高二英语月考作文讲评
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高二英语月考作文讲评

Part Ⅰ总述

1. 遗漏and 之后的内容 As middle school students, we all taken examinations of different types and experienced both success and failure/success as well as failure.

2. 过渡语的使用 ……中学生面对考试失败, 普遍存在两种态度。

Different people hold/have different attitudes towards failure in exams. / Faced with failure, we generally hold two different kinds of attitudes./ Among students, there exist two main attitudes towards failure./ Some students hold a negative/positive attitude to failure. However, other students hold the opposite attitude towards their setbacks.

Part Ⅱ态度一 消极的态度 Words and expressions

1. 考试结果不如人意

When the results of examinations are far from satisfactory /anything but pleasing.

When they fail to get expected scores/marks…

2. 情绪低落 be in a bad mood/be in low spirits be/become low in spirits

3. 丧失信心 lose (their) confidence

4. 不再努力

They are so disappointed that they refuse to/don’t want to/are unwilling to make further efforts.

5. 将过错归咎于老师 blame their teachers for their faults/ blame their faults on their teachers 连词成句,连句成段 S ome students hold a negative attitude towards failure. When failing in exams, they tend to be/ become low in spirits. What’s worse, they are so disappointed that they refuse to make further efforts in their studies. Some even blame their faults on their teachers. As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on.

Part Ⅲ 态度二 积极的态度 Words and expressions

1. 分析并找出失败的原因 find out and analyze the cause of/the reasons for their failure

2. 增加自信 strengthen/increase/build up self-confidence become more confident

3. 避免再犯同样的错误

try not to repeat their mistakes in later examinations try to avoid making the same mistakes

4. 对已取得的成绩感到自豪

feel proud of what they have achieved be proud of the things they have accomplished

5. 对老师的帮助怀有感激 be thankful for the help their teachers give them

have appreciation for the help their teachers give them

连词成句,连句成段 To our relief/joy, most students hold quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks. When faced with failure, they choose to find out and analyze the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to build up self-confidence. By doing these, they try to avoid making the same mistakes in their later examinations.

Part Ⅳ 自己的观点 观点鲜明

1. 失败乃成功之母 As the saying goes, failure is the mother of success./ There is a saying that goes ‘Failure is the mother of success./ A saying goes that failure is the mother of success.

2. 从失败中汲取教训 learn from failure

3. 勇于面对失败 be brave to face failure/face failure bravely

连词成句/连句成段 What I want to stress is that failure is the mother of success. Knowing that failure is unavoidable, we have no choice but to face it bravely. Besides, what we should do is to learn from failure. Only by doing these can we make great progress and make our dream come true.