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1 一.上周初三年级同学进行了一次体检,结果发现同学们的视力下降。请你用英语向全班同学报告原因(如图所示)。并提出倡议:爱护我们的眼睛 养成好的读书习惯

要求:

1. 写出所给要点,不必逐字翻译。

2. 要用所给提示词语,做到语句连贯。

3. 全文字数80以上,开头和结尾不计入总数。

提示词语:

poorer and poorer

become short-sighted

reading habit

Boys and girls:

Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyesight. So the examination report is not very good. _____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really hope all of us are well. Many thanks!

范文:Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyesight. So the examination report is not very good. Two thirds of the students spend too much time on TV, playing computer games or their eyes are too tired. A quarter of us are reading while lying in bed or walking. And a few read books both in strong sunlight and in the dark light.

With the time passing on, the eyesight becomes poorer and poorer. We‟ll regret if we are shortsighted. It is important for us to form a good reading habit. Let‟s take care of our eyes! I really hope all of us are well. Many thanks.

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二.书面表达(10分)

写一篇有关你和你就读的学校开展体育活动的短文。

要求:所写短文必须包括以下提示要点;意思表达清楚,文句通顺、连贯,单词拼写正确, 标点无误;至少写出7个句子,字数70左右。(不包括已经给出的句子) 。 要点:1.学校每年秋季举办运动会。去年运动会上你获跳远第一名。

2.同学们通常有早锻炼、做眼保健操、课后有时打篮球或踢足球。

3.介绍你最喜欢(favourite)参加和观看的运动项目。 4.运动有益于身体健康(health),你准备进行更多锻炼。

My School Sport

范文:My School Sport

I study at No. 2 Middle School. There is a sports meeting in our school every autumn/Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn/A sports meeting is held in our school every autumn. I took the first place/was first in the long jump/won the long jump last year. We usually take exercise in the early morning. We do eye exercises in the afternoon. After school/class we play basketball or football. My favourite sport is football/I like football best. I often watch a football match on TV on Sundays. I think(doing)sport is good for our health/(doing) sport makes us heathier and stronger. I am going to take/do more exercise/do more sport.

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3 三.书面表达

根据中文大意,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。

假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David 的e-mail ,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail ,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。(信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的短文内。)

提示词语:Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important …, listen, talk, read, write

Dear David,

I ‟m glad you‟ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. __________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

范文:One possible version:

Dear David,

I ’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It‟s difficult for you because it‟s quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It‟s also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I‟m sure you‟ll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

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4 四.下面三幅图是中学生丰富多彩课余活动的一瞥——书海拾贝、球场健身、走近自然。请根据这三幅图的内容(可适当扩展),写一篇关于课余活动的短文,题为“Our out - of -class activities ”。字数80词左右。(注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名)

范文:One possible version:

Our out - of - class activities

Our out - of - class activities are rich and colorful. We often go to the libraries to read all kinds of books. We learn a lot more in this way. We also do sports. They can help us keep healthy and strong. The most popular sport in our school is volleyball. I often play volleyball with my classmates. Sometimes we go outside school to learn the world. For example, we go to the country, to study flowers. Through these out - of - class activities, we learn a lot of things that we can‟t learn in class.

五.写一篇有关你和你就读的学校开展体育活动的短文。

要求:所写短文必须包括以下提示要点;意思表达清楚,文句通顺、连贯,单词拼写正确, 标点无误;至少写出7个句子,字数70左右。(不包括已经给出的句子) 。 要点:1.学校每年秋季举办运动会。去年运动会上你获跳远第一名。

2.同学们通常有早锻炼、做眼保健操、课后有时打篮球或踢足球。

3.介绍你最喜欢(favourite)参加和观看的运动项目。 4.运动有益于身体健康(health),你准备进行更多锻炼。

My School Sport

Sample writing

My School Sport

I study at No. 2 Middle School. There is a sports meeting in our school every autumn/Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn/A sports meeting is held in our school every autumn. I took the first place/was first in the long jump/won the long jump last year. We usually take exercise in the early morning. We do eye exercises in the afternoon. After school/class we play basketball or football. My favourite sport is football/I like football best. I often watch a football match on TV on Sundays. I think(doing)sport is good for our health/(doing) sport makes us heathier and stronger. I am going to take/do more exercise/do more sport.

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5 六.书面表达。

在一次英语班会上,老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80~100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名

提示: ①What does your school look like? ②What fun do you have at school? ③Why do you like your school?

Proud of My School

One possible version.-

Proud of My School

My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 2 000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.

We.have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table-tennis. Sometimes we have class meetings. They are very interesting.

I love my school because it\'s like a big family. The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

七. 初级写作

根据英文提示,以“I like the Internet”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,短文开头已给出,所给英文提示词语也必须全部用上。

1. an important part, in our daily life, useful

2. search, download(下载)information

3. read English Weekly, with … help, practise

4. send e-mails, make telephone calls

5. buy, online, interesting, colorful

I like the Internet

The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. ____________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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6 八.书面表达

假定你们学校要举行为期三天的运动会。你是学生会主席,由你具体筹划这次运动会,包括时间、地点、运动项目(不少于5项)等。请你将筹划的情况告诉你班的英国同学Jack 。Jack 擅长跑步,你邀请他参加男子400米接力赛项目,并告诉他该项目比赛的具体时间及注意事项。(词数:80-100)

范文:Hi,Jack,we ‟re going to have our school sports meeting on th eplayground next week.It will last three days from Thursday to Saturday.We have many competitions in running,such as 100-metre race,200-metre race,400-metre race and the relay race.We also have the long jump,the high jump and so on .I know you ‟re good at running.Would you please take part in the boys ‟ 400-metre erlay race which starts at 10:30 am on Friday?Please be on time,wear your sports shoes and take a bottle of water.

Good luck to you!

九.我们的情感是丰富多彩的,哪种情感会时常办随你呢?请参照下面的提示完成任务,

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

参考范例:

I often feel happy.(陈述自己的观点) .There are many things that make me happy.(以下列举1—2个事例或论据,可以用一般现在时也可以叙述过去发生的事)For example,when I get presents I feel happy.It can make me feel that the people around me are friendly to me.When l help others l feel happy because helping others is to help myself.I'm happy every day.This kind of feeling is good for me,it can make me feel that the world is so beautiful,In the future,I want to be a happy girl.Do you have the same feeling as me? (得出结论和感悟)

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7 十.书面表达

A) 小作文

假如你叫杨明,今天头疼、咳嗽、发烧,妈妈要带你去医院看病, 不能上学。 特想你的班主任吴老师请假。

请根据上面的提示写一份30词左右的请假条。注意请假条的格式。

B) 大作文

张怡宁在2004年雅典奥运会(Athens Olympic Games) 上的成绩令人敬佩, 在浙江萧山举行的国际世乒赛(ITTF World Cup)女子单打(women‟s singles)中又战胜了王楠, 为了让感更多

Dear Mr / Miss Wu,

I‟m sorry I can‟t go to school today. I have a headache, a cough and a fever. My mother is going to take me to see a doctor today. Don‟t worry about me. I‟ll go to school as soon as I feel a little better.

