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1 大学英语四级考试作文预测(2011.11)

恩波教育英语研究所

预测作文(一)

Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students

1. 不少大学生的生活方式消极,不上课,不运动,不出去社交,而是宅在家里或宿舍,导致知识水平下降的

同时身体素质也在下降。

2. 你对此有什么看法和建议?

【范文】

In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities. This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.

Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on. To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed. As to universities, they should hold the idea ―health comes first ‖ and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard. Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home. Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.

【点评】

文章开门见上,指出大学生的不良生活方式,简单提及其危害。之后第二段分析了导致生活方式消极的原因:生物钟颠倒,沉迷于网络游戏,饮食习惯不规律以及各种竞争的压力。同时分别给大学,父母和大学生给出建议。

文章第一段中would like„ rather than意为“宁愿„„而不愿„„”; to some extend意为“在某种程度上”;reversed biological clock意为“颠倒的生物钟”;health comes first意为“健康第一”;conscientiously observe意为“认真遵守”;form 意为“培养”。

预测作文(二)

Character Education

1. 学校教育除了培养学生的学习能力之外,还应注重诸如孝顺、诚实等的品德培养;

2. 品德培养的重要性。

【范文】

Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think. But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life. As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.

Character education plays an important role in the development of future society. It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities. In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives. What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently , how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously , for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.

【点评】

本题谈论的是学校教育,说明了只注重培养学生的学习,思考能力,很难建成和谐舒适的社会,由此引出需要加强道德教育。第二段从几个方面说明品德教育的重要性:满足学生全面发展的需要;防止学生变得自私,自利,自负,没有礼貌等等;教导学生对自己和祖国的将来负责。

第一段第一句中hardly 意为―几乎不‖;leading a harmonious life意为―引领和谐生活‖; attach more attention to 意为―更加重视‖; 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意为―起重要作用‖;efficiently ,colourfully 和seriously

2 作为副词,修饰前面的动词,分别指代有效地学习,多姿多彩地生活,认真负责地做事。

预测作文(三)

Does Knowledge Change Fate?

1. “知识改变命运”曾是无数寒门子弟奋斗的动力所在,可如今现实却是,不仅知识难以改变命运,穷孩子

能接触到知识的机会也在减少。

2. 你对此有什么看法,且应采取什么措施阻止这种现象?

【范文】

Large number of children from poor families once held the belief "Knowledge can change fate" and thought that hardworking could reward them-- As one sows, so will one reap. But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.

This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society. First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening. Second, it may let many real potential genius go away. Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.

Therefore it needs to take urgent measures. On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students. As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.

【点评】

文章由习语“知识改变命运”引出话题,指出当今社会现实---知识无法改变命运。文章第二段分析了该现象的危害:加剧穷富差距和不公平;导致“潜在的”人才流失;不利于建立和谐社会。最后一段分别给政府,学校提出建议,采取措施改变这种状况。

第一段中reward 意为“回报”;As one sows, so will one reap.为习语,意为“ 一分耕耘, 一分收获。” 文章第二段中列举该现象的危害,分别用 First, „Second, „Third 表示“首先„„其次„„再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意为“创建以人为本的和谐社会”。

第三段中 make preferential policies意为“制订优惠政策”,establish completed systems意为“建立完善的体系”。 预测作文(四)

Indirect Employment

1. 工作难找,大学生流行“曲线就业”,通过实习或做一些杂活积累社会经验。

2. 你对此有什么看法?

【范文】

Confronting the more and more severe employment situation , university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out. Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.

I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment. Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which can't be gotten from books. Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests. Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.

【点评】

文章第一段指出大学生就业形势严峻,随之出现“曲线就业”。文章第二段开门见山,说明自己的观点---赞成这种做法,然后一一列出了好处:第一,缓解就业压力,获取新的知识和实践经验;第二,有利于大学生认识自己兴趣所在;第三,锻炼学生的社会技能和个性。

第一段中severe employment situation意为“严峻的就业形势”;finding ways out意为“寻求出路”;第二段中in favor of 意为“支持”;not only„but also意为“不仅„„而且„„”;Last but not the least意为“最后但是最重

3 要的是”。

预测作文(五)

Who Should Pay the University's Tuition?

1. 大学学费不断上涨,有人认为大学学费应由学生自己赚取,有人认为应由父母供给。

2. 作为大学生,谈谈你自己的观点,并给出理由。

【范文】

University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities. With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition. Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life. Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.

As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part. It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies. But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money. Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.

