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串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文三(原创,转载表明出处)

(一)

1. 每年,高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去西部贫困地区支教;

2. 支教活动的意义;

3. 我的看法。

(1)With the development of high education, the phenomenon of many college graduates pouring to the west as volunteer teachers has become increasingly popular nowadays. In one job market before a post board for recruiting volunteer teachers stands an ocean of college graduates, writing their names, educational backgrounds and their like on the register papers, with many more waiting in a line to join them , which is a common scenery in many cities in China especially these years. The issue, being so common, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.

(2)Many profound meanings can be brought by being a volunteer teacher ,with the following ones being the foremost. Firstly, being a volunteer teacher of the west can deepen their understanding of life , enlarging their social experience and thus enriching their life circle. Secondly, great progress in education of the west will be brought surely by the college graduates being due to their rich knowledge and professional teaching skills, which will enhance west’s economical development at last.

(二)

1. 现在许多传统文化正慢慢消失;

2. 传统文化消失的原因;

3. 我的看法。

With the development of economy, the disappearing of many traditional culture has become increasingly terrible nowadays. Before an ancient quadrangle courtyard in Zhengzhou stands many senior citizens , angrily protesting the removal of the city’s last courtyard, with plenty of journalists standing around to photograph and report the protest, which is a common scenery in many cites in China especially these days. The issue, being so serious, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.

Many reasons can account for this phenomenon, with the following one being the foremost.

Firstly,nowadays, especially in the times of developing economy as the priority for the government, the educational absence of appreciating the traditional culture leads to many youngs lose interest in the traditional symbolic elements. Secondly, the trend of globalization brings western developed countries’culture attract people’s attention from our counties tradition to the west.

串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文二(原创,转载表明出处)

今天大部分同学可能已经知道了自己是哪个考场了,如果考场离自己学校比较远的话,建议6月6日当晚最好住在考场附近的宾馆里,免得第二天堵车 。这两天郑州各个高考考场周围的宾馆已经开始预订房间了,如果不抓紧的话很可能过两天就预订不到房间了。如果觉得经济承受不起的话,

可以几个同学可以合租一个房间,彼此间也有个照应。大家可以在今天中午空间的说说下边找留下自己的考场学校名,第几考场等信息,这样就能提前找到6月7日一个战壕里的战友了。不早了,大家这两天注意调节自己的生物钟,早点儿睡就别再熬夜了。晚安·······

串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文二(原创,转载表明出

处)

今天大部分同学可能已经知道了自己是哪个考场了,如果考场离自己学校比较远的话,建议6月6日当晚最好住在考场附近的宾馆里,免得第二天堵车 。这两天郑州各个高考考场周围的宾馆已经开始预订房间了,如果不抓紧的话很可能过两天就预订不到房间了。如果觉得经济承受不起的话,可以几个同学可以合租一个房间,彼此间也有个照应。大家可以在今天中午空间的说说下边找留下自己的考场学校名,第几考场等信息,这样就能提前找到6月7日一个战壕里的战友了。不早了,大家这两天注意调节自己的生物钟,早点儿睡就别再熬夜了。晚安·······

1. 在现代社会,城市交通问题变得越来越严重;

2. 城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活所带来的影响;

3. 解决的方法与措施。

(1)With the development of economy, the issue of city traffic jams has become increasingly serious nowadays. (2)In the sunshine lies many cars, creeping as slow as ants on the wide roads, with plenty of them jamming steadily all together, which is a common scenery in many big cities in China especially in these years. (3)The problem, being so serious, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.

(4)The issue leads to many bad effects to our life, with the following ones being the foremost. (5)Firstly, as we all know, everyday of our life should not be frittered away and the time should be cherished, but serious traffic jam wastes our minutes, lavishes hours and even squanders one whole day, which leads to say it kills and even murders our prime time. (6)Secondly, traffic jam , leading to many air pollution , greatly threatens our health.

(二)

1. 目前网络教育形成热潮;

2. 分析这股热潮的原因;

3. 你对网络教育的评价。

(7)With the development of economy, the issue of network education has become increasingly serious nowadays. (8)Before a computer sits several students, listening lectures carefully on the network education websites, with their teachers standing beside them and listening eagerly also, which is a common scenery in many colleges, high s

chools in China especially in these years. (9)The issue, being so common, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.

(10)Many reasons can account for this phenomenon, with the following ones being the foremost. (11)Firstly,the network education, bringing great convenience to many students especially for those who locates far distance from developed regions, saves great deal of time and greatly enhance their study’s efficiency . (12)Secondly, the network education is lectured by the most professional experts of every field , which can bring more knowledge and broaden students’horizon vastly.

