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题号:273819 题型:书面表达 难度:容易

使用次数:213

标题/来源:书面表达/全国通用2010届高考各地模拟书面表达分类汇编(三)

更新日期:2010/4/11

【题文】

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(2010·天津市蓟县下营中学高三第一次模拟)

假定你是李华,常和英国笔友Harry 通信。上周你给Harry 写了一封信,谈到一年来你们的生活中发生的巨大变化,并向他介绍了自去年至今市政府为减轻学生负担,提高学习效率执行的一系列措施:不得早8点以前上课;不得加课、补课;每天1小时体育活动;„„请你按下图顺序,描述你们生活的变化和你的感受。

注意:1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 2.词数不少于100。

3.可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯。

Dear Harry,

How are things going with you? Today I’m writing to you about the changes that have taken place in our life since last year.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Oh, it’s time for bed, so I have to stop here. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Harry,

How are things going with you? Today I’m writing to you about the changes that have taken place in our life since last year.

Classes used to begin very early in the morning so we had to go to school without breakfast, which more or less affected our health and studies in class. But now we get up at half past 6 and have enough time to have breakfast.

Now we have an hour for sports each day. We can take whatever exercise or sport we like. After that we feel relaxed and very energetic in class. Apart from that, we also have a variety

of out-of-class activities such as going mountain climbing, or holding an art festival in which gifted students sing and dance or play a drama. Furthermore, as unnecessary burden is reduced, we have less homework to do in the evening, so as a result, we have time to do whatever we are interested in, such as surfing the Internet for useful information, playing some computer games for relaxation. No longer do we have to stay up late, and we can go to bed at 11.

In my opinion, the changes benefit us a lot and we are all happy about them/ the changes. Oh, it’s time for bed, so I have to stop here. Looking forward to hearing from you.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:275050 题型:书面表达 难度:容易

使用次数:337

标题/来源:书面表达/湖南省宁乡一中2010届高三下学期4月仿真模拟

更新日期:2010/4/13

【题文】

Section C

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是李华,今年暑假欲参加英语短期培训班。你在报纸上看到下面的广告并将疑问标记在广告上。请用英语给英国房东写一封120-150词的信,简要介绍你的情况并就你的疑问提出询问。

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to interested in the accommodation you have offered to someone to help with two children. I am a twenty one-year-old boy and I come from China. I have been learning English for several years and besides it, I can also speak two other languages fluently which are Spanish and French. I once worked in a kindergarten for one year, so I know how to take good care of children.

I am enquiring about the time which I should help you with the children and for how long. Moreover you have mentioned languages, but we do not know what languages are requested.

I would like to ask about the experience what kind of experience, teaching or looking after children. Lastly, I am asking about the accommodation what kind of it and how it is like. I look forward to receiving your letter.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:319479 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:997

标题/来源:河南省方城二高20092010学年高二下学期期末模拟试题(英语)/河南省方城二高20092010学年高二下学期期末模拟试题(英语)

更新日期:2010/6/23

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第二节书面表达(满分15分)

给China daily写一篇报道。

看图:解放军某战士王刚在回家探亲的火车上,得知长江沿岸遭遇洪水的消息后,毫不犹豫地加入当地抗洪的队伍中去,并提前返回连队。

要求:

内容需包括提示及图的全部内容。

卷面整洁,书写规范

词数120左右

开头已为你写好。

Notes:洪水floods 部队 units

报道开头已写出:

One day, Wang Gang, a Pla man, was on the train back home when he learnt from a newspaper that

【答案】

One possible version:

one day, Wang Gang, a PLA man, was on the train back home when he learnt form a newspaper that the Changjiang River was

in danger and the floods were washing away so many houses and crops. Outside the window of the train, he found villagers running towards the river with tools and bags on their shoulders. Without hesitation, he got off the train and joined the people in the fighting against the floods. He jumped into the water and stood in it for hours protecting the bank from being destroyed. After hours of fighting, the floods were stopped at last. One of the villagers went up to ask him his name, but he refused to tell, saying goodbye, instead, Wang Gang went on his way, not towards his home but his units.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:310184 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:858