【点评】

文章第一段开门见山,指出关于谁支付大学学费的不同意见。第二段说明自己的观点----希望父母和孩子共同承担学费,这样有助于减轻家庭负担,学生也有机会通过社会实践获取更多社会经验。

第一段中With the rising of university's tuition意为“随着大学学费的上涨”;be beyond one' s ability意为“超出某人的能力范围”。第二段中gain working experience意为 “获取社会经验”;lighten financial burdens意为“减轻经济负担”。

大学英语四级考试作文预测(2010.12)

预测作文(一)

College Students’Living Condition

1. 反应大学生生存状况的词语从“蜗居”、“蚁族”到“鼠族”,不断涌现。

2. 对于这种现象,你有什么看法?

【范文】

Recently, the living condition of some college students is frequently referred to as ―dwelling-narrowness ‖. In fact, this embarrassing situation is very serious that few of us can fail to meditate on the causes of it.

In the first place, it’s difficult for graduates to bear the high cost of life in big cities. Poor payment thus gives rise to bad living conditions. Next, college students are more ambitious. Many of them are eager to compete in big cities like Shanghai and Beijing, where talents are abundant and positions are limited. Refusing to go back hometown let them suffer in big cities, which indirectly make their situation worse.

Generally speaking, college students should be more qualified to better themselves and adjust their goals according to the reality.

【点评】

首句交待背景,用无生命的名词词组(inanimate noun phrase)作主语并使用被动语态,文章更加客观中立。 第二句话使用单词embarrassing ,深入地挖掘了当今大学生生存状况艰难与大学生十年寒窗之间令人无奈的矛盾。第三句话为承上启下句,fail to do sth.表示没能、不能做某事。文章第二部分阐释了作者的个人看法。认为此社会现象的一个原因是大城市的高消费与大学生刚刚毕业收入相对较低之间产生的矛盾。第二个原因来

4 自大学生对自身期许过高与大城市人才济济之间的矛盾。使用单词ambitious ,表示雄心勃勃。在形容人才济济时,使用abundant ,表示充足的。此外,文章还指出第一个原因是直接原因,第二个原因是间接导致了大学生生存困境。

最后一段给出了解决方法,better oneself指使某人自身更加优秀,better 此处作动词讲。

预测作文(二)

Should we help others in need?

1. 现在经常有这样的现象发生:路上有人摔倒,没人敢上前帮忙。

2. 这是人们的公德心缺失还是其他什么原因呢?

3. 你对此有何看法?

【范文】

Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But what ’s strange nowadays is that people dare not show their helping hands to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue.

Firstly, I think people’s moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.

In general, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.

【点评】

第一句话介绍背景,使用“美德”virtue 一词。第二句话为转折句,除了使用but 这个表示强烈转折意味的连接词,还采用了strange 和首句形成鲜明对比。

文章第二部分开始阐释人们公德心(moral sense)缺乏的原因。指出原因之一为自私。此处采用了egoism, 也可使用selfishness, 但不可使用individualism ,后者在英语语境中通常作褒义词讲,即崇尚自尊自立之意。原因之一是内因,原因之二是外因。Trap 指陷阱,deceit 指欺骗。第二段使用了内外因、主客观因素结合的方法,较全面地解释了公德心缺失的根源。

最后一段表明作者立场,提出既要坚持善良之心也要有防备之心。

预测作文(三)

Food Safety

1. 食品安全问题令人担忧。

2. 对此,你有什么看法(可从蔬菜、水果滥用农药、激素方面分析)?

【范文】

Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have popped up. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for this issue.

First, I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expense of consumers ’ health. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has resulted in the degradation of food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health hazard for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profit. As a result, people’s health has been seriously disturbed.

All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should do establish laws and implement them effectively to avoid producing toxic foods.

5 【点评】

首句直接点题,词组pop up指弹起,这里指食品安全突然间成了一大社会问题。

文章第二部分从蔬菜生产商、水果滥用农药及激素方面阐释了食品安全问题的根源。Observe 除了有观察之意,还可以表示某人的观点;动词commit 后面通常接违法或伤害性的事情,如commit a crime, commit illegal things, commit suicide等等。“以消费者的健康为代价”除了使用at the expense of 还可以使用at the cost of 或者ignoring 。 另外,在表达同一意思或相近意思时,此文避免了一词多用,而是采用不同的单词或词组,如劣质食品使用了problems concerning the safety of food, the degradation of food quality 和toxic foods。

最后一段再次点题,并提出了万能解决方案之一,即政府和相关单位要制定法律法规。

预测作文(四)

The Popularity of Micro-blogging

1.近年来“微博”越来越流行,许多人利用“微博”来表达心声、交流想法。

2.微博流行的原因。

3.微博可能引起的弊端。

【范文】

Micro-blogging is no longer a strange word. More precisely, it has become part of our life.

As for me, many factors contribute to the widespread of Micro-blogging. First, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings at any time. Second, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By revealing their heartfelt emotions on the Micro-blogging, their friends may also know about their conditions and can offer in-time comfort.