串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文一(原创,转载表明出

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今天晚上把两篇现象分析型的范文放在一起来分析提炼下这类文章的写法。现象分析型的文章一般来说第一个提纲是让大家来描写一个现象,第二段让大家分析现象出现的原因,第三段让大家写如何来解决这类现象。按照我们课上讲的方法,第一段用数字扩展来写会变得非常简单,第二段让写原因,我们可以在主题句里阐释说明导致这种现象的一个原因,然后后边的扩展句用正反扩展模板来扩展这一个原因就可以了,也就是说用正反扩展来写第二段的时候我们只能写一个原因。第三段用我们讲过的解决措施万能模板来写会非常简单。因为不能剧透,所以课上我们讲的这些写法就不能公开在这里了。今晚给大家新整理出了一些万能句型和模板,是我在课上从来没讲过的,供大家参考。如果实在掌握不了这篇日志中的写法那就算了,一定以课上说的为主!

先看两篇文章的中文提纲:

第一篇:1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象;2. 产生这种现象的原因;3. 如何解决这一问题;第二篇:1. 在现代社会,城市交通问题变得越来越严重;2. 城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活所带来的影响;3. 解决的方法与措施。

(一)

两篇文章第一段都是让描写现象,除了可以用数字扩展来描写外,可以用举例例证的扩展方式来写。至于具体如何来举例例证,一起来看下我写的两篇文章第一段的范文。

第一篇:(1)Nowadays, an increasing number of college students can’t find decent jobs after graduation , the phenomenon of which has aroused great concern among public. (2)In the job markets staggers (蹒跚)hundreds of college graduates, eagerly looking for decent jobs , with many being refused to give them an offer by the employers, which is a common scenery in many big cities especially in these few years.(3)The problem, being so serious, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China. 现在,越来越多的大学生一毕业都找不到体面的工作,这个现象引起了公众广泛的关注。近几年在中国很多大城市,都可以看见很多大学生徘徊在各种人才市场,很期待找一份工作,但是很多人求职的时候都被拒了。这个现象这几年很普遍。这个问题,

如此的严峻,已经在微博--中国最有影响力的媒体平台,引起了热烈的讨论。

第二篇: (8) Nowadays, an increasing number of cites are short of energy , the phenomenon of which

has aroused great concern among public. (9)In a gas station lies plenty of automobiles, including public buses, engineering vehicles ,privates cars and their like , eagerly waiting for a barrel of gas to support their vehicles,with plenty more automobiles lining a long stream waiting outside of the station , which is a common scenery in many big cities especially these years. (10)The problem, being so serious, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.现在,越来越多的城市能源都短缺,这引起了公众广泛的关注。近几年在中国很多的大城市,都可以看到很多的车辆停在加油站内,包括公交车,工程车,私家车等,排着队焦急地为自己的车辆加油,还有更多的车排着长长的队伍在加油站外焦急地等待。这种现象近几年很普遍。这个问题,如此的严峻,已经在微博--中国最有影响力的媒体平台,引起了热烈的讨论。

第1句和第8句都是主题句模板套出来的。这个主题句模板在精讲班里没给大家说过,不过在空间的一篇日志里。

这两篇的第2句和第9句是扩展句,是用一个霸气外漏的句型分别列举了两个例子。In the job markets staggers (蹒跚)hundreds of college graduates, eagerly looking for decent jobs , with many being refused to give them an offer

by the employers, which is a common scenery in many big cities especially in these few years 这个句子如果让大家写,肯定这么写:There are hundreds of college graduates staggering in the job market. They are looking for decent jobs. But many of them are refused to give them an offer by the employers. This is a common scenery in many big cities especially in these few years,也就是说让大家来写大家会把这一个句子用四个独立的句子来表达。我们来观察下这四个独立的句子的主语是一样的,都是college graduates, 那我们可以尝试着把There are hundreds of college graduates staggers in the job market这个there be句型的倒装句改成另外一种形式的表系主的倒装句:In the job markets staggers (蹒跚)hundreds of college graduates (这两个句型怎么转换的知识点在有些班上我说过,有些班没讲过);所以这个句子可以这么来写:In the job markets staggers (蹒跚)hundreds of college graduates , and many college graduates eagerly look for decent jobs, but many of them are refused to give them an offer by the employers,也就是说成了连词and 和but 连接的两个独立的分句。学过语法的童鞋都知道,第二个句子和第一个句子主语一样,可以把第二个句子的主语省略掉,第二个句子的谓语动词换成相应的非谓语形式就ok 了;第三个句子的主语又和第一个第二个句子主语一样,第三个句子换成with 引导的独立主格结构就可以了。所以就变成了:In the job markets staggers (蹒跚)hundreds of college graduates, eagerly looking for decent jobs, with many of them being refused to give them an offer by the employers,再在后边加一个万能的非限制性定语从句which is a common sense in many big cities especially in these few years来修饰前边整个句子就可以了。如果大家觉得这个句子特复杂的话那就对了,因为在上篇日志里说过,独立主格结构和非谓语动词确实比较难。不过,如果大家真的掌握的话,真的是霸气外漏啊。相同的变法也适应于:(9)In a gas station lies plenty of automobiles, including public buses, engineering vehicles ,privates cars and their like , eagerly waiting for a barrel of gas to support their vehicles,with plenty more automobiles lining a long stream waiting outside of the station , which is a common scenery in many big cities especially these years. 具体如何来变,在这里就不赘述了。其实,在“近期大家很想知道答案的一个问题的回答”这篇日志里,用这套组合拳,写出了一个句子:In the sunshine runs a joyful boy, tightly holding some English test papers of ZSB published by some English training schools, yelling excessively excited to his classmates :" i get

