初三作文复习
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1 前言

书面语言表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达。先是思维,把要写的东西在脑中思考,这往往是个别的,孤立的一些素材,很凌乱琐碎;因此要对此进行组织,把这些思维作出整理,使其条理、系统化,但这还是较粗糙的,可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误;最后才是表达,把组织过的材料仔细推敲,确无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等,这就是写作。上述的三个过程,最难的就是第三个过程,这需要我们有较好的语法知识,掌握一定数量的句型,习惯用语,熟练的写作技巧,这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来。

总之,要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。那么,究竟怎样才能写好作文呢?

首先要搞好阅读。阅读是写作的基础,在阅读方面下的功夫越深,驾驭语言的能力也就越强。所以要写好英语先要读好英语,在语言学习方面狠下苦功,教科书要读透,因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文,文笔流畅,语言规范,精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。再就是要进行大量课外阅读,并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。

其次,要加强练词造句的训练。词句对作文相当于造房的材料,无好材料就造不出好房子。平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累,把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录,再对照正确句子,使地道的英语句子如同条件反射,落笔就对。

了解英语写作格式,还有,要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式。可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书,对英语写作有一个初步的概念,如怎么写议论文,如何提出论据,如何展开,如何确定中心句;又如,英语信的格式,如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等,然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习。

要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯。经常用英语记日记,等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法。在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等,使文句更优美生动。还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔。写好后对照范文,找出差距,然后再练习,这对提高英语作文也很有帮助,在游泳中学会游泳,只有多练习才能练好。

总之,平时学习语言素材积累多了,体裁格式记住了又经常练习不断提高,到作文下笔时就会得心应手,水到渠成。

期中写作复习

Composition 1:学校的 “English Center” 是同学们练习英语的场所。这里的 “Teenager Hotline” 每天都能收到不少同学的咨询电话。作为热线的一名志愿者,请你根据当时的记录,首先描述其中两位同学遇到的问题,然

2 【思路剖析】

1、审题和正确理解题目要求是写作的关键:此篇写作要求既有描述性内容(首先描述其中两位同学遇到的问题),又要有建议内容(然后给其中一位同学提出具体建议并说明原因)。而且还要把两方面内容很好地结合起来。

2、 抓住关键,组织语言:此篇短文考查要点包括内容、语言结构和篇幅。

其中首先要求考生根据所给材料自选两个同学就有关内容进行描述,能就选择其中的一位同学向他/她提出有针对性的建议并说明原因;其次语言结构要求考生能运用较多的语法结构和词汇,句式和词汇的选用要恰当、丰富,如:a girl named / called Mary…,a girl whose name is Mary said…, feel worried because…., I believe / think / feel / I’m sure…To tell you the truth…;文章结构、逻辑性、过渡词和连接词(for example, because, or等)的准确使用都是考生应该特别注意的,最后还应尽量做到语言无误,行文流畅。

3、根据题目要求,迅速提取有关表示建议的句型和相关词语,如:You’d better (not)…, Why not…? Why don’t you…? What / How about (doing)…? If I were you, I would…, You should…You’re supposed to…, You have to…等。

4、所提建议内容还应该是积极向上的,别忘了还要和你的理由保持吻合。同时别忘了文章的结尾处要向对方表示良好的祝愿, 如: I believe they may feel proud of you. Good luck! / I hope you’ll…I’m looking forward to (doing)….等。 【误区诊断】

这是一篇集叙述和建议为一体的短文体裁的写作,写作的思路一定要清晰。

1、时态混乱:描述其中两位同学遇到的问题部分应多用过去时态,类似调查报告内容,这在我们三年的学习中已经接触过这方面的内容,而建议部分则应侧重句型的运用。但不少考生把握不好时态的要求,时态混乱,甚至建议部分还用过去时态等。

2、人称不清:不同体裁的写作要求时不同的,叙述部分是向:“读者”介绍情况,要用第三人称,而建议则是向本人提出“作者”的主意,要用第二人称。

3、句型把握不好:很多考生的想法很好,也想表达一定的思想,但由于基础知识不够扎实,句型把握不好,容易出现句型乱用,句型使用不准确,甚至将所写内容按照中文思路进行罗列等问题。

【范文】

We've got many calls from teenagers. They have met different problems. A girl named Mary said there were many rules in her family. For example, she had to do chores after school. Another girl called Lucy felt worried because the pet dogs in her neighborhood made the ground dirty.

Here I have some suggestions for Mary. From your call, I know you have different ideas about your family rules. If I were you, I would have an honest talk with my parents because we can exchange opinions and then understand each other better. Or why not consider writing a letter? Maybe that's a good solution. I guess you must be a lovely girl and they just want you to be successful. I believe they may feel proud of you.

Good luck!

Composition 2:Lynn 在过去的几年当中发生了巨大的变化。请根据表格中提供的信息适当拓展,发挥想象,描

述她的变化。(80字左右)

3 范文:

Lynn has changed a lot in the last few years. She used to be a short and quiet kid, but now she is a tall and outgoing student. She used to enjoy reading books at home, but she prefers to play sports with friends these days 。。。。。。

As for ways of learning English, she finds it amazing to try different methods. Doing lots of practice used to help her a lot. At present, she learns more by working with a group. And she also practices conversations with friends to improve her speaking skills.

Composition 3:学校有许许多多的规则。请你描述至少三条规定,并对其中一条你最不喜欢的规则具体说明不喜欢的理由,并给出相应的建议。(必须用到提示词语,作文80字左右)

提示词语:be allowed to; if I were …, I would …; need; should 范文:

There are lots of rules for students at our school. For example, we have to wear uniforms in the campus. And we should exercise for at least an hour every day. The one that I disagree with is that boarding(寄宿) students are not allowed to study in groups in the evening classes.

In my opinion, students need to spend time studying together. On the one hand, we can share our ideas and improve our studying skills. On the other hand, we would develop our friendship during the group work. If I were the head teacher, I would allow students to discuss for about an hour every evening. I think that would help us become more interested in studying and get better grades.

其他范文:(这些作文的内容供同学们写作时参考) 第一篇:

Students in school should follow the school rules. In my school it ’s always the same. For example we have to our school uniforms every day. We can’t eat in the classroom. And we are not allowed to bring our mobile phones to school. But lots of students always have something against wearing uniforms. For me, I think wearing school uniforms is not smart enough. And everyone would like to show their beautiful faces and be different. So I think we should wear our own clothes or we should be allowed to design our own clothes. It would be a good idea for school to keep both teachers and students happy.

第二篇:

Dear Fran,

I read your letter and know your problem. Don’t worry, I can help you.

Firstly, you should encourage Mei to make her more confident. Then, if I were you, I would tell her how to change these problems into challenges. As young adults, it’s our duty to try our best to deal with each challenge with the help of others. Next, you are also supposed to advise her to ask the teacher for help. What’s more, you ought to tell the rest of the students both you and Mei’s problems. They always come up with good solutions to your problems.

I hope all these will be helpful to Mei and you.

Yours,

Knowledgeable

第三篇:

At present, there are many rules at our school. Let me tell you something about them.

First of all, we have to wear school uniforms every day. Though there is a store for us to buy food and drinks, we are not allowed to eat in the classrooms. The most terrible thing is that we can’t bring mobile phones to school.

I know that if we bring our mobile phones to school, we might use them in class. But it’s also important for us to keep in touch with our parents. When we have something important to tell our parents, the mobile phone is very useful to us. In my opinion, we would be able to bring our mobile phones to school and keep the phone power off during class.

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