However, Micro-blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information.

All in all, Micro-blogging provides us comfort and also inevitably some concerns. We should be careful while using it.

【点评】

第一段直接切入主题。首句在说明微博越来越流行时没有用肯定句micro-blogging is more and more popular, 而是用否定句的方式“负负得正”。

从第二段开始阐释流行的原因。Contribute to 是固定词组,表示为„„作出贡献,其对应的名词是contribution 。第一个原因是微博方便人们在任何时候表达他们当时的感觉。这里通过“at any time”和“instant feeling ”突出了微博和传统博客的区别。第二个原因是微博可以减压。此处release 表示释放,除了跟release pressure, release stress, 还可以跟release news。

第三段描述了微博的弊端,give away表示出卖,同义词有betray 。最后一段是作者的对微博的态度,在充分肯定微博积极意义的同时提醒人们要谨慎使用微博。

预测作文(五)

Reflection on Natural Disasters

1. 最近国内外灾害不断发生,这些灾害引起了我们对于自然所做的行为的再一次思考。

2. 你是如何看待自然灾害的?

3. 我们应该采取哪些措施来尽可能避免这些灾害和减少损失呢?

【范文】

Natural disasters happen almost every day,those devastating ones leave us to think about our behaviors towards nature again.

6 First of all,we need to set a sound pre-warning mechanism, which enables us to detect potential risks at an early stages. Accordingly,emergency measures can be taken,and losses can be minimized.

Second ,governments have to equipped with an excellent Disaster Assistance Response Team to rescue those disaster-stricken areas. The primary goal is to provide emergency services, such as drinking water and medical treatment, until long-term aid arrives.

Third, citizens need to realize that the main cause of those disasters is largely due to climate crisis; therefore, they should purchase energy efficient appliances, plant trees and economize our consumption on housing.

From what has been discussed above, I maintain that minimizing the cost of disasters can be achieved by our persisting efforts.

【点评】

第一段为总起段,提出问题并引起读者的注意。在形容自然灾害时,用disaster 。Devastating 表示极具破坏性的,同义词为destroying 。Leave sb. to do sth. 意味着使某人做某事。之后第二段中使用了连接词accordingly, 用以表示顺接或因果关系,连接词的使用能够使文章更具连贯性和逻辑性。而两个被动语态的使用则使文章更加客观公正。

第三段从政府的角度来进一步论述。Disaster-stricken 为形容词,意思为饱受摧残的。在讲述政府提供的救援时,文中用了举例的方法使文章更加具体有说服力。

第四段中的be due to主要用来表示不好的原因。Purchase 表示大宗购买,意为buy 。这里用了三个并列的动宾词组,使文章更加有说服力。

最后一段maintain 用来表示某人的观点,同义词还有observe, declare, insist。

大学英语四级考试作文预测(2012.5)

恩波教育英语研究所

预测作文(一)

Luxurious Buildings On Campus

1. 近年来,一些大学建起豪华楼舍来提升形象;

2. 有人赞同,有人反对;

3. 谈谈你的观点。

【范文】

With a view to improving their image and comprehensive strength , many universities are rushing to build luxurious constructions.

Some people are in favor of this trend, because the considerably more comfortable environment could let students apply themselves to academic studies. The others who hold the opposite opinion think it not only wastes money but also disturbs the normal teaching activities.

Generally speaking, newly-built blocks help to meet the increasingly demanding requirements of the modern students. But with the breakdown of heaps of age-old buildings, their original historic significances would disappear. Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the commercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students. Therefore, I strongly hope universities could attach more attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation , attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements.

【点评】

首段直接点题,说明现象;第二段分述人们对此现象各持己见;第三段陈述自己的观点,并提出建议。 范文首段提出大学楼舍“豪华风”这一普遍现象;第二段指出赞同者认为舒适的环境能让学生更好地投入学业中,反对者认为这不仅浪费钱,而且扰乱了正常教学活动;第三段给出自己的观点---旧楼的拆除破坏了校

7 园原有的历史意义;奢华的趋势使得大学教育商业化,给大学生带来负面影响。最后提出建议,希望大学能注重提高自身的文化内涵,加强学科建设。

第一段中With a view to意为“为了”,后面接v.-ing ;第二段中apply themselves to academic studies意为“全身心投入学业”;第三段中construction of specialties 意为“专业队伍的建设”,improvement of their cultural connotation 意为“提高自身文化内涵”。

预测作文(二)

On Buying Graduation Thesis

1. 毕业论文买卖成风;

2. 有人认为本科生没必要写毕业论文,有人认为有必要;

3. 你的看法。

【范文】

Since graduation thesis serves as a role of evaluation , college students are required to write academic essays focusing on their major before graduation. Afraid of not getting their degree, buying graduation thesis has become a prevailing practice.