it , i get it, finally i get it ", with all of his classmates , boys and girls, suddenly crowding madly to him just for a simple glimpse of the mysterious papers on his hand. 大家临睡前有兴趣可以分析下。

用了这么多篇幅给大家写这种写法其实心里怪怪的,这毕竟是辛苦研究出来的,虽然比较复杂但绝对的霸气外漏。本来计划等下一届同学上精讲班的时候再讲给大家的。现在公开出来最坏的结果就是大家没学会,但是让其他机构同行知道了可真的就剧透了。有些基础差的男同学这几天特浮躁,平时一点儿都不学习,就等着这几天背所谓的押题卷,在昨晚的日志里说了几句真话,结果引来一些同学的不理解甚至是无端谩骂。把这些写法这么详细地公布出来就是想让有些同学知道押题玩的是概率,哪怕到了最后一刻我们都应该抓住一切机会接地气地学习!

这两篇的第3句和第10句都是客套话,也是万能的,大家可以背一下就ok 了。

(二)

这两篇的第二段都是让分析原因,我们一起来对比下:

第一篇: (4)Many reasons can account for this phenomenon, with the following

ones being the foremost. (5)Firstly, the knowledge students studied in college is not sufficient enough to support daily work required by the job. (6)Secondly, some students are pursuing too high a goal when seeking for jobs. (7)They care about various factors such as salaries, working conditions and so forth, which narrows their choices.

第二篇: (11)Many reasons can account for this phenomenon, with the following ones being the foremost.(12)Firstly, the past decades has witnessed a huge development in our country’s economy, which boosts enormous demand of energy supplies. (13)Secondly, environment protection being importantly crucial for the harmonious society,the authorities enact strict laws and regulations to restrict energy exploration and manufacturing in order to promote sustainable development .

这两段的写法都中规中矩,里边也用了一些上课讲的写句子的技巧,时间关系就不在这里赘述了。

下边 把这两篇文章的前两段的写法完整给大家罗列出来,供大家参考:

(一)

1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象;

2. 产生这种现象的原因;

3. 如何解决这一问题。

(1)

Nowadays, an increasing number of college students can’t find decent jobs after graduation, the phenomenon of which has aroused great concern among public. (2)In the job markets staggers (蹒

跚)hundreds of college graduates, eagerly looking for decent jobs , with many being refused to give them an offer by the employers, which is a common scenery in many big cities especially in these few years.(3)The problem, being so serious, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.

(4)Many reasons can account for this phenomenon, with the following ones being the foremost. (5)Firstly, the knowledge students studied in college is not sufficient enough to support daily work required by the job. (6)Secondly, some students are pursuing too high a goal when seeking for jobs. (7)They care about various factors such as salaries, working conditions and so forth, which narrows their choices.

(二)

1. 许多城市出现能源短缺现象;

2. 分析原因;

3. 给出建议。

(8) Nowadays, an increasing number of cites are short of energy, the phenomenon of which has aroused great concern among public. (9)In a gas station lies plenty of automobiles, including public buses, engineering vehicles ,privates cars and their like , eagerly waiting for a barrel of gas to support their vehicles,with plenty more automobiles lining a long stream waiting outside of the station , which is a common scenery in many big cities especial these years. (10)The problem, being so serious, has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo-- the most influential social media in China.

(11)Many reasons can account for this phenomenon, with the following ones being the foremost.(12)Firstly, the past decades has witnessed a huge development in our country’s economy, which boosts enormous demand of energy supplies. (13)Secondly, environment protection being importantly crucial for the harmonious society,the authorities enact strict laws and regulations to restrict energy exploration and manufacturing in order to promote sustainable development .

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