2016中考作文
初一 议论文 32767字 431人浏览 爱的阡陌殇

书面表达

一、人物介绍类

Writing 1

假设你的笔友(来自美国的Mike) 下个月将到你校交流学习,请你把Mike 的情况提前介绍给同学们。

要求:

1. 内容包括:(1)Mike的家庭情况。(2)Mike的性格特点和兴趣爱好。(3)Mike的父母和同学对他的评价。(4)Mike来中国的原因。

2. 词数:60-80。

3. 短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

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Writing 2

你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下列全部内容。

注意:1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式;

2.词数 80 左右;

3.短文第一句已为你写好。

生词:竞赛 — competition (n.)

Writing 3

请根据以下提示内容,写一篇介绍我国科学家钱学森的英语短文。词数90左右。

内容提示:

1. 1911年出生于上海,三岁随父亲到北京;

2. 1934年毕业于上海交通大学,一年后去美国学习;

3. 1955年和家人返回祖国,从此以后,他致力于研究工作。他在新中国的导弹和核武器的开发方面作出了杰出的贡献,获得了“导弹之父”的荣誉。

4. 2009 年10月31日不幸在北京逝世。

提示词语:贡献contribute; 导弹missile; 核武器nuclear weapons

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【范文及点拨】

Writing 1

【思路点拨】

该篇习作要求我们介绍有关笔友迈克的情况。具体行文可以这样展开:

1. 开篇:开篇介绍背景, 即迈克下个月要来我校学习。

2. 正文:正文介绍迈克的具体情况。根据要点提示,我们可以从四个方面展开。这四个方面分别为迈克的家庭情况,性格爱好和特点、父母和同学对他的评价以及他来中国的原因。

3. 结尾:结尾部分表达自己的愿望,希望大家能和迈克成为好朋友。

【满分作文】

My pen pal, Mike, will come to our school to study next month.

He is an American. He is fifteen. There are three people in his family. His father is an engineer, and his mother is a teacher. He is outgoing and he likes to help others. In his free time, he likes listening to pop music and playing basketball. His parents and classmates all think he is a lovely boy. He wants to learn Chinese, and he loves Chinese food. That’s the reason why he will come to China.

I hope you can make friends with him.

Writing 2

【思路点拨】

本文是要求写一篇申请书,做一个自我介绍,属于记叙文范畴。写作时我们以李华的身份和爱好进行介绍,根据表格中的内容提示,我们可以从两个方面写作:个人基本信息(包括年龄,含出生年月及地点;教育及学历;所学主要课程)和特长与爱好。本题写作比较简单,注意学会使用高级句型。

【满分作文】

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Jinan, Shandong province in February 1992. At the age of seven I went to school. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1999 to 2005. From then on I studied in Shanddong experimental middle school. And I graduated this summer. The subjects I have to learn at school are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I am very good at English and computer. In spare time I like listening to the pop music and collecting stamps. And I like swimming and skating, too.

Writing 3

【思路点拨】

本文属于介绍人物的记叙文,从提示内容可判断,本文应按时间的先后顺序进行表达,即1911年(be born) →1934年(graduate) →1955年(return to China) →2009年(die)。为了句子的连贯性,中间可运用适当的连接词。 【参考范文】

Qian Xuesen is a famous scientist. He was born in Shanghai in 1911. At the age

of three, he went to Beijing with his father. In 1934 he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and one year later he went to study in the U.S. He returned to China with his family in 1955. Since then, he has devoted himself to research. He contributed a lot to the development of missiles and nuclear weapons for New China. For his excellent research work, he was honored with the name “Father ” of Missile. Unfortunately, he died in Beijing on October 31, 2009.

二、亲人好友类

Writing 4

假设这周英语老师为大家布置了一篇作文,要求大家介绍自己最好的一位朋友。请你根据下面的要点提示完成这篇作文。

要点:1. 他的外貌特征。

2. 他的兴趣爱好。

3. 大家对他的评价。

4. 你和他成为朋友的原因。

要求:1. 词数:80左右;2. 根据提示内容可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 My Best Friend

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Writing 5

父爱如山!假设父亲节即将来临,请你借此机会给你父亲写封信,和他谈谈心里话。 写作要点:

1. 父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活;

2. 父亲在学习上对我严格要求; 考试失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲鼓励我笑对生

活;表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。

温馨提示:

1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点,语言流畅,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥;

2. 短文词数不少于80词,短文开头和结尾已替你写好,不计入总词数;

3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming. I’d like to say something to you.

