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英语作文杂谈

写好英语作文的关键

套用句型, 背诵大量范文, 达到熟悉这些地道的句子结构! 并提取其中的关键句型,活用到你的作文中去,就可以获得高分!写作步骤,做到“一审二写三连四改五通读六地道”。

了解英汉语言的表达习惯

英、美人的思维习惯是“一般特殊型模式”,即先概括、总结、整体、总述、结果,后举例、讲解、分解、叙事及修饰和说明,语义重心在前,而汉语正好相反。

汉语的修饰语前置,句首开放,句尾收缩。英语修饰语后置,句首封闭,句尾开放。 试比较:汉语:

棒!

真棒!

干得真棒!

你干得真棒!

这事儿你干得真棒!

没想到你这事儿干得真棒!

真没想到你这事儿干得真棒!

我真没想到你这事儿干得真棒!

说实在的我真没想到你这事儿干得真棒!

英语:

This is the cat.

This is the cat that killed the rat.

This is the cat that killed the rat that ate the rice.

This is the cat that killed the rat that ate the rice that lay in the house . This is the cat that killed the rat that ate the rice that lay in the house that

Hover built last year.

思考:(先译英,再比较英汉两种语言的思维模式)

I read a book quietly in the library all afternoon.

I flew to New York from Beijing this morning.

I haven’t seen you since last Sunday/for a year.

I’m at my office from 9a.m to/till 5p.m.

You can keep this VCD as long as you like.

关于书信和看图作文

写好英语文章的20字诀

Agreement: 主语和谓语在人称、数上的一致,关系代词与先行词的一致。

Ambiguity: 尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。

Brief: 文章" 简为贵" ,要抓住要点,简明扼要。

Coherence: 文理通顺,前后连贯。

Development: 主题的发挥应当充分、合理、正确。

Division: 词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当,划分要清楚,避免使用重复字句和种子片段。 Figures: 正确合理使用各类修辞格式。

Inflated diction: 不使用做作的语言。

Key: 用适当的关键词突出主题,每段都应有主题句。

Logical: 内容要符合逻辑。

Message: 信息要新鲜、确实、可信。

Omit: 合理删除多余的不必要部分。

Proposition: 主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。

Punctuation: 正确适时使用标点符号。

Relevant: 文章一定要要题。

Sentence pattern: 句型要尽量多样化。

Strait: 开门见山,直来直去。

Style: 文体恰切,适合内容要求。

Tense: 动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。

Theme: 选题得当,主题突出

记叙文的写作

记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”,因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如: Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the

front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3. 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. She served them with tea but they left.

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

"Don 't worry, we'll send you home."

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.

走出英语作文的误区

误区Ⅰ 使用句型太复杂以致出错

小作文的写作强调的是内容连贯,句子通顺,语言流畅,并且句子与句子之间能够用恰当的关联词衔接起来,并不要求写出多复杂的句子。但有些考生理解为只有句子长了,所用的从句多了才更纯正,所以使用各种从句分词等,致使文章言不达意,错误百出,效果适得其反。

误区Ⅱ 加入太多的想象成分,使内容细节过多,文章冗长。

学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够,再加上对于“可适当增减细节,不可字对字的翻译”的误解,于是加入了很多离题较远的细节,乱了主题。不可字对字其实只要求学生不可简单照译,并非不可翻译。学生只要在理解写作要求的基础上以翻译为主,在要点之间加上简练恰当与必要的关联词和关联句即可。翻译要点可直译也可意译,但要恰当准确,用已学过的词语与句型,切不可生搬硬造。

误区Ⅲ 书写不规范造成大量失分。

由于该卷的主观性,作文的卷面分往往不只1、2分。因此写作的规范与书法非常重要,甚至所用墨水的颜色也应列入考虑之列,比如,浅色的墨水或油笔写出的字就显得乱,而深色的如碳素墨水则给人以整齐美观的印象。这里介绍几个应注意的地方。

1. 好的开头和结尾。由于评卷人的主观性,好的开头与结尾往往给人以好的印象。一般开头不要写得太罗嗦,要找着恰当的切入点,快速入题,简洁明快。结尾同样不拖泥带水,最好还能适当评论,写出点睛之笔。

2. 用好关联词。在写作的过程中,以下关联词的应用非常关键。比如,表并列的and ,besides ,as well as,in addition to,not only„but also,when ,表递进的furthermore ,what 's more,what 's worse,表转折的but ,while ,on the contrary,on the other hand,however ,表选择的either „or „,whether „or „,otherwise 等。有了这些词的连接,就会使文章变得语句通顺,层次清楚,有声有色,考生勿需用很多的复合句也能让评卷人感觉到你的水平不同一般。