Consequently , heated discussion on the issue has been arisen. Some don't think it is necessary to write the graduation essay while the others support the current educational system.

However, the main argument for scrapping essays is because most of them are of such a low quality . As this work is usually assigned in the last term, exactly when they are starting to hunt for jobs, it is no wonder that they are not fully focused on the task. Furthermore, the communication between student and tutor is far from adequate. Nevertheless, I still believe that thesises are something from which students can gain a lot if they put their heart into the task.

【点评】

文章首段通过毕业论文的用途引出社会现象----买卖论文成风;第二段指出不同的人对此持有不同意见;

第三段结合自身观点,分析现象产生的原因:毕业论文一般是最后一学期完成,而学生忙于找工作导致论文质量低,另外学生和导师的沟通不够,最后给出自己的观点---毕业论文对于学生而言很重要,如果用心去做,学生可以从中学到很多。

第一段中serves as a role of evaluation意为“起着评估的作用”;第二段中Consequently 意为“随之产生,因此”;第三段中are of such a low quality意为“质量低”,fully focused on意为“集中精力关注于”。 预测作文(三)

The Spirit of Lei Feng

1. 雷锋精神学了半个世纪,雷锋却越来越少;

2. 当下我们该如何弘扬雷锋精神?

【范文】

Lei Feng, a heroic model in China who was known for his altruism and devotion to the country, has been taken as a role model over past 50 years. But in recent years, some people have abandoned their long-held ways of learning from Lei Feng and become too selfish to helping people in need.

In today's diverse society, where individual interests are given more emphasis, the image of Lei Feng seems to have lost its appeal to some people, and is even met with cynicism . But everybody can do the basics: show more compassion, have a stronger sense of obligation and try to do good, no matter how small it is. Furthermore , governments should pay more attention to morality construction, raise people's willingness to help others, let them realize that altruism is always necessary for a harmonious society and provide fuel to the flame so it can burn more brightly.

【点评】

文章第一段通过介绍雷锋,说明雷锋精神,引出社会现象:有些人变得自私,不愿帮助那些需要帮助的人;

8 第二段指出过分强调个人利益使得雷锋形象失去原有魅力,为弘扬雷锋精神,个人应该有强烈的责任感,勿以善小而不为,政府应该加强道德建设,提高人们助人为乐的意识。

文章第一段中altruism 意为“无私,利他主义”,devotion 意为“奉献”; taken as a role model意为“作为榜样”;第二段第一句中涉及where 引导的定语从句,修饰先行词society ,cynicism 意为“冷嘲热讽,玩世不恭”,sense of obligation意为“义务感,使命感”;Furthermore 表示递进。

预测作文(四)

Influence of Digital Products on College Students

1. 数码产品种类多,更新快,大学生人均拥有数码产品的数量越来越多;

2. 这种现象对大学生来说是有益还是有害?

3. 你的看法。

【范文】

Currently, college students are unavoidably exposed to all kinds of digital products, such as digital cameras, laptops, cell phones and so on, which grow in an increasing categories and quantities. Many students continuously update their "equipments" to meet their over-growing needs. Meanwhile people show great concerns about the influence of those products.

There is no doubt that digital products make things more convenient for college students. For instance , computers and Internet enable students to collect information with greatly improved work efficiency. What's more, digital items widen students' scope of eyesight and make their life more colorful. Although these items also cause negative effects, as they may waste their precious time and cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life. Neverthless, I cherish a belief that with the help of digital products, college students can benefit a lot and the world will have a wonderful future.

【点评】

文章第一段指出现在的大学生不可避免的接触各种数码产品,并且根据需求不断更换产品,这一现象引起人们关注于产品给大学生带来的影响。第二段首先指出数码产品的优势,并列举一种产品进行说明;之后分析了产品带来的负面影响,并给出作者自己的观点。

第一段中unavoidably 意为“不可避免地”;are exposed to意为“接触”;in an increasing categories and quantities 意为“种类和数量不断增加”。第二段中There is no doubt that… 意为“„„毫无疑问”;For instance表示列举;cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life意为“培养出与现实生活脱节的一代人”。

预测作文(五)

Free Blood Donation

1. 无偿献血的意义;

2. 作为一名大学生,你认为该如何做?

【范文】

Free blood donation refers to healthy donators voluntarily giving a small amount of blood. It doesn't harm the donators' health as their bodies could make quick adjustment. It is a kind of way by which people can make contribution to society and realize self-value. However, some people are still unwilling to donate blood.

