实梦四级对比选择型作文
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二.对比选择型作文

这类题型是四级考试写作中常见的题型之一,它的标志非常明显,非常容易辨别。作文题目的目标比较明确,富有针对性,即直接要求考生比较两种观点或两种做法,进而表明自己对问题或事物的态度(或观点),也就是作出选择。此类题目有下面两种模式:

1. 分析观点一的利弊——分析观点二的利弊—— 作出最佳的选择

2. 分析两种观点各自的优点——分析两种观点的不足——作出选择

练习:认真审题,写出下面题目的提纲。

1. Is Honesty an Important Virtue?

①有人认为诚实在生活中并不重要。

②我认为诚实是一种重要的品德。

Is Honesty an Important Virtue?

(主题)分析对诚实的错误观点,并说明自己对诚实重要性的认识。

(开头段)说明诚实在人们生活中的情况,并提出问题。

(中心段1)有些人认为诚实不是非常重要的

① 认为当环境允许或情况不会变得有利时,就可以撒谎。比如:

a. 在约会迟到时编造理由,并不会伤害友谊。

b. 为了避免尴尬我们会编造故事。

(中心段2)我认为诚实是一种重要的美德,因为诚实是为我们好。

① 诚实使我们的生活轻松实在。

a. 如果撒谎就要时时小心。

b. 生活会因此变得很辛苦。

② 诚实能给我们带来信誉和友谊。

a. 人们认为诚实的人可信,有责任感

b. 他们会相信我们。

c. 我们会交很多朋友。

③ 结论:诚实很重要,我们应该努力过诚实的生活。

2.Do you work for money?

①有人认为工作只是为了赚钱。

②我认为工作不只是为了赚钱,还有其他的目的。

Do you work for money?

(主题)分析认为工作只是为了赚钱的错误观点,并说明自己的看法。

(开头段)用工作与收入的现象提出问题,并点明自己的看法。

(中心段1)有些人认为他们工作的唯一目的是赚钱。

① 他们只在乎赚钱多少。

② 他们认为工作是为了付帐而必须忍受的痛苦。

③ 在他们看来工作是没有趣味的,总是枯燥无味的。

(中心段2)我认为工作不仅意味着赚钱,更意味着:

① 工作给我们自尊和自信

a. 工作体现我们的才干

b. 工作是我们自我价值的一部分,我们用工作来定义自己。

c. 事业成功给我们自豪感。

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第十九次 2 ② 工作是为了自我实现。

a. 每个人都有梦想,如果工作得好,梦想就能实现。

b. 工作可以有很大的乐趣。

结论:我们应当了解工作的意义和乐趣,应当享受工作。

对比选择型作文模板1

It is a common phenomenon (for ________ to__________)/ that…..

This issue has aroused public concerns. Some people hold that__________, while others argue that_________.

As to me, I’m in favor of___________. For one thing,________. For another,____________. Therefore.

范文1. On College Students’ Occupying Seats

1. 在大学校园里,占座是很普遍的现象

2. 有人认为,大学生课前占座是不文明行为,也有人持不同意见

3. 我的看法

On College Students’ Occupying Seats

On campus, it is a common phenomenon for students to occupy seats. In the library, classrooms, and even the canteen, you can find books and pens claiming the temporary usage of the tables and seats.

This issue has aroused public concern. Some people hold that it is a wrong and impolite behavior which should be fought against, while others argue that students should not take the blame since colleges fail to provide sufficient study facilities. There is probably some truth in both sides.

As to me, I’m in favor of the former argument. For one thing, occupying seats inevitably worsens the problem of resource shortages. The seats will remain empty until the occupiers come. For another, taking up seats does harm to the harmonious campus atmosphere when friendship and modesty give way to improper competition. Therefore, I strongly oppose this kind of act.

范文2. Should Offering Seats Be Compulsory for Young Bus Riders?

1. 近来,有关公交车上年轻乘客是否应该让座的话题引起热议

2. 有人表示赞成,也有人表示反对

3. 我的观点

Should Offering Seats Be Compulsory for Young Bus Riders?

These days, whether it should become compulsory for young bus riders to conduct good deeds on bus, like giving up seats to needy people, has become a topic of debate.

Some people believe it is just basic good manners for young people to offer their seats to the elderly, the pregnant and the so- called “weak ” groups. It is nothing but maintenance of high moral standards. On the contrary, other people say young people pay the same fare as other riders, and therefore have no obligation to give up their seats. It is in nature a moral rather than a legal issue.

For my part, I think such good deeds as giving up seats to needy people is

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第十九次 3 truly necessary, but the precondition is that one does this out of true willingness. Only when good deed are based on good will are the good deeds meaningful.

