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那么按2013年12月四六级考试在即,在近年四六级写作灵活命题和高跑题率的背景下,如果再死板的按照传统背诵模板的方式去准备作文可能是死路一条;如有人将作文分为“图画作文”、“话语评论”、“提纲作文”,甚至还有更加细致的分为“观点对比型”、“问题解决型”、“现象意义型”或“谚语警句型”,这样的总结方式优点是细致,缺点是繁琐,致命的硬伤是“考试题目不一定会按照某个老师总结的类型”去考。而且阅卷发现,作文跑题的原因之一就是死板的背诵了模板或预测作文,在话题相类似的情况下,直接将背诵预测作文写上去,忽略题目的要求,导致直接失分。

因此,死背模板和考前押宝预测作文都不太靠谱。也有“10大”、“20大”、甚至“30大”冠以“必备、必背”之类的字眼。试问,30篇作文还叫预测吗?

相反,不如静下心来,仔细想想考试是怎么回事吧!

只要是命题作文,就一定给出“话题”和“内容要求”;那么按照“话题”和“内容要求”写相应的功能段落和表达就确保不跑题。以下给出的文章和内容基于课堂所讲的“功能段落和表达”,目的在于帮助有缘在新东方课堂相识的同学复习课堂所讲,并帮助考生重温“现象”、“建议”、“意义”、“原因”、“观点(利弊)”和“危害”的功能表达。复习时,请勿追求面面俱到,重点复习现象、建议和意义,如果有时间也复习其他三种功能段。范文中重复部分是常见功能表达。

话题1:老年人孤独生活

Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself ” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”

首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人/物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。

Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children ’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness,it is advisable for their children to spend more time in

parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find itdifficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.

二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if 句为图画简单评论;in contemporary society 一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile 一句为相关人+具体感受;however 之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。

As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us

toaccompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words) 尾段首句:观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。

话题2:网络谣言

Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “It is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet rumors. ” You can cite some examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

Given is a simple but thought-provoking remark: “it is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet

rumors. ” Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the seriousness of rumors: if we intend to have a positive Internet environment, it is advisable to eliminate/refuserumors. (51)

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for individuals to surf the Internet for the information they need. Meanwhile, an increasing number of people find it rather difficult to distinguish the true news from rumors. Searching the Internet, we can notice a great many examples like this: false news, ads and pictures. (危害) Then, it is these rumors that lead the public to be cheated, confused and even panic. As a matter of fact, experts in large numbers have come to realize the importance of Internet honesty.

As a regular Internet surfer, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for government to punish rumor makers. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to refusemaking and spreading rumors. Sparing no efforts to do so, we will witness a hopeful and promising future of Internet life.

话题3:延迟退休

Directions :For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Retirement Age Be Postponed? You ’d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Your writing should be based on the following outline.

1. 近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3. 我的看法

Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admitthat aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up

enough work-force.As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view thatpostponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

I am convinced that we should take into account the wishes of old people. If those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks; if not, it is advisable for the society to create a comfortable twilight for them. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising and hopeful. (187 words)

话题4:教育回报

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay

entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120

Given is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in2010,it had become a trend fordoctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and

$1038. Meanwhile, we can notice that weekly earnings of college graduates with no degrees, those with high school diploma and people with less than high school diploma were $712, $626 and $444 respectively.

(注:图表描述没有必要面面俱到,写出大体趋势即可。)

Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of

education: if individuals intend to acquire/ gain/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. In contemporary America, it has become a trend for a host of companies/firms/corporations/

organizations to hire doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.

As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. Do bear in mind: education is a worthy investment.

v 照“话题”和“内容要求”写相应的功能段落和表达就确保不跑题。以下给出的文章和内容基于课堂所讲的“功能段落和表达”,目的在于帮助有缘在新东方课堂相识的同学复习课堂所讲,并帮助考生重温“现象”、“建议”、“意义”、“原因”、“观点(利弊)”和“危害”的功能表达。复习时,请勿追求面面俱到,重点复习现象、建议和意义,如果有时间也复习其他三种功能段。范文中重复部分是常见功能表达。

你的一个疑虑:大家写的都一样,会不会认为是抄袭或模板????? 放一百个心:你的文章放在400万考生中,根本看不出来。

考前一天,作文还能涨20分,如何做到??

1. 背写: 记住,没有必要全部背诵以下作文,但必须背诵高度重复的表达。因此,重点背诵:一定要注意两种类型作文写作思路上的差别。

以下几篇范文中重复的部分、就是这次四、六级写作必然能够写上的句式表达。 一定要写:

一定要将所背内容写到自己作文中,一定要字迹工整。你就可以涨分了!!

2.放松心态:只要你准备背写,只要你用上了你背写的表达,你的写作也许拿不了高分,但一定不会因此丢分。

3. 对待预测,不抱有赌博的心态。仔细审读、体会范文中的思路、表达才是重点。

但不敢保证这次必考我预测的作文,但只要用了你背诵的内容,你写作不会太差!

4. 如果赌题,不要在考试后骂我!

5. 活学活用是关键。

关于作文类型是2011年12月那样的全英文要求的作文,还是传统汉语提纲+英文题目的作文类型,笔者认为两种均有可能:几率各占50%,个人倾向于回归传统命题方式:即英语题目+汉语提纲。

但相同的话题重复可能性不大,2011年12月话题均涉及到“成功”,因此,今年2012年6月与“成功”直接相关的话题可能性不大。

有几个万能句,首先进行背诵,考试肯定能写上。

现象描述万能句:

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for _____ to _______. 中间段:

As a vital quality/ awareness/ virtue/ part of life, _____ brings us power , arouses our enthusiasm for life, and helps us to _____.

