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题目:

some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

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112 some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

Sample One:

When it comes to the issue (当谈到…) whether children should begin their formal education at a very early age, different people hold different viewpoints. If I were faced with (面对) this issue, I would probably say that young children should spend more time playing. In the following discussion, I would like to present few of the most important reasons to support my idea.

The most important reason is that playing is fun. When we are young, we do not need to worry about anything at all. All we know at the time is play. Why? Simply because it is fun, and playing is something that a child will enjoy doing. This can let them know that life is interesting. In addition, we get the rest of our lives to study, why hurry for these couple of years? If you can understand this, you can understand my point more deeply.

Children can learn during playing as well is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. Nowadays, companies develop all kinds of games for young children, such as 3D tic-tac-toe, Playdough, Lego and so on. You can learn a lot while you play them. For example, when young children play three-dimension (三维的) tic-tac-toe, they establish the idea of the three-dimension in their mind. They not only think things on one plane, but also on numerous planes in all directions. This could be very helpful with future education in math, and the child may be interested in a study in math later on. Don't you think the above example is very persuasive (有说服力的)?

Admittedly (当然了—of course), there is an advantage for children who start learning early, which is getting ahead start. Nevertheless, the advantages of playing during early childhood carries more weight than the advantages of studying, so the most attractive conclusion is obvious.

To sum up, given all the reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that playing is a better choice for young children. I think young children should play with their friends and play some meaningful games such as the ones mentioned above.

Sample Two:

Early Education

It’s a good thing that many parents have realized the important of education, but some parents are too eager to start their own program to educate their young children. It’s not unusual to see that a three or four-year-old child busy learning many skills, such as playing musical instruments (乐器), playing chess or drawing pictures, etc. What’s more, more and more students are complaining about the heavy burden of study they are faced with. They find their schoolbags are getting heavier and heavier, and the hours they spend on their homework are becoming longer and longer. This is because parents, on the one hand , are expecting too much of their children and put a lot of pressure on them—they want them to get high scores and always be tops students; while on the other hand, teachers are schools also attach much importance to hard-working and long-hours of study.

However, the fact is that few of the children have any interest in the things they are learning, and even fewer will be successful in the future in the subjects they have learned when they were little kids.

There is a very famous saying, which goes “More haste, less speed” (欲速则不达). Too early education and too much pressure can only kill the talents of young children and make them tired of study. Without considering the age and interests of the kids, parents are actually killing their curiosity and their right to make their own choice. The so —called (所谓的) early education will do great harm to the children’s self-improvement. Therefore, if the parents really wish their children can get better education, they should first think of the children’s interests, and make reasonable plans according to the age and interests of their children.

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