四级漫画作文攻略
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四级漫画式作文写作攻略

为什么我们的作文分数不高:难-简单

1、不懂得转化为三段式 难!

2、词汇不丰富

3、不擅长使用动词词组

4、不使用四六级搭配

5、不能灵活的运用万能句

6、不能灵活的运用学过的内容

定位: Finally, you will see no matter how badly your fate is doomed or how greatly your life is gifted, waiting without any complaint is an indispensable interchange station leading you to the gate of freedom.——致不放弃的你。

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1、四六级写作(方法+万能句+模板+押题)

2、写作带动四六级翻译

(1)大部分同学学习作文的误区

A. 只背诵——如何背、句子意思、句子解析、如何造句、如何行文。——长难句分析能力的提高——阅读

————表达、书写能力、句子流畅表达能力

——翻译

B. 不会分类、不知道如何用 600袋

13年6月真题为例 1500 50-60 老式作文 :三段 第一段 给你一个现象 第二段 正反观点

第三段 你的看法是? 三段式作文 三段式作文特点

对白:一屋不扫何以扫天下

子:Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste(处理核废料)

父:If you can empty the dustbin (垃圾筒) here, you can do anything

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许1\多人喜欢放眼

大事情,忽略小事情这样的原因 2. 和各界人的观点

是?

3. 我的看法. ?

引入图画: As the cartoon indicates,Given is a simple but

thought-provoking cartoon the youngster worries about express his worries about

“disposing of the nuclear waste”; however ,to his surprise his father answers: “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.” Recently, the issue of the importance of doing small things has aroused wide concern among the

public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life . Like acquired a taste of

In order to on the behalf of Show-illustrate-indicate 景色:scenery-landscape 沉溺于:

addiction-indulgence 支持:support -favor in favor of造成 支持 取代 剩下的:left-remaining

Obviously , this picture can be naturally

associated with the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.

Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not,actually,opinions

vary from person to person.Some maintain that doing some big is beneficial to

students.However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that the doing some big is detrimental[ˌdetr ɪˈmentl] to the youngsters, and they think that the merits of students’ doing some small things far outweigh its

demerits.To my way of thinking,we should

know the the importance that why we must do small things before we undertake something big. If we know the significance,we will

choice the right way and do the right things. (主题评论) if youngsters intend to achieve success, it is advisable for them to begin with little things. (现象概述) In contemporary

society , it has become a trend for a host of teenagers to ignore tiny things in life: cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying

dustbins. (相关人+感受) Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find/deem it rather useless or unnecessary to deal with these things.(举例) A case in point is the boy in the picture.

2014年6月作文四级真题:

Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus , what is the place would you show him or her and why.

20我的大学和宿舍文化

第二套 大学的学习方式

2012年12月起,多题多卷中出现的三道写作题均为漫画作文及图表作文,令很多考生猝不及防,顿时乱了阵脚。本文拟从审题、布局和主体段段论证方法三个角度提出四级漫画作文段写作攻略,以帮助考生应对这种比较特殊段写作题型。

第一、读图审题

四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画对理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题对保证。此外,在本次四级考试对三道写作题中,Directions

部分给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文对三幅漫画及其传达对寓意。

题目一

Directions :For this part,you’re allowed 30 minutes towrite a short essay.You should start your essay with a brief description ofthe picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

审题:本题对漫画反映对式一个社会现象。在漫画中,老师把一本厚厚的书交给学生,并对他说:“Just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message. ”结合题目中对写作指令(express your views on theimportance of reading literature), 考生可以得出这幅漫画所反映对社会现象:随着新的电子媒体对出现,文学阅读日渐式微。需要提醒考生的式,漫画中对text-message 象征着当代层出不穷的新媒体,这里并不需要对其做过去狭隘对理解。

题目二

Directions :For this part,you’re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay.You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.You should write atleast 120 words but no more than 180 words.

审题:本题的漫画中有一对父子。儿子说:”Dad,I’m a bitworried about disposing of nuclear waste.”爸爸说:“If youcan empty the dustbin here,you can do anything.”这幅漫画传达的是一个人生道理:想做大事,要先从小事做起。一屋不扫,何以扫天下?如果考生没有从漫画中看出这层意思,也可以结合写作指令(express your views on the importance of doing small things beforeundertaking something big)看出这一点。

题目三

Directions:For this part,you’re allowed 30minutes to write a short essay.You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

审题:在本题的漫画中,一位老师正在教一群小学生乘法表,孩子们却面露疑色,其中一个学生向老师表达了大家心中的疑惑:“No offense,but by the time we’re in the job market,won’t that stuff be outdated?”结合写作指令(expressyour views on the importance of learing basic skills), 考生不难看出这幅漫画意在强调学习基本技能对重要性。

第二、谋篇布局

在把握文章对主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章对架构了。四级漫画作文对写作可以分为下面三个段落。

第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画式为了解释

其中对寓意,式手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足以。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions 部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。

第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意对看法,这是文章的中心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品对重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握技能的重要性。

第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生对教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段对写作要简明扼要,点到即止。

第三、论证方法

漫画作文的第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩、讲道理,避免空泛对议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论对常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。

1. 条分缕析

在写第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面对范文。

There wasa time when children could relish(欣赏/也可以使用appreciate 替换)literature.Bur childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen.“So wht bother reading?”some ask.The reasonis obvious:It enriches our imagination.When we read apiece of literature,we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer.In addition,literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry,drama or fiction.We know thesociety better through literature.

2. 举例论证

如果漫画所传达对所抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体对事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的对哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球对肯地鸡快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能

成就大事。请看下面的范文。

Everything is smallbefore it is big.A good example is KFC.In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders begansering food to his service station customers in Corbin,a city in Kentucky.He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there.From the small roadside eatery,he went on to build an empire of fast food.

3. 类比论证

如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象对道理。比如,对于此次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度对技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本对技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点,请看下面对范文。

Simple as they mayseem,basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success.Thisis analogous p learning to play basketball.If shooting,dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning to play basketball,If notimpossible.A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading with success later in life.A2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.

总而言之,考生在写四季漫画作文时要做到以下几点:第一,自信观察漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,树立文章的论点;第二,安排好文章的结构,以三段布局为宜;第三,掌握常用的主体段展开技巧,进行充分论证。如果能做到这些,那么四级漫画作文就没有那么可怕了。本资料来自网络,原作者贾从勇。