As a college student, I think effective measures should be taken to encourage people to join in the team of blood donation. First of all, a nation-wide campaign should be launched to educate people scientific knowledge about blood donation as well as the prevention and control of diseases spread via blood. Second, activities should be carried out to raise public awareness about its benefits and safety, letting them abandon their concerns. Last but not the least, government at all levels should cooperate to create a harmonious and healthy society, and improve people’s current spiritual civilization.

9 【点评】

文章第一段从献血的定义入手,提及献血对人体的影响以及献血的意义,最后一句指出问题所在---有部分人不愿加入献血的队伍。第二段从自己作为大学生的角度,提出自己的意见:首先需要开展运动,向人们传授献血方面的科学知识以及血液疾病预防知识;其次,开展提高公共意识的活动;最后各级政府部门应该创建和谐健康的社会。

第一段中 make quick adjustment 意为―快速调整‖;make contribution to society 意为―‖为社会做贡献‖;realize self-value 意为―实现自身价值‖。第二段中多次使用被动语态,measures 与动词take 搭配,campaign 与动词 launch 搭配,activities 与动词 carry out搭配;表示列举,First of all―首先‖,Last but not the least―最后但并非最不重要‖。

大学英语四级考试预测作文(2010.6)

预测作文(一)

My View on Double BA Degree

1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见

2. 我对这一现象的看法

【范文】

Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

【点评】

首段直接点题,说明现象;第二段分述三个优点,其中首句为让步状语从句,意思是“虽然可能带来负面的后果,但总体上是有益的”;第三段呼应第二段,得出结论。

范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象;第二段分三点进行论述,其中前两点是优点,即学生会更加勤奋,并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作,最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重;第三段下结论,呼应第二段。

第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。

预测作文(二)

Opening Psychological Courses

1. 许多人建议大学开设心理课程

2. 我对这一问题的看法

【范文】

Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons.

On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a

10 door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.

In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development.

【点评】

首段提出主题,其中第二句为过渡句,引出下文;第二段提出三点同意的理由;最后一段得出结论,与第一段首句呼应,其中第二句是解释型的补充说明句。

范文首段提出许多人建议大学开设心理课程。作者同意这一建议,并分三点在第二段中叙述理由。首先,目前的学习以及将来的就业压力需要开设心理课程。其次,教会学生如何调整在不同环境下的情绪。最后,给学生介绍有利于其身心健康的好习惯。第三段总结呼应首段内容。

第二段第一点中的ever-increasing 表示“一直在增加的”,修饰两个名词词组,对比鲜明,at the moment 表示“现在”,in the future表示“将来”,open a door for…表示“开启了„„之门”;第二点中的regulate 表示“调节,控制”;第三点中的conducive 表示“有益于„„的”,后接介词to 。

预测作文(三)

Advantages and Disadvantages of Electronic Dictionary

1. 电子辞典的优点

2. 电子辞典的缺点

3. 我的结论

【范文】

The discussion about electronic dictionaries has never stopped in the past few years. Let's have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.

The biggest advantage of an electronic dictionary is its convenience. Whenever you meet new words or expressions, you can know the meaning quickly. What's more, with the development of science and technology, electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more advanced: they can pronounce the words clearly, provide sample sentences to illustrate word usage and store difficult words for special memorization. Last but by no means the least, electronic dictionaries are becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more and more students can afford them.

However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, some students rely too much on the electronic dictionary —they never put their heart into learning new words and expressions. In the second place, some explanations are neither complete nor accurate , which are quite misleading . Finally, new technical inventions do not necessarily lead to progress in learning. Diligence is always the decisive factor , because "there is no royal road to learning".

Up until now, we can see it clearly that an electronic dictionary is not beneficial or harmful in itself. The key lies in the user—so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.

【点评】

首段提出一个长时间争论的话题;第二段中指出该事物的优点;第三段阐述缺点;第四段首句下结论,表明此事物本身无对错,第二句指出关键在于使用者,即如果合理使用,就会从中受益。

范文首段指出,有关电子辞典的讨论从来没有停止过;第二段阐述优点,即电子辞典便于查询,而且随着技术的发展,电子辞典功能也越来越多,另外价钱也越来越低;第三段提出缺点,电子辞典让学生产生依赖心理,而且有些解释不准确,另外技术的进步不一定带来学习上的进步;最后一段总结,电子辞典本身无对错,关键在于正确使用以便为我们服务。

第二段第三句中的illustrate 表示“用图或例子来说明”;第三点中的afford 表示“买得起”。第三段第一点中的rely too much on表示“过分依赖”;put one's heart into doing sth.表示“专心致志于某事”;第二点中的accurate

11 表示“精确的”,misleading 表示“使人误解的”;第三点第二句中的decisive factor表示“决定因素”。 预测作文(四)

Teenagers' Studying Abroad

1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学

2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的

3. 我认为这种观点是不对的

【范文】

Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.

