最常用功能性段落
1. 现象阐释
2. 利弊分析
3. 个人观点
【成果回顾】
On E-shopping
1.
当前网络购物盛行 2.
网上购物的利与弊 3. 你的看法
第一段：
online shopping, young ladies ordering fashionable dresses from www.taobao.com, young men purchasing magazines from some book-selling website, and even the aged buying household appliances from the Internet.
第二段【版本一】 marketplace on the Internet, we have more choices than ever to pay bill for gas, television or telephone without going to an office several blocks away. marvelous technologybusiness, no department would have a control on the quality of service or commodities.
第二段【版本二】
the pleasure of ordering services or commodities with but few clicks. there is no garden without weeds! This new technology is also blamed by some critics for its inability of having control over the quality of goods or service it offers.
第二段【版本三】 ―Online Transaction‖ E-Business System: convenience, efficiency, and low costs, lack of quality assurance. Consumers who feel overcharged or underserved can hardly find a chance to complain.
第三段【版本一】
adult or a kid, well-educated or just normal, would enjoy the convenience which E-shopping bring us.
第三度【版本二】 the Click-to-Buy process. as a well-educated young lady, I am confident that ―involution makes human, and renovation makes human life‖, and that the march of time will definitely bring about the mature of online shopping system.
Celebrities Being Products’ Spokesmen
1. 明星代言现象很普遍；
2. 明星代言广告可能存在一些问题；
3. 我的看法。
第一段 celebrity’s advertisements on the Internet, televisions, newspapers, magazines or on the outdoor bulletins? celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokesmen or representatives for a wide variety of products.
第二段【版本一】
advertisements celebrities before representing, a star may know nothing about the product. Thus, consumers may be misled. for the sake of money, some stars advertise for items with low quality, even for fake commodities. In the case of Sanlu, the public image of stars involved was spoiled. deserve their labor, which widens the gap between the poor and the rich.
第二段【版本二】
The prevalence of public character advertising seems not unusual, but it has become a social disaster. Admittedly, businessmen have the right and need to make their products household brands with the assistance of superstars’ advertising. However, some of them have broken (blow up) the moral bottom-line. Some celebrities, for their inability of judging the quality of commodities they advertise, get involved into scandal of fake-product advertising and money-oriented boasting. Consequently, the public figure is ruined and consumers are misled.
第二段【版本三】
In just one generation, for millions of people, regardless of their status or background, their consuming decision has been guided by ―Public Figure Advertising‖. Scholars and social researchers from every part of the nation are singing high praise of the value of the social information system: efficient and persuasive, but few have ever looked at the side effect: inaccurate and misleading. Consumers who were persuaded to purchase a substandard product can neither be satisfied nor blame the spokesman – superstar in their mind.
第三段【版本一】
From my point of view, it is high time that measures were taken to eliminate the demerits. Firstly, laws should be worked out to regulate celebrities’ advertising. Secondly, stars should be required to tell the truth to the public. Only by doing so can stars be trusted by their fans and can consumers benefit.
第三段【版本二】
When it comes to the concrete solution to this demerit, it occurs to most people that the best policy is to punish these stars by corresponding laws. Legislation, however, is a time-consuming process, and works only on extreme cases. The key factor lies in the TV institutions, while those ―superstars‖ are not the core of the corrupted group. Therefore, a better approach may be to take measures against these organizational ―rumor producers‖.
附录：经典观点对比型作文常用句型
Para. 1 （第一段开头句）
1. There arises a controversial debate over whether . Those who are in favor of … deem that is advisable to …. According to them, no one could … without ….
2. We often find ourselves caught in a dilemma, whether we should 3. Whether we shoulddiscussion.
4. Whether we shouldcontroversial issue.
5. As to whether we should, people’s views are divergent.
6. Whether we should is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well.
例：Whether we should read selectively or extensively is a very popular topic which is often talked not only by students but by most scholars as well.
Para. 2 （第二段开头句）
1. The arguer may be right about …., but he seems to neglect / fail to mention (take into account ) the fact that …
2. It would be nature to take the view that …., but it would be absurd to claim that ….
3. Such idea, if not entirely is somewhat misleading / doubtful and needs careful consideration.
Para. 3 （第三段开头句）
1. If asked to make a choice, I would not hesitate to side with the former / latter view.
2. Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …
Students' Commonweal Activity
1. 目前大学生有很多机会参与公益活动；
2. 有人认为参与这些活动对学生有益，而另些人则认为会影响学业；
3. 你的看法。
In a world of increasing diversity, college students have more access to participating in
commonweal activities. No better example than the following one can illustrate this trend. On 8th, Aug. 2008, tens of thousands of young college students were organized to be volunteers of the grand event, Beijing Olympic Games, serving the athletes, referees and spectators from every part of the world.
Whether it is a blessing or curse for students to take part in such an activity has triggered a heated discussion among the general public and students themselves alike. Some folks, longing for the corresponding trainings, deem it an opportunity for students not only to acquire practical skills, but to broaden their horizon. Sadly, others cling to the idea that it is totally a waste of time, spending a whole summer on something irrelevant to academic practice.
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