Now I‟m writing to you to ask for sick leave.

Yang Ming

B)I‟d like to introduce a girl to you. Her name is Zhang Yining. She was born in 1982 in Beijing. She is 1.68 metres tall and weighs 52 kilos. At the age of six, she began to play table tennis. In 1999, she won the second at the 45th Table Tennis World Championships, only lost to Wang Nan. In the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, she won the first. And now she won the women’s singles at ITTF World Cup in Xiaoshan, Zhejiang. She beat Wang Nan. She is the top of the tennis field. We hope she will make greater progress in the future.

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8 十一. 书面表达

在你的成长过程中,家人(父母、祖父母等)倾注了大量的心血。他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心、帮助外,也会提出一些建议。

A )请根据你的情况,列举五点家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议,用简短的文字分别填入96~100空白圆框内。(共5小题;每小题1分,总分5分)

B )请根据上面圆框中的内容,选择一点或几点写一篇短文,向你的好友谈谈你的家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议以及你的想法。

要求:

1. 词数80左右(不包括文中第一句所给出的词)。

2. 条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇:

be strict with sb. 对某人严格要求;allow sb. to do sth.允许某人干某事

______________________is / are very kind and helpful. ____________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

My parents are very kind and helpful. They cook meals and wash clothes for me every day. At the weekend, they often prepare some of my favorite food. Sometimes they also help me with my lessons. They are very strict with me, but when I make a mistake, they first listen to me and then have a talk with me instead of just complaining about it. They always try to understand me. I think that is a good way for a child to grow up. With their care, I am living and studying happily.

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9 十二. 书面表达

你班班委会决定将于6月18日上午举行初三离校前的最后一次班级活动。假如你是班长,请你根据表格中的活动内容,用英语写一篇短文,向你班外籍老师汇报这次活动的安排。短文的开头和结尾己给出。

说明:

1.请自行设计表格中“其它”的内容,所设计的内容必须具体、合理;

2.要求语言连贯,条理清楚;

3.词数:70左右(不包括已给出的短文的开头和结尾) 。

Our class is going to have a farewell party on the morning of June 18,___________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________At 11:30, the party will be over.

Possible versions:

(1) Our class is going to have a farewell party on the rooming of June 18. At 8:00, we'll talk about" What are you going to be when you grow up?". After that, we will discuss our plan for the summer holiday. From 9:00 to 10:10, we'll sing, dance, put on short plays and enjoy tousle. At 10:10, we are going to do some cleaning, repair the desks and chairs and give books to the pupils. At 11:00, we'll take photos, give each other telephone numbers and addresses, and give presents to the teachers. At 11:30, the party will be over.

(2) Our class is going to have a farewell patty on the morning of June 18. At eight, we'll begin to talk about what we are going to do when we grow up. And we'll talk about how we are going to spend our summer holiday. At nine, we'll sing, dance, and put on short plays. We'll play games together. From 10:10 to 11:00, we'll clean the classroom, repair the desks and chairs. We'll clean the teachers' offices. At eleven, we'll enjoy some fruit(s) and drinks, take photos and give each other telephone numbers and addresses. At 11:30, the party will be over.

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10 十三. 书面表达

暑假就要到了,你的外籍教师Mr. Green 打算用10天左右的时间出去旅游。他从网上查到了一些相关信息,但是自己无法确定哪条线路最佳,他希望你能帮助他分析并做出选择。他的要求是:

1. 大约10天。

2. 价格适中。

3. 能够看到不同风格类型的风景。

下面是他所查到的一些信息,请你选择其中一条线路并把你做出此选择的理由写下来,字数80~100。

1. 10 Days of Selected(精选的)China Tour Beijing, Xi‟an, Guilin, Shanghai Price: $ 1265 a person.

2. 11 Days of China Grand Tour Beijing, Suzhou, Shanghai, Hainan

Price: $ 1270 a person

One possible version:

I think you‟d better take the “11 Days of China Grand Tour.” First, that‟s the days you want, about 10 days. Second, it is cheaper. Third, you can see different kinds of scenery during this trip. You‟ll visit two important cities of China-Beijing and Shanghai. In these two cities, you‟ll visit the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Temple of Heaven, the Shanghai Museum and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. So you can experience old and new China. Suzhou is famous for silk and beautiful gardens. Hainan has different kinds of weather and scenery. There are many things to see, such as Wanquan River, Hairui Tomb and Tianya Haijiao. There is also scuba diving, fishing and boating I think you‟ll have a wonderful time.

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11 十四. 请你参考图中的信息,写一篇关于你的同学获朋友的小短文。 要求:

1.短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校。

2.可用所给信息,也可适当发挥。

3.词数:60-80词。

所给信息:Zhou Yi: 14;tall/short; thin/strong; kind; favorite sport; listen

to music; read books…

Today I want to tell you something about my classmate/ one of my best friends, Zhou Yi. He/She is a boy/girl of 14 years old. He/She is tall/short and thin/strong. He/She likes reading books very much. He/She likes sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. Sometimes when he/she is free, he/she enjoys listening to music. He/She is kind. I‟m not good at English and he/she often helps me with my English. I‟m happy that I have such a good friend.

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12 十五. 书面表达

根据图示,用英语写一篇题为“Changes in People’s Life”的短文,介绍过去和现在人们生活的变化。

要求:1. 词数在80个左右。

2.把图中所示内容表达完整,条理清晰,意思连贯。

3.开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数。

参考词:apartment 公寓

Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 20 years.

One possible version:

Changes in People‟s Life

Great changes have taken place in people‟s life in the past 20 years.In the past people kept in touch with relatives or friends mainly by sending letters. They would listen to the radio for news and other information. Children used to go to school by bicycle.Big families had to share small rooms.

Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the internet at home. When they are free,they watch the news and other programmers on TV. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. More and more people live in big and bright apartments with several rooms.

In a word, people live better than before.

