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The bar chart given above reflects that the number of readers choosing paper book or electronic books experienced some changes during the past four years. The number of paper book readers decreased slowly from 10 million in 2010 to 8 million in 2013. However, during the same period, the number of electronic book readers increased steadily from 8 million to 12 million.

We learn from the bar chart that people in mounting numbers would like to choose electronic books while less people like paper books. What might account for this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, with the widespread availability of electronic devices such as smartphones,tablet PC and Electronic Reader,it is much easier for electronic books to be applied and popularized. Secondly, compared with paper books, electronic books are characterized by convenience in terms of carrying and saving spaces. Furthermore, the costs of purchasing and downloading

electronic books are lower that of paper books, which enables readers to save a great deal of money. Last but not least,electronic books sometimes stand for high fashion and efficiency.

Whether electronic books will totally replace paper books one day still seems to be uncertain. However, no matter what kind of books will vanish, the habit of reading books should not be eliminated. (218 words)



我们从这幅柱状图中得知,越来越多的人愿意选择电子书而越来越少得人喜欢纸质书。有什么可以解释这个现象? 理由可以罗列如下:首先,随着诸如智能手机、平板电脑、电子阅读身背这样的电子产品的广泛普及,电子书的使用和传播变得相对容易。其次,相比纸质书而言,电子书的携带更加方便,也更加节省空间。再者,购买或下载电子书的成本比购买书籍要低得多,这可以为读者省下一大笔钱。最后,电子书似乎也是一种时尚和高效的象征。



包括代沟、对孩子过分保护、过分溺爱、只关心下一代忽略老人。 As can be seen from the picture, the department in a store which sells nutritive products for children is surrounded by crowds of parents, making the salespeople extremely busy. In contrast, the neighboring department that sells similar products for the elderly seems rather deserted by customers. Its saleswoman feels so bored that she can not resist falling asleep.

The picture mirrors a common social phenomenon from a unique angle —people tend to care more for the next generation than the previous one. On the one hand, young couples dote on children, most of whom are the “only children”. Parents endeavor to prepare their kids for a bright future by raising them healthily. On the other hand, young couples fail to spend time with their old parents, and some of them are even too mean to provide the old with at least a decent living environment.

I think such a trend is quite abnormal and distressing. Filial duty used to be the most highly prized virtue among the Chinese for over two thousand years. Busy as people are, the duty should not be easily shirked. Supplying our old parents with material and emotional supports

is not only a repayment to them, but can also set a good example to educate the youth.


从图中我们可以看到,一家商店中的儿童营养品专柜前挤满了父母们,以至于售货员几乎要忙不过来了。而隔壁的老年营养品专柜看起来似乎已经被顾客们遗忘了。这个售货员甚至无聊得睡着了。 这幅图从一个独特的视角反映了一个普遍的社会现象,即人们对于下一代的关心超过了上一代。一方面,年轻的夫妇们把大部分的注意力都放在他们的独生子女身上,让他们健康地成长并为他们创造美好的未来。另一方面,年轻夫妇们没能花时间和他们的老父母们在一起,有一些人甚至吝啬得不肯给父母提供像样的居住环境。



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Different people have different views on_____. Some people think that_____, whereas others argue that __________.

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing, I firmly believe that ___________.For another, _____________.Just think of________, who/which_______.

Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that______. Only if_______ can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.


In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China, and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years.

The biggest benefit, in my eyes, is that_______. In addition,_______. Finally, ______________.

Apart from the benefits mentioned above, we should also face several unavoidable challenges. In the first place,_____________. In the second place,________. What is more, _______________.In summary, we should_______________.


Nowadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life, ranging from __________to_____________.

The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the

one hand,_________. On the other hand,__________.

To conclude, ____________are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may________. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use, always being a master instead of slaving of them.


一. 得出最终结论

1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that... 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论„„

很完全的答法,"take sth into consideration"短语的应用,加分。

2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that... 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论„„

"Take into account sth" 短语似乎又比上句的"take sth into consideration" 提升了一个层次。

3、Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that... 因此,自然我们得出以下结论。。。

"Hence" 一词用在文章中大气吧,但别平时口语中用,否则即使老外也用一种看老古董的眼神看你。。。

再特意提一句:"we'd better" 在这里不是“不得不”或“最好”的意思,而是一种自然而然,水到渠成的得出结论。

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。

短语"there is no doubt that"上线,同时运用我们的老朋友"as well as" 增加看点。

5、All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之,我们没有„„是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

二. 引出不同观点

1、People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that.... 人们对„„的观点因人而异。有些人认为..... 然而其他人却认为„„


2、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。

乍一看,跟上句的开头神似,其实就是省略掉了"people's" ,不


3、People may have different opinions on... 人们对„„可能会有不同的见解。


4、There are different opinions among people as to... 关于„„人们的观点大不相同。

"different" 虽拉低了水准,但"as to"又拯救了回来。

5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败) 人们的态度各不相同。