飞人的作文
三年级 记叙文 1614字 382人浏览 bfhwan197716

This picture show(shows ) an American girl in traditional chinese costume. (This picture shows that an American girl wear traditional Chinese costume) I think this is (去掉) means a lot for chinese culture more and more international ( I think this indicates that Chinese culture is becoming more and more international) and(去掉) as the global economy(economy) developing, other cuntries(countries ) have pay more attention for(to ) our cuntry(country ) .

There are saveral(several ) reasons for this phenomenon. Fristly , the great(rapid) developing economic of china give more develop (有这用法?) changes for ther(their ) counties . We work together with many foreigns (这个foreign 是国外的意思可以用外国人foreigners ), meanwhile ,we also share our culture with them. In this way we increase the cultures

communicate (communicate 是动词 应该用communication ).Makes (动词作主语时应用动词~ing形式作主语,应改为Making)chinese (国家开头字母应大写) culture give more influnce (influence 本身可以作动词也可以作名词,可直接Making Chinese cultures have an great influence on other world ’s culture) to the world culture.(这句话前面括号我重新给你写了遍) Secondly, our country has long history and our ancestors created highly civilization and great culture ,so foreigns (应为foreigners ) love (like )to explore Chinese(大写) culture. When they konw (know )more chinese (大写)culture they will fell(fall ) in love with it.

In my opinion, this is good phonomenon (拼写错了)for both us and foreign. (it is benefit for all the world) It is give more(不该用比较级,因为你没比较) changes of communication for us to(with好?不明白这句话意思) world . We should advocate this great job

有些拼写错误我直接给你用括号改过来了,但没换字体颜色,你语法有欠缺,单词掌握的不是很好,继续努力,建议你多背些作文模板!