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写作测试三朱伟范文(包含英语一和英语二)

The following chart is a questionnaire about the Satisfaction Rate in customers to a company’s service. This bar chart shows the number of positive and negative responses given by customers in a market survey about services at a leisure center.

Asked about the parking facilities at the leisure center, 700 clients responded positively, whereas 550 said something negative about it. Looking at the ticket costs, there were almost three times as many people responding negatively as those who respond positively, with only 350 satisfactory responses.

Equally evaluated was the booking service, for which the survey counted 650 positive and 600 negative responses. In contrast to the ticket costs, the attitude of staff was considered very positively. Only one fourth of the 1250 asked customers complained about the attitude of staff. 950 people thought positively about the staff at the leisure center.

Summarizing the results of this report, you can say that there is need for improvement in the fields of ticket costs, booking service and parking, especially for the former. Also, it will be highly recommended that we do everything possible to increase the parking places and perfect our service.

虚度光阴,人生遗憾

范文:Para.1: broadcasts some kinds of soap operas, is appreciating every nut and bolt (细节)of those invariable plots.(情节) that we human beings always perform something wasting much of precious time, thus spoiling youth 毁灭了青春 as every second elapses.每一秒的流逝

Para.2: this degeneration, , habit is habit. We are good at giving ourselves sufficient excuses to support what we always do in our daily life.

well-known scientist, whose name is Sigmund Freud / Andrew a kind of habit, representing a sense of spiritual existence, can never be changed as long as continuing for 47 days,nor is这次也不例外 this kind of time-wasting practice. 内因 TV programs, ranging from entertaining show, TV talk show, TV series, etc. to some other inferior products 劣等的作品, which differentiate from forms as well as broadcasting time but never really from their essential

Then, the consequence is very distinct. 毫不夸张的说soap opera ruins the concept of cherishing time.

Para.3: up these inappropriate doings, 不合适的行为 involving laying down the effective regulations to restrict the quantities of entertainments, time outlook and guaranteeing more rational lifestyles. 确保更加合理的生活方式 º

必背范文篇:小作文(应用文)核心预测

申请信 application t

to your university an application for the prize —— “Most Improved Organization Award” .

Dear Sir —— “Most Improved Organization Award”. The consider our group as a qualified candidate are as followings.

Firstly, we specialize in private tools^ rebuilding and the living standard of our schoolmates who are physically challenged(残疾人). For example, we rebuilt the 创业 but the exalted experiences to change our lifestyle改变生活的高尚体验.

Really hope you, a majestic judge, be touched by the efforts we have made. If you have any requirements or need any further narration阐述, please do not hesitate to call me via ×××.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

新东方2014考研英语 写作测试四 主讲老师:朱伟

英语一 Haste makes waste. 欲速则不达

When the hot word of the year——“speed” gains a series of concerns from the public引起普遍关注, can we still stand there, hesitating for what occurs?我们还能无动于衷吗? As we can see from the depiction, a single person , 修饰 riding 主动 on a bike , Actually, it is a morning call to send us a message that haste makes waste欲速则不达,

But my own worry today is less of the problem of human’s pursuit of materialism物质主义 than 不是这个问题而是那个问题 it is of the slightly more luxurious 更担心的是 agony of the decline in the thinking style about speed even of the educated. Several factors could weigh heavily for this degeneration, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following

two

To begin with, as the economic boom brings not only the high standard of modernization现代化的高标准 but the fast rhythm of living as well 逻辑完整, many citizens, especially for young college graduates, could hardly keep cool when facing the relentless competition激烈的竞争. It is estimated that据估计 one in four college students think they may lose the chance to get a wonderful life if there is no promotion within 3 years.

Furthermore, externally 外因, our society is witnessing an overwhelming number of low- level TV programs, ranging from the talk show to some other inferior ones, which exaggerate the nonsense of success 无意义的成功 to ignite 点燃 the over-idol toward so-called “speed”.对速度的孤独崇拜

Taking into account all analyses mentioned above, we may safely arrive at a conclusion that it is, unquestionably, unreasonable to be utilitarian ( speedy ) 功利主义 in our work and daily life.

英语二

Directions :

which shop handle in 2004 and 2005.

Using the information from the charts, write a short report, which describes the situation in 2004 and compares -180 words on your answer sheet.

Elaborately and luminously, these two pie charts display the proportion distribution of the three main types of shops, which sold our commodities over the period from 2004 to 2005.