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Writing 6

你国外的朋友Jason 想了解你们的英语老师,请根据下表提示用英语写一篇题为“My English teacher Laura”的短文。

要求:

1. 题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 介绍必须包括所给要点,但不要逐条翻译;

3. 词数80左右。

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【范文及点拨】

Writing 4

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇记叙文,根据题目要求可知,需要从三个不同的角度展开叙述。即:外貌、性格和成为好朋友的原因。具体写作时,我们可以从以下几个方面展开:

1.引出最好的朋友是谁。2. 根据要点提示中的信息,条理清晰地描述我的朋友的外貌、性格和兴趣爱好。3. 介绍我和李梅成为朋友的原因。

【满分作文】

My Best Friend

My best friend is my classmate, Li Mei. She is a beautiful girl with big eyes and long hair. She is neither tall nor short. She likes dancing very much. She started dancing when she was six years old.

Li Mei is a warm-hearted girl. She is keen on helping other people. Both teachers and our classmates like her.

I showed no interest in learning in the past. After learning why, Li Mei helped me with my studies. With her help, I became interested in learning and made great progress. And we became good friends after that.

Writing 5

【思路点拨】

题目要求考生在父亲节来临之际表达对父亲的爱和对父亲的感谢。文章要求有两个要点:第一是父亲为了让我接受更好的教育和享受更好的生活,工作很辛苦;第二是父亲既对我严格要求又对我关心鼓励。基于以上两点在父亲节来临之际表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。

【满分作文】

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming. I’d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. Whenever I

fail an exam, you encourage me to be confident and keep trying. When I have problems in life, you always tell me to be brave and keep smiling.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Father’s Day!

Yours, Li Hua

Writing 6

【思路点拨】

这是一篇以图表形式出现的介绍他人的人物类书面表达。写作要点:1. 个人基本情况(姓名:Laura ;国籍:英国;年龄:29);2. 人物性格:善良、严格、有耐心、有创造力;3. 表现出这些性格特点的事例;4. 你对她的评价。

【满分作文】

My English teacher Laura

Laura, my English teacher, is from England and is about 29 years old. She has blond hair and she always wears a pair of glasses on her nose.

She is strict with us in our study, so all the students are well-behaved in her class. Although she is strict, she can get along well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. Whenever we have difficulty in English learning, she will help us to deal with the questions. We all like her lessons very much. That’s because she is very creative. Her teaching style is quite different from that of the others. She prepares her lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. In class she always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.

In a word, I think she is one of the best English teachers I have ever seen. We all love and respect her.

三、学校生活类

Writing 7

学校生活有时让你开心,有时让你烦恼,作为学生的你一定有不少感想吧。请你以“My feelings to the school life ”为题写一篇短文,简要谈谈你自己的感受。词数:80左右。

温馨提示:1. 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。

2. 这些词汇也许对你有帮助:change, homework, bored, strict, relax

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Writing 8

在初中三年的英语学习中,你参加过不同形式的课内外活动。请你用英语写一篇文章,描写你印象最深刻的一次活动以及你的收获,题目自拟。

注意:1. 80词左右;

2. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。

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为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长,学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是刘波,用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。注意:文中应包含所有要点,并适当发挥;不能出 现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Headmaster,

I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will

Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!

Yours sincerely, Liu Bo

【范文及点拨】

Writing 7

【思路点拨】

此类话题是学生比较感兴趣的话题,和学生们的生活很贴近。在整个中学的学习生活中,学生们有开心也有烦恼,有很多东西值得去写。我们可以在题目中抓住两个要点:1. 叙述你的学校生活;2. 谈谈自己的感受。

【满分作文】

My feelings to the school life

My feelings to the school life are changeable.

When I do well in the exams, I feel excited and happy. But I often feel sad when I do badly in exams. If I spend lots of time doing my homework, I will feel bored and unhappy. My parents are always strict with me. But if they don’t understand me, I will be very disappointed. I like playing with my friends and it makes me relax.

In short, my feelings to the school life are a very important part of my life. I love my colorful and interesting school life.

Writing 8

【思路点拨】

通过审题,我们可以发现这几条信息非常重要,即“初中三年的英语学习”、“一次课内外活动”、“印象深刻”和“收获”。所要描述的事件是应该能够给作者留下深刻印象的事例,或是对作者的生活或学习有一定教育意义的典型事例,比如“第一次参加英语角”等。

【满分作文】

My first experience in English corner

It was a beautiful Sunday. Our teacher told us that there would be an English corner after class. I set off soon after the last class in the afternoon.

To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few minutes. I joined them in their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and limited that I couldn’t follow them or make myself understood. I was also afraid that someone might laugh at me. But a smiling face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. I became bolder and came to speak English with them freely.

The day was unforgettable. I learned a lot of knowledge and made a lot of friends. Through practice, we all improved our English. Though we spoke only in simple English, we all believe that tomorrow we will make greater progress.