3. 用好标点符号、大小写,安排好段落。如果是汉语作文,学生大多注意标点符号,但写英语时一些考生就不够认真。一篇文章下来一逗到底,没有标点的变化,没有大小写,没有段落划分(一般以两段为宜),让人一看就烦,更不要说得到好的分数。

4. 用好情感词语。任何文章都有自己的观点,英语小作文也不例外。考生应注意用一些能反映自己观点的词,否则文章就很干瘪,没有韵味。没有人愿意读没有感情的作文。

5. 书写清楚,整洁,规范。

英语作文的结尾方式示例

文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。

文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种:

1、首尾呼应,画龙点睛

在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her” (我忘不了她) 的结尾:

After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.

2、重复主题句

结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town ”(我爱家乡) 的结尾:

I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.

3、自然结尾

随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing ”(钓鱼) 的结尾:

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.

4、含蓄性的结尾

用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子) 的结尾:

Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.

5、用反问结尾

虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,并具有特别的强调作用,引起读者深思。如“Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。

Everyone should learn to do housework. Don’t you agree, boys and girls?

6、指明方向,激励读者

结尾表示对将来的展望,或期待读者投入行动。如“Let ’s Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动) 的结尾:

As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let’s go in for sports.

文章的结尾没有一定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是,一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语,以便使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。

中考满分作文欣赏

向外国友人简单介绍黄山( the Yellow Mountain )

( 2002 年安徽省)安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山( the Yellow Mountain )。

( 1 )位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。( 2 )乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。( 3 )登山便可领略其云海( the sea of clouds )、奇松( wondrous pines )、怪石( unique rocks )等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意 1 词数: 80 词左右。 2 请不要逐字翻译。

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China . It lies in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there . It's not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain , you can enjoy the sea of clouds , wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises , the sky looks very beautiful . It 's really a nice place to visit .

中国与WTO

中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我市——河源参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求: 1. 100 词左右; 2. 要点包括: a. 有悠久的历史,位于广东的东北部,离广州 198 公里,人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹,如苏家围( Sujiawei );万绿湖( WanluLake )等等;万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方,湖水清澈,无污染;湖中有各种各样的鱼;你可以到那里划船,野餐,钓鱼,是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观河源市博物馆,在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石( fossil )。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils. I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

Thank you.

我最喜欢的节日

There are a lot of holidays for chinese people, such as National day, May Day, etc. However, chinese people look on spring festival as their most important one of all.And it's also my favorite festival, especially when I was a child, because In those days, I could have a plenty of delicious food to eat, enjoy a very long holiday and wear beautiful clothes. And what is more important is that I could received much new year's gift money. So, everyyear, I expected the spring festival would come soon. After I grew up, it's no longer as important to me as before . For I can have my delicious food and wear my favorite clothes every day. It's like I'm having spring festival every day!

一年有很多节日, 如国庆节,劳动节等等,但中国人看的最重的还是春节。我也很喜欢做春节。尤其是小时候,因为一到春节不但可以吃到好多好吃的,而且还能放很长的假,穿漂亮的衣服,最主要的是可以收到好多压岁钱,小时候总盼望着春节的到来。长大了,春节好像没那么重要了。因为现在天天都能吃到好吃的,穿自己喜欢的衣服,就想天天都在过年 My Chinese Teacher,My Chinese Teacher范文

以"My Chinese Teacher"为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1、孙老师今年36岁, 中等身材。

2、她关心。热爱学生, 工作认真负责。

3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short. She works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Asking the Way问路

根据下列提示,编写一段题为“问路”的对话(60--80个字):

Green 太太想去博物馆,但不知如何走,于是就向一位警察询问。警察告诉她沿街走到第二个十字路口向左拐,拐角过去第三幢楼就是博物馆。

Asking the Way

Mrs. Green: Excuse me, but could you tell me the way to the museum?

Policeman : Certainly. Just go up this street and turn left at the second crossing. The third building from the corner is the museum. You can’t miss it.

Mrs. Green: Oh, let me see. Go down this street, turn left at the second crossing. and the museum is the third building from the corner. Am I right?

Policeman : Yes, that’s right.

Mrs. Green: Thank you very much. Bye-bye.

Policeman : You are welcome. Bye-bye.