标题/来源:书面表达/甘肃省庄浪二中20092010学年度高二下学期期中考试英语试题

更新日期:2010/6/7

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第三节书面表达(满分30分)

仔细观察下面一幅图画,根据图画的内容,写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。

情景:假定你叫李红,家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown 女士参加,并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。

参考词汇:have a gathering party(聚会)

【答案】

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you/re coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We ’ll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you’ve been there, haven’t you?

Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you’ll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No.7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Cental Park is just in front of it. We’ll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come

on time. We’ll wait for you at the park gate.

Yours,

Li Hong

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:302874 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:787

标题/来源:书面表达/江苏省盐城市2010届高三下学期第三次调研考试英语试卷

更新日期:2010/5/23

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第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

下图是一幅与当前交通状况有关的漫画,请根据漫画内容对当前的交通状况进行评述。

1.仔细品味图中文字的幽默,并适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.作文中得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

As we can see from the picture, two snails are talking about the traffic jam on a highway nearby.

【答案】

As we can see from the picture, two snails are talking about the traffic jam on a highway nearby. The high way is so packed with cars that none of them can run fast.

With the development of society, more and more people are Bow able to afford a car, Some families may have more than one. As a result,traffic jams are seen everywhere,which causes people a lot of trouble. What if an ambulance rushing a seriously sick patient to the hospital gets stuck in it? What if the fire engine is On its way to a fire accident? What if a businessman is driving to an important appointment? All these and other cases may possibly result in heavy losses.

To help prevent or even solve this problem,l think we must respond positively to the government ’s call to make better use of public vehicles,thus reducing the number of

ears occupying the already crowded streets and roads By doing this, we Call also help decrease the release of waste gas.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:335413 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:238

标题/来源:2010届湖北省高考英语总复习练习系列(二)/2010届湖北省高考英语总复习练习系列二

更新日期:2010/7/24

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第四部分:书面表达(满分25分)

请根据下列图表及文字说明用英语写一篇短文, 内容应包括中美高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例、差异及原因。

Pocket Money Sources for High School Students

要求:1. 词数100个左右。短文题目已为你写好并不计入总词数。

2. 不可逐字翻译, 但可适当增加内容, 使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇:百分比 percentage (n.)

【答案】

The pocket money resources for the American and Chinese high school students come almost the same way: money from their parents, income from part-time jobs and scholarships they can get, but the percenttage of each is quite different. Half of the American students' pocket money is from their parents, 35% from part-time jobs and 15% from

scholarships,while the Chinese students get 90% of their pocket money from their parents and only 10% from part-time jobs and scholarships.

It seems that there are two reasons for this difference. One is that the American students have more opportunities to do part-time jobs or get scholarships and the other is that the Chinese students have little time to do part-time jobs.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:327642 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:209

标题/来源:2010年重庆一中高二下学期期末考试/2010年重庆一中高二下学期期末考试英语卷

更新日期:2010/7/7

【题文】书面表达(满分25分)

根据图画中的内容,以It ’s harmful to Civilization为题写一篇词数为100词左右的短文。文章包括以下三个部分: 1)简述图画内容; 2)说明图画所反映的主题;

3)写出自己的看法。关键词:cheat, quarrel, spit, litter, jump the queue

【答案】

In our school, some students do not behave well at all. As is shown in the following pictures, some spit as well as litter everywhere whenever they want. Some cheat in exams while some jump the queue when they are waiting to get their meals in the dining-hall. Some students even quarrel in public or fight against each other. All the above behavior is of no good to building a friendly and harmonious society.