Writing 9

【思路点拨】

本题是一篇应用文。要求学生根据要点提示,给学校写一封建议信。本文同时也是一篇材料作文,由于所给的材料非常具体,无论是行文结构还是内容立意都没有什么难度可言。写好本文的关键就是设法让文章意义之间自然衔接,句式不重复单调。谋篇布局时一定要避免直接串联材料中的句子,注意选择恰当的连词,并做好语境的自然过渡。

首先,针对学校提出建议,包括下列内容图书馆的开放、课外活动的课程设置、组织考试的频率;然后,针对老师方面提出建议,内容包括课堂的效率、作业布置等。要分层逐一分析原因。

【满分作文】

Dear Headmaster,

I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often so that we can read all kinds of books. And our school should organize more after-class activities. It's better if we can get more time for sports. And I really wish we can have fewer exams. Also the school meals should be better. As for our teachers,I hope they could make classes more interesting and talk less but more clearly in class. And the students will be unhappy if teachers don't finish class on time. We will be happy if teachers give us less homework. Some students also hope that teachers could give them more chances to speak in class.

Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!

Yours sincerely,

Liu Bo

四、暑假计划类

Writing 10

中考马上要结束了,考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David ,你的美国笔友Fred 来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情,并说明理由。词数:80词左右。

Writing 11

你的笔友Sammy 想了解你这两天的考试情况以及暑期安排。假定你是陈涛,请根据Sammy 在电子邮件中的提问,给他写回信。字数在80字左右。

Writing 12

今年的九月,你就要开始高中生活了,这个阶段是我们人生中的一个重要时期。在即将到来的暑假,为了更好地适应高中的学习生活,你打算做些什么?词数:80左右。

【范文及点拨】

Writing 10

【思路点拨】

这是一篇以暑假计划为主题的作文,题材现实感强,不仅在内容上贴近同学们的生活实际,而且也是大家感兴趣的话题。由题目给出的信息可知这篇习作共有两个要点:一是你中考后想做的两、三件事;二是陈述其理由。另外,由于是给朋友写信介绍“你”的暑假生活,可以确定人称应为第一人称I ,时态应以一般将来时为主。

【满分作文】

Dear Fred,

You can’t imagine how happy I was to receive your letter.

I have many plans for after the exam. First of all, I’ll do more housework for my parents because they have been so busy, not only working but also taking care of me. What’s more, I am going to buy a few interesting books so that I can have a meaningful summer vacation. Last but not least,

I will go on a trip to Yunnan to enjoy the beautiful views, of which I’m extremely fond.

How about you? I hope you’ll have a wonderful vacation. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, David

Writing 11

【思路点拨】

这是一篇看来信写回信的作文。题材与同学们的生活和学习息息相关,贴近现实生活,是大家所熟悉的内容,因此易于动笔。根据来信的内容,一定要把对方询问的考试情况、暑假安排以及对新学期学校生活的渴望分别表达清楚。另外,由于是给朋友写信的文章,可以确定人称应该是第一人称I 。

【满分作文】

Dear Sammy,

Great to hear from you!

I am really satisfied with my English exam. It is English that I have always been good at as well as interested in. Generally speaking, I had a busy and tiring day yesterday but I was quite pleased with the support I received from my family. As for the summer vacation, I have quite a few plans. For example, I will go to visit my grandparents who looked after me for years. In addition, I am going on a trip to Sichuan, which is to my mind the most beautiful place. Most importantly, I can’t wait to enjoy my new school life and meet new friends.

Hope you are well.

Chen Tao

Writing 12

【思路点拨】

这是一篇谈论暑假计划的作文。这个话题非常贴近同学们的生活实际,如何为高中的学习生活做好准备是我们每位同学所面临和必须考虑的问题。写这篇文章时,所有的暑假计划都要围绕是否能对更好地适应高中的学习生活有帮助这一主题。

【满分作文】

I will enter senior high school in September. I therefore plan to do something useful during the summer vacation in order to help me adapt to my new school life.

First of all, I will spend almost a month reviewing what the teachers taught me in junior high school. In addition, I am going to take more exercise, which will help keep me physically strong. Most importantly, I will make myself well prepared by previewing the lessons in senior high school so that I can have a better understanding of them.

I do hope that I will live a wonderful life after implementing the above plans.

