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1 英语饼形图写作思路

Given is a pie char which clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in how to celebrate Spring Festivals. Overall, those who spend this traditional holiday at home have the

largest proportion, which accounts for 53%; then, the next/second are those who visiting friends and relatives, with 27%, followed by people who celebrate it by traveling, at 16%; finally come those who study or exercise on Chinese New Year, with only 4%. Such a scenario can be naturally associated with the significance of Spring Festival for Chinese people, but what results in these differences? To my understanding, at least two reasons can account for this phenomenon. For one thing, Chinese people are best characterized by their strong sense of family, which enables a majority of individuals to celebrate Spring Festival together with family members or relatives. For another,

compared with before, some people are richer /wealthier and they have more freedom during the vacation; therefore, many people choose celebrating this holiday by traveling.

Accordingly/Anyway, it is advisable for governments to focus more eyesight on

people ’s diverse/various demands for celebration. Then, it is essential for them to work out comprehensive strategies to strengthen transportation during Spring Festival vacation.

译文:

所给是一个饼状图,清晰展示了人们在“如何过春节”方面的显著差异。总体上,在家中过春节的人们有最大的比重,达到了53%;排在第二位是走亲访友者,占27%;紧随其后的是有16%的人旅游过年;最后只有4%的人选择充电或健身过年。

2 这样的情景可以自然联系到春节对中国人的重要性,

但是什么导致了这些差异?在我看来,至少两个原因可以解释该现象。一方面,中国人的突出特征是他们比较强的家庭观念,这使得绝大部分人都与家人或亲戚一起庆祝新年。另一方面,与过去相比,一部分人富裕了而且在春节假期有更多的自由;因此,很多人选择旅游过年。

因此/无论如何,政府应该重视人们不同的庆祝形式要求。此外,他们有必要制定综合策略去提升春节假期的交通。

The pie graph demonstrates the detailed structure of the cost of the project.

As we can see, the production occupies almost the quarter of the expense (24.48%),

which is not a surprise, for the main process of a project is the production. Then, facilities, account for around one-fifth (20.98%) of the outlay and the third contribution is the labor cost, which is 17.48%. According to the chart, the traditional cost: the production, the

facilities and the labor cost are still in charge of the majority (62.94%) of the expenditure. The rest (37.06%) of the expenditure is shared by several factors concern about law and management: licenses (12.59%), taxes (10.49%), legal (8.33%) and insurance (5.59%). It is certain that the material cost, which is comprised by the production, the facilities and the labor, dominates the outlay of a project. However, the nonmaterial cost (licenses, taxes, legal and insurance) is unremarkably less than the former, responsible for nearly 40% of the sum. Given that all kinds of innovations to cut down the material cost have been used during all the history of industry, the latter should, and would play a much more important role in controlling the entire outlay in the future.

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第一段的写法

饼图第一段描述:

Investment in

Shanghai from Different Countries and Regions

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5 第二段的原因

承上启下的句子:

① What contributed to these changes/differences? I think there are many reasons.

② Many reasons, I believe, can account for these changes/differences.

③ There are many reasons for these changes/differences as follows.

In the first place /To start with, /First and foremost,__________.

Moreover/ What's more, ___________.

The last but not least ,_________________.

(一)正向增加的原因

一.万能句式:旅游/出国读书的人/电脑/手机/汽车/网民数量增多

1. With the rapid development of the economy, there is a remarkable improvement in people' s living standards. To a certain extent, people are able to afford the 手机/汽车/旅游的费用/电脑/出国读书的费用

2.With the rapid development of advanced science and technology ,the price of 手机/汽车/东西is so cheap that everyone is able to afford it.

二.网民数量增加,进口车数量增加

相关词汇:

netizen=Internet user 网民 imported car 进口汽车

原因:

1. With the rapid development of the economy, there is a remarkable improvement in people' s living standards. To a certain extent, people are able to afford the ①computer ②imported ca 2.Advanced science and technology play an increasingly important role in which p romotes more and more 3. The government advocates the policy of and the price of importe d cars is cheaper than people, which prompts more and more people buy imported cars.

4. fairly convenient and efficient for people’s life, (to a certain exten t,) which promotes more and more people

三.旅游/出国旅游人数增多

相关词汇:

Traveling [n/v-ing] Travel [n/v]

Travel abroad/travel in foreign countries

Tourism industry 旅游业

原因:

1. With the rapid development of the economy, there is a remarkable improvement in people' s living standards. To a certain extent, people are able to afford 2. People are usually under this competitive an effective way to relieve their stresses and get relaxation.

6 3.People think/consider it is important to 【of course, i s a sure way to achieve this goal/these goals. 】

4. Advanced science and technology plays an increasingly important role in the tourism indust ry ,which prompts more and more people go to travel (abroad).

5. The government advocates the policy of giving priority to the development of the tourism i ndustry which prompts more and more people go to travel (abroad).