As a citizen in this civilized society, we should form good habits and develop a sense of responsibility. We must know that every bit of the improvement of our civilization calls for the efforts of every member living in this large community.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:307651 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:101

标题/来源:书面表达/2010届高考考前书面表达经典预测一百篇(上)

更新日期:2010/6/5

【题文】

5月3日,你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。

注意:

1、日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增减细节,使日记连贯;

2、词数100左右。

【答案】

One possible version:

Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:335117 题型:书面表达 难度:较易

使用次数:942

标题/来源:2010年安徽省高三全国大调研考试(一)/安徽省2010年高三全国大调研考试一

更新日期:2010/7/24

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第二节书面表达 (满分25分)

仔细观察下图,给某英文报纸写一篇120—150字的短文。短文应主要包括以下内容:

1、简要描述图中的内容; 2、图片中所反映的现象: 3、你对此现象的看法和建议。

【答案】

As is described in the picture, an increasing number of private cars are running in big cities.

It is certain that private cars have brought us a lot of convenience and e0mfort. But meanwhile, they have brought more traffic jams too. The situation is sometimes so seri01is that people have to queue for miles in streets waiting and wasting their time on the way. And serious pollution is another problem caused by the many vehicles. Therefore, the government has to limit the number of cars running in the streets. In my opinion, public transportation services such as buses, taxis and subways should be encouraged in order to settle the problem. And people's awareness to protect our environment also needs to be promoted. If possible, they are encouraged to take public transportation, or even ride bikes or walk, which will not only save energy but also benefit their health."

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:1474858 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:539

标题/来源:2013届江苏省泰州二中高三第二次限时作业英语试题(带解析)

更新日期:2013/2/24

【题文】请根据下面这幅漫画写一篇150词左右的短文。

要求:

1. 请阐述温室效应所产生的原因。

2. 简述其后果,应尽可能涵盖图中所有信息(至少谈及三个方面)。

3. 我们该怎么办?

These years, global warming is becoming a serious problem, endangering people’s life.

【答案】不唯一

These years, global warming is becoming a serious problem, endangering people ’s life. Several factors contribute to the rise of temperature. First of all, a lot of greenhouse gas is produced by cars and factories; further more, people burn a lot of coal and wood for their life; the loss of forests is another cause of global warming.

Global warming will cause some harmful effects. In the first place, some islands will disappear because of the rise of sea level, and thus people of certain countries will have to look for new places to live. Extreme weather, will also result from global warming. When temperature rises, the production of crops will decrease, which directly endangers people ’s lives. If the temperature keeps rising, some animals and plants will disappear from the planet, thus destroying the ecosystem.

Facing such a threat, we should join efforts to ‘cool ’ the earth. For example, we can take a subway or bus to work instead of driving private cars to reduce greenhouse gas. All in all, we are supposed to remember it ’s our responsibility to save our earth. (168 words )

【解析】

试题分析:写漫画作文首先要仔细观察画面内容,要观察图画的全貌,要观察背景与人物,要观察图画的细节,还要分清主次。第二,要深入体会图画作者的创作意图,要知道作者在提倡什么,反对什么,颂扬什么讽刺什么,这样在写作时才能把握的准确。第三,要根据观察、体会发挥自己的想象与联想,把作文写充实、写生动。第四,要明确作文写作的目的要求,做到作文与要求相符。

考点:这是一篇议论文。

点评:考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构,尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作练习以外,还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

2.5分

题号:2004536 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:195

标题/来源:2014届北京石景山区高考一模英语试卷(带解析)

更新日期:2014/4/10

【题文】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周六和好友爬西山时你受伤的故事。请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60.