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13 十六. 短文写作

在初中三年的学习生活中,你一定交了不少好朋友,

留下了许多美好的回忆。请以“My Best Frierd Tom/Mary"为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,介绍一位你最要好的朋友,男生姓名用Tom ;女生姓名用Mary 统—代替。 内容要求:1.他,她的外貌特征和个性特点;

2.你们一起经历的一件你印象特别深刻的事情。

注意:严禁使用真实的校名和姓名

十七. 书面表达(15分)

Dear …, Thank You for Your Love

提示:在你的成长过程中,得到了家人、老师及朋友的关爱,你一定对他们心存感激。请你补全题目(如:Dear Mum, Thank You for Your Love),用英语写一篇短文,叙述他们所做的一件令你深深感动的事情,并表达你的感激之情。

要求:

1.根据所给题目写一篇短文;

2.词数不少于60个;

3. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁。文中不得使用真实人名、校名,否则以零分计。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version:

Dear Mum,Thank you for Your Love

Dear mum,I always feel I am the luckiest child in the wor1d,because I have you as my mum. You are such a great parent.

I still remember the day when I failed my maths exam .I was so frustrated when I got home .You were not angry with me.Instead ,you praised me for my hard work and encouraged me to keep on. Tears came into my eyes when you took me in your arm.I came to know how much you ┉

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14 十八. 书面表达

请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题,用英语写一篇短文。提示语必须用上,只抄提示语不给分

提示内容:1.1ast slimmer,go ,Guilin

2.visit ,Lijiang ,boat

3.water ,clean ,fish

4.climb ,hill ,happy

5.city ,beautiful ,people ,friendly

要求:要点齐全,表达正确,语句通顺,意思连贯,

书写清晰、规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥,词数60~

80。

书面表达

A Visit to Guilin

Last summer 1 went to Guilin with my parents.We visited Lijiang by boat.The water was very clean and we could see a lot of fishes in the river.We also climbed the hills .The trees on the hills were very green .We had a good time and felt happy .Guilin is one of the most beautiful cities in our country.The people of Guilin are friendly.I love Guilin very much.

评分标准:

第一档(10分) :能写出全部要点,语言无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。

第二档(8--9分) :基本上能写出全部要点,语言有少量错误,行文较连贯,表达较清楚。

第三档(6—7分) :能写出大部分要点,语言有一些错误,行文不够连贯。 第四档(4—5分) :只写出部分要点,语言错误较多,影响意思表达。 第五档(1—3分) :只写出与内容有关的少数要点,不成句。

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15 十九. 书面表达

假设你叫王萍,是某电视台英语频道“School English ”栏目的忠实观众。请根据下列

要求:

1. 语句通顺,合乎逻辑。

2. 字数80~100词(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

June 26th, 2005

Dear Cathy,

I like your program very much. _________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely,

Wang Ping

One possible version:

June 26th , 2005

Dear Cathy,

I like your program very much. It has a lot of interesting stories, attractive games and popular English songs. From your program we can learn many new words and expressions. We can improve our listening and speaking in English. We can also know more about the culture of other countries in the world. In a word, we learn a lot from your program.

I‟m sorry to tell you that I can‟t follow you easily sometimes because you speak a little bit fast. It‟s also a pity that we can only watch your program twice a week.

Thank you for giving us a lot of fun! I wish your program a bright future!

Yours Sincerely,

Wang Ping

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16 二十. 书面表达

81.假如你叫李明,去年在因特网上结识了一位笔友Jack 。他正在学习中文,常从网上了解

Jack 。

要求:(1)内答详尽,书写工整; (2)文中不要出现你的真实姓名和校名;

(3)词数60~80; (4)开头已给出,不计入总数。

参考词汇: activity活动 surf the Internet 上网

范文:Jack is my good penfriend on the Internet. He 'll visit our school next week. He is 16 years

old. He lives in London, England. There are four people in his family. He is studying at Park

School. His favourite subject is maths. And he likes music and football very much. He is learning

Chinese now. In his free time, he often surfs the Internet and he has known much about China

from the Internet. I hope you will all be his good friends, too.

二十一. 书面表达

假设你是李雷,你在上个月参加了学校的英语角活动,请你把参加活动的情况用

英语写一封信告诉你的笔友王飞。信的内容还应包括以下要点:

1. 活动时间及地点;

2. 参加人员:一些学生及教师;

3. 活动内容:阅读英语报刊、练习英语口语、学唱英语歌曲;

4. 感 受:口语有提高、上课能讲英语了„„

注意:

1. 每行按右边规定的词数书写,总词数80左右;

2. 所给的要点提示必须都用上,并作适当发挥;

3. 信中不得使用真实的人名、校名;

4. 信的格式和开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Fei,

I ’m glad you are interested in the English Corner. I ’d like to tell you something about it.

Li Lei

Dear Wang Fei,

I ’m glad you are interested in the English Corner. I’d like to tell you something about it.

Last month we had the English Corner on Friday afternoons in the library of our school. Not

only a few students but also two teachers took part in it. Some of us read English books and

newspapers. Some of us practiced spoken English. The teachers also taught us English songs.

Since I took part in the English Corner, my spoken English has improved. Now I’m able to

speak English in front of the class. And I find it not so difficult to learn English as before.

Li Lei

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17 二十二. 书面表达

(A)篇任务型小作文:汤姆今天生病卧床,无法到校上课。(1)请你替汤姆向老师写张请假条。

Dear Mr. Gao,

I‟m sorry to tell you that I

(2)你能给汤姆几条好建议吗?(至少两条)

(B)篇

课余时光是我们忙碌学习生活的凋节剂。你是如何支配自己闲暇时间的呢?‟看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读书报、郊游、帮父母做家务,还是…… 请你以“My Free Time”为题。描述一下自己的课余生活。

请注意:1.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数80个左右。

2.不得写出自己和学校的真实名称。

3.开头已写好。请你接着往下写。

My Free Time

I have Its of things to do in my free

time._____________________________________

.

书面表达

(A)

Dear Mr Gao,

I‟m sorry to tell you that I‟m not feeling well today. I have got a bad cold. I can‟t go to school today and tomorrow. Thank you!

Tom

2. Please drink more water. You should see a doctor. You should have a good rest. You have to take some medicine. (B)

My Free Time

I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to music for a while. I find it a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with friends. We always have a good time!

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18 二十三. 书面表达

一说到考试,同学们总有讲不完的故事。在你的记忆中,那些发生在考场内外的故事,一定有使你至今感慨、难忘的吧? 请以考试为话题,写一篇题为“An Unforgettable(难忘的)Experience”的短文。

以下提示词语可能对你有帮助(可根据需要选用) : final exam, mid-term exam, nervous, warm words, relax, confident, give the best performance(do well), fail, . ..... 注意: 1、100字左右;

2、请不要使用真实姓名和所在学校名称。

___________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

Among many exam experiences, I still remember what happened in the final exam last term.

