2015升本智博升本写作必读共7页
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Romance. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 随着互联网的普及,出现了很多网络恋情

2) 人们对此褒贬不一

3) 你的看法

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本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求阐述人们对该现象所持的不同态度,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述网络恋情的出现,引出人们对其的不同态度; 对比阐述两种态度各自的理由; 表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度并说明理由。

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Online Romance

With the widespread of the Internet, there have appeared many online romances. The lovers meet over the Internet, date on the net and finally fall in love with each other. People’s opinions on it vary greatly.

Some people think online love is very romantic and exciting. It is an amazing thing that the Internet brings together two strange persons far away from each other. Moreover, they think that online romance, compared with realistic love, attaches more emphasis on the appeal to each other in spirit and involves less material conditions. However, many others think differently. In their eyes, the Internet is a virtual world, on which there impossibly exist real, enduring love since it is very difficult to tell the real from the fake by the Internet. Besides, they argue that pursuing online romance is sometimes very dangerous because there are many cheaters on the net. As far as I am concerned, it is an easy and fast way for people to make new people by the Internet. However, people should have more protection and safety

consciousness when making friends by the Internet. Don’t give out rashly your personal information to strangers on the net. And keep it in your mind that you should have more realistic knowledge of each other before starting a romance.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Make the Best Use of College Life. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 有的大学生在入学后寻找各种途径去赚钱

2) 有的大学生为应付各种考试,经常参加各种辅导班

3) 你打算如何有效地利用你的大学时光

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和提纲第2点分别提出对待某问题的不同处理方式,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的处理方式,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:提出“如何有效利用大学时光”这一问题; 阐述大学生主要将时间花在哪些方面和他们的主要考虑; 谈谈“我”打算如何利用我的大学时光和“我”的主要理由。

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How to Make the Best Use of College Life

It is beyond doubt that we enjoy more free time in college than in middle school. But as to how to make use of our spare time, different students hold sharply different views.

In order to earn money, a good number of undergraduates are busy doing part-time jobs. In this way, they can relieve their families’ financial burden to some extent. Besides, they can achieve more independence through their work. Others are confronted by countless exams and they often attend guidance lectures in the hope of improving their performance in these tests. They believe that a record of good exam results will be useful when they look for jobs in the future.

As far as I am concerned, I will live my college life in a different way. On the one hand, as a student, I will give priority to the development of my knowledge and skills, so I am determined to spend most of my spare time studying hard. On the other hand, I think it is necessary for me to join one or more of the student associations. These associations can provide chances to improve my communicating skills and make my life colorful. In conclusion, I do believe that my college life will turn out to be colorful as well as fruitful.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

1) 现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神

2) 导致这一问题的原因是什么

3) 大学生应该加强拼搏精神

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一个问题,指纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因,提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述年轻人缺乏拼搏精神的现状; 分析导致这一问题的原因; 说明大学生应该如何加强拼搏精神。

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Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit

Nowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for one’s success in today’s competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit which,in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing the difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.

There are many factors resulting in young people’s lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Today’s parents provide nearly everything to the children, which results in the children’s lack of motivation for striving on their own. What’s more, the present education system does not pay much attention to help the young people build up the combatant spirit.

Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young people’s combatant spirit. Above all, parents shouldn ’t spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should build a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for today’s young people to enhance combatant spirit.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Work with a Person or Work with a Machine? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

1) 一些人喜欢和人打交道多的工作

2) 然而也有一些人更愿意和机器打交道

3) 你更喜欢哪种工作? 为什么?

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出人们的一种喜好,提纲第2点要求指出人们的另外一种喜好,提纲第3点要求“我”从中做出选择,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:指出人们对于工作的两种喜好:喜欢和人打交道多的工作,喜欢和机器打交道多的工作; 对比阐述两种工作各自的特点; 表明“我”更喜欢哪种工作,并说明理由。

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Work with a Person or Work with a Machine?

When asked about work preference, different people will give different answers. Some people like working with people. However, others prefer jobs which mainly involve objects or machines.

