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In what way do you think college is a time of growth and expansion?

It is well known for us that college is a time of growth and expansion.Not only an expansion in knowledge but also in psychology.

We students go to college from high school to acquire further knowledge.In college,we have more chances to learn series of subjects to which we were not introduced in high school.We college students have the opportunity to select the subjects what we are interested in,which is different form what we must choose to learn in high school.As a consequence,we spend more time on which we have chosen.At the same time,we would attach more importance and pay more attention to our major.

In university,the students are from different places and they have different habits,characteristics and hobbies.They are introduced to handling relationship between different people.Nobody tells them what to do and how to do it,so they have to balance their studies and their part-times.It is necessary for us to develop the abilities to get through the difficult situation and all kinds of stress.After the college education,most of us are more maturely and are able to deal with complicated situations.

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构

Currently,in the modern society,learning foreign language has become so fashionable that some people go with the tide and blindly pursue everything from foreign countries.As is depicted in the picture,a Chinese young man is presenting a bunch of flowers to a foreign lady, who stands for a foreign language, but the Chinese lady, who represents our mother tongue,Chinese, is given the cold shoulder.It is a reflection of reality.

There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.First and foremost,when finding jobs,we will be asked whether we have work experience in foreign countries.Someone who has that means he or she has a privilege.It is not only because of our bind persuasion but also what should be done to meet the satisfaction of the modern life.Furthermore,some vain people think that,in a sense, foreign things would bring glory for them.Last but not least,the technologies in some field is in high level,on the contrary,that in China is no so good.In a word,Rome is not built in a day,it is a concept which has been in people's heart for a long time.As a consequence,it is difficult for majority of people to abandon it.

As far as I am concerned,language stands for the culture of a country.So although sometimes the person who has come back from foreign countries has advantage in finding a

job,but that experience can not guarantee jobs,because ability is more important.That is to say,we should also attach much importance to our own culture and our mother tongue.

Don ’t Hesitate to Say 查看要求 When could we say "No "? When do we have to say "No "? Everyone has the right to say "No ", but maybe sometimes we should say it but we do not. Have you ever say "no " when somebody ask you for help? What do you think of your saying "No " when someone else ask you for help? When could you do that? Personally speaking, under three situation I could do that. First of all, if I am not able to help him or she, I would refuse to help him or she. But I could introduce someone else to him, if it is convenient. Secondly, if I would like to, but I have no time to, I would do that reluctantly. Last but not least, if she or he has the ability to do it herself or himself, and she or he has time to do it, I would do that without any hesitation. Sometimes we have to say "no " but some of us choose not to do. In our daily life, it is universal to see that someone would feel embarrassed to say "No " to others though they have to. Some of them think it is impolite to reject others. Some of them have the idea of saying "No " to others may hurt someone. But if we do not say "No " when it is necessary, we will not only set ourselves into the difficult situation but also reduce others' trust on us. Maybe things go along the opposite side. We did not decline others because we wanted to develop a close relationship with others, but finally, he or she broke up with you just because you should have rejected. So as far as I am concerned, we should learn to say "No " without hesitation. 73 排名:共205篇, 本文排名52,最高分85.5, 最低分0

评语: 拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用

Nowadays it has become a prevailing trend for some individuals or organizations to rank the universities. Taking a look around, we can find too many examples to list. To this phenomenon, people's attitudes differ sharply. Some people hold the view that ranking university can help high school graduates or their parents to make a sound choice when enrolling in a university or college. Furthermore, this practice can help the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their positions. Others, however, point out that the result of ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of collecting money. In addition, some universities overemphasize the result of ranking and waste a large mount of resources. As far as I am concerned, we should not go to extremes. On one hand, it must be admitted that ranking is an effective way to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work. On the other hand, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way. 字数:185 84 排名:共34篇,本文排名5,最高分90.5,最低分0 评语: 作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者有一定功底,可在平 时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用 My View on University Ranking(2010-12 CET6)1222 Some people hold the view that ranking university can help high school graduates or their parents to make a sound choice when choose a university or college. Besides, university ranking could encourage the high school students to spare no effort to study in order to be admitted into the key universities. Furthermore, this practice can help the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their positions. On the contrary, the others point out that the result of ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of raising their fame and collecting money and student. In addition, some universities attach too much importance to the result of ranking, which wastes large mounts of resources. Last but not least, the university ranking may not be so fair that ranking is not unique and not authoritative, which is easy to mislead high school graduates and their parents. As far as I am concerned, we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, it must be admitted that ranking is an effective way to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work. On the other hand, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way. 字数:255 89 排名:共34篇,本文排名2,最高分90.5,最低分0

评语: 作者词汇基础扎实;作者在句法层面做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错

V era broke with the man six years ago.Six years ago,at that time,they were lovers.They had something in common not only in life but also in soul.When they had looked at each other like that they had felt that their souls had,as it were,put their arms round each other and dropped into the same sea,content,to be drowned,like someone who are mournful.But the man just knew something about himself.They have made some promise like that they would travel around the world together.But they had not carried out their promise,furthermore,finally,they broke up with sadness.Now,they have broken up for six years,but to her surprise,she saw him again.What would happen?

At the first time,the man did not recognize her.Then they sat down at opposite each other.After greeting,they chatting with each other about their conditions now and the experiences of the past six years.During the six years,Vera has suffered much difficulties,on the contrary,the man has gone to so many interesting places which V era envied very much.He told something interesting to her,which made her very sorrowful,but he did not realize that.Instead,he told her his experiences excitedly.Naturally,I had no choice but to say that he had a very clear memory of his own things,ignoring others' things,as it were,he was a typical egoist.He couldn't keep pace with her emotion in time.But she was so sensitive that sometimes what she wanted was only the details which could move her.That is more than sufficient.What a pity,the man had never known that.

Now they should have given up their drawbacks in their characteristics.But nothing has been changed.There was a strange stillness.They were still themselves just like six years ago.As it is in the text,he is still self-engrossed,careless,parsimonious. Also,the same with V era,she is still sensitive,mean,and obstinate.As a consequence,although they are single now,it is inevitable that they cannot become lovers again.At the end,she made a decision to go without any hesitation.