In the past I always felt nervous at the beginning of exams. And because of this, I never gave the best performance.. But in the last final exam, when I got the paper, ! was surprised to see some warm words on the paper, "Hi, everyone. Believe in yourself and you will do best Good luck." Seeing these words, the feeling of nervousness soon disappeared and I became confident. I did best that time?

Ever since then, whenever I have exams, these simple but warm words always encourage me and make me feel confident.

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19 二十四。书面表达

江海风情园是海门市中小学生向往的素质教育基地。假设你和你的同学4月18日去那里游玩,请根据图画提示和自己的想象, 写一篇英语日记。要求:

1. 所写游玩项目不少于5个;

2. 意思连贯,条理清楚;

3. 日记中不得出现真实的校名和学生姓名; 4. 词数:70左右(不包括已经给出的内容)。

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20

Possible versions:

Ⅰ. Today I went to Local Scenic Park with my classmates. We took a bus there. We were so excited that we talked and sang all the way. In the park, we flew kites, boated on the lake and played basketball. At lunch time, we cooked some rice and vegetables ourselves. They were delicious. In the afternoon, we took some photos near the lake and somewhere else in the park. We had a very good time.

Ⅱ. Today I went to Local Scenic Park with my classmates. In the morning, we went there by bus. The park looked beautiful. First, I flew a kite, then I went boating on the lake. At noon, we had a picnic. I liked the delicious food very much. In the afternoon, I played football with some boys and then had a party with my classmates. I sang and danced at the party happily. Today is the happiest

day I have ever had.

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21 二十五. 书面表达

假定你班今天下午要开一次以“Keep Our School Clean”为主题的英语班会, 请你以班长的身份准备一篇70词左右的英语发言稿。主要内容包括以下几点:

1.不随地吐痰,不乱扔垃圾。

2.不在墙上乱涂乱画。

3.每天保持室内外卫生清洁。

注意:1) 请不要逐字翻译。

2) 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数) 。

Good afternoon, everyone!

One possible version: Good afternoon, everyone!

We are studying in this school. It's our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It's not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the classroom. We should neither draw pictures on the walls nor throw any litter onto the ground. I think we must make it a rule to do some cleaning every day. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school,I'm sure our school will be more beautiful. That's all. Thank you!!

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22 二十六. 书面表达

暑假即将来临,张涛给王刚发了个电子邮件。假如你是王刚,请根据邮件内容予以回复。回件的开头和结尾已经给出(不计入总词数)。

要求:1.词数 60—80。

2.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。

3.以下内容供参考,也可以自行安排计划。

地点:南京,北京,海南„„ 活动:游览,拍照,划船,潜水,购物„„ 名胜:玄武湖,天安门,长城,天涯海角„„ 食物:北京烤鸭,水果,海鲜(sea food)„„ 交通工具:汽车,火车,飞机 „„

Dear Zhang Tao,

Glad to hear from you. I‟m fine, thank you.

It is really a good idea to travel with you. I‟d like to start our travel on July 10th . First, we take a bus to Nanjing. We can go boating on Xuanwu Lake. Then we‟ll go to Beijing by train at night. In Beijing, we‟ll visit the Great Wall, Tian‟anmen Square and the Palace Museum… We can take photos there, do some shopping and eat some famous food like Beijing Duck. We may spend one week there. I‟m sure we‟ll have a good time!

Best wishes!

Yours,

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23 Wang Gang

二十七. 书面表达。

6月6日是“全国爱眼日”(National Eyes Caring Day),请根据以下提示写出一份宣传稿,让全校的学生关爱自己的眼睛。题目已给出。

要求:1.词数:50-80。

2.书写规范,语句通顺,行文流畅,结构完整,语法正确。

内容需包括以下要点:

1.爱眼日主题为保护视力。

2.保护视力对中学生很重要。

3.视力不好会给生活和学习带来不便。

4.呼吁同学们都养成良好的用眼习惯以保护视力。

提示词语:视力eyesight ;主题topic

Love Yourself Love Your Eyes

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

Love Yourself Love Your Eyes

June 6th is National Eyes Caring Day.The topic is Caring for Eyesight.

It is believed t0 have good eyesight is very important t0 everyone especially to us middle school students during our growth time.Poor eyesight may result in many difficulties in our daily life and study .We hope every student can from now on form good habits when using eyes. Remember, a clear world is only for bright eyes·

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24 二十八. 文段表达

根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。(信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内)

假如你叫李玲,是英国中学生露茜的笔友,你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉她应该做什么,不应该做什么。

Hi Lucy,

_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ling

One possible version:

Hi Lucy,

Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there‟s nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I don‟t think what you do is right since you are a student. You‟d better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I‟m sure they‟ll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands.

Yours,

Li Ling

I .

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25 II . 二十九. 书面表达

1.假如你是A1ice ,即将初中毕业,请写一封感谢信给你的老师MrWhik ,感谢他对你在校 学习期间的帮助并向他表达美好的祝愿。(词数在30个左右,信中不得出现你的校名和姓名)

A Thank - you Note

Dear Mr White,

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Alice

2.每个人都拥有自己心中的偶像,相信你的心中一定也有一颗“星”在闪烁。请根据以下

要点,以“My Favorite Star" 为题写一篇80词左右的文章介绍一位你所喜欢的明星(可以是歌

星、影星、球星„„) 。

要点: (1)„„是我所喜爱的明星;(2)劝我喜欢他(她) 的原因;

(3)他(她) 的一些个人情况。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

1. One possible version:

A Thank- you Note Dear Mr. White,

Thanks for giving me all the help during my study at school. You paid so much attention to me

that I made a great progress. I enjoy the time we stayed together.

Thank you again for everything. Best wishes !

Alice

2.One possible version:

My Favorite Star

My favorite movie star is Jack Chan. He is a great actor. I like him very much not only because his movies are exciting but also because he is very friendly. I like his new movie "Speed" best. It's a very successful action movie.

Jack Chan is one of the most popular stars in the world. He is living in Hong Kong now. He likes the famous movie" Sleepless Night" very much. He also likes Beijing Opera. He has many fans,

like me.

I hope he will be happy all his life, because he is my favorite star.