编写一段题为“Giving a Gift”的对话

根据下列提示,编写一段题为“Giving a Gift”的对话(50个字左右):

提示:

(1) 圣诞节, Xiao Chen拜访了 Elizabeth ,并送给她一件礼物。礼物是一只漂亮的竹 篮。

(2) Elizabeth当场打开了礼物。她非常高兴,说这正是她所喜欢的,并再次感谢小陈。

Giving a Gift

Elizabeth : Hello, Xiao Chen! Merry Christmas!

Xiao Chen: Merry Christmas, Elizabeth. This is a small gift for you.

Elizabeth : Oh, thank you so much. May I open it now?

Xiao Chen: Sure. I hope you like it. (after opening the gift)

Elizabeth : My! What a beautiful bamboo basket! This is exactly what I like! It’s so nice of you, Xiao Chen. Thank you again.

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

2008奥运的中考英语作文

一、2001 年 7 月 13 日,你的美国朋友给你写了一封信,祝贺北京申奥成功。收到信后你给他写了一封信,介绍了你们是如何庆祝申奥成功的。回信应包括下列图画所示内容,并邀请他在 2008 年来中国。

注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 信的开头和结尾已写好。

生词: 1. 竞标成功 win the bid for„„ 2. 出墙报 put up a wall newspaper

Dear Bill,

Very glad to receive your letter of July 13. ________________________________________ ------------------------------------------------------------------------.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Hua

内容要点:

1. 向美国朋友道谢。

2. 听到北京申奥成功的消息非常激动。

3. 召二人来家商量庆祝方式。

4. 三人到教室出墙报。

5. 周一同学们看到墙报的反应。

6. 邀请美国朋友 2008 年来北京观看奥运会。

Bear Bill,

Very glad to receive your letter of July 13. Thank you for your congratulations. I was very excited when I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games. Immediately I called Wei Guo and Li Hong to my house. After a brief discussion we decided to put up a wall newspaper for our class. We hurried to our classroom and began to work. Wei Guo wrote a poem. Li Hong copied some news from the newspapers. I drew an Olympic flag. The next Monday, our classmates were both surprised and overjoyed when they saw the wall newspaper.

I hope you can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008. Then I 'll be very happyto be your guide.

二、北京奥运一名志愿者让外国朋友更多地了解北京

( 2002 年黄冈市)小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者:他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友„„在交谈中,小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明,并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴,他甜蜜地笑了„„

请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象,写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出(不计入总词数)。

内容要求:

( 1 )帮助外国朋友;( 2 )与外国朋友交谈;( 3 )感谢小明;( 4 )小明很高兴。 词汇参考: try ( do ) one 's best , find ( that ), heavy ( lost ), carry ( show , take ), taxi ( car , bike ), on the way , talk with ( about )

Xiao Ming had a dream (梦) last night . In the dream , he volunteered to serve (志愿列队) the Beijing Olympics .

Xiao Ming had a dream last night. In the dream, he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olympics. He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries. When he found a foreign friend worried in the street, he went up to him and asked him what was the matter. The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack, and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel. Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel. Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing. Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming's English was very good. Xiao Ming was very happy. He smiled and smiled, then he woke up.

三、我与奥运

New Beijing, Great Olympics

The 2008 Olympic Game has been the most cheerful and anticipated event throughout Beijing ever since Beijing was rewarded the right to host the 2008 Summer Olympic Games, yet the focus should be shifted from making a promise to fulfilling the promise made.

In my point of view, to bridge the gap between the promise and reality, Beijing still has a long way to go. To begin with, infrastructure construction should be the primary concern. Such infrastructures as communications and transportation system and facilities ought to draw our constant attention. First, traffic jam has been an age old headache in Beijing. The scene of long queues of vehicles worming their way inch by inch will surely cause great incontinence, and blemish the image of the city meanwhile. Next, to add enchantment to convenience, overall city planning is indispensable. Time permitting, a redesign of city layout and adjustment of architectural style would provide a better environment for fostering the characteristic, blending, oriental elegance with international grandeur, will tower aloft among surrounding architectures. To achieve such effect, Beijing shall solicit opinions from first rate architects and make an overall plan. Thirdly, quality of the population should be improved. To make an international metropolis, both “hardware” and “software” are important.

However, Rome was not built in a day. To carry out the promise of “New Bei jing, Great Olympics”, deeds speak louder than words.