五、人际关系类

Writing 13

英语课堂上,老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以“How to get well with others”为题,写一篇英语短文。

注意:1. 词数80–100;

2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;

3. 文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。

How to get on well with others Writing 14

在学习与生活中你一定帮助过他人。你校校报正在开展以“我助人,我快乐”为主题的征文活动,请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你助人的故事,让大家与你一起分享助人的快乐。

1. 写作要点提示:

(1) 帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因;

(2) 助人的具体过程(你是如何帮助他人的);

(3) 被助人的反应及你助人后的感受。

2. 写作要求:

短文的内容包含所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可围绕提示要点适当增加情节,以使短文的意思连贯;短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;短文的字数在100词左右。

Writing 15

假设你是王威,你的朋友马华上周来信说,他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话,这使得他非常苦恼,不知道如何处理。请你给他写封回信,提出一些建议并帮助他解决问题。短文的字数在80词左右。

【范文及点拨】

Writing 13

【思路点拨】

这是一篇建议如何与他人相处的书面表达。根据中文和表格提示,可以看出这篇书面表达的要点包括两个:1. 小组讨论出来的有关“与人相处”的建议;2. “我”对“与人相处”的建议。

【满分作文】

As we know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?

First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other. We can share happiness and sadness with our friends. What’s more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.

In my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. I am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others.

Writing 14

【思路点拨】

这是一篇叙事性文章,结构可以用总–分–总的形式,内容重点在于叙述和描写,要重点把who ,when ,where ,why ,what ,how 写清楚,即:谁在哪里何时做了何事,为什么要做,及最后的感受。1. 帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因;2. 助人的具体过程(你是如何帮助他人的);3. 被助人的反应及你助人后的感受。

【满分作文】

Everyone needs help and I’ve learned a lot from helping Mike.

I was not good at math in the beginning. Months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math because he wanted to give it up after he failed some exams. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn’t understand before. Every day I helped Mike go over what he had learnt, I also helped him with his homework. During the weekends we did exercises together. With my help, Mike made great progress in math. Later he even enjoyed learning it.

From this experience, not only did I help him out of his trouble, but I also improved my own math. I have realized that it does everyone good to help others.

Helping others is helping ourselves.

Writing 15

【思路点拨】

就朋友遇到的麻烦提出合理化的建议(不少于2条);时态:一般现在时;人称:第二人称为主;内容:1. 开篇点题,你要给朋友提出几点建议,2. 你对朋友提出的解决问题的具体建议,3. 你对朋友的祝愿

【满分作文】

Dear Ma Hua,

I'm sorry to know that you're in trouble these days. I'm your friend and I can give you some advice to help you.

First, you can find a chance after class to talk with him heart to heart. It's necessary to tell him that listening to the teacher carefully is very important so he can't talk to you in class. Then, you can ask him if he has some questions and needs your help. You should try your best to help him. After all, helping others is helping yourself.

I hope my advice is useful and you can get along well with him.

Yours Wang Wei

六、活动介绍类

Writing 16

本周我们班将组织“与好书为友,以读书为乐”的主题活动。请根据以下提示,用英语写一段话,词数在80-100之间,内容必须包括表格中提示的要点:

注意:

1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;

2. 文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:develop 培养

This week our class will organize a reading activity – Be Friends with Good Books and Take Delight in Reading. I think________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 17

学校英语广播电台调查员安德鲁(Andrew)最近正在做一项关于“如何和家人度过周末”

注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;2. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) 。

Dear Andrew,

I am writing to tell you about how students from different grades spend weekends with their family. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Ying

Writing 18

英语课上,老师组织全班同学就“周末活动”话题进行小组调查,下面是你组的调查及讨论结果,为了更好的向全班同学汇报你组的情况,作为小组发言人,请你以Li Fang 的名义,根据下表及表后提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。

注意:1. 发言稿开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 文中不得使用真实姓名;3. 词数:100字左右。

Good morning, everybody. I am Li Fang. Here are the results of our group survey, there are 4 students in our group. All of us always

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【范文及点拨】

Writing 16

【思路点拨】

这是一篇介绍读书活动的文章,要求考生根据表格信息来写一段话,必须涵盖所有提示信息。 要点很清楚,共三个:读书意义、活动计划和个人愿望或感受,注意不要遗漏要点。每个要点下面各有几个小要点,写作时要注意总分结构的使用。要点二写活动计划,很显然需要用到一般将来时will/be going to。

【满分作文】

This week our class will organize a reading activity – Be Friends with Good Books and Take Delight in Reading. I think it is important for us to read books, because they can help us learn more about the world, bring us enjoyment and develop good habits. For this reading activity, we have made lots of plans. First, we are going to get more helpful books. Good books are like good friends. Second, we plan to make full use of our time to read books as many as possible. Third, we are going to take notes after reading. I hope we can read more books and improve ourselves a lot from this activity.