【答案】 Last Saturday, my friends and I went to climb the West Mountain. While climbing, we enjoyed the sunny weather and a beautiful view. We were very delighted to reach the top without much time or effort. However, we found it more difficult to go down, so we went slowly and helped each other when necessary. Though I took care a lot, unfortunately I slipped and hurt my leg badly and could hardly stood up. One of my friends came to me immediately and carried me on the back till we reached the foot of the mountain. I was very thankful and felt proud of having such good friends.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇看图写作,一共四幅图。做题时:1. 认真读图,可知四幅图讲述的是上周六和好友爬西山时你受伤的故事。2. 初步构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核,修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来,看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息,还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

【亮点说明】范文句式写的比较出彩:While climbing, we enjoyed the sunny weather and a beautiful view. 这句话用了省略句, we found it more difficult to go down, so we went slowly and helped each other when necessary. 这句话用了it 做形式宾语, I was very thankful and felt proud of having such good friends.这句话用了动名词做宾语。 考点:考查图画类书面表达

2.5分

题号:352768 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:121

标题/来源:2011届宁夏银川二中高三上学期第三次月考英语卷/2011届宁夏银川二中高三上学期第三次月考英语卷

更新日期:2010/12/18

【题文】假设你是李华,宁夏某中学高中学生,今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE 的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份,根据以下图片提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。 注意:

1.根据图片的内容适当展开,以使行文连贯;

2.开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数;

3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;

4.词数:100左右

参考词汇:短缺shortage;

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning.I ’m Li Hua from Ningxia, China.It ’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.

That ’s all.Thank you.

【答案】

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning.I ’m Li Hua from Ningxia China.It ’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.

As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.Therefore, it’

s high time we did something about it.

Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use .Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water .Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law .Last but not least, it ’s everyone ’s responsibility to make good use

of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.

In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically . That ’s all.Thank you

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:1562873 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:227

标题/来源:2013届浙江省苍南县求知中学高三第一次月考英语试题(带解析)

更新日期:2013/4/19

【题文】下面这幅漫画展现了城市停车难的情况。请根据你对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。 你的短文应包含以下内容:

1、简要描述漫画内容;

2、谈谈你的感想;

3、如何改善停车难的状况。

注意:

1、可根据下面文章开头所给提示,作必要的发挥想象。

2、词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

With the development of economy, more and more families have their own cars, which makes it difficult for people to park their cars in public places.

【答案】With the development of economy, more and more families have their own cars, which makes it difficult for people to park their cars in public places.

As can be seen from the cartoon, a driver becomes annoyed when seeing the notice saying “No vacancy”. There is no doubt that it’s very convenient for people to go

to work or take their children to school by car. Despite the advantages cars have, car parking problems are becoming increasingly familiar to the general public. I hold the opinion that the severe shortage of parking lots is influencing the living environment of those who live in cities.

To solve car parking problems, various measures should be taken by the government. In my view, it’s high time that more parking lots should be constructed to reduce the problems. Besides, people should be encouraged to go to work by bike or on foot if they live near the working place. Only when these

measures are taken can the problems of car parking be tackled.

【解析】

试题分析:本文考查看图作文。首先考生要看懂图的中心思想。本文是关于城市停车难的情况,要点包括1、简要描述漫画内容;2、谈谈你的感想;3、如何改善停车难的状况。需要准确表达. 写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,尤要使用连接词把两方面的情况表达清楚。

考点:考查看图作文

点评:看图作文对考生的要求较高,首先要读懂图形,要求考生筛选出要点或者中心思想,然后再把要点用连接词串联成文。本文要从三个方面着手,不能出现审题方面的偏差。写作时要使用高级的词汇或者句型让文章更有文采。

2.5分

题号:1816389 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:587

标题/来源:2014届重庆八中高三上学期第二次月考英语试卷(带解析)

更新日期:2013/12/3

【题文】请结合图片内容,按要求用英语写作。

要求:(1)简要描述图片内容;

(2)结合生活实际,发表你的看法;

(3)要紧扣图片,有明确的观点;

(4)词数不少于60;

(5)在答题卡上作答。

【答案】

As can be seen in the picture, a tall tree with a big heart-shaped crown is standing

there, protecting her two kids, one of whom is rather small and the other has to bend over.

The picture tries to tell us that the mother tree, in name of love, leaves too limited space for her kids to grow up, which is often the case in our social life. Some parents love and care their kids so much that they make every effort to protect them. In this way parents usually instruct their kids in every aspect and even control their lives, leaving no space for them to grow freely.