四、北京将举办2008年奥运会,做为一个初中生你将为奥运做些什么

We 've been waiting for so long,and at last it comes true!The 29th Olympic Games will be held in our great country.It 's not only a time to show how strong our altiletes are but also a valuable chance to exhibit how beautiful and thriving our country is!

We are junior school students now ,so we have to do something for the Olympic Games.We can pay attention to protect our environment or do some other things to do a little contribution to the famous activity.

I hope the 29th Olympic Games will be held successfully!

五、2008年奥运会我要做一名志愿者

I want to be a volunteer of beijing olympic games. I realized the time flies.I must study english very hard. Because English is very useful and it is very important. And to be a volunteer of the olympic games is good for myself too.I can make some friends from different countries and learn more about sport,about olympic. But the first thing to perpare this is study hard, I am confident i will to be a good volunteer and I will show the world:our country and our cities are so perfect in the world.

爱护动物-Take Care of Animals

June 23rd Sunday Sunny

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking, "Don't do that. It's bad for it. If you really love them, take good care of them." His face turned red and answered he wouldn't do that again.

今天是个风和日丽的好天,我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱,大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的,一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说:“不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们,就应该爱护它们。”他的脸红了,并且回答说他不会再那么做了。

It was very fine today. It was neither too hot nor too cold.He Song and I went to Beijing Zoo

we often hear the saying"Time is money."But I think time is much more precious than money.Because If we lost time, we can 't find it.But We can try to woke harder to get more money.No matter whatever you do ,you can not get lost time back.

"Time flies.time and tides wait for no men".You can see how important time is.Lunxun had said"I spent the time on my work while others are havig coffee."We must make good use of our time,especially for our students,we shouldn't waste time in playing games and the like.

最激动人心的时刻-The Most Exciting Moment

We were very excited to hear that the Shenzhou-V carrying the 38-year-old astronaut Yang, lifted off on Wednesday at 9:00 a.m. at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre, Gansu Province. After 21-hours and 23 minutes, the Shenzhou-V manned spacecraft landed in northern China. The success was exciting not only for all Chinese, but also for people around the world. That is an honor of our great motherland.

All of our classmates decide to study harder. We wish we could fly into the space by the spacecraft one day.

我们听到这个好消息简直太激动了,载着38岁宇航员杨利伟的神州五号载人航天飞机于上午九点钟在甘肃九泉卫星发射中心发射成功。21小时23分钟之后,它降落在中国北部。它的成功,不但使全中国振奋,而且也使全世界为之兴奋。这是我们伟大祖国的荣誉。

我们全体同学都决心加倍努力地学习。我们希望有一天,我们也能乘坐宇宙飞船飞往太空。

This morning China launched the first manned spacecraft.When we heard the great mews, we couldn 't help cheering and dancing. The century-old dream has come true. It is important not only for our country, but also for the world. We are very happy to see our motherland becoming stronger. We are proud of her.

Now China's first astronaut, Yang Liwei has become our idol and it is the students' dream to work in the future for space exploration. So we must do our best to study. When we grow up, we will work hard to make our country richer and stronger.

今天我国第一架载人航天飞机发射成功。当我们听到这一特大好消息时,我们禁不住欢呼雀跃起来。千年的梦想得以实现。这不光是对我们国家,同时对整个世界都有着重要意义。我们高兴地看到,我们的祖国变得更加强盛。我们为她自豪。

现在我国第一名宇航员杨利伟已经成为同学们的偶像了,而他们的梦想就是将来去太空探险。所以我们必须尽最大努力搞好学习。等我们长大了,为祖国富强而奋斗。 My Dreams

I want to be a teacher when I listen to my teacher carefully. I think I can be a teacher when I grow up. I can help many students learn things well. I can play with my students, too. So we are good friends. I want to be a doctor when I see many doctors save their patients. To be a doctor is really great. I think I can be a doctor when I grow up. Then I can help many people out of danger. I will be the happiest girl in the world. I want to be a reporter when I watch TV every evening. We can get lots of important information from them. They make the world smaller and also make us happy. I would like to be a reporter when I grow up. And I can learn a lot about China and the other countries around the world. I can meet many superstars as well. I have lots of dreams. I think my dreams can come true one day, because there’s an old saying “where there is a will, there is a way.”

Form a Good Habit(养成好习惯)

We can have good habits and bad habits. "Early to bed, early to rise,Makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise."

This is an old English saying. It tells us that we must go to bed early and get up early. If we do it every day, we shall be healthy, rich and clever. Some people go to bed late at night and get up late in the morning. This is not good for them. We must sleep when it is dark. When daylight comes, we must get up.This is the time for exercise. If the body is not used, it becomes weak. Exercise keeps our body strong.

