最近3次四级考试作文
初二 记叙文 4字 153人浏览 风偏11

2012.6

作文题目是write a composition entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline below.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议 No one in China has failed to notice that goods are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags. we can find examples with ease :a small co mputer is packed in a thick and heavy carton ,clothes are put in a well-designed colorful plastic bags

What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand, to earn more economic gains, a considerable number of manufactures usua lly wrap their products with unnecessary but appealing materials aiming at attracting customer’s attention, arousing their curiosity and th en stimulating their purchasing desire . On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the more delicate the package seems ,t he superior the quality will be. However, the emergence of excessive package has given rise to many undesirable consequences. For on e thing ,it is a waste of precious and limited natural resources ,. For another, customers are often deceived by artificial external packi ng rather than being provided with high-quality goods .

To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose rest riction on excessive packaging. Second, a public education campaign should be launched to show that packaging doesn't equal to qualit y, and also let them know the bad impact of it. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend.

2011.12

Nothing succeeds without a Strong Will

Sometimes, in our daily life, the easiest thing might be the most difficult thing, as in the case of some people trying to quit smoking for hundreds of times and still making endless efforts without any hope of success. The reason for their failure is their lack of a strong will。

In our modern world, nothing is simple and straightforward. Something might appear deceptively easy at first, but as we proceed on, we will find that it is actually extremely difficult. Therefore, we must take whatever we do seriously and be mentally prepared to make our utmost exertions. When we encounter obstacles and setbacks, we must apply our strong willpower and persevere until we finally succeed。

For us university students, in our academic studies or in our daily life on campus, we might not be faced with insurmountable challenges. But we need to get prepared, right now, to take things seriously, try to cultivate our strong will, and be ready to pursue our goals through persistence and indefatigable will. I believe it’s the only way we can achieve our success。 Nothing succeeds without a Strong Will

Success depends on many factors, both physical and spiritual. In my opinion, mental factors like a strong will are far more decisive in enabling us to achieve success. For example, despite our repeated efforts to quit smoking, our lack of a strong will would still cause us to end up in failure 。

In any of our undertakings, we should first set a goal. Some goals are highly challenging. Without a strong will, people would give up in the middle and they fail to achieve their goals. For those people who do succeed, they succeed simply because they have that mental stamina which enables them to challenge even the most insurmountable difficulties。

There is a saying that ‘Impossible is nothing’. To make the impossible possible, we must exercise our perseverance and strong willpower. Or, as an English proverb goes, ‘If there is a will, there is a way.’ Our world is becoming increasingl y competitive and only by making strong-willed efforts can we maximize our potential and gain competitive edges, and prevail over all obstacles that lie in our way to success。

2011.6 My views on Online Shopping 1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题

3. 我的建议 Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.

Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.

It is undeniable that shopping on the Internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.

点评:本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知,因此,考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是,比较特殊的是,题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题,而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以,考生应当审清楚题,在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点,还必须给出相应的缺点。

按照四级作文的要求,考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题;

第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购,分别铺陈其优缺点;关于优点,网购的优点很多,考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述,比如说网购可以节省很多时间;网购可以节省很多成本开支等;其次,缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面;为了不至于跟优点相比,缺点方面太轻,考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点,比如说与传统购物相比,网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣;

第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。

整篇作文话题比较好展开,难度不大,只要考生审好题,列出相应点,相信作文不会是难题。