Writing 17

【思路点拨】

本篇写作任务是要求大家根据调查表写一封信。 具体行文可以这样展开:

1. 确定主题:具体到本次写作任务,根据表中信息,我们确定本文的主题是介绍三个人的不同周末活动。2. 确定正文层次:调查表中包含的信息有:凯特周末的活动;辛迪的周末活动;约翰尼的周末活动。3. 语言运用灵活性:由于三个层次的大致内容相似,所以要特别注意句式、短语以及词组的灵活运用,以保证句型的多样性和新鲜性。4. 最后写自己的周末活动。

【满分作文】

Dear Andrew,

I am writing to tell you about how students from different grades spend weekends with their family. Kate is a student in Grade One. She always goes shopping with her mother and helps her do some housework on weekends. Cindy is from Grade Two. On weekends, she goes on a picnic with her parents if the weather is fine. Then the whole family holds a family concert at night. Johnny is a boy in Grade Three. He goes to the history museum or practices basketball with his father on weekends. My name is Li Ying. I’m in Grade Four. I often help my parents sell clothes on Saturdays. On Sundays, I play with my friends after finishing my homework. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ying

Writing 18

【思路点拨】

本篇习作要求我们针对“周末活动”调查结果写一篇发言稿。发言稿即讲话稿,就是在一定的场合,面对一定的听众,围绕主题讲话的稿子。观察给出的表格和图片,对其中的信息进行分析和整合,确定正文结构::(1)描述表格中的信息。全组人员周末时间做作业;三人看电视;两人做运动以及没有人做家务。(2)描述图片中的信息。它要求我们描述最理想的周末, 其中有三点:多做运动;有充足的睡眠和参加兴趣小组。

【满分作文】

Good morning, everybody. I am Li Fang. Here are the results of our group survey, there are 4 students in our group. All of us always do our homework on weekends. Three of us often watch TV. Two of us sometimes exercise. I’m sorry to say no one in our group ever does any housework on weekends.

As for our ideal weekends, first, we think it’s necessary and important for us all to have enough sleep and exercise more. Second, we should try to find more good ways to relax. For example, listen to music, play chess, go to the library, surf the Internet as well. And we can also join some interest clubs if we like.

What do you think of our ideal weekends? We’re waiting for sharing yours. Thanks for your attention!

七、表达观点类

Writing 19

假设你班上周就“Is it OK to tell white lies?”开展了一场讨论,请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文,简单介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈你自己的观点。

注意:

1. 短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;

2. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计总词数;

3. 文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名;

4. 参考词汇:善意的谎言 a white lie

Writing 20

随着网络的发展,人们消费观念的转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。

注意:①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;

②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息,否则不予评分;

③词数:100词左右;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

④提示词汇:网购shopping online ;避免做某事avoid doing sth ;商品goods ;导致cause

Writing 21

目前学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文,标题是My opinions on cheating in examinations,请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。 内容要点如下:

注意:

1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;

2. 标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;

3. 词数:80~90词左右;

4. 参考词汇:作弊cheat (v.)

【范文及点拨】

Writing 19

【思路点拨】

1. 本文的中心论题是:“Is it OK to tell white lies? ”所以首先要提出中心论点,点题。

2. 从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分成两段,先写赞成者的观点及理由,即善意的谎言是出于好意,说了不为过;可以帮助人们友好相处;有时候能使人增强自信。然后很自然地过渡到反对者的观点及理由,即善意的谎言也是谎;会伤害友情;终究不能持久。

3. 讲述自己的选择,要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。

【满分作文】

Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. The students have many opinions.

Some students support the opinion. They hold the view that telling white lies doesn’t matter much as long as it is out of kindness, especially when a friend is facing failure. Sometimes, white lies can encourage people to stick to what they are doing.

However, every coin has two sides. Other students oppose the opinion. They believe white lies are always lies. They also convey the meaning of cheating. To make things worse, white lies hurt people’s feelings, so they do harm to friendship. Meanwhile, lies never go far.

In my opinion, although white lies are lies, they are necessary in our daily life. After all, not everyone dares to face reality bravely.

Writing 20

【思路点拨】

1. 本文的中心论题是:网上购物的优势与劣势。所以首先要提出中心论点,点题。

2. 从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分做两段,先写网上购物的优势,足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累;价格便宜;可供选择的范围广,品种多,然后很自然地过渡到网上购物的缺点及理由,只看到图片,看不到商品本身;容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。

3. 讲述自己的选择,要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。

【满分作文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

There are at least three good points of shopping online. First, people can buy what they want without going outside, which helps them avoid crowds and heavy traffic. Second, the prices of goods online are usually reasonable. Third, it offers different varieties of goods for people to choose.

But there are also some bad points. The most serious one is that people can not see the goods in person. Instead, they get the information only from the pictures and the description. If they want to buy a pair of shoes, they can’t try them on. Sometimes, the goods they buy are totally different from what they have expected. To make things w orse, shopping online makes it easy for people to buy what they don’t really need. It is a waste of money.

