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Today, many people are under much pressure. People are tired of studying, working, and living in the present. They don't have enough energy to make a breakthrough with their own lives. What makes them lose their confidence ofthe future is really a serious problem (去掉to fix on).

Many people have heard the song "Stronger", which has given me a lot of enlightenment. As the lyrics go, we can not be defeated by(去掉the) difficulties. On the contrary, we can beat them and become stronger.(这句的标点有改动)

From my point of view, I believe that only diligence can defeat laziness and become the"big

push". (引号空格) There are some reasons as follows:first, diligence is of great importance in our lives, which can make us stronger than others. Secondly , diligence leads to success, while laziness can result in failure. Just as Martin Luther says: “No opportunity for the lazy, but diligence can make the most common

variable an opportunity”. Last but not least(去掉the) , diligence can help us avoid ignorance, overcome difficulties, and enlighten the mind.

Here are some methods that can help us get rid of laziness and become diligent. We should make long term plans, which can give us a direction and

motivate us. Then the short term plans can urge us to do what we should do at present. Only this way(去掉by) can we overcome laziness and become successful.