1适用地区:河南、河北、山西、山东、湖南、湖北、江西、广东、安徽、福建。

假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume )。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意:

1、词数100左右;

2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考范文:

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to dome a favor.(点名主题:暑假,请帮忙)

To get some working experience, I plan to find a part-time job in a foreign capital company(要点1:想去外资公司兼职). I have already finished my job application and personal resume(要点2:已写好求职申请和个人简历). However , my English is bad. Worse still, I don’t even know much about the format of a personal resume (说出自己的困难) . So, I’m writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and

suggestion. You can correct any mistakes yon find in them. (总结,点名写信目的)

Looking forward to your reply(期盼回复). And I’d be really thankful (表达感激之情).

Yours,

Li Hua(结束语)

课标全国2适用地区:黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、海南、青海、西藏、内蒙古、新疆、云南、贵州、甘肃(最后三个不考听力)。

假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photographyclub)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter 写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:

1. 主题:环境保护;

2. 展览时间;

3. 投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

标准范文:

Dear Peter (称呼) ,

Our schoolphotography club is going to hold an International High School

StudentPhotography Show(你校摄影俱乐部将举办国际中学生摄影展。). The theme of the show is environmental protection(要点1,主题:环境保护). It will start from June 15th and last for threehours(要点2,展览时间). Anystudentwho is interested iswelcome to participate (鼓励投稿). I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to dosomething for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos onthat theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for

morepeople to see them(引申:点名Peter 可以投稿的原因:摄影好,也喜欢为环保做贡献,以及良好的结果), If you want to join, you can send your photos

to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com. (要点3,投稿信息)

Hope to hear from yousoon. (提出期望)

Yours,

Li Hua (结束语)

课标全国3适用地区:陕西、广西、重庆。

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1. 表示歉意;

2. 说明原因;

3. 另约时间。

注意:

1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

标准范文:

Dear Bob,(称呼)

I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstorewith you on Friday afternoon(要点1:点题致歉). I have just found that Ihave to attend an important class meeting afternoon(要点2:说明原因) . I hope the change will notcause you too much trouble. (引申)

Shall we go on Saturday morning? (要点3:另约时间) We can set out early so that wewill have more time to read and select books(引申:另约,强调什么事). If it is convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what timesuits you best. (增加细节,给出两种时间原则)I should be availableany time after school next week.(亮明自己下周随时有空,可不能再延期致歉啦) Yours,

Li Hua(结束语)

英语考场作文写作建议

1. 仔细审题,简列提纲。

2. 扩展提纲,连句成文。

3. 过渡词语,衔接紧凑。

4. 卷面整洁,爽心悦目。

5. 细心复查,确保无误。

附:衔接连贯常用语

表举例示范:for example, in other words, for instance, that is, that is to say 等

表因果关系:therefore,so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result等

表总结概括:insummary, to sum up, in brief, in short, on the whole, in a word, all in all, inconclusion, as has been noted, on the whole等 表转折让步:unfortunately,though/ although, anyway, but, however, otherwise, still, yet, after all, inspite of, on the contrary, on the other hand, in any case, whatever等

表递进过渡:again,also, worse still, obviously, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover,next, similarly, after a while, at the same time, in addition, meanwhile,suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what’s more 等