In my opinion, I prefer going shopping to shopping online, because going shopping is a kind of enjoying life for me and I can also get what I really want. Writing 21

【思路点拨】

1. 本文的中心论题是:My opinions on cheating in examinations,所以首先要提出中心论点,点题。

2. 从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分做两段, 先分析这种现象产生的原因,然后很自然地过渡到自己的看法。讲述自己看法时要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。

3. 对自己的观点做简短的总结并点题。

【满分作文】

My opinions on cheating in examinations

It is well known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations, but sometimes we have too many which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at our lessons. So when taking examinations, students sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. Students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

八、安全与防护类

Writing 22

你觉得你的校园生活安全吗?请你写一篇题为"How to Keep Safe in School"的短文, 谈谈你的看法。

内容包括:

1. 描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件(经过与结果) 。

2. 提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议(至少两条) 。

3. 呼吁每个学生都要注意校园安全。

作文要求:

1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。如需使用学校名称或学生的姓名, 请一律使用Hilltop School和Tom 。

2. 语句连贯, 词数80个左右。作文开头已经给出, 不计入总词数, 也不必抄写在答题卡上。请将作文写在答卷指定的位置上。

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For

example,_______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 23

假设这周英语老师为大家布置了一篇题为"How to Keep Safe Online"的作文,请你根据下面的内容要求完成这篇作文,谈谈你的看法。

内容包括:

1. 列举一点或者两点不注意网上安全可能导致的后果。

2. 为保障学生的网络安全提供几条建议。

3. 呼吁每个学生都要注意网络安全。

作文要求:

1. 词数:80左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ;

2. 建议要切实可行, 至少两条。

How to Keep Safe Online

Lots of middle school students like to surf the Internet nowadays. _____________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 24

每时每刻, 世界上都会有人因交通事故而伤亡。假如你是校报英文版的通讯员,请根据下面的表格,写一篇关于交通安全的报道,同时阐述你自己的观点。 要求:

1. 表达流畅, 有层次性;

2. 70词左右。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【范文及点拨】

Writing 22

【思路点拨】

该篇习作要求考生针对“如何保障校园安全”这一话题谈谈自己的看法。根据要点提示,我们可以这样展开行文:

1. 开篇引出话题——如果我们不多加小心,校园对于我们来说可能很危险。在这里,可以列举一个事例来辅助论证。

2. 引出了话题之后,接着就可以谈谈你自己对这件事情的看法。根据要点提示,主要是给出几条自己认为可以加强校园安全的建议。建议要中肯,且切实可行。

3. 最后部分可以呼吁大家多注意校园安全,也可以选择表达自己的良好祝愿。

【满分作文】

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough?

For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.

Writing 23

【思路点拨】

通过分析可以得知,该篇习作要求同学们就一件事情发表自己的看法。因此,该篇习作属于议论文。要求我们针对“如何保障上网安全”这一话题谈谈自己的看法。根据要点提示,我们可以这样展开行文:

1. 开篇引出话题:如果不注意网络安全对于我们来说可能很危险。在这里,可以列举一个事例来辅助论证。

2. 引出了话题之后,接着就可以谈谈你自己对这件事情的看法。根据要点提示,主要是给出几条自己认为可以保障网络安全的建议。建议要中肯,且切实可行。

3. 最后部分可以呼吁大家多注意网络安全,也可以选择表达自己的良好祝愿。

【满分作文】

How to Keep Safe Online

Lots of middle school students like to surf the Internet nowadays. However, it can be dangerous if we don’t pay attention to the Internet safety. For example, if we tell strange people where we are, we might be in danger.

In my opinion, to keep students safe while surfing the Internet, teachers should teach them about online safety rules. At the same time, parents should set some rules for them. For example, "Don’t talk with strange people online." I hope all of us can surf the Internet safely and happily.

Writing 24

【思路点拨】

本篇写作任务是要求根据表格提供的信息写一篇报道,属于应用文。遇到这样的写作任务时,我们应该首先认真观察表格,分析表格,然后通过对表格的概括描述来表达自己的观点。写作要点分析:

第一段:根据表格列举的伤亡人数,说明每时每刻都有交通事故发生,并说明事故的起因大部分是由于人们的疏忽或者缺乏安全意识。

第二段:可以避免交通事故的途径:通过遵守交通规则;避免酒后驾车;开车时不打电话或者聊天等。

第三段:发出呼吁:安全第一,必须严格要求自己。

【满分作文】

Each year a lot of people get injured or die in traffic accidents. A study shows that one person gets injured each second around the world. Many accidents happen because people are careless or pay less attention to traffic safety.

In fact, most accidents can be avoided. If everyone follows the traffic rules,

like never driving after drinking, or not talking or making telephone calls while driving, there will be less traffic accidents.

After all, safety must come first. We must be strict with ourselves and take care of other people’s lives.

