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九年级英语作文范文

姓名:___________班级:___________

1.假设你是Andy ,请根据下面的汉语提示以“My lifestyle ”为题目写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的小短文。

内容提示:(1)我叫Andy ,14岁。

(2)我每天打篮球,我想成为一名篮球运动员。

(3)我通常早饭吃一个鸡蛋, 喝一杯牛奶;午饭、晚饭吃肉和蔬菜。

(4)我喜欢喝牛奶,因为我需要许多能量。

(5)我不喜欢吃甜食,因为它对健康没有好处。

要求:(1)要点完整,表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;

(2)60词左右。

My lifestyle

【答案】My lifestyle

I ’ m Andy. I’ m 14 years old. I play basketball every day,because I want to be a basketball player. I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast and have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk,because I need so much energy. I don’ t like eating sweet food ,because it is not good for my health.

【解析】试题分析:本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己的生活习惯。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点:这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如I play basketball every day,because I want to be a basketball player.等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点:考查提纲类作文。

2.手机(cell-phone )是现代人经常使用的通讯工具之一,人们用它交流,收发短信, 拍照,上网查询资料等,它使我们的生活方便,快捷。 然而也有人长时间用手机玩 游戏,收发垃圾微信(wechat ),不仅浪费宝贵的时间,也对视力有害处。 请你以cell-phones 为题,谈谈你对手机的看法。

【答案】

One possible version:

The cell-phone is getting more and more popular and it is a good media of communication. Because we can use cell-phones to communicate with each other and send short messages to each other. We also can use them to take photos and surf the Internet instead of using computers. They make our daily life convenient and quick. However, the cell-phones have many disadvantages. Some people spend long time playing the mobile games and receiving or returning wechat. It is bad for our eyes

as well as wastes time.

In my opinion, we should spend adequate time in using cell phones. Only do it like that can we make good use of cell phones

【解析】 试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,谈谈自己对手机的看法。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:The cell-phone is ……. ;We also can ……. ;the cell-phones have ……. ;we should ……. 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己对手机的看法。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了手机的作用,接下来介绍手机带来的弊端,最后提出自己对手机的看法。此处用了communicate with ,send short messages ,spend time in doing sht; is bad for,等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点:提纲作文。

3. 临近毕业之际,学校要举办一场毕业生告别晚会,假如你是九年级一班的李明,将代表班级在会上发言。请结合内容提示以“My speech at the school leavers ’ party ”为题写一篇80-100词的发言稿。

内容提示:

1. How are you feeling while giving the speech?

2. Who do you want to say thanks to?

3. Why do you want to thank them?

4. Your wishes for the future.

要求:

1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;

3. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

My speech at the school leaver’s party

Teachers and classmates,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】My speech at the school leaver’s party

Teachers and classmates,

I ’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school

leaver ’s party.

First, I’d like to thank all our teachers. We have learned a lot from you. You show us your kindness, your patience, and rich knowledge. You’ve dev eloped our interests, skills and made us grow up happily. You’ll always be our role models.

Next, I want to thank my classmates. We’ve studied together, helped each other and had a lot of fun. We have become good friends. Soon we will go to new schools and we may not see each other so often in the future. But I believe our friendship will last forever.

Wish you all success and good luck in the future.

That ’s all. Thank you.

【解析】短文是发言稿的格式,发言稿通常由称呼、正文和结束语组成。

1. 称呼:写在第一行左边,顶格书写。常用的称呼有Dear Mr./Mrs./Miss...,Dear Sir/Madam,Ladies and gentlemen,Boys and girls等。

2. 正文:位于称呼语的下一行,向右缩进四个字母左右。

3. 结束语:演讲结束时,一般要以“That's all.Thank you!”结束。

二、在写发言稿时,要注意以下几点:

1. 演讲目的要明确,正文主题鲜明,观点突出,内容要点全面。

2. 多使用简短的句子。

3. 理清写作顺序,文章前后要连贯。

短文用了一些短语和句式,learn from ;show sb. sth.向某人展示某物;make sb do sth使某人做某事。用了连词but ,and 增加了文章的亮点。

4.假如Mary 是你的好朋友,你们既是最好的朋友又是邻居,6年前初次相识。现在一所混合

【答案】

Mary is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her six years ago. We are now studying in a mixed school.

She has a square face with big eyes. She has long straight hair. She is the slimmest of my friends.

Mary is generous and is willing to share her things with others. She is kind and never says a bad word about anyone. She is also very helpful. She often listens to my problems carefully and offers me help. I can tell her anything because she can keep a secret. Riding a bike is her favorite and she thinks it is one of the healthiest out-door activities.

She has a good voice and sings well. She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第三人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少. 如: be willing to do sth乐意做某事;Riding a bike is her favorite and she thinks it is one of the healthiest out-door activities骑自行车是她的最爱,她认为这是一个健康的户外活动。She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up她长大后想成为一名歌手并且环游世界。, 学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理.

考点:提纲作文。

5.三月份是文明礼貌月,请你以校学生会的名义就“创建文明城市,做文明市民”这一主题,根据下列提示写一封倡议书。

要点提示:

1. 爱护花草树木;

2.不在公共场所随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾;

3.遵守交通规则;

4.尊敬师长,礼貌待人;

5.团结友爱,助人为乐;

………….

注意:

字数在80字左右;倡议书应该包含所有要点;不要逐句翻译,但可适当发挥。

倡议书的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:traffic rules 交通规则;respect vt.尊敬

【答案】

Dear schoolmates ,

Our Jiaozhou City is trying to set up a national civilized (文明的) city . We know it includes excellent environment and good behavior . So we middle school students can do something for it.