After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased . On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

【点评】

第一段指出当前某种普遍的做法,之后分两点阐述人们支持这种做法的原因;第二段首句鲜明地指出自己反驳的意见,然后分两点来阐述理由;最后一段进行总结,并请当事人在做出决定前多加斟酌。

范文首句点题,指出青少年留学这一现象,并给出支持者的理由,即独立的生活会教会他们自信和坚持不懈,而且国外的教学水平会让学生进入更好的大学、找到更好的工作。第二段给出反对理由。首先,早期独立不一定是件好事。另外,太多的国外学校的目标是挣钱,所以它们的教学质量是令人质疑的。末段总结说青少年留学可能会带来好处,但令人担忧的问题也很多。

第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的机会做某事”。第二段首句中的biased 表示“偏激的,存有偏见的”;第三句中的aim at 表示“目的在于”;第四句中的guarantee 表示“保证”,adapt to 表示“适应”,fierce 表示“激烈的”,修饰competition(竞争) 。

预测作文(五)

How to Eliminate Cheating on Campus

1. 当前校园中存在许多作弊现象

2. 解决这一问题的办法是„„

【范文】

Nowadays. instead of listening attentively in class and working hard after class, a number of students adopt all kinds of dishonest methods to get high scores in examinations. It has become such a serious problem that it has aroused the concern from the whole society.

To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind., it calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all, the university authority should make it clear that any cheating behaviors in the examinations, from whispering and copying, receiving answers via mobile phones to asking ringers for help, will be severely punished with no exception. Moreover, teachers of all subjects should go all the way to restore honesty by setting an example for the youth through speaking sincerely and behaving truthfully . Last but not least, young students, the future of our nation, should view integrity as the prerequisite to an upright and responsible citizen so as to learn to despise and fight dishonest behaviors throughout the society.

How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from any kind of cheating behaviors? Only when

12 all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.

【点评】

首段描述一个引起全社会关注的社会现象或问题,并在第二段中给出三个解决办法;末段使用反问句和only 引导的倒装句回应主题,效果强烈。

范文首先指出,当前校园中存在的严重的作弊问题已经引起全社会的广泛关注;第二段阐述解决办法。首先,大学应明确任何形式的作弊都会受到惩罚。其次,老师要以身作则,为学生树立榜样。另外,学生应该把诚实作为当一个好公民的必要条件。末段指出,只有同心协力,才能解决校园作弊问题。

第二段第一句中的put an end to表示“结束,终止”,call for表示“要求,需要”;第一点中via 指“通过”,with no exception指“没有例外”。第二点中的go all the way to表示“全力以赴”,restore 在文中指“重塑”,set an example for表示“为„„做榜样”,speaking sincerely and behaving truthfully表示“说话真诚,行为诚实”。

第三点中的integrity 指“诚实,诚信”,prerequisite 指“先决条件”,后接介词for 或to ;despise 表示“蔑视”。

2009年6月四级作文预测

(一)Fire Prevention on Campus

1. 前段时间校园火灾频发,造成生命和财产损失

2. 分析火灾发生的原因

3. 作为学生,如何预防校园火灾发生

●审题概述●

这是一篇分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章,撰写的重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失,然后说明火灾原因,最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段,主要概述;第二段,说明原因;第三段,详细论述措施。

【范文】 Fire Prevention on Campus

People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported—houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, ―What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?‖

A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.

Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.

◇第一段思路点评:概述并引入下文

◇语言点提示:

(1)此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?常可作为过渡句,引出下文

(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如are alarmed by,were reported,were burned down,were

13 damaged ,Faced with。

◇第二段思路点评:论述火灾的主要原因是使用热得快烧水,还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂。

◇语言点提示:electric water-heaters电热水器

◇第三段思路点评:详述预防火灾的三点措施,注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。

◇语言点提示:take precautions采取预防措施fire extinguisher灭火器

(二)Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生

2. 物品被盗的原因

3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

●审题概述 这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。

【范文】Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

―If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,‖ goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important one. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked outside a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides , do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition , it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.

◇第一段思路点评:陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

◇语言点提示:it seems that此句型表示一种可能性

◇第二段思路点评:说明被盗原因

◇语言点提示:

14 (1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识

(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

(4)light-fingered 小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

◇第三段思路点评:阐述如何加强防盗意识

◇语言点提示:

注意关联词语in the first place,besides ,In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

(三)How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

3. 你对网络依赖症的看法

● 审题概述●

本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段,侧重简述网络给人们生活带来了多彩、便利。

第二段,详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段,论述对网络依赖的观点。

【范文】1: How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.

Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

The power of the Internet is all pervasive, yet its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.