Those people who have the first preference believe working with people usually makes one feel interesting and efficient. In addition, they maintain people can be inspired to bring forward new ideas by communicating or consulting with those around them. However, still others have different preferences. In their opinions, working with objects or machines can make one enjoy more peace and quiet. Besides, they argue, under such peaceful conditions, one can do more practical work, improve his skill and make technical renovations.

Weighing up these two kinds of work, I prefer working with people. For one thing, I like to cooperate with others and work in a team. For another, although there are competition and rivalry, we can learn something from other people. Considering these, I think, working with people is beneficial to our career development. 来

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Body-building. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 近年来越来越多的人开始参加各种健身俱乐部或健身中心

2) 人们健身的目的有哪些

3) 你对此的看法来源:考试大

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求说明人们热衷于该现象的目的,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述近年来人们热衷于参加健身俱乐部或健身中心的现象; 说明人们健身的主要目的; 谈谈“我”对健身的看法。

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Body-building

In recent years, more and more people spare no pains to join in the body-building group. People begin to take part in various fitness clubs or fitness centers in their spare time. This shows body-building has become an indispensable part of many people’s life.

Why are so many people keen on body-building? Firstly, keeping health is one of their main purposes. In modern society, many people stay for most of the day before the desk without doing any exercises, which definitely harms their health. Body-building caters to the need of these people who come to realize the potential danger of their working pattern. Secondly, body-building is beneficial for people to keep their body shape. Many setting-up exercises like aerobics are very helpful in cutting up weight. Besides, body-building is a good way by which people can release pressure.

As far as I am concerned, the popularity of body-building will be a long-time trend. It shows people begin to pay more and more attention to life quality. As a fashionable, healthy lifestyle, body-building will attract more and more people.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parasites of Big Cities. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 现在大城市里有很多“城市寄生虫”,他们以乞讨为生

2) 这种现象带来的影响

3) 如何解决这一问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种不良现象,提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的影响,提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述大城市中的“城市寄生虫”现象; 分析“城市寄生虫”现象带来的影响; 说明应该如何才能有效地减少这种“城市寄生虫”。

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Parasites of Big Cities

Nowadays there are many beggars in big cities, who are called “parasites of big cities”. Some are begging something to eat for survival, while most of them are professional beggars according to the survey. In addition to plain beggars in rags, there are many disabled beggars and begging families with the children as the leading character. Besides, in recent years, student beggars have appeared.

No doubt, these “parasites of big cities” have brought great bad effects. On the one hand, their asking a reward without labor is a burden on the society and influences the city image. On the other hand, many pretended beggars cheat people’s sympathy by fake stories and experiences, which is very harmful to society.

Considering the bad effects of “parasites of big cities”, it is high time for us to take effective measures to solve the problem. Firstly, the government should pay more attention to these beggars and resettle them in a reasonable way. Secondly, education and training should be given to these beggars to help them learn how to support themselves. Besides, people should be more cautious in providing helps to the beggars and leave no chance to those cheaters.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Security or Privacy? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 近些年来,许多公共场合都安装了摄像监控装置

2) 人们对此众说纷纭

3) 你的看法

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求阐述人们对该现象的不同看法,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述近年来公共场合安装摄像监控装置的现象,引出人们对其的争议; 对比阐述争议双方各自的理由; 表明“我”的倾向并陈述理由。

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Security or Privacy?

In recent years, security cameras are installed in public places for the purpose of preventing and combating crimes. This phenomenon has sparked many debates. Most people welcome it and believe these cameras play a positive role in maintaining people’s security, while still some others think installing cameras infringe people’s privacy rights.

Those supporters maintain that installing cameras in public places, especially some key sites, can provide law enforcement agencies with criminal evidence. Moreover, they say that installation of cameras is a good deterrent to those with intentions of crimes. However, those protesting this practice claim that the government shouldn’t sacrifice millions of citizens’ privacy rights only for monitoring probably nonexistent crimes.