First, we should protect flowers and trees.Second, don't throw the rubbish casually

in public. Third, it’s necessary to obey traffic rules.What’s more,we must respect our teachers and parents, and be polite to others. At the same time, everyone ought to get along well with others, and be ready to help others.

It ’s our duty to do what we can to make our city more beautiful. It is by working hard together that we can set up a national civilized city.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇短文要求我们写一份倡议书,并用所给的信息。学生在写的过程中可能会有不会拼写的单词或句意表达不畅。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求根据“创建文明城市,做文明市民”这一主题,写一封倡议书,内容完整,用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。使用了表达顺序的词语First …Second …Third, 有总分总的结构.

考点:提纲类作文

6.书面表达 (共1小题 ; 满分20分)

不以规矩,难成方圆。生活中总会有这样或者那样地规定。我们学校也有许多规定。 其中:1、学生每天必须穿校服上学。

不许化妆(make up)、不许打耳洞、男生不许留长发。

不许带手机上学。

4、……

请用80-100字谈谈你对此校规的看法。

【答案】

We need a school policy

Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. Life is always full of all kinds of rules, so does our school. For example, students must wear uniforms to go to school everyday. In some school, students are not allowed to make up, pierce ears and boys can not wear long hairs. Nowadays, some more new school rules are added to the school policies. For instance, students can not bring phones to school. What ’s more, for some strict school, students are not allowed to go outside without a note and so on.

In my opinion, school policy is a necessity for the students. It can help students get rid of some bad habits and regulate their own behaviors and. Besides, it can help create a strong school atmosphere for students to study. In a word, we need a school policy.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards,无规矩不成方圆;create a strong school atmosphere 创造浓厚的叙述氛围等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理。

考点:话题作文。

7.假如你叫王琳,15岁,9年级2班的学生,你校成立了英语俱乐部,正在招聘会员,请你根据下面的提示,用英语给俱乐部负责人写一封应聘信。(100词左右)

要求:1.先做自我介绍,说明自己的性格:自信,勇于接受挑战;特长爱好,喜欢的颜色及原因。

2.说明要参加原因:英语学得不好,想提高;得到更多知识,更好地了解世界;交许多朋友,分享快乐、忧愁,让生活多彩;……;希望得到机会,以取得进步。

3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/madam,

I ’m Wang Lin.____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!

Yours,

Wang Lin

答案】

I ’m fifteen years old.I ’m in Class 2 Grade 9.I ’m confident and I’m always ready to take on new challenges any time .I ’m good at Chinese and I like chatting with friends on line (I like sports…) .My favourite colour is blue because it can make me feel calm.

I’m not good at English, so I want to be a member of the English club.I want to improve my English ability.I ’d like to get more knowledge and learn more about the world .I hope to make many friends in the club, we can share our ideas and help

each other .Our life will be colourful and interesting .I can also learn how to work with others (team spirit …) .I ’ll be happy if you give me the chance .I ’m sure I can make progress.Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细, 我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,注意写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,逻辑性强。词汇和句型句式运用。使用了适当的连词so ,and ,because ,句式I ’ll be happy if you give me the chance. ,I ’m always ready to take on new challenges any time.等。学习中要注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当应用使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理. 考点:提纲作文

8.书面表达 (满分10分)

My Favorite

要求:

1. 请把题目补充完整再作答,例如你可以写“My Favorite Book”,“My Favorite Music”,“My Favorite Teacher”等。

2. 注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。

3. 不得使用真实姓名和学校。

4. 词数不少于60。

【答案】

My favorite teacher

My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair.

And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,本文所给要点是几个问题,故动笔前先要阅读要点,找出问题的答案。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。 写作亮点:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:be strict with对……严格;be ready to do sth准备做某事;in trouble处于困难中;try one’s best do to sth尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点:材料作为。

9.根据提示和要求,写一篇短文。将短文写在答题卡情景作文空白处。

实现祖国的繁荣复兴是中华民族的伟大梦想, 每一个中国人都有自己的梦想,请以“My

Dream ”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你梦想的工作。

要求:

1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

2.词数:80—100。标题和短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇:grow up, in order to, subjects: math, physics, chemistry,

biology, … , study hard,university, come true , help others

My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a ___________.

【答案】

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I

was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and

they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very

healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more

knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I’ll give my love to the patients as much

as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think

my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以my dream 为题写一篇作文。这是一篇开放性的作文,题目

为我的梦想。梦想是什么,为什么会有这样的梦想,怎样实现梦想,这些内容都需要学生们

自己去完善。关于梦想这个话题,在教材中还是有所涉及的,所以这方面的一些词汇和句型,

学生们应该有一定的积累。写这篇作文时,首先要确定自己的梦想是什么,然后再描述如何

实现这个梦想。题目中给出了一些参考的词汇,写作时可以选择使用。另外还需要注意表达

得流畅和有条理,多使用连词和学过的一些较好的句型和短语。

【亮点说明】这篇一篇比较优秀的范文。在这篇短文中,作者告诉了我们他的梦想是成为一

名医生,而且作者之所以有这样一个梦想跟他小时候的经历是分不开的,所以在文章中作者

还告诉了我们他想成为医生的原因。因为小时候和医生打过交道,所以作者也想成为一名医

生。接着作者写了他该如何来实现自己的梦想。最后坚定认为自己的梦想一定会实现。整篇

短文的结构清晰,叙述完整,有条理。短文中的较好句式有With the help of them, I was

getting better、Since then I have hoped to become a doctor、I will study hard to

get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream、I think my dream will come true

one day等。