作文存在问题
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作文存在问题

1. 审题:这是一则招聘的文章,应用编辑的口吻写,应该使用第二人称。一些同学用第一人称把它写成了应聘的文章。

2. 卷面差、书写不好的现象普遍。

3. 不会灵活使用被动语态,如Reporters are wanted for our school English newspaper.

改错

1. If you have no difficulties communicating with others, you can ….

2. You should be good at writting. / You should have a good written skill.

3. If you have interest in this job, please contact with me.

4. If you have enthusiastic about this job,….

5. Here are some requirements that you need meet.

6. You should have a good ability of observe.

7. If you equal to the job, don’t hesitate to join us.