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假如你刚去澳大利亚的一所高中读书,在上第一节课时,你填(打勾)了一张表格(见听力测试第二大题)。第二天上课时,老师要求每个学生根据自己在表上打勾的情况做一个简单的自我介绍。现在,请你把所做的介绍写下来。

注意事项:1、开头部分已写好,只需接着写;

2、不要逐条翻译,可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的华语,使所写内容连贯;

3、所写内容必须包括QUESTIONNAIRE 上的主要内容;

4、词数:70个左右。

Hi, everybody,

I‟d like to tell you something about myself. _______________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

Hi, everybody,

I‟d like to tell you something about myself. I am sixteen years old. I am a middle school student from China. In order to improve my English, I came here. I like your school very much because it is famous for your good teachers and beautiful school buildings. I like English very much, but I still have some difficulty (in) listening to the teachers here. I haven‟t any friends or relatives here so I hope you, my dear classmates, will help me with my English. By the way, I like women teachers because their voices sound beautiful. That‟s all.

Thank you

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27 三十一. 书面表达

“世界无烟日(Non—smoking Day)”那天,某中学对该校学生吸烟情况进行了一次调查,结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。

要求:1.对调查结果进行描述。

2.表明自己的看法并提出建议。

3.所写内容符合“世界无烟日”主题。

4.词数80个左右。

提示词语:doa survey about„(做一个有关„„的调查) ,

3%ofthe students(百分之三的学生)

On Non—smoking Day,a school did a survey about how many students smoke.Here are the results :3%of the students often smoke .7%of the students smoke sometimes .These students saythey smoke just for fun and they look cool while smoking .Nearly everyone knows smoking does no good to people’S health,especially for teenagers .As students ,we should not smoke .Those who smoke should give up smoking .And if OUr family members smoke ,we should try tO stop them .Students who have never smoked should never try it .

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28 三十二. 书面表达

情景设定:学校运动会正在进行之中。校广播台“荣辱广角镜”栏目小记者萧鸣看到了下面

两组镜头。

镜头一:男子接力比赛最后一棒,二班王强同学跌倒受伤,仍然坚持跑到了终点。

镜头二:赛场周围,有部分同学说笑嬉闹,还将剩余的饮食和废弃物随手乱扔。假设你是萧

鸣,请你从上面两组镜头中任选一组,并根据其内容为校广播台写一篇80词左右的短讯。

要求:1. 确定并围绕所选镜头进行表达,短讯内容应给予情景想象和细节扩展;

2. 对所选的镜头要有个人观点,提出表扬、倡议或批评、建议;

3. 词数80词左右,开始语已给出(不计入词数)。

提示词语:(镜头一)last lap, fall, hurt, get up, go on, shout, give up, highly,

(镜头二)out of, talk, laugh, waste, play, take part in, environment。

School sports meeting was still going on __________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Reported by Xiao Ming

Writing: (One possible version)

Scene one: It was the last lap of the boys‟ 100-metre race! All the runners were trying their

best to run fast. Suddenly, Wang Qiang, the runner from Class 2, fell and hurt his leg. But he

didn ‟t give up. Instead, he got up and went on running to the finishing line. All the teachers and

students shouted “Come on!” to him and spoke highly of him.

I think we should learn from Wang Qiang—Never give up, and try our best to do well in

everything. (85 words)

Scene two: But out of the playground, a few of the students were talking and laughing loudly.

Some students were even playing cards under the trees. It seemed that the sports meeting had

nothing to do with them. Some food and drinks were not eaten or drunk up but wasted. Lots of

litter could also be seen here and there.

I think everyone should take an active part in the sports meeting. It is also our duty to protect

the environment around us. (80 words)

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29 三十三. 书面表达

某英语杂志社“中学生专栏”在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点,用

注意:

1、 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;

2、 参考词汇:自信-confidence (n.), confident (adj.); 打败-beat (beat, beaten) (v.);

3、 短文须包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Learn to smile Smile is an attitude (态度) to life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

Learn to smile

Smile is an attitude to life. In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail in an exam; or another time, you are misunderstood by your friends. These unpleasant things may make you feel bad. Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself; that‟s to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself. We should also learn to smile to others. It will help us to get closer to others. So, smile is the most widely understood language.

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30 三十四. 书面表达

请你以学校学生会的身份,写一份有关即将在本校举办2006年英语夏令营活动的书面通知,内容如下:

┌───────┬────────────────┐

│时间 │7月29日至8月1日 │

├───────┼────────────────┤

│地点 │学校礼堂 │

├───────┼────────────────┤

│内容 │1. 演讲、辩论 │

│ ├────────────────┤

│ │2. 谈学习英语的经验 │

│ ├────────────────┤

│ │3. 师生英语晚会 │

│ ├────────────────┤

│ │4. 游览市容 │

├───────┼────────────────┤

│要求 │1. 欢迎广大同学踊跃参加夏令营活动│

│ ├────────────────┤

│ │2. 活动后写一篇日记,谈谈你的感想│

└───────┴────────────────┘

注意:1. 词数在80~100个左右。

2. 意思连贯、语言通顺、避免逐条翻译

3. 开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:做演讲 make a speech (give a lecture) 辩论have a debate

June 6,2006

Dear Students,

Students ’ Union One possible version:

June 6,2006

Dear students,

The English Summer Camp will be held in the school hall from July 29 to August 1.

Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in.

During the camp,you can give a lecture and have a debate. Besides,the students who do well in English study will talk about their experience. There is also an English party

between teachers and students. In the end,you ’11 have a chance to visit the City of Tianjin. Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. Don't forget to tell us what you think of the camp in your diary.

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Students‟Union

三十五. 书面表达。

假如你是张红,你想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动,请你用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾已给出。

内容应包括:

1.你参加这次活动的目的;

2.你的兴趣、特长;

3.你希望住在什么样的美国家庭。

要求:

1.词数:80词左右;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。

提示词语:夏令营summer camp

Dear Sir/Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Zhang Hong

One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I want to join in the summer camp. It‟s a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about the American culture.

I often surf on the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely. I‟m very proud of it.

I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children. I‟m sure we‟ll have a great time together.

Thank you!

Yours,

Zhang Hong

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32 三十六. 书面表达(本题有2小题,75小题5分,76小题15分,共20分)

75. 三年的初中学习即将结束,请根据下面的提示,结合自身实际情况,对自己的学业作一简要评价。

With the help of I have made much progress in the last three years. I do well in think I will

76. 假设你是李华,请从下面及75小题中选择部分信息,给你在英国的笔友Harry 写一封信,谈谈你的暑假安排,80词左右。注意:信的开头与结尾已给出,不计词数。

书面表达

75 略

76. One possible version”

June 13th, 2006 trio to West Lake by bike with my friend. I‟m sure it will be a lot of fun! I‟ll also do some studies to improving my maths because I am a little weak in it. of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking meals and cleaning rooms. Isn‟t my plan nice?

Please write back soon. .