It is _____ that enables _____ to build up _______.

尾段:

(建

议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classma tes (not) to _______

(展望未来)

If we try our utmost to do so, the future of _____will be promising, hopeful and rosy.

第一部分:全英文作文

1. 乐观

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essa y entitled Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future by commenting on the T agore ’ saying, "If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss t he stars." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future

Our history has been filled with a variety of enlightening sayings, and the following is no exception: if you shed tears when you miss the sun, you wil l also miss the stars. This remark can be naturally associated with the sig nificance of optimism: if one intends to witness a promising future, it is advisable for him to be optimistic.

历史上有很多发人深省的话语,下面这个就不例外:“如果你为错过太阳而流泪,那么你可能还会错过星星。”该评论使人很自然地联想到乐观的重要性:假如一个人想要看到光明的未来,他最好应该保持乐观。

Optimism is the key to success in all fields of activity, and it can be like ned to the road to a promising future. (排比句:重点背三个动词:

bring, arouse, help)First, as a vital psychological quality, optimism bri ngs us power, arouses our enthusiasm for work, and helps us overcome diffic ulties. (强调句式:一定能

写)Second, it is optimistic attitude that enables people to build up confi dence, hope and courage. (所有作文万能句)

As a matter of fact, successful people in mounting numbers

have come to realize the necessity of optimism in life, work and study. 乐观是各行各业成功的关键,而且它可以被比作通向光明未来的道路。首先,作为一种极其重要的心态,乐观会带给我们极大的动力,让我们对工作充满热情、帮助我们战胜困难。同时,正是一种乐观的心态使得人们积累了自信,希望和勇气。事实上,成功人士们早已经意识到乐观在生活工作和学习中的必要性。 (观

点)As a college student, I am firmly convinced that optimism is the road to success. (建议:一定写上)

Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to cultivate optimism.( 如果字数不够:结尾展望未来:

If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our life will be hopeful, promis ing and rosy.) (223 words )

作为一名大学生,我坚信乐观就是成功之路。因此,我们应该鼓励、倡导和支持

朋友和同学们去培养乐观精神。 (假如我们能尽最大努力这样做,未来生活一篇美好。)

第一篇作文可以写如下话题:A strong will(11年12

月), confidence, cooperation or teamwork, courage, patience, practice(97年) ,a good preparation(11年12月六级主题) ,

perseverance, modesty, diligence, unity, knowledge, sense of happiness, p unctuality, a willing heart, 志愿者精神(volunteers )互助(mutual help)创新精神(innovation )

第二部分:提纲式作文

一、慈善机构公信力

My View on Charity

1. 近年,部分慈善机构或个人受到批评质疑

2. 出现这种现象原因(重点背诵段)

3. 我的看法

Charity brings the society power, arouses people ’s enthusiasm for life, an d help others to overcome difficulties. However, after several scandals, i t has become a trend for the public to criticize and doubt charity organiza tions or individuals. A case in point is China Red Cross, whose fame was spo iled by Guo Meimei.

It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first p lace, the disordered charity management is the root cause of criticism. Wh y? Charity organizations in mounting/ large numbers have not come to reali ze the problems in their management, budget and raising money. In the secon d place, the lack of public ’s trust constitutes another major cause. Based on a survey on the Internet, because of some negative cases, a majority of p eople admit that they are unwilling to donate or help others through charit able activities or organizations.

As a college student, I am firmly convinced that it is exceedingly necessar y for the public to be involved in charity. However, we should advocate and encourage organizations to reform charitable activities. (174)

二、退休制

Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?

1. 近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3. 我的看法

Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit t hat aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along wit h the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes , it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-f orce. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize t his problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that

postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old pe ople stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help t hem to enjoy their retirement pension.

I am convinced that we should balance old people ’ interest and this aging so ciety. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we try our u tmost to do so, the future of old people ’ life will be promising, hopeful an d rosy. (187 words)

三、 幸福感

How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness

1. 人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法

2. 幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面,也指。。。

The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the wa y to enhance it.

In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to severa l others aspects. Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individu als admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequa tely, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friend ship and love. Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a soli d foundation for anything significant.

As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encoura ge our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their hor izon and cultivate their ability. (168 words)

四、 大学生电子设备

Are Advanced Electronic Products Necessary for College Students?

1. 如今,大学生谱表拥有较高级电子设备,如智能手机,电子词典等

2. 对此人们看法不一

3. 我的看法

On many campuses, it has become a prevalent trend for college students to u se various advanced electronic products. Taking a look around, we can find a great many products like this: smart cell phones, E-dictionaries and so o n.

A number of individuals favor college students ’ using these pieces of equip ment. To begin with, as necessary products, they can bring college student s more convenience, arouses their awareness of keeping up with IT developm ent. In addition, it is these advanced products that enable students to bui ld up their speed and efficiency. Even so , others hold a different view. Fi rst, according to a recent survey on the Internet , a majority of students a

dmit that an iPhone is exceedingly expensive for them. Second, students in mounting numbers have come to realize that advanced products are based on t heir parents' hard work.

As a college student, I am convinced that not all students should purchase these high-tech and expensive products. However, we should advocate and en courage friends and classmates to buy, if they earn money by themselves . (175 words)