If you want to keep healthy, you must form a good habit.

参观动物园-Visiting the Zoo

Welcome to the zoo. I'm Xiao Wang. Today I will show you around the zoo. Now let me tell you the plan for today. First, we will go to the Lion Park. Then we will go to the Monkey Hill. You can see the lovely monkeys there. The Bird World is next to the Monkey Hill. There are all kinds of birds. Finally, we will go to the Panda House. The famous animals look very honest. You will like them very much. Remember, don't feed them. Let's take good care of the animals. I hope you will have a good time. Thank you.

欢迎来到动物园参观。我是小王,今天我将带领你们参观动物园。现在我说说今天的安排。首先,我们要去狮子园,然后我们去猴山,在那里你们能看到可爱的猴子。鸟世界紧邻猴山,那儿有各种各样的美丽的鸟。最后我们去的是熊猫馆,著名的熊猫看上去憨态可掬,你们会喜欢它们的。记住,千万不要投喂动物。让我们好好保护它们。

希望你们过得愉快。谢谢。

Welcome to Beijing Zoo. Let me introduce myself. I 'm Wang Ping. You can call me Xiao Wang. Today I'll show you around our zoo. Our zoo is the biggest in China, and it has the largest number of animals. Here is the plan for today. We'll go to the Panda House first. You can see the world famous animal.They look very lovely and honest. Then we,Il watch the beautiful birds. The Monkey Hill is near to the Bird World. The clever monkeys will welcome you warmly. Finally, we'll go to the Lion Park. Don't be close to such animal.

Please remember, don't feed the animals. OK! Have a good holiday! Thank you.

欢迎来到动物园参观。我来自我介绍一下,我叫王平,你们可以叫我小王。今天我来带大家游览动物园。我们的动物园是全国最大的也是动物最多的。下面是今天参观的顺序。我们先去熊猫馆,你们可以看到世界上著名的动物,熊猫,它们看上去既可爱又憨厚。然后我们去看那些美丽的鸟。猴山离鸟世界很近,聪明的猴子将会热情地迎接你们。最后我们要去狮子园,不要靠近那些凶猛的动物。

请记住,不要投喂动物。好吧,玩得愉快! 谢谢!

我家有了电子邮件-My Family Has E-mail Box

“叔叔来信了! ”我高兴地喊道。可这封来信与以往叔叔寄来的信不同。这是一封电子邮件! 很久以前叔叔就到美国去了。他非常关心我的学习情况,因此经常写信给我。但是他的信要经过很长时间才能到。几年以后,我们家装了电话,这样我们交流起来就方便多了,可费用也升上去了。现在好了,我们都买了电脑并且可以上因特网。这样我们可以随时交谈,而且花费并不多。世界真是越变越好了。

"Here comes uncles letter!" I shouted happily. But this letter was different from those he sent to me before. It was an email! My uncle went to the United States long ago. But he cared about my study and life very much. So he wrote me often. But it would take a long time for his letter to arrive. Several years later, my family set up a telephone set, It became easier for us to communicate, but we cost more money by calling each other. Now we both had a computer and

could get on the Intemet. Then we could talk to each other any time we wanted to, and it wouldn't cost much.The world is changing, and it is changing better and better.

课间十分钟-Ten Minutes Break Between Classes

下课了,同学们就像脱了缰绳的马一样欢腾起来。你看,他们有的离开座位打闹着,伴随着一阵阵尖叫声和欢笑声;有的并没离开座位,他们在充分利用时间做小游戏。瞧,他们一会儿争得不可开交,一会又一团和气;有的人则安静地坐在那里若有所思。他们还时不时地停下来观看别人的打闹。多么充满活力的课间十分钟啊。

Class is over. The students are jumping with joy, just like runaway horses. Look, some of them have left their seats and begin to play noisily. They are laughing and screaming from time to time. Some don 't leave their seats. They are making use of the short time to play games. Sometimes they argue so seriously and sometimes they appear so polite. Others are sitting in their seats, as if they are thinking of something. Now and then they will stop to watch what others are doing. What an active ten minutes' break it is!