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33 三十七. 书面表达。

请用英语表述下面的内容。要点如下:

1)明天是星期天,同学们到医院看望Mr. Smith。

2)早上九点钟校门口集合,乘公共汽车去。

3)Mr. Smith是我们的英语老师,他上周生病住院了。

4)请你建议带一份礼物,并说明理由。

要求: 1)不要逐句翻译 2)字数60---80

书面表达。(范文)

Mr. Smith is our English teacher. He is very kind to us and teaches very well. He fell ill last week and now he is in bed in hospital. Tomorrow is Saturday. We are going to see him together. We will meet at the school gate at 9:00 tomorrow morning. Then we’ll go to the hospital by bus. I think we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers will make him feel good and happy.

三十八. 书面表达(共1题,计15分)

最近,《晨晖英语报》以“你心目中的好老师是什么样子的?” “一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点?”为题展开调查和讨论,结果如下(黑影部分):

请根据上图提示,给合你自己的观点,围绕“What is my favorite teacher like? Why? ”这个主题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

参考答案(one possible version)

Firstly a teacher should be able to play different roles in school.He can care about us like a mother.He can give us knowledge like a tutor.And he can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.Secondly,a teacher should be patient and helpful.When we are in trouble,he can always help us patiently.Thirdly,a teacher should be fair.He should have the same rule for everybody.No one can break them.Fourthly,a teacher should be fun.He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.

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34 三十九. 根据要求完成大作文,词数:60—80。

初中的学习生活即将结束,在装载您收获的行囊——成长记录袋中还应该增添一份您自己满意的答卷。请参考下列“Mindmap”所提供的信息,以“My Middle School Life”为题写一份自我评价。

要求:1. 自我评价中必须包括“Mindmap”所提供的三方面信息,同时对每方面信息所包含的内容可以进行适当的增添或删减。

2. 再用二、三句话写个简单的未来寄语。

3. 写作中不得出现您的真实姓名、校名以及能够透露出您个人身份的相关信息。

My Middle School Life

_____________________________________________________________________________ Words to the Future

参考范例:

My Middle School Life

How time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good. (用一般过去时写出过去的学习生活情况)Now, I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I've got more knowledge and improved my life. (用表示现在的几种时态写出现在的学习生活情况) As for the future, I've two dreams. One is to be a teacher, and the other is to be a volunteer. Helping others is my greatest happiness. (用一般将来时写出自己的梦想)Although I have made much progress, I'll try my best to do better. Believing myself is the key to success. (未来寄语)

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35 四十.

书面表达

下面一组图画描述的是上个星期天发生在宁波雅戈尔动物园里的一个故事,请你用第一人称写一篇英语日记。

注意:1.日记格式及开头、结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;

2.词数:80左右;

3. 参考词汇:some food left; throw away/about ; give…to;zoo keeper; come up to; feed the animals

June 4th Sunday Fine

This morning my parents and I went to visit Ningbo Youngor Zoo and we had a picnic there. We had a big lunch on the grass, but Then we said sorry to him and went on with our visit.

A possible version:

June 4th Sunday Fine

on. "What can we do with these things? Throw them away!" I said to my parents. But my mother didn't think we could. Then I said that we could give them to the monkeys. My mother agreed that it was a good idea. We were going to feed the monkeys with our food when suddenly the zoo keeper came up to us and said, " Please don't feed the animals!"

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36 四十一. 书面表达

本月全市开展以“做文明市民,从不闯红灯做起”为主题的交通安全宣传月活动。请你写一篇80字左右的短文,谈谈如何遵守交通法规。短文的开头已给出(不计人总词数) 。 要求:1.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe,everyone should follow traffic rules.

内容要点可参照参考答案。各种人称均可。 One possible version:

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe,everyone should foilow traffic rules.When you walk,you should walk at the side of the road.Always be careful and look left and right before you cross the road.‟If you like riding,don‟t run through the red traffic lights.。Don‟t ride too fast . If you ride a motorbike,remember to wear vour helmet(s). If you drive,you should slow down at the traffic lights . You must alwavs wear a seat belt . You must never drink wine . When many passengers are waiting for the bus‟please stand in line and wait for your turn .Don‟t push others.Don‟t get off the bus until it has stopped.

Remember :it is better to be on the safe side.

注:1,2处还可以有下列表达方法:

Look carefully before you cross the road.

When there is a lot of traffic,you can‟t cross the road./you must stop/wait.

If you want to cross the road,you must wait for the green light(s)./ Yon mustn‟t cross the road in front of the traffic.

When the traffic light(s)is/are red ,you must stop ./When the traffic light(s)is/ are green'you can go./If the traffic light(s)is/are yellow,you should wait.

四十二.

书面表达(满分15分)

中国自古就有尊师重教的优良传统,“程门立雪”就是一个典型例子。请根据以下提示写一篇短文,叙述这个故事,并简单谈谈你的看法。词数60左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:thick 厚的 respect 尊敬

Long, long ago in China there was a young man called Yang Shi. One day _______________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version:

Long, long ago in China there was a young man called Yang Shi. One day he went to visit his teacher Chang Yi. It was snowing heavily. Cheng Yi was sleeping then, so Yang Shi waited in the snow outside. He kept waiting in the snow until his teacher woke up. Then they found that the ground was already covered with thick snow!

We should learn from Yang Shi and respect our teachers. A good education makes a country strong!

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37 四十三. 看图表达

请看下面四幅图及提示,对李雷和王英的不同学习方法,写一篇80词左右的短文,谈

谈自己的看法。要求意思连贯,符合逻辑。短文的开头已给出,请接着往下写。

Li Lei and Wang Ying are two middle school students. They both work hard but they have different learning ways. 范文:

Li Lei and Wang Ying are two middle school students. They both work hard but they have different learning ways.

Li Lei is often tired in class. He usually doesn't listen to the teacher. As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes. So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying listens carefully and tries to catch what the teacher says in class. Because of this, she goes to bed early and she learns better than Li Lei.

In my opinion, Wang Ying learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning way.

四十四. 为了迎接父亲节的到来,《21世纪报》(21*Century)正在开展有关“父子(女)亲情”的征文活动。假如你叫周泰(Zhou Tai),下列几幅图片描述的是你和父亲之间发生的一件往事,请你根据图片及所给文字信息,展开合理想象,写一篇短文,并谈谈你现在对此事的感想。(本小题20分)

要求:1. 语句通顺,行文连贯,书写整洁;

2. 字数不少于60; 3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。

提示词:net bar, think of, feel sorry

(One possible version)

Father ‟s Day is coming, I ‟m going to tell a story between my father and me. One day, I wanted to go to the net bar, But how would I go there without money? Suddenly I got an idea, I went to Father for 50 yuan, I told him I was going to buy some books. He quickly took out the money and told me to study hard. As soon as I got the money, I ran to the net bar, and I spent all the money on the computer games.