In 2004, 48.1% of our products were promoted by hypermarket, 46.5% by small family-run shops and 5.4% via other outlets. Then after only another 365 days, the share of hypermarkets rose up sharply by some 11% to 59.6%. Meanwhile, the turnovers contributed by small family-run shops decreased symmetrically by just over 11% to 35%.

Actually, ( it is hardly necessary for us to think twice before figuring out this truth of matter th at ) the quantity of hypermarkets’ upsurge is equivalent to the one of small family shops’ slides, which predicts a whole new business trend in the foreseeable future, that is, large shopping chains, due to their much cheaper goods price as well as ample supplies and kaleidoscopic options, will surely take more marketing shares in competition. Also, there are still some other outlets holding/which hold more or less steady, with a slight drop in share of only 0.3%.

Considering these general illustrations, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that the large supermarkets are taking more of our goods than other retailers, with their sales having represented well over 50% of total turnovers yet. The tendency that hypermarkets will continually play critical roles in our customers’ daily purchasing may be irreversible. 小作文:You are in charge of the Part-Time Center of your university. Today, a complaint letter is delivered to you by one of employers――“I will not use your temporary staff 临时工 any more for their Please write a letter to explain what happened and ask for his forgiveness.

Dear Sir,

our temporary administration assistance

Actually,

Unfortunately, his family coincided with some catastrophic affairs 遇到了一些事these days so that he has made a lot of misunderstandings due to absence of mind.心不在焉 It is very irrational that we still send him to work for you.

exceptional, 是个例外 I would like to give you some kind of

compensation 给予补偿. Next week, if you please, I will send you another skilled free of charge免费.

Really hope you reconsider this

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming,The Director of Department

新东方在线2014考研VIP 英语 写作测试五 主讲老师:朱伟

大作文:

朱伟点评:这篇2013年1月的考研英语一真题和我上次 课讲的英语一预测范文连漫画和举的例子 都一样。关于大学毕业生走到人生十字路 口何去何从的话题,就是选择。做决定要 果断。

首段描述漫画,次段分析有人注重选一条 路坚持,有人只是犹豫不决。然后举个大 学生毕业后不知到底是就业还是工作的例 子呼应主题;最后一段表达立场,希望大 家

全文只要紧扣选择写,无论你写的是很多 大学生迷茫,还是选择本身的重要性,都 可以!把我的范文稍微改几个主题词,就 可以照搬了!

We can figure out a story< some plots> in the picture that standing on the crossroad of life are many graduates, who could only gaze at these diverse road signs and hardly know where to go. life is such a kind of miracle which is all about choice, trap in the delusion of orientation.

I intend to make some further analyses as followings. Firstly, some people may attach importance to setting a life goal as quickly as possible owing to加名词 their belief to a saying that

Yet, there are 名词出现句子结束 still some others who accustom to putting themselves in a hesitating state due to their fear of unstable outcomes after making wrong decisions. Personally, the more time you spend in lingering, the bigger chance you take to confuse yourself.

It is unveiled by a recent survey initi ated by Readers’ Digest three months ago that 40% more or less of undergraduates investigated feel helpless in the face of whether to graduate for job or pursue a higher degree.

Thus, it is, unquestionably, essential to be resolute 果敢 in our work and daily life. So, a list involving some constructive and liberal mottos to restrict being sentimental 限制变得多愁善感 when things need t o be settled 被动should be adhered to our dressing table as soon as possible . 话从正面说从反面说

小作文:写信号召同学们参与慈善义卖、为需要帮 助的孩子们募集资金物品的活动

朱伟点评:这是一封关于写信号召同学们参与慈善义 卖、为需要帮助的孩子们募集资金物品的 活动,归属于倡议信。

文章的难点在于第一个写作要求,需要给 出活动details ,很多考生忽视了这一点。 通俗点说,读过去得是一个完整的活动安 排,语言只需简单清晰,不能大而空,这 是得高分的关键!

所谓details 就是要有具体活动细节,比如 时间、活动安排、如何参与进去等,历年 应用文考查的都是大家的实际生活操作能 力,因此得分关键永远是我课堂上反复强 调的,语言一定要“接地气”,

Dear classmates

I am writing this letter to call you up to take part in our Charity Sale Weekend, which will be held in next Saturday and last two days持续两天. This action aims to help those homeless children who are eager to live life in a normal way.

We will start this exalted 高尚的 occasion at 9 a.m. Saturday morning, with a formal opening ceremony. Then, at about half past nine, you are highly praised to pick up everything

you have and make a great deal with other students to collect as much money as possible for the welfare of children.为了孩子们的福利

Finally, you can log on the website of our school to make an enrollment before this Friday. We

look forward for your presence Li Ming, the President of Student Union

新东方在线2014考研VIP 英语 写作测试六 主讲老师:朱伟

大作文 全球物价(对比)

This graph shows the prices of the consumer goods in three European countries from 1981 to 2005 .