范文3:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is It Better to Buy Or Rent? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 房价过高让许多人买不起房,因而不少人选择租房

2. 也有人认为买房才能过得安稳

3. 我的看法

Is It Better to Buy Or Rent?

The price of housing has kept increasing in recent years, which causes a big headache for people living in cities. A lot of people cannot afford to own a real estate property, so they choose to rent instead of buying an apartment. This group of people doesn ’t want to bear burden of mortgage so that they opt for a practical solution. Renting an apartment makes them have a place to stay and thus they can focus on work as well as personal life.

Some other people, however, believe that an apartment owned by themselves make them feel safe and relieved, so they are willing to sacrifice some other aspects of life to borrow money from the bank to buy an apartment.

As far as I am concerned, to buy or to rent is all about people’s personal choice. But when the price of housing is standing too high, it will be better to rent first and wait for the good timing when the price is going down to buy.

Homework:

Direction : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Should Students Follow Fashions? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1. 许多大学生的打扮越来越时尚

2. 有些人认为大学生的主要任务是学习而不是追赶潮流,有人却不这样认为

3. 我的看法

对比选择型作文强化训练:

范文1:

What Is More Important: Character or Academic Achievement?

1. 有人认为考试成绩是评价学生的标准

2. 也有人觉得应该以品格培养为教育方向

3. 我的看法

What Is More Important: Character or Academic Achievement?

What is the criterion to judge the performance of a student? Some believe that the exam marks should be the first standard concerned. A student’s first priority is to study well, and academic achievement can show the result fo a student’s efforts and

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第十九次 4 capability. But some disagree by holding that good character should be considered first when talking about the performance of a student, as character shows that whether a student has correct basic moral value and proper behaviour.

As far as I am concerned, sound character is more important in judging a student ’s performance. Firstly, good exam marks can not be everything as that won’t follow a student’s whole life. But sound character will be the only thing that lasts for long. Secondly, if a student has very poor character, good marks will be meaningless. When the student has grown up, his academic achievement will probably be used for wrong purpose.

I, therefore, believe that we should reform the educational system and care more for student’s character cultivation.

范文2.

Direction : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Does Electronic Equipment Promote Education? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1. 很多大学投入大量的财力为教室添置电子设备

2. 有人赞同使用电子设备辅助教学,有人认为回到粉笔时代更有助于课堂教学

3. 我的看法

Lately a number of colleges are spending large quantity of money on electronic equipment, which is supposed to promote education.

This event has aroused a heated discussion. Some people believe that electronic equipment is a good supplement to traditional teaching. It enables teachers to demonstrate things in a more vivid way by showing pictures or videos. To some extent, students are more involved in the class. In contrast, others are against electronic equipment, which they think will inevitably distract students from study. In their view, teaching with the aid of traditional chalk can make students focus more on study.

As far as I am concerned, electronic equipment is quite beneficial to education. However, we shold keep in mind that electronic equipment is just a means of teaching, which will never overshadow the significance of qualified teachers.

范文3.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Pet Raising . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。

2. 有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。

3. 你的观点。

Pet Raising

Nowadays, with the improvement of the people’s living standard , some people form a habit of raising small or domestic animals as pets. Some raise small dogs or cats as their pets while others raise various birds or fishes as their pets.

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第十九次 5 However, some people object to the idea of raising animals as pets. To them, animals have their own right to live a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people raise animals as pets have a negative influence on the surroundings ,for example, dogs’ chasing people on the street and so on. What’s more, some animals will transmit some diseases.

In my opinion, I do not like the idea to raise animals at pets. We should not deprive them of their natural right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.

范文4.

Fast Food

1. 快餐逐渐成为许多人生活的一部分

2. 有人认为吃快餐能节省很多时间,有人则认为快餐对健康不利

3. 我的看法

Fast food has been increasingly popular in our life. For one thing, more fast food restaurants, both Chinese and western style, appear in the street. For another, more customes welcome fast food. Several years ago, only the young went to McDonald ’s, but now people of all ages rush to fast food restaurants.

The popularity of fast food apparently relates to the fast pace of modern life. Office workers have to turn to fast food because of their short lunchtime. Some families, with both husband and wife working full time, cannot afford the time to cook, so they choose it too. However, evidence shows that fast food lacks nutrition, and if we eat only fast food, it is surely bad for our health.

Therefore, I think, for convenience’s sake, we need fast food. But if we want to keep good health, we should try our best to cook for ourselves.