Now when I think of it, I feel sorry to Father. I will never do such a thing any more.

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38 四十五. 文段表达

根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。(信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内)

20. 假如你叫李玲,是英国中学生露茜的笔友,你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉她应该做什么,不应该做什么。

Hi Lucy,

_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ling

One possible version:

Hi Lucy,

Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there‟s nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I don‟t think what you do is right since you are a student. You‟d better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I‟m sure they‟ll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands.

Yours,

Li Ling

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39 四十六. 为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《新世纪英文报》正在举办以“How to be a good learner? ”为题的征文比赛。请你踊跃投稿。内容提示:

要求:

1.必须用上所有的内容提示,语句通顺,书写规范;

2.词数80左右,已给出的句子不计人总词数。

How to be a good learner?

As a good learner,we should_____________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all these will be helpful to us.

As a good learner,we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class ,we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. As a student ,working hard is important。but don’t forget to d0 sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time,If we have any problems. we’d better ask others flor help. I hope all these will be helpful to us.

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40 四十七. 书面表达

写讲话稿。假设你叫李华,初中毕业生学业考试已经结束,茂名市第一中学准备录取你,但要求你参加英语口语面试。下表是口语考官发给你的问题,要求你以表中的问题为线索,用英语作连续陈述(行文要连贯,不要写成一问一答的形式)。请将讲话稿写在指定的横线上,字数不得少于80个单词(所给出的单词不计算在内),开头和结尾以为你写好。注意:

Good morning,

Good morning,

I ‟m really glad to talk to you. I‟m Li Hua, 15 years old, from a five-people family. I like swimming and listening to music. In the past three years, I have been studying very hard. I got two prizes in maths competitions and three prizes in English. Going to Maoming NO.1 Middle School for further study is always my dream, for, you see, the school is so beautiful. If I can study here, I will work even harder. I will read as many books as possible, especially English books. My new dream in the new school is to enjoy myself with my new teachers and new friends.

That ‟s all. Thank you very much.

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41 四十八. 书面表达

由于父亲常年在外工作,李华一边上学一边照顾多病的母亲。昨天李华不慎摔伤了脚,医生建议他在家休息两周。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文,谈谈如何帮助李华。(开头已给出)

提示:

1. Why will you help Li Hua?

2. How can you help him with his lessons?

3. What are you going to do to help him with the housework?

要求:

1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。

3. 词数60—80。

书面表达:

One possible version:

Li Hua’s father works in another city, so Li hua has to take care of his sick mother after school. He hurt his foot yesterday. The doctor said he has to stay at home for two weeks. I will help him. I ’ll go to Li Hua ’s home to tell him the homework and what we learn in class. Explain the difficult points and answer his questions. I can also do some housework for him, such as do some cleaning house, washing some clothes and cooking. I hope he will get well soon. I ‘m sure Li Hua won ’t fall behind.

四十九. 假如你是China Daily 中学生版的记者,请根据下面材料写篇报道。

背景:这所学校建于三年前,当时有数百名儿童因贫困而失学,后来人们为“希望工程 (Hope Project) ”捐款200余万元,当地政府用这笔款项兴建了这所学校。

现状: 教师60人,学生900人,教学楼内有18个教室,另有1,200平方米的操场,微机室,语音室,图书馆各一个。这所学校已远近闻名,学生们都很努力,因为是希望工程给了他们学习的机会。

The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn‟t go to school because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.

Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters

The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there Study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given Them the chance to go to school.

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42 五十. 书面表达。

假如你叫李平。最近,你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意见(见下表) 。现在,请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。

注意:1. 信件须包括写信原由及表格所列内容;

2. 书信格式正确;

3. 书写整洁;

4. 词数在80个左右。

生词提示:electronic adj.电子的 explanation(S)n.解释,说明

Dear Editor,

Recently I made a survey about the use of the electronic dictionary.My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful,convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words .The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it.But my English teacher doesn‟t’t think we should use it,because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary will make US lazy and we shouldn‟t’t use it.

Yours , Li Ping 五十一. 书面表达

请用英语表述以下内容。

要点如下:

1. 本周六是王红的生日。许多同学将去她家参加生日聚会;

2. 王红爱好广泛,为人友善,经常帮父母做家务。

3. 一些同学打算向父母要钱,买礼物送给她。

4. 你对同学们花钱买礼物一事的看法及理由。

要求:

1、不要逐条翻译; 2、字数:60-80。

One possible version

Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies. She often helps her parents with the housework. It‟s her birthday this Saturday. Many classmates will go to her home for her birthday. Some of them will ask their parents for some money to buy gifts. But I don‟t think it‟s a good idea, because that‟ll cost our parents‟ money. I‟m going to make a birthday card for her by myself. I‟m sure she‟ll like it.

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43 五十二. 如果家长不在家,你能照顾好自己吗? 班会课上,同学们就这个话题纷纷展开讨论。 Lin Xua :I can take care of myself.I know how to cook noodles.I can„ Chen Li: I‟m afraid I can‟t look after myself.1 will watch TV and forget to do„ Zhou Wei: I‟m not sure.Maybe 1 will just have sandwiches or fruit for meals„ „

请你也就以上话题写一篇80词左右的短文,内容可以涉及一日三餐、家务劳动、学习娱乐等。

五十三. 书面表达

随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展,„„每天锻炼一小时,健康工作50年,幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心,校园里出现了可喜的变化:运动时间延长了,运动项目增加了,学生体质增强了,校园生活丰富了。请以Sports in Our School为题给校刊写一篇报道。 内容要点提示:

1. time for sports

2. kinds of sports

3. change of students‟ health and study

4. change of school life

要求:

1.80词左右,可适当发挥。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

Sports in Our School

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible version: Sports in Our School

Sports in our school have changed a lot .Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week .and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.

Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games,running ,and jumping on the playground.

Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit .What‟s more? a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.

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44 五十四. 书面表达

中学生学习时间长、压力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中初三(3)班的班长,最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据表格提供的调

注意:1. 短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点;

2.词数:80-100。题目和开头已为你写好,不记入总词数。

The Poper Way(s) for Students to Relax

I am the monitor of Class3, Grade 3,No.22middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.______________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One Possible Version:

The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax

I am the monitor of Class 3,Grade3,No.22Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

There are 60 students in my class(31 boys and 29 girls ).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV.12students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are busy to relax.