失败-Failure

没有人喜欢失败,但并不是所有的人任何时候都能成功。可惜的是有些人遭到失败后一蹶不振。我们必须学会接受失败。毕竟,失败也不总是一件坏事情,我们可以从失败中学到很多东西。有一句名言是,“失败是成功之母。”我们可以从失败中了解自己的缺点,吸取一些经验。这样如果我们下一次决定东山再起的话,成功就比较容易了。而且失败也可以使我们的意志变得更坚强。

No one likes failure in his life. But not all can always succeed. It's a pity that someone will never stand up after a failure. We must learn to accept failure. After all, failure is not always a bad thing. We can learn something from it. Just as the saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success. "We can know our own shortcomings and learn some experiences from a real failure, ff we made up our minds to start again, it will be easier to succeed next time. Furthermore, failure can make our will stronger.

地球——我们的母亲-The Earth——Our Mother

Pcople often say that the earth is like our mother. She gives life to all the living things on the earth and provides us with air, food, water and other essential things we need for living.

Once she was beautifhl and rich, but now she becomes dirtier and dirtier, poorer and poorer. It is due to what we have done to her. Please have a good look at her: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wild life, and the depletion of the ozone layer… Can she bear to see her children putting the waste here and there? Can she bear too see her children cutting down the trees and destroying the grassland, to see the acid rain destroying everything? Can we bear to see our mother suffering so much? Isn' it time for us to ask ourselves whether this is the way to treat our mother?

Floods, draughts, acid rain„,these are the punishments from nature. Everyone should know that there is only one earth, lfwe go on treating her like this, it won' t be fit for us to live in any longer. It' s time for us to love her, take good care of her and cure her. We should save the earth so as to save ourselves.

地球——我们的母亲

人们经常说地球就像我们的母亲。她给了地球上所有生物生命,给我们提供生活所必需的空气、食物、水和一切基本的需要。

曾经她美丽富饶,而现在她变得越来越脏,越来越贫脊,那都是我们造成的。请好好看一看她:受污染的江河湖海、扩张的沙漠、森林和野生生物的毁灭、臭氧层的耗尽„„

她能忍受她的孩子到处乱扔废弃物吗? 她能忍受她的孩子砍伐树木、毁坏草原,让酸雨毁灭一切吗? 我们能忍受她遭受这样的痛苦吗? 我们该问问我们自己,这就是我们对待母亲的方式吗?

洪水、干旱、酸雨„„这些都是自然对我们的惩罚。每个人都应该清楚人类只有一个地球。如果我们继续这样对待她,她将不再适合我们居住了。是该我们好好爱她、照顾她、治疗她的时候了。我们应该拯救地球,以便拯救我们自己。

钱能给我们带来什么-What Can Money Bring to Us

金钱在我们的生活中占有重要的地位。没有钱,我们无法办事,甚至不能生活下去。因此,有些人认为金钱就是一切。他们用钱可以买到所有他们想要的东西。有的人甚至通过偷、骗取金钱。当然,他们最终的结果就是受到惩罚。因此金钱不仅能给我们带来幸福,而且也能给我们带采不幸。

Money is very important in our life. We can do nothing and can't even live on without money. So some people think money is everything. With money, they can buy everything they want. Someone even gets money by stealing and cheating. Of course, they will get punished in the end. So money can bring us not only happiness, but misery also

荣誉能给我们带来什么-What Can Honor Bring to Us

在这个世界上,人人都希望自己的努力得到别人的承认和褒扬。荣誉可以给我们带来满足、自信,有时甚至是金钱。它可以鼓励我们上进,但也可能让我们坠入深渊。有些人为了获得荣誉不择手段。他们不惜去偷、去骗。当然,最终的结果就是身败名裂。因此荣誉不仅能给我们带来幸福,而且也能给我们带来不幸。

What Can Honor Bring to Us

Almost everybody in this world wants his efforts to be accepted and praised. Honor can bring us satisfaction, self-confident and even money sometimes. It can encourage us to make bigger progress, and so can it ruin us. Some will do everything for honor. They even steal it or cheat it. Of course, they will be broken in the end. So honor can bring us not only happiness, but misery also.

一次可怕的经历-A Horrible Experience

I used to be fond of skating. But now things have changed because of a horrible experience. One winter, the weather was so cold that water turned into ice. One day on my way home, when seeing a frozen lake, I thought that the ice must be thick enough to support me. Being so interested in skating, I couldn't help going down and sliding on the ice. Suddenly, I heard a sound of crack. Looking down, I saw the crack on the ice surface. I was frightened out of my life and didn 't dare to move. But nobody could help me. I had to move toward the bank carefully.