范文5

Utilitarian Courses or Elementary Courses

1. 目前大学生面临就业压力、实用主义观念盛行的背景下,就课程的内容学生有不同的倾向。

2. 有的人认为实用课程重要;有的人认为基础课程重要

3. 我的观点是……

The phenomenon of tight labor market has given rise to a heated discussion: whether our university should focus more on practical courses? I am of the opinion that our education should equip students with more utilitarian courses.

It ’s true that a university should establish the structure of the students ’ knowledge. And basic courses will help the students to develop such abilities as logic thinking and judgment. However, it is more essential to be armed with advanced science and technology, as is conveyed in the famous saying “The survival of the fittest ”. Only in this way could we survive the cruel competition. What ’s more important, acquiring more advanced utilitarian knowledge, we could keep up with the pace of the information ear.

All in all, I strongly recommend that the courses should be practical so as to adjust the students to the needs of the job market.”

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范文6.

On students Dealing in Stocks

1. 许多大学生热衷于利用课余时间炒股

2. 人们对此持不同态度

3. 我的看法

On students Dealing in Stocks

When many people make a fortune in the stock market, a great number of university students follow their steps and get involved in dealing in stocks too. They deal in stocks in their free time, trying to earn some money and gain some experience in managing properties.

Most people accept this understandingly. They say dealing in stocks provides the students an opportunity to combine what they have learned in school with practice. However, there are also people who take a negative view on this. They argue that dealing in stocks will not only take much of the students’ energy and time, but it will also make huge economic risks. When huge losses occur, they may lead to disastrous results.

As for me, I think university students must be discouraged to deal in stocks, since campus life is not yet ready for the turbulent stock market.

范文7

If There Were No Advertisements

1. 有人认为广告完全没有必要

2. 有人认为我们社会离不开广告

3. 我的观点

Nowadays, advertisements can be found everywhere in a big city such as Shanghai. They shout at us from the television screen and radio loudspeakers, wave to us from every page of the newspaper, signal to us from the roadside billboards all day and flash messages to us in colored lights all night.

Faced with a flood of advertisements, some people wonder whether it is necessary to have such huge sums spent on advertising. They often cite in illustration of it the attractive, but false and deceptive advertisements to which many consumers fall victim. They suggest that since advertising is an entirely unproductive industry and may even harm the customers’ interest, why don’t we stop advertising and use the money to reduce the price of goods? It sounds like a good idea, but they fail to notice the contribution advertising makes to our society. Because the production of a better product to compete for customers ’ money is the goal of advertisers, customers are thus given a chance to compare their products and get the best and cheapest one. Besides, as the advertisement can provide people with a lot of immediate and detailed information as to the availability of a certain product, or a service or a job, it makes life much more convenient. And another thing we mustn’t forget: the fact that we pay so little for our daily newspapers and TV programs is due entirely to the money spent by advertisers.

Advertising performs such a useful service to our society that we can’t imagine

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第十九次 7 what would happen if there were no advertisements.

范文8.

Should Free Music Downloads Be Banned?

1. 越来越多的人开始在网上下载免费歌曲

2. 有人认为这会严重影响唱片业的发展,应该予以禁止,有些人不以为然….

3. 我的观点

Should Free Music Downloads Be Banned?

With the development of technology, more and more people are making use of the Internet and are enjoying downloading all types of materials.

Some hold that this kind of behaviour should be banned because it can destroy the development of the industry. While others argue that they are especially fond of downloading free music. Free music downloads not only enrich their life, but also are good for the music industry because they help increase the popularity of music.

However, from my point of view, it is not advisable to allow free music downloads. For one thing, they violate the intellectual property rights of musicians. For another, they have a negative impact on the sales of musical products such as CDs, which may do harm to the whole music industry. Without good returns, who would like to invest in the music industry? In order that the music industry can develop healthily, we had better ban free music downloads. Let ’s all start to do so with ourselves.

范文9.

Mark Adding Policy of College Entrance Exam

1. 高考加分政策一直是人们热议的话题

2.有人认为应该取消高考加分,有人认为应该加以完善

3. 我的看法

Mark Adding Policy of College Entrance Exam

The mark adding policy of college entrance exam has been practiced for a long time. Although college entrance examination of this year has finished, yet many people pay much attention to the issue of awarded marks.

Some people think this policy should be cancelled. Due to the impression of the mark adding system, the whole test process is not effectively controlled, and the policy has become a tool for some people to ask for interests for themselves. However, others think the policy should be perfected for it is helpful to the students who have some specialties but poor at some other subjects. The mark adding policy can encourage students to attend more activities besides study.

From my point of view, the merits of mark adding policy do outweigh its demerits. Although the policy still has some defects, it will bring more benefits to all if rational criteria can be established.