(As we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax.)I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, It can help improve our health.(Therefore, I often Play ping pong after class. It‟s really helpful to both my health and my study.)

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45 五十五. 基础写作

(A)话题表述:为配合“构建和谐校园,和谐班级,人人争当文明学生”的活动,作为一名中学生,你认为该做些什么?请用简短的英语写出你的建议。 要求:语言规范,字迹工整,意思完整。30-40个词。

参考范文:As a student, we should keep our school clean. Please don ‟t throw litter everywhere .Don‟t run after each other. Don‟t speak loudly in the classroom. Don‟t draw and spit everywhere. Do everything according to the rules.

(B)书面表达:

紧张忙碌的初中生活即将结束,你一定想好好放松一下。你将怎样度过一个既充实又有意义的假期呢?请用英语写下来。

要求:语言规范,字迹工整,意思完整。50-60个词。

参考范文:After three year‟s study, I feel very tired. This is a good chance to plan my summer holiday. First I want to travel to Beijing to relax myself. Beijing is the capital of our country. And there are many place of interest there. For example, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. I have never been to the great wall before, so I‟ll visit it first. Then I‟d like to visit Tsinghua University because I want to study there some day .

After that, I want to go over my lessons in order to make great progress. I believe my dream will come true.

参考范文:As a student, we should keep our school clean. Please don‟t throw litter everywhere .Don‟t run after each other. Don‟t speak loudly in the classroom. Don‟t draw and spit everywhere. Do everything according to the rules.

87. 参考范文:After three year‟s study, I feel very tired. This is a good chance to plan my summer holiday. First I want to travel to Beijing to relax myself. Beijing is the capital of our country. And there are many place of interest there. For example, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. I have never been to the great wall before, so I‟ll visit it first. Then I‟d like to visit Tsinghua University because I want to study there some day .

After that, I want to go over my lessons in order to make great progress. I believe my dream will come true.

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46 五十六. 书面表达

下个学期,我们每一位同学即将进入新的学校。请你根据下列提示,以“New School, New Life” 为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文,谈一谈你的新学校、新生活、新打算,(注:文章的开头已给出,不计入词数)

What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?

What do you think your new school life will be like?

How will you improve yourself in the future?

New School, New Life

I‟m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文:I‟m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities. The life will be very colourful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a „buddy club ‟ for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.

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47 五十七. 书面表达

根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

汶川地震 (Wenchuan Earthquake) 发生后,9岁学生林浩 (Lin Hao) 救了两名同学,然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。

请你就林浩同学的事迹,以 “Learn from the Hero” 为题,给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学的事迹简介,你对这件事的感受,以及你要向他学习什么。 提示词语:a student, nine years old, happen, save, walk, to safety,

be deeply moved, brave, give up

Learn from the Hero

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

Lin Hao is a student. He is only nine years old. After Wenchuan Earthquake happened, he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hours to safety. I was deeply moved by his story. I think he is a brave boy. He did his best when he faced great danger. I should learn from him. I will think of others first and help them as much as possible. I will never give up when I face any difficulties.

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48 五十八情景作文

常德晚报举行英语征文比赛,请根据图画和所给提示词, 以“Sally smiled again” 为题写一篇80个单词以上的英文短文参赛。要求语法正确、意思连贯,所提供的图示和英文提示词必须涉及并可适当发挥。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

提示词:

in hospital, look after, miss lessons, fail, help, encourage, join, game

One possible version

Sally smiled at last

Last month, one of my classmates, Sally was sad. Her father got ill and stayed in hospital. She had to look after him. So she missed a lot of lessons. In the English exam she failed.

During those days she was worried about her father and study. When we learned about that, we decided to help her. Some classmates helped her with her study. Others took turns to care for her father. Our monitor encouraged her to smile at life. Soon Sally caught up with her classmates in her study and her father became better and better. Sometimes she joined us in the game. Smile appeared on her face again.

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49 五十九. 书面表达

80. 2008年5月12日,四川汶川发生了特大地震,数十万人伤亡,数百万人失去了家园,数万孩子失去了校园。在此危难之时,全国人民众志成城,抗震救灾,向灾区人民伸出了援助之手。假设你叫李伟(Li Wei),请你从学生的角度,以 A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan 为题,给灾区的孩子写一封英文短信,以表达你的同情、关心、支持与鼓励,让他们尽快从地震的阴霾中走出来。

要点提示:同情 关心 支持 鼓励 祝愿

提示性词语:earthquake, kill, wound(致伤), relatives, destroy, lonely, homeland, loveliest, whole-heartedly(全心全意地) ,donate, overcome (克服), confidence, firm will (坚定的意志) ,rebuild(重建) , pocket money (零花钱)

注意:(1)请尽可能使用所给的提示性词语,但写作不受所给词语的顺序限制.

(2)句式工整,书写规范,语句条理性强,注意标点符号。词数:80个左右。 ________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

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One possible version:

A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan

Dear little friends,

May12,2008 was the most terrible day for you, for me and for all the Chinese .The great earthquake killed and wounded your relatives, your teachers and your classmates, and destroyed your houses and schools badly. You felt very sad and our hearts were also broken deeply. However, you are not lonely. The loveliest people, such as the leaders, soldiers, doctors and volunteers, immediately arrived and helped you whole-heartedly. The people all over China are donating money, things or even their blood. I‟ve also donated all my pocket money.

All these days I‟ve been collecting the information from Wenchuan. Sometimes tears on my face while watching, listening or reading.

China is a big family. We are all your brothers and sisters. We will do everything to help you rebuild your homeland and make you be out of the endless pains. We are all together with you for ever. I believe you can overcome the difficulties with your confidence and the firm will. Please accept my heartfelt wishes: You‟ll be fine in the future.

Best wishes to you all !

Yours,

英语作文写作指导

50 Li Wei 六十书面表达

假如你叫张蒙,班主任李老师想了解班级同学的状况,以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求,给班主任李老师写封e-mail ,说明自己的情况,并请她给你提一些建议。内容要求:

1. 学习任务重, 睡眠不足, 缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。

2. 在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。

3. 词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。

4. 开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。

From:zhangmeng@163.com

To:chlw524@sina.com

Subject:problems

Date:June 26

Dear Ms Li,

I ‟m very glad to write to you__________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes.

Zhang Meng

. Dear Ms Li,

I‟m very glad to write to you.I have a lot of troubles these days.Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school.I don‟t enou gh time to sleep.I nearly have no time to do sports.My friends and I can hardly find time to talk,or play together.When I get back home from school,I‟m not allowed to watch TV,surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music.I feel worried about them.I don‟t know what I should do.Could you please give me some suggestions? Best wishes.

Zhang Meng