In my perspective, children need more freedom to grow up, even if they will meet with failures or frustrations. So, parents, give more space to your kids if you really love them and want to protect them.

【解析】

试题分析: 考察看图作文。由这幅图,我们可以理解讲述的是父母亲对于孩子的关爱。可以从父母对孩子无微不至的关爱入手,也可以通过具体的例子来说明这一切。看图作文对于考生的要求很高,要求考生有很强的审题能力,能根据图表在脑海里勾勒出故事发生的始末,考生的思维量是非常大的。然后根据图表内容组织要点,要注意要点的完整性,不能有遗漏。在完成图表作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】:首先作者的连接句运用得很到位,如第一句As can be seen in the picture;这是看图作文经常使用的串联句,显得训练有素。在语言的组织以及观点陈述方面很有条理,表达到位。高级句型也有很多,如protecting her two kids 分词做状语;one of whom is rather small and the other has to bend over.非限制性定语从句;

考点:考察看图作文

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题号:2031251 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:232

标题/来源:2014届北京市东城区普通校高三3月联考英语试卷(带解析)

更新日期:2014/4/22

【题文】假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“A Volunteer Day ”的英文稿件。

请根据以下四幅图所提供的情景,叙述去年12月5日(The International Volunteer Day )你班志愿者日活动的完整过程。

注意:

1、短文的开头已为你写好。

2、词数不少于60。

提示词语: patrol vt. 巡视 trim vt. 修整

Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the day doing something for our school instead of having classes.

【答案】

Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes.

At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school. We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day.

What a valuable experience I had in the high school! I’ll remember it forever.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇看图写作,一共四幅图。做题时:1. 认真读图,可知四幅图讲述的是你班志愿者日活动的完整过程。2. 初步构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核,修改错误。

5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来,看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息,还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

【亮点说明】所给范文条理清晰,语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子:be divided into被分成,be responsible for 对„负责,take care of 照顾,prepare for 为„做准备,cut them into 被切成, At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. 这句话用了宾语从句, We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school.

这句话用了不定式做目的状语, Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush.这句话表示对比, Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. 这句话用了定语从句,Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. 这句话用了非谓语动词。

考点:考查图画类书面表达

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题号:1140967 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:500

标题/来源:2012年全国普通高等学校招生统一考试英语(北京卷带解析)

更新日期:2012/6/14

【题文】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿。 注意:1. 日记的开头已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于60。

Saturday ,June2 Fine

This morning

【答案】

【解析】这是一篇看图写作,一共四幅图。做题时:1. 认真读图,可知四幅图体现了你所做的一件好事,2. 初步构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核,修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来,看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息,还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

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题号:344544 题型:书面表达

难度:一般

使用次数:542

标题/来源:2011届江苏省南京师大附中高三学情调研考试英语卷/2011届江苏省南京师大附中高三学情调研考试英语卷

更新日期:2010/9/25

【题文】上海至南京的城际高铁(the intercity high-speed train )于2010年7月1日开通。请您简要描述以下两张图片的内容。列举人们对高铁开通的不同看法(至少两点),并谈一谈您的个人观点。文章的开头已给出。

要求:

1.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

2.词数:150词左右。短文开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Only July 1st , China opened the intercity high-speed train between Shanghai and Nanjing.

【答案】

Only July 1st

, China opened the intercity high-speed train between Shanghai and Nanjing. It takes about seventy-five minutes from Nanjing to Shanghai on the High-speed train. Passengers enjoy safe and c omfortable service during the whole jurney.

Compared with other forms of transportation, the high speed train has many advantages. It provides high er speed of travel fro its users. In addition, it helps share the burden of other transport systems. Last but not least, the high-speed tra in service contributes to helping boost economy, tourism and the exchange between the prosperous cities along the line. However, not everyone thinks highly of the high-speed train. Firstly, the ticket price will be about 50 percent higher than the fare for the “D ” trains along the same route, which is too expensive for ordinary wage-earners.