◇第一段思路点评:综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if 引导的条件句引出“网络”话题,第二句概述网络带来的多彩和便捷的生活。

◇语言点提示:has drawn…, realized…, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。

◇第二段思路点评:详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系,先总述,后分述。

◇语言点提示:resort to借助、诉诸、求助于

◇第三段思路点评:先陈述人们对网络的依赖,再谈对此的看法。

◇语言点提示:

(1)negative effects副作用、反面作用

15 (2)addicts 成瘾者、依恋者

(3)fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界

(4)pornography 色情表演、色情作品

(5)fraud 欺骗、诈骗

【范文】2:

As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can ’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much that they forget many other important matters.

As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.

(四)Craze for Civil Service Examinations

1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员

2. 引起此现象的原因

3. 你的看法

● 审题概述●

本文是一篇论述大学生报考公务员人数增多的原因和对此的看法。第一段,主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段,侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段,重点谈自己对此的观点。

【范文】Craze for Civil Service Examinations

Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can ’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.

In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.

Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.

◇第一段思路点评:第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考,第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军,第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的,还有理工科的。

◇语言点提示:liberal arts majors文科专业学生

16 ◇第二段思路点评:先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素,再详细分述。

◇语言点提示:

(1)On one hand…On the other起到衔接上下文作用

(2)is attributable to归因于

(3)sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济

◇第三段思路点评:重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。

◇语言点提示:beyond reproach无可厚非

(五)Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班

2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班,有些人则认为没有必要

3. 你的观点

● 审题概述●

这是一篇主要论述对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段,概述各种各样培训班的状况。第二段,论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段,重点阐述你对此的看法。

Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming , in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialities like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.

Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than insert knowledge into our head.

As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.

◇第一段思路点评:第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起,第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。

◇语言点提示:

(1)a great diversity of各种各样的

(2)mushrooming 迅速扩散、增加

(3)language crash courses语言速成课程

17 ◇第二段思路点评:先用一个对比句式摆出两种不同的观点,再分别详述他们的看法。

◇语言点提示:注意连接词语while ,the former,they ,the latter group of people等的使用,强化了上下文之间的连贯性。

◇第三段思路点评:辩证地论述自己对参加各类培训班的看法。

◇语言点提示:

(1)as far as I am concerned我认为,就我而言

(2)counter-productive 适得其反的、事与愿违的

四级

预测一

1, 现在大学生宿舍几乎是人手一台电脑

2, 有些人认为会促进学生学习,有些人认为会影响学生的学习

3, 你的看法

审题

这是一篇议论文, 关于大学生拥有电脑的利弊。可以分成四部分: 第一部分,介绍越来越多的大学生有自己的电脑;第二部分,赞成拥有电脑的好处;第三部分指出反对拥有电脑的理由,如打游戏上瘾等;第四部分,提出自己的观点,不用带电脑也能满足学习等各种需要。

Is It Necessary of A College Student to Own A Computer in Dormitory?

Nowadays, if you ①step into students’ dorms, you’ll find almost every college student owns a computer. Some people think it is a good means to promote study. It is very convenient and fast to find what we need when we are writing thesis or doing a research. And we can also have online learning if we have problems in our study. In addition, we can see movies or listen to music whenever we are tired. So having a computer in dorm brings a lot of benefits.

While there are still some people who think that having a computer in the dorm ②has a bad effect on study. In fact, there are so many students who are addicted to computer games, playing them day and night, so it’s obvious that they can’t do well in their study. ③What ’s worse, there are so many unhealthy things on the Internet that will ruin those who don’t have a strong will to control themselves and lead to crimes in reality.

To me, there is no need to have a computer for each college student. The reasons are as follows: firstly, if you lack self-control, ④it ’s very likely that you ’ll use the computer to play games, watch films or chat with friends instead of study. Secondly, if you really want to use the computer, you can certainly go to the school’s computer rooms to do whatever you like. The price for surfing the Internet in school is low. Thirdly, it’s not safe leaving your PC in dorm. Once stolen, it is a great pain to you and your family for the PC is quite expensive. I do believe it ’s not necessary to get a PC in the dorm.

语言点:

① step into 走进

② has a bad effect on 对„„产生不利的影响

③ What ’s worse 更糟糕的是

④ it ’s very likely that… 很可能„„

预测二

1, 从今年六月一日起我国开始限制塑料袋的使用

18 2, 描述半年来“限塑令”积极效果

3, 你的建议

审题

这是一篇议论文, 关于废除免费塑料袋保护环境的好处。可以分成三部分: 第一部分,介绍今年六月份通过得“限塑令”,分析其原因在于保护环境等;第二部分,“限塑令”实施后的效果,同时指出还有商家仍然在使用免费塑料袋;第三部分提出自己的观点,仍需加大力度继续推行“限塑令”。

Ban on Free Plastic Bags

Plastic bags have been used for about 20 years, and they bring great convenience to people in life, but they also ①represent a major challenge to the enviromental protection at the same time. They are difficult to recycle, which has caused international attention and concern. As a result, our country has started to forbid using free plastic bags from June 1 on this year.