As to me, I prefer the former opinion. In my opinion, As far as public security situation is concerned, the installation of security cameras is quite necessary to

maintaining citizens’ security. On the other hand, people needn’t feel uncomfortable for being monitored by a camera in public places since everything we do outside can be seen by some other people. To conclude, the advantages of installing cameras in public places much outweigh its disadvantages.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Campus Politics. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 很多大学生都热衷于参加“校园政治”活动,比如竞选学生会或社团干部

2) 这样做有哪些好处

3) 可能带来的问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求说明这种现象会带来的好处,提纲第3点要求分析该现象可能带来的问题,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述大学校园内的学生热衷参加“校园政治”的现象; 说明参加“校园政治”的好处; 分析过分热衷于“校园政治”可能带来的问题。

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Campus Politics

Nowadays, many college students show great enthusiasm in participating into campus political activities, such as running for heads of the Students Union or the associations. Campus politics is an important part of college life.

College students can benefit a lot from participation in campus politics. Above all, by attending campus political activities, students can develop their practical

capabilities, especially management and coordination capacity. Moreover, these activities provide students a stage to show themselves and bring their abilities into full play. Besides, campus political activities help strengthen students’ sense of responsibility.

However, campus politics might bring some problems. Too much participation in campus politics might influence study. Besides, some students’ being keen on campus politics is for fame and gain, which will influence their health of mentality. Therefore, schools and teachers should give necessary instruction to students on their participation into campus politics.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Sub-health. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

1) 现代社会很多人都处于“亚健康”状态

2) 造成“亚健康”的原因

3) 应该如何解决“亚健康”问题

【思路点拨】

本文属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求提出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因,提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:指出亚健康问题的普遍性及其影响; 分析亚健康出现的原因; 说明应该如何解决亚健康问题。

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How to Deal with Sub-health

Nowadays, quite a few people are suffering from sub-health. Indeed, sub-health can result in both physical and mental diseases. Even worse, people who suffer from sub-health are more easily to die prematurely.

There are many factors resulting in sub-health. Among these, the pace of modern life plays a vital role. The fast pace of modern life exerts great pressure on people and pressure is the ultimate cause of sub-health. What’s more, modern people spend too much night time working or entertaining, which seriously affects their health.

Considering the great harm brought by sub-health, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to prevent sub-health. Firstly, people must have enough sleep to ensure that they can regain energy and physical strength. Secondly, people should have a rational diet under the instruction of doctor in order to avoid the diseases caused by malnutrition or super-nutrition. Thirdly, people should regularly do some exercise to keep healthy. To conclude, it is necessary for us to take flexible measures to avoid the threat of sub-health.

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Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

1) 现在许多人都喜欢买打折商品

2) 而另一些人认为越是打折的商品越不能买

3) “我”的看法

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和提纲第2点要求提出两种相反的观点,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:指出人们对待打折商品的两种不同态度:可以买打折商品, 不应该买打折商品; 对比阐述两种态度各自的理由; 表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度,并说明理由。

【参考范文】来源:www.examda.com

Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products?

When asked about whether customers should buy cut-price products, different people will offer different views. Some people like to buy cut-price products since a discount is a great appeal. However, others maintain that it’s not a wise and rational idea to buy discount products.

Those people who make the former choice believe they can save themselves a lot of money by buying cut-price products. In addition, they can use less money to buy more products. However, still others do not agree this. In their opinions, the discount is merely a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desires for purchase. Besides, they argue that the discount always tempts customers to buy something unnecessary.

As to me, I tend to refuse to buy cut-price products. For one thing, complaints about cut-price products rank first in recent days according to the newspapers. For another, cut-price products are usually not provided with an after-sales service, such as three guarantees for products. Considering these, we may reasonably conclude that customers should think carefully when they buy cut-price products

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票

2) 分析产生这种现象的原因

3) 提出你的建议

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求“我”针对该现象给出建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses.

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses.

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes. 热点作文4

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for National Civil Servants. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 近几年兴起了一股报考国家公务员的热潮

2) 分析产生这一现象的原因

3) 你对此的看法是„„

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出近几年社会上出现的一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述近几年来报考国家公务员的热潮; 分析产生这一热潮的主要原因; 谈谈“我”对报考公务员的看法。

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Test for National Civil Servants

In recent years, there are more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants. Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation. And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention.

The following reasons can account for this kind of craze. Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Besides, the high social position of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.

In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, from the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation. If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.