九、饮食健康类

Writing 25

目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注,你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学 要求:

1. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并发表自己的看法。

2. 所给的提示词必须全部用上,可适当发挥。

3. 字数80词左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students ______________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 26

假设在英语课上, 老师让同学们讨论有关健康饮食习惯的话题。你和小组成员认为错误的饮食习惯对我们的身体健康有很大的危害。现请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文, 并在课堂上与同学们进行交流。

要求:(1)内容包括:①列举一些错误的饮食习惯;②请谈谈什么是良好的饮食习惯。

(2)字数:80词左右。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 27

现今社会,学生的压力越来越大,因此,很多健康问题也随之而来。请你针对这个问题,根据下面的提示写一篇文章,投稿给某英文杂志的“闲谈健康“栏目。

要点:1. 来自学习方面的压力:课业繁重

2. 来自人际关系方面的压力:同学相处问题

3. 来自父母的压力:父母的期望太高

要求:1. 词数:80词左右(文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数) ;

2. 根据文字提示可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Nowadays, students are facing a lot of pressure.____________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【范文及点拨】

Writing 25

【思路点拨】

写作本文是首先读表,然后客观真实地解读表格调查结果。根据调查结果,发表自己的看法。组织语言时,根据本文题材和体裁的具体特点,要用according to, as a result, as for, in fact等描述客观依据的短语。尽量避免It seems that„这种主观性表达很强的句式。

另外,注意表格中所有的要点以及后面的提示词必须都要用上。

【满分作文】

Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don’t have a balanced diet. (It is bad for their health.) 20 percent (of the students) go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often fell hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s worse, they get ill easily.

It’s necessary/important (for us) to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.

Writing 26

【思路点拨】

本篇习作的主题是健康饮食习惯的话题。根据给出的内容提示,我们可以得出文章应该包含的内容有:错误的饮食习惯和良好的饮食习惯。

我们可以这样安排文章的行文结构:

1. 开篇。开门见山地提出饮食是生活的重要部分;然后列举出错误的饮食习惯,例如吃饭太快或太多等。

2. 正文。提出解决方法,即饮食应适量和饮食应均衡营养。

3. 结尾。:应养成良好的饮食习惯。

【满分作文】

Meals are an important part of life. However, many of us have eating habits that are bad for our health. Some people eat too quickly or too much, while others don’t

have meals, in order to lose weight. And some people just eat snacks instead of having meals.

It is important to have good eating habits. To stay healthy, d on’t eat too much or too little. You should eat all different kinds of food, such as vegetables, fish and eggs, in order to get enough nutrition.

Having good eating habits are very important.

Writing 27

【思路点拨】

该篇习作属于议论文。我们可以这样展开行文:

1. 开篇提出论点:现在学生的压力过大。

2. 接着使用论据论证:根据文字提示,压力主要来自三个方面:学习的压力,人际关系的压力和父母的压力。可以依次引出这三种压力并作较为具体的描述。

3. 引出结论:阐述学生的压力过大这个问题导致的后果很严重,很多健康问题都可能随之产生,因此,社会各界都应该予以重视。

【满分作文】

Nowadays, students are facing a lot of pressure. First, they have too much homework to do. Therefore, there is little time left for them to do the things they like. Second, it is difficult for them to deal with relationships with their friends. This is especially true for students who have just moved to a new school. Third, parents often put a lot of pres-sure on them. So that they don ’t let their parents down, students feel that they should try to be the best at almost every-thing. As a result, many health problems may come up. It is high time for the whole society to do something to solve this problem.

十、节日假日类

Writing 28

假设你是小伟。你的室友大明昨天接到你朋友Maria 的电话。她正在研究中国的节日文化,需要你的帮助。现在,请你根据大明所留便条的内容,给Maria 回一封电子邮件。 Xiaowei,

Your friend Maria made a phone call to you yesterday. She wants to know the traditional Chinese festival —the Lantern Festival. She wants you to tell her why we like it, when and how we spend it (tell her at least 3 activities). Send an email to her at maria1988@gmail.com. Please ask her what they do during Christmas for me.

Daming

注意:

1. 电子邮件的格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数(80-100词) ;

2. 表达完整、书写规范、卷面整洁;

3. 提示词:swe et rice dumplings 汤圆play with firecrackers 燃放鞭炮the Lantern Festival元宵节

Subject: the Lantern Festival

Dear Maria,

How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival —the Lantern

Festival.Actually,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Love,

Xiao wei

From: xiaowei@sina.com

To: maria1988@gmail.com

Writing 29

每年的10月31日都是西方的“万圣节”,, 现在已经进入10月了,万圣节即将到来。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇发言稿,在下周的英语课上和大家分享一下你的计划。

要点提示:1. 提前买好一个南瓜,节日当天邀请外教马克一起制作南瓜灯(jack-o-lantern);2. 天黑之后穿上化妆服, 提着南瓜灯去敲朋友的门, 玩传统的万圣节游戏"trick-or-treating" 。

要求:1. 词数:80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;2. 根据提示内容可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Hello, everyone!

