提示类作文
初一 记叙文 2627字 35人浏览 FayeSX

提示类作文常由三部分组成:1. 主题句:提出观点。 ①…is harmful…. 有害

②I think we should…. 我认为我们应该 ③…are important….. 很重要

2. 拓展句:进一步围绕主题句阐明论点。 ①…is harmful. It can cause many problems。

…. 有害,它会引起很多问题

②…are important. Without… we cannot imagine… …. 很重要。没有…. ,我们无法想象… 3. 对观点提供论据。论据应有层次性。

①First …Second …Third …Finally…首先.. 第二.. 第三.. 最后 ②Firstly …Secondly … Thirdly…Lastly … (同上) ③In the first place…In the second place… 首先…其次… ④ For one thing… For another…首先…其次… ⑤ To begin with… next…首先…其次… ⑥ What ’s more…. 另外… ⑦ Above all…. 最重要的是… ⑧In addition…另外… ⑨Besides …. 除此之外…

⑩ In my opinion…在我看来… 范文:

Recently we did a survey about our eating habits in our school. As we all know , we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks. Others are particular about food. And still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we ’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up our bodies. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

范文: B Fast Food

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.

There are several reasons for this. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, you can either eat it there or take it home. Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is clean and comfortable. Fourth, it has excellent service, and the quality of food is guaranteed. However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value.

Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. It’s not good for people, especially children. So you should eat fast food as little as possible.

范文: C

Dear students,

I ’m heart-broken when I see so many students watch TV every day. I can’t judge whether it is good or not. TV is full of colorful knowledge and it can give the students more information. But when do the students watch TV? You usually make use of free time to watch it. Thus, you’ll reduce the time you study. After all, you are students and you should study for your future. If you waste a lot of time watching TV, you’ll fail in exams. I want to say “Don ’t do that again! ”

Finally, please keep away from TV, or you’ll be nothing in the future.