Secondly, most of them are designed to make stops at every station, so covering the shole distance will take nearly two hours.

In my opinion, the high-speed train can be described as a fast, safe, comfortable and environmentally-friendly means of transportation. It will be more beneficial to the

development of our city.

【解析】略

2.5分

题号:1547950 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

3. 建议Grown-up 应正确面对心理压力;4. 介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施。

注意: 1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Hi, Grown-up,

It ’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.______________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Hope my ideas will work.

【答案】

Hi, Grown-up, It ’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I ’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively.

Hope my ideas will work.

【解析】

试题分析:考查半开放性作文。本文的话题是考生较为熟悉的学习的压力,要根据所给的要点做适当的扩充,在介绍具体措施的时候可以从多锻炼,增加睡眠的时间等角度出发做具体的阐述。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。 考点:考查半开放性作文写作

点评:半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。

2.5分

题号:2123564 题型:书面表达 难度:一般

使用次数:972

标题/来源:2014届北京市昌平区高三下学期第二次统一练习英语试卷(带解析)

更新日期:2014/5/30

【题文】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周一你和同学在上学路上发生的一个真实故事。请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少

于60。

【答案】Last Monday, my classmate and I saw a group of people gathering around on our way to school. In order to see what was happening, we got close and found an old woman lying on the ground. The people just stood there, watching and chatting. We were worried about her and decided to take her to the hospital by taxi immediately. It turned out that she slipped and fell. She had to stay in the hospital, so we contacted her family. Soon her son came and thanked us by giving us money. We refused the money and said goodbye to them. Hurrying to school, we found we were late. To our delight, our teacher praised us for what we had done and we felt proud of that.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇看图写作,一共四幅图。做题时要认真读图,下面四幅图描述了上周一你和同学在上学路上发生的一个真实故事,内容要点: 1.看到老人摔倒 2.打车送老人去医院3.给老人告别,4.受到老师表扬,然后要构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。再连词成句,然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。最后反复审核,修改错误。注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来,看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等

相关的信息,还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

【亮点说明】这篇范文出彩的地方是使用了很多语法现象和句式:Last Monday, my classmate and I saw a group of people gathering around on our way to school. 这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语,In order to see what was happening, we got

close and found an old woman lying on the ground.这句话用了不定式做目的状语和宾语从句, The people just stood there, watching and chatting. 这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语, It turned out that she slipped and fell. 这句话用了固定句型, Hurrying to school, we found we were late. 这句话用了现在分词做状语,To our delight, our teacher praised us for what we had done and we felt proud of that. 这句话用了宾语从句。

考点:考查图画类书面表达

2.5分

题号:2031274 题型:书面表达 难度:较难

使用次数:509

标题/来源:2014届福建省泉州市高三质检英语试卷(带解析)

更新日期:2014/4/22

【题文】某英语报举办以勤俭节约为主题的中学生英语写作大赛:要求参赛者根据以下四幅图内容,用英语描述发生在李华身上真实的故事并阐述其意义。

注意:1、文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2、词数120左右。

参考词汇:节俭thrift

One day , Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought.

___________________________________________________________________________________

_________

_________

【答案】

One day , Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought. After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bg byy using a pair of his old trousers. Several hours later, he did make himself a very nice bag. When he showed it to his mother, she was amazed at what he had done and praised him a lot.

Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environment friendly behavior. What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us. Therefore, I believe that thrift is a good virtue for every one of us Chinese to keep.

【解析】

试题分析:本文属于看图作文,讨论的主题是勤俭节约。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

【亮点说明】本文最大的亮点是文章的结构的组织,在第一段里作者主要是对图片教训描述,第二段发表的个人的观点。文章很和谐,是一个完整的整体。同时本文在连接词以及高级句式的使用上很有特色,如which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us.等等。

考点:考察图表类作文

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