As soon as I got onto the bank, the ice broke. How horrible it was! Even ifit has been a long time since then, I can still feel the fear. And I no longer like skating since then.

一次可怕的经历

我曾经非常喜欢滑冰。但是因为一次可怕的经历,事情发生了改变。

一年冬天,天气—卜分寒冷,湖水都结了冰。一天在回家的路上,看到结冰的湖面,我想这冰厚得足以支撑得住我。因为喜欢滑冰,我忍不住跑到湖面上滑起来。突然我听到一丝开裂声,向下一看,我看到冰面上出现了裂纹。我被吓得要命,不敢动。但是没有人能帮助我,我只能小心翼翼地向岸边挪动。

我刚一上岸,冰面就裂开了。太可怕了! 即使过去了这么长时间,我仍然感到恐惧。从那时起我就不再喜欢滑冰了。

兴趣是最好的老师-Interest Is the Best Teacher

小学的时候我学习不好,总得不了高分。老师认为我不是好学生,妈妈也把我看成是坏孩子。我伤心极了,他们肯定都以为我是一个笨孩子,可我并不笨。我画的画经常拿出去展览,有许多著名的艺术家还夸奖过我呢,他们说我是小神童。爸爸也支持我,他鼓励我做自己喜欢做和认为对的事情,还告诉我兴趣是最好的老师。爸爸尽力创造机会让我发挥自己的天赋。我相信兴趣加努力会让我在不久的未采成为一名有成就的画家。

Interest Is the Best Teacher

I was not able to get high marks when I was in primary school. Teachers didn't like me because I was not a good student. Mother considered me as a bad kid. They hurt me by thinking I am a retarded child. But I am no fool. Almost all of my paintings were showed in public. Many famous artists had praised me for my paintings. They called me "little prodigy". And dad was on my side too. He encouraged me to do what I liked and what I thought was proper. He told me that interest is the best teacher, Dad did what he could to develop my talent fully. I believe that interest together with hard work will make me a successful artist in the near future

相信自己-Believe in Yourself

我的童年并不快乐。因为妈妈和老师想让我做的事情我一件都做不好。我考试得不了高分,我喜欢做一些他们认为是不正确的事情。只有爸爸支持我。他鼓励我做自己喜欢做的事情,告诉我要相信自己。他知道我喜欢拉小提琴,就给我买了一把,还请来了老师教我。我现在已经能够拉得很好了。我曾经在世界儿童小提琴比赛中获得三等奖。如果我努力学习并且一直相信自己,我一定会成为一名出色的小提琴家。

When I was a little girl, I didn't live a happy life. Because I was not able to do what my mom and teachers wanted me to do. I didn't get high marks. I liked doing things that they thought not proper enough. Only dad was on my side. He encouraged me to do what I liked. He told me to believe in myseff. He knew that I loved playing the violin, so he bought one for me and asked someone to teach me. Now I was very good at it. I once played abroad and get the third prize in a world violin contest for children.I would become an excellent violin player if I worked hard and always believed in myself.

我的电脑-My Computer

现在电脑越来越普及了。我也有一台自己的电脑,它是浅绿色的。有了电脑我学习更方便了。更重要的是,通过电脑我极大地扩大了自己的知识面,它真的是我的好帮手,而且也是我值得信赖的好朋友。

Computer is more and more popular at present. I have my own computer and its color is light green. It 's more convenient for me to study with a computer. And the best of all is that computer can tell me almost everything I want to know. It really helps me a lot and has become a trustworthy friend of mine.

我国超级女生

During the summer holidays, the programme “Super Girls” is people’s favourite. People would lock the “Hu Nan” TV as soon as possible on Friday evening. These super girls have different characters and each of them has different charms, so both the young and the old like them very much. They both sing and dance very well. One of them --Li Yuchun is my idol. The disport said, “Li Yuchun was born for the stage,” because she has different charm and a very cool face with a tall figure which absorbed almost everyone. I think in the future, she will be another Jay. She will be even more famous than Jay. As soon as her disc comes out, I will be the first to buy it. I will support you all the time--my super girl--my corn.

访问北京

A Trip To Beijing

On July 5th my parents took me to Beijing. We stayed at Huabei Hotel. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall.

We also went to the Palace Museum. The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are! I visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look.

The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan, North Lake and Xiang Hill. I now know more about the history of China. I also like modern Beijing. The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.

Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing.

