看荷作文提纲花
初一 散文 2字 436人浏览 wang喀什机

看荷花

1、开头 (诗句引入 向往之情 提问 开门见山)

2、沿途所见

(1)云 (颜色 形状 联想)____________________________________________, ________________________________________________________________________

(2)树 (种类 特点)________________________________________________

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(3)水 (声音 颜色 )________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

(4)心情___________________________________________________________________

3、荷花

(1)远看荷花 (整体感觉 颜色)___________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________

(2)近看荷花

荷叶(不同的形状 颜色) (有的荷叶______________________,像__________________;有的荷叶__________,像______________________________;还有的荷叶______________________________________________________________________________.

荷花 不同的姿态. 有的荷花__________________________________________________ 有的荷花______________________________________________________________,还有的 ________________________________________________________________________________

联想:______________________________________________________________________

(3)荷叶上的水珠 (姿态 动作 联想)_______________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________

(4)风吹动荷叶的姿态__________________________________________________

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(5)动物 鱼 _______________________________________________________________ 白鹭 __________________________________________________________________ 其他_____________________________________________________________________

4、结尾 (表达对荷花的爱 赞美荷花的气节 )