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April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

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鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是,过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点,根据下表所提示的信息,用英语写一篇短文。

physically.

【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁,所选内容与我们生活相关,考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述,适度发挥,不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚,语言流畅,句式表达多样,用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。

第一节 情景作文(20分) 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据一下四幅图的先后顺序, 介绍指数活动的全过程, 给某英文杂志的" 绿色行动" 专栏写一篇以"Green Action in Our Class"为题的英文稿件。

注意: 字数不少于60。

提示词: 郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were

carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。文章思路清晰,要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

第二节 开放作文(15分)

根据下面提示, 写一篇短文, 字数不少于50.

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

2009高考英语全国I 卷满分作文(海南、宁夏) 【全国卷I 海南、宁夏】【试题回放】假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括:1.外出购物2.替房东还书 K 3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 2)此事已告知Susan3) 尽快回电

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,I'm going out shopping, and won't be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o'clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours, Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文属于提纲式要点作文,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确,各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。

假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David 的e-mail ,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail ,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。

英语作文网

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many

foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your

listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

请你根据下面的提纲,以“我的家乡”为题,写一篇100—120字的短文。

提纲:

(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题,你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题,并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示:1. 要走路去上班,而不是开车或坐车;

2. 每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次,或打球、或游泳;

3. 饮食要健康;

4. 不要工作太晚,要早休息。

要求:1. 短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑;

2.80—100词左右;

3. 开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play

basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

随着阳光体育运动在全国开展,政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视,提出了这样的标语:“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后,校园里出现了可喜的变化,强身健体,增强了学习效果,校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意:1. 词数80—100左右。

2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇:build up one’s body strength 强健身体

reduce diseases 减少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.

Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.

Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The

playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.

Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first

place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.中国公务网 2006-5-28 11:34:59

Olympics and I

Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.

This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world

through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.

Sincerely yours,

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are

responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the

SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.

What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!

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1996年高考英语满分作文(九篇)

作文题目

你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。

注意:1.情况介绍必须采用短文形式:

2.词数100左右;

3.第—句已为你写好。

生词:竞赛—competition(n.)

My name is Li Hua.

满分作文(一)

My name is Li Hua. I’ve seen the advertisement. I want to apply for the job. I was born in February, 1977. I come from Dalian, Liaoning. I studied in Guang Ming primary school from 1984 to 1990. Then I studied in No.6 Middle School in Dalian from 1990 to 1996. The main subjects are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I am good at English and Computer. Last year I won the first prize in a computer competition in my school. In my spare time, I like swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to pop music. I will be glad to work in your company.

满分作文(二)

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in Feb. 1977. I started my school in Guangming Elementary School in 1984 and graduated there in 1990.

Then, I entered Dalian No.6 Middle School. The main subjects I studied at school were Chinese, Mathematics, Physics, Chemistry, English and Computer. I was fond of English and Computer and good at them. What the most important was that I won the first prize in the school computer competition last year. Now, I am very interested in it. I have a lot of hobbies in my spare time, such as, collecting stamps, swimming, skating, pop music, etc. I think I am competent for the job. I am sure I will exert all myself to work hard.

满分作文(三)

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I entered Guangming Primary School at the age of seven and studied there from 1984 to 1990. Then I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated recently. I studied Chinese, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer at School. Of all the subjects I like English and Computer best and I learn them well. Last year I took part in the school computer competition and won the first place. I am fond of listening to music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.

满分作文(四)

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Feb. 1977 in Dalian, Liaoning province. From 1984 to 1990, I studied in Guang Ming Primary School, and from 1990 to 1996 I studied in the No.6 Mid-school in Dalian city. The main subjects which I have learnt are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry, Computer and so on. I am especially good at English and Computer. I won the first prize in the computer competition in our school last year. I also have some hobbies. I like swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to music in my spare time. 满分作文(五)

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in February 1977. I studied in Guang Ming Elementary School between 1984 and 1990. Then I went to

the 6th Middle school in Dalian to continue my study during the years from 1990 to 1996 and graduated this summer. My major subjects at school are Maths, Chinese,

English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer.

I got especially interested in English and computer. Last year, I won the first prize in School Computer Competition. And I have passed TOFEL last year also.

My hobby is swimming and skating. And I also like collecting stamps and listening to the pop music. I hope very much to work in your company and work as hard as I can. 满分作文(六)

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province inFebruary 1977. At the age of seven I went to school. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. From then on I studied in No.6 Middle School of Dalian. And I graduated this summer. The subjects I have to learn at school are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I am very good at English and computer. I won the first prize in the computer competition of school last year. In spare time I like listening to the pop music and collecting stamps. And I like swimming and skating, too.

满分作文(七)

My name is Li Hua, and I was born in Feb. 1977. The city of Dalian in Liaoning is my hometown. I studied in Guangming primary school from the year of 1984 to

1990. Then, I began my junior school in No.6 Middle School in Dalian. In the year of 1996, I graduated from that school when I finished my senior courses.

I studied Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer as main subjects in my middle school, and I did well in English and Computer science. I got the first prize in the competition of computer in my middle school with great honors.

I always spend my leisure time in swimming, skating as well as collecting stamps. I am fond of pop music, too. 满分作文(八)

My name is Li Hua. I think I have the ability to work in your company. Now I want to introduce myself to you, hoping this can help you to know me better.

I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went on with my study in No.6 Middle School of Dalian, and graduated this summer. In the school, the main subjects that I have learned are Chinese, maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. Of all the subjects, I like English and Computer best. Last year I won the first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I like collecting stamps, listening to popular music, swimming in summer and skating in winter.

I think all of these above will help me do my work well in the future, so please give me a chance and you will be surprised at my achievements. 满分作文(九)

My name is Li Hua. I was born in February 1977 in Dalian, Liaoning. I bagan my schooling in 1984 when I was seven. From 1984 to 1990, I studied in Guangming

Primary School. And then I studied in No.6 Middle School of Dalian for six years. Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer are the main subjects which I have learned at school. My favourite subjects are English and Computer, so I do well in them. Last year I won the first prize in the school computer competition. I also have a lot of hobbies, such as swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to pop music.

1、考题示例

假设你是李华,在得知四川大地震的消息之后,作为校学生会主席,你决定给灾区的中学生写一封慰问信,主要内容包括:

1、得知四川发生突如其来的特大地震灾害,心情非常难过;

2、看到你们表现得非常镇定、坚强,感动得热泪盈眶;

3、患难见真情,全校师生向你们表示慰问的同时,共计捐款12万元;

4、美好家园可以重建,希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。

参考词汇:捐款 make a donation to

I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. A better hometown can be rebuilt. Therefore, never give up whatever happens. Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!