Smoking and Health-吸烟与健康

人人都知道吸烟有害健康。那些吸烟过度的人一般都活不长。吸烟可能引起多种疾病,其中最严重的是肺癌。另外,吸烟的人还损害了那些不吸烟的人的健康。如果所有的烟民都戒了烟,那么我们就可以享受更清新的空气,也就更健康了。

Everybody knows smoking is bad for health. Those who smoke too much may not live long. Smoking may cause many diseases. The most serious one is lung cancer. Smoking can also do harm to those who don't smoke, If all smokers give up smoking, we can enjoy clearer air. 我喜爱的歌手 My Favourite Singer

She is such an ideal singer!She is a girl with a lot of talent. She is a girl but she has individuality like a boy. On the stage, she sings and dances so well. She is so happy and she makes us excited… Can you guess who she is? Yes, she is Li Yuchun, the winner of “Super Girl 2005.”

She is a student of Sichuan Music College in Grade 3. She is twenty-one this year. She is 1.74 metres tall. Now she is very popular in China and even in the world. I know she worked hard in the past, and has succeeded today. I’ll learn from her and try my best to achieve my dream.

I like her because she is so cool and lovely. I love her because she makes me feel happy. I enjoy her because she is independent and she has the individuality of herself.

Li Yuchun, I’ll cheer for you forever!

介绍校内配套设施

I am very gladto showyou around. As you can see, my school is very small. It hasonly one building which is built like a ring. It has four floors in all. On the' first floor are the offices of leaders. The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors. On the second floor, there is a reading room. In front of the building is the playground.

我很高兴带领你们参观。正如你们看到的,我们学校很小。它只有一栋楼,这栋楼技建成环形,楼总共有四层。第一层是领导们的办公室。教室和老师的办公室在其它三层。二层有一个阅览室,楼前面是操场。

the Internet

These days, more and more people are interested in the Internet. Using the Internet, students are able to get the latest information from literature to sports. Students can also join the group on line, discuss such things as maths problems, school life and so on. Through the Internet

students can broaden their view. But if students spend too much time on line, it will do them harm. 著名歌手 A Famous Pop Singer

Jay Zhou is a famous pop singer. He is famous for Fine day,Class Two Grade Three, Quiet, Shanghai 1943 and so on.His music is mainly R & B and Hip-pop. His songs are full of vigor. You can't help moving your body when you hear them.As his music fan, I know he likes antiques very much. Do you know his full name? Yes, it's Zhoujie Lun.

网上交友-Making Friends on Line

these days many students like to make friends on line.Most of them think it's interesting to know a stranger through the Internet. As a matter of fact, only a few of them have succeeded in getting a real good friend in this way. Most of them have been cheated. Some of them have committed crimes with the friends on line. So we should be careful of making friends on line. We'd better pay more attention to our study.

我喜欢阅读 I Like Reading

I like reading very much. When I was a small girl, I was interested in reading picture books on science and history. At the age of seven, I entered a primary school and began to read more books.

Now I am a middle school student. I have many subjects to learn. Every day I must finish a lot of homework. I am very busy. But when I have spare time I still want to read some story books. One day my young sister brought me a book Xl YOU J I.I read the book with GREat interest. I like Monkey King very much.

阐述你对中学生上网的看法

I think it is not all bad for millde school student to search the Internet.Some students play games on line.I don't aGREe it at all.It has nothing to do with their study.And it will make them lose the interests of learning.But also it is very nessary for us to search the Internet.In the modern world,using computer and the Internet is an important skill.We can use it to find some information that we need and communicate with our friends,teachers and parents.Sending e-mail and check out some international news are useful for us as well.

生活问题 Problems in My Life

In the life, everybody has a lot of problem. For example, I am a wonderful student. I can usually get a high mark. I study very well. But sometimes I reckless of the examination, so, I can’t do it very well. After the exam, I blow it. Most of my teachers usually apprehend me, but my mother sometimes makes little of me. She usually says that,’Honey, why you blew the exam, don’t forget, you are an excellent student, you must study hard, and you must get the high mark next exam.’

When my mother says that, I always feel very chagrin. I am not oracle, why I can’t make mistakes. But my father apprehends me. He thinks I am a children, so I can make a little mistake. I always study hard after I blew the exam, because my father cheers on me. I study hard for me, for him, of course, I study hard for my mother too.

When we barge up against, don’t trepidation, don’t be scared, and tell the tribulation to our kiths, they can help you.

寄语:

学好英语的关键在于——学了、反复、用上

In our lives, I think we can try to do something, but we must try doing everything.

Wish you good luck!

Bye-Bye!