Over the 25-

higher than both France and Germany do, except for the early / mid 1990’s when French prices were higher and the early 2000’s when both French and German pric es were higher at different times.

Taken an overall inspection, prices of United Kingdom have varied dramatically, peaking at 24% in 1986, but, through several fluctuations back and forth, they have progressively come down, with the closing in 2004 at 5% and then rising only slightly the ensuing year.

Also, French and German prices have always varied only a little bit from each other within a maximum range of 12%, with French prices staying higher than German prices from 1982 onwards.

If we put all of their performance in the background of the near 30-year world economy, it is barely irrational to say that these three largest European entities have made great efforts to keep the goods’ pri ces under control.

much steadier price curve and successfully let the prices in a lower increasing level.

小作文:

邀请信朱伟点评:邀请信一直是应用文一大热点。首段表达 目的,抬举受邀人;次段分解活动安排; 最后一段请求回复,再次表达期盼。

possible for you to be a judge in our English Speech Contest on March 5. It is universally acknowledged that you are one of the most well-known experts in this area. Thus, we would be honored to have you there with us.

This occasion will start at 9 a.m. with an opening ceremony mainly involving words of welcome addressed by the president of this contest. Then, it will be followed by the fierce contest, including qualifying contest, semi-final and final.

experiences about how to address speech well, which could be the most critical part of this conference.

of English-learning Department

新东方在线2014考研VIP 英语 写作测试七 主讲老师:朱伟 英语二电子图书阅读对比,公司数据:

)The two pie charts below show (a) the three main types of e-

that each type of terminal handle in 2009 and 2010.

2)Using the information from the charts, write a short report, which describes the

)Write about 160 words

on your answer sheet.

Elaborately and luminously, these two pie charts display the proportion distribution of the three main types of e-book readings, which change its shares over the period from 2009 to 2010.

Terminals of Reading for 2009 Terminals of Reading for 2010 6% 5.5% ■ mobile phone ■ laptop 34.5% Other 60%46% 48%

Meanwhile, the turnovers contributed by laptops decreased symmetrically by just over 11% to 34.5%. Actually, it is hardly necessary for us to think twice before figuring out this truth of matter that the quantity of mobile phones’ upsurge is equivalent to the one of laptops’ slides, which predicts a whole new business trend in the foreseeable future, that is, portable mobile terminals, due to their much cheaper prices as well as convenience, will surely take more marketing shares in competition.

In 2009, 48% of e-book readings were promoted by mobile phones, 46% by laptops and 6% via other outlets. Then after only another 365 days, the share of mobile terminals rose up sharply by 12% to 60%.

Also, there are still some other outlets holding more or less steady, with a slight drop in share of only 0.5%.

Considering these general illustrations, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that mobile phones are taking more of e-readings than other terminals, with their shares having represented well over 50% of the total cake yet. The tendency that mobile phone will continually play critical roles in our daily e-reading may be irreversible.

英语一

When the importance of conserving energy gains an overriding focus from the public, can we still stand there detachedly for what kind of efforts we shall make?

As we can see from the depiction, some simple but practical methods, such as turning down the air-conditioner, going upon stairs by walk instead of lift, saying no to disposable chopsticks and turning down the brightness of TV, can make a bright change of our world.

Actually, it is a morning call to send us a message that the topic concerning low-carbon lifestyle has been in the spotlight 摆在聚光灯下 and aroused wide concern at any corner of our society.

It is estimated by a recent survey I met with great coincidence巧合 in Contemporary Youth three months ago that CFL (Compact Fluorescent Lamp)节能灯 can save the electricity for about 70% more than common one does.

Apart from the above-mentioned aspect ,another factor contributing 修饰 to the tendency of promoting efficiency is that our society is walking to some kind of extremes 走极端 in the consumption of natural resources .It goes with no denying that low-carbon lifestyle is nothing but a necessity. 生活的必要

Taking into account all analyses mentioned above, we may safely arrive at a conclusion that it is, unquestionably, beneficial to be self-controllable自制 in our work and daily life. So, a list involving some constructive and liberal mottos to guarantee economic habits should be

adhered to our dressing table as soon as possible.

It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences (which) the energy-saving lifestyle brings about. (直接引出两个影响,依旧是内外) To begin with, it can save us the budget of living expenditures.