四.出国读书人数增多、考研(接受继续学习)人数增多的原因

相关词汇:

Further education 继续教育University 大学Diploma 文凭Certificate 证书

Graduate 本科生Postgraduate 研究生

原因:

1. With the rapid development of the economy, there is a remarkable improvement in people' s living standards. To a certain extent, ①people are able to afford ②2. People are usually under great work/employment stresses in this competitive an effective way to improve their overall / comprehensive quality of living.

3.People think it is important/vital/significant to ②this new time. of course, is a sure wa y to achieve this goal /these goals 】

4.The government advocates the policy of giving priority to the development of education, (to a certain extent,) which prompts more and more people to study abroad.

五.醉酒驾车的人数减少

相关词汇:

drunk driving [n]醉酒驾驶 safe driving[n]安全驾驶

drunk driver 醉酒司机 punish 惩罚 authority 官方

原因:

1. Our government’s relevant laws and regulations play an impor tant role in the number of less drunk driving. For instance, punishing people who drive when they are drunk , suspendin g their driving licenses and so forth.

2. The public service announcement and media have been advocating the danger of drunk driving, which makes people have the awareness of safe driving.

3. Celebrities set up good examples for average people in safe driving.

4. People realize the value of their lives.

(二)负面增加的原因

负向增加的原因可以从以下几个方面写(不利的数据变化,如交通事故案件数增加,青少年犯罪案件数增加):

1. the increasing use/number

2. people’s ill attitude and improper behaviors

7 3. lack of the awareness

4. lack of instruction and poor regulation

解决问题的方法可以从以下几个方面写

1. education

2. relevant laws and regulations

3. punishment

4. better facilities or substitute

5. set up good examples

一. 交通事故案件数增加

相关词汇:

Traffic accident 交通事故 Pedestrian 行人

The rate of accident 交通事故率

原因:

1. With the rapid development of the economy,there is a remarkable improvement in people's living standards and people are able to afford cars,which lead to the increasing number of c ars on the roads.

1. Drivers driving under the influence of alcohol are responsible for the high rate of accide nt.

2. Drivers often use cellphones when they are driving ,which distract their attention.

3. Pedestrians and drivers disobey the traffic rules.

4. Pedestrians and drivers have little awareness of traffic rules

解决问题的方法:

1. The government should implement relevant laws and regulations ,For instance, punishing people who drivedisobey the traffic rules,suspending their driving liceses and so forth..

2. The public service announcement and media have the responsibility to advocate the imp ortance of obeying the traffic rules.

3. Celebrities should set up good examples for average people in obeying the traffic rules .

4. It is important for people to realize the value of their life, then they will obey the traffic rules.

二. 青少年犯罪案件数增加

相关词汇:

Youngest= Young =teenager青少年 Crime 【n 】犯罪

Criminal 【n/a】犯人/犯罪的 computer crime 计算机犯罪

Young crime =juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪

原因:

1.The violent TV programs contribute to the increasing number of young crime.

2.Most of their parents devote their time to their work, neglecting their children’s health ,study ,lif e is the most vital reason in juvenile delinquency.

3.Schools attach less importance to the instruction of development of teenagers’ bodies and mind s.

解决问题的方法:

8 1. The government should implement relevant laws and regulations ,For instance, and so f orth..

2. The public service announcement and media have the responsibility to advocate the imp ortance of caring our young people .

3. Celebrities are responsible for young children to set up good examples in building up he althy lifestyles and positive attitudes to life .

4. It is vital for parents to focus more time and energy on all the aspects of their children, exchanging ideas and emotions.

三. 大学生就业难度增加

相关词汇:

employment 就业 unemployment 事业 job hunter/seeker找工作的人

competence[n]能力 be quallified for this position 有能力胜任这个职位

college expansion of enrollment 大学扩招 Phenomenon 现象

sexual/gender discrimination 性别歧视

develop special skills 发展特殊技能

students’ Attitudes toward employment 学生对就业的态度

Enrich social experience 丰富社会经验

最后一段

表趋势:

第一种:I believe /suggest that with the development of the economy , more and more peoplewill realize and pay more attention to the necessity of _____.少 trend will go on /continue ①in the long term/run (或②in the short term/run 或③in the near futur e).

或②Moreover, it seems that this trend will continue in the better/worse direction in the near futur

第二种:In conclusion, more and more peoplewill realize and pay more attention to the necessity of _____ as the progress of the society. In addition /Moreover/Besides, I suggest/believe that this trend will continue in the better/worse direction in the near future.

第三种:From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion thatmore and mo re peoplewill realize and pay more attention to the necessity of _____ as the progress of the so ciety. In addition /Moreover/Besides, I suggest/believe that this trend will continue in the better/worse direction in the near future.

表建议或解决方法:

1、We should take some effective measures+上面提到的解决方法

2、We should try our best to overcome the problem+上面提到的解决方法