Now half a year has passed. We can see in supermarket free plastic bags have disappeared, people ②have the consciousness to take shopping bags with themselves when they go shopping. On the other hand, free plastic bags are still being used in some small shops. If we want to get rid of plastic bags in our life, more education and efforts should be further made.

In a word, ③it is esstential that we should take measures to deal with environmental pollutions caused by such daily consumption as plastic bags and etc. We should ④spare no efforts to put the law into effect and try our best to protect our earth!

语言点:

① represent a major challenge 给„„带来重大挑战

② have the consciousness to 具有做„„的意识

③ it is esstential that we should take measures to 我们很有必要采取措施„„

④ spare no efforts 不遗余力做„„

预测三

1, 越来越多的年轻人开始通过网络交朋友

2, 产生这种现象的原因是什么,并简述其利与弊

审题

这是一篇议论文, 关于网上交友的利弊抉择。可以分成三部分: 第一部分,网上交友的好处,比如说很方便和远方、甚至国外的朋友联系等;第二部分,网上交友的一些弊端,如需要提防犯罪分子、网上诈骗等;第三部分提出观点,利用网络,但要注意保护自己。

Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?

Nowadays, more and more people begin to make friends through Internet. As a new way to communicate with others, Internet has its ①unique advantages which appeal to young men. For example, it can help you meet people far away from you without a long journey and much money. You can sit down at home, ②clicking the mouse . Internet helps people make the world a little one which we call the ―earth village‖, and making friends on line is easy.

But Internet gives people chances to ③cover their true identity because you can’t actually know who you are talking with. Maybe you are talking with a criminal who wants to know your private information, or you may encounter a man who wants to cheat you of money or do something even more terrible to you. It is dangerous to make friends with people like that on line, of which we should be careful.

19 So making friends online is interesting but we must be critical and learn to protect ourselves.

语言点:

① unique advantages 独特的优势

② click the mouse 点击鼠标

③ cover one’s true identity 掩盖真实身份,隐藏身份

④ cheat sb. of sth. 骗走某人的某东西

预测四

1, 有人喜欢存钱

2, 有人喜欢提前消费(using tomorrow’s money today)

3, 你的选择,说明原因

审题

这是一篇议论文, 关于金钱的不同用法。可以分成三部分: 第一部分,介绍有人爱把余钱存银行,而有人则借钱买车买东西等;第二部分,分析这两种做法的原因和可能产生的后果;第三部分提出观点,理性使用。

On Saving Money

With the development of society and the improvement of people’s life, people live a better life, more and more families have more extra money. Some people tend to save money to put the spare money into banks. However, others feel like using tomorrow ’s money today like Americans. They tend to buy their cars or even computers in ①installments . To them, what counts is the current happiness.

Generally speaking, people who save money are those who don’t have much money and are afraid of poor life in the future whereas other people want to live a happy life ②for the moment. To those who like to use tomorrow’s money today, ③there is a possibility that they might not pay off the debt one day if they lack self-control.

In my opinion, we should use money properly, the key point is that we must make the best use of the money we have and ④plan for future life. We all know the difficulty of earning money, so we can’t waste money. What we must have in mind is that we should use our money in the right way.

语言点:installments 分期付款for the moment 临时,眼前there is a possibilty that… 有可能„„plan for 为„„而筹划

预测五

1. 表明你的身份和事件

2. 对到场领导老师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处

3. 宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会取得成功.

审题

这是一篇应用文,写的时候要遵循口头交际的原则:面对听众,使用符合语境的口头表达。第一段,介绍自己的身份;第二段,对老师和领导所做的组织工作表示感谢,运动会对大学生的意义;第三段,宣布运动会开始,表达对运动员的祝愿。

Opening Speech

Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students, ladies and gentlemen!

I’m glad to stand here to make the opening speech. My name is Jim, ①on behalf of the students’ Union, it’s my great pleasure to say something to welcome the wonderful sports meet in the two days to come.

20 First, I’d like to thank our teachers and leaders of the university who have ②devoted so much to preparing for and organizing the sports meet, which will give us a very good chance to show ourselves and have a better university life. Sports meet is one of the most important events in our school life because it is surely to make our campus life more colorful and unforgettable. I hope every sportsman and every other students will enjoy it!

At last, I’d like to declare the opening of the sports meet and give my good wish to every participant that they would ③play their utmost to make it all the more successful!

Thank you for your attention!

语言点:on behalf of… 代表„„devoted so much to 贡献力量做„„play their utmost 尽最大努力,发挥出最佳水平,赛出最好成绩