Halloween is coming._________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all! Thank you!

Writing 30

假设你是晓玲。你的美国好友琳达(Linda)对中国文化习俗很感兴趣。上周她在QQ 上给你留言,请你根据留言, 给她回一封邮件。

Xiaoling,

Recently I had Chinese classes and became interested in Chinese festivals,especially the Dragon Boat Festival. I want to know when and why you have the Dragon Boat Festival. What do you eat, and how do you celebrate it? Please send me an email at linda@gmail.com.

Maybe we have a festival that is similar to yours.

Linda

注意:1. 电子邮件的格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数(80-100词) ;

2. 逻辑清晰、内容完整;

3. 提示词:Chinese Calendar 阴历glutinous rice 糯米boat races 赛龙舟

spice bag 香包

Subject: the Dragon Boat Festival

Dear Linda,

How are you doing? I’d like to tell you something about the traditional Chinese festival —the Dragon Boat Festival.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Love,

Xiaoling

From: xiaoling@sina.com

To: linda@gmail.com

【范文及点拨】

Writing 28

【思路点拨】

这次的写作任务是根据便条的内容回复邮件。通常这类题目中,给出的便条内容或留言内容已经限定了文章的主题和内容。在具体写作时,要有逻辑性地安排如下写作要点:

1. 开篇:首先要跟对方交流感情,写作任务中已给出。

2. 主体:在这一部分,依次介绍元宵节的庆祝时间;我们喜欢元宵节的理由和元宵节的庆祝活动。在介绍庆祝活动时,我们可以采用first, second, third等序数词来使文章看起来有条理,也可以用一些连接词将各个活动连接起来而不显得突兀,例如:but, and, however 等。此外,我们可以适当地表达自己对元宵节的喜爱之情。

3. 结尾:最后,按照便条中提到的,我们要询问对方怎样过圣诞节,并表示希望了解该节日。

【满分作文】

Dear Maria,

How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival —the Lantern Festival. Actually, we have it at the end of the Spring Festival. We like the Lantern Festival because we can enjoy beautiful views at night. Usually, we eat a kind of sweet rice dumplings called yuan xiao, and we go out to watch colorful lanterns with our family members. When it gets dark, it looks beautiful everywhere with lots of lanterns. We also enjoy some firework shows or play with firecrackers ourselves. It’s great fun!By the way, what do you usually do during Christmas?

Love,

Xiaowei

Writing 29

【思路点拨】

该篇习作要求考生写一篇发言稿。在处理这类文章时, 我们该注意:(1)开门见山提出要针对什么话题发言。(2)针对话题进行具体地、详细地阐述。(3)最后部分照应开头,对全文作简要总结。

就该篇习作而言,我们可以这样展开行文:

1. 开篇:点明此次发言的目的是介绍节日背景向同学们介绍自己的计划。

2. 正文:介绍计划的具体内容。根据写作要点提示,对所给的两项活动进行阐述。

3. 结尾:呼应开篇,发出邀请。

【满分作文】

Hello, everyone!

Halloween is coming. As a traditional festival of western countries, Halloween is celebrated by lots of people now. I would like to talk about my plan for the coming Hal-loween.

I will buy a pumpkin before the festival. Then I would like to invite Mike to make a jack-o-lantern with me. When it is dark, I will put on special costume and go out with the jack-o-lantern. I will knock on my friends’doors and play "trick-or-treat-ing"on them.

What about your plans? Let’s have a wonderful Halloween together!

That’s all! Thank you!

Writing 30

【思路点拨】

本篇写作任务是根据便条的内容回复邮件,便条中与主题相关的信息就是写作要点。在具体写作时,大家要有逻辑性地安排这四个写作要点,切忌完全以回答问题的形式展开。具体行文安排如下:

1. 开篇:首先要跟对方交流感情,写作任务中已给出。

2. 主体:在这一部分,我们依次介绍端午节的庆祝时间;我们喜欢端午节的原因。如何庆祝端午节和端午节的食物。

3. 结尾:最后,我们要向对方提问是否有类似的节日。

【满分作文】

Dear Linda,

How are you doing? I’d like to tell you something about the traditional Chinese festival —the Dragon Boat Festival. Actually, the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the 5th day of the fifth month according to the Chinese Calendar. It is also called the "Duanwu Festival". We celebrate it to remember the great poet in China, Qu Yuan. During the festival, we eat zongzi —a kind of rice dumplings. They are made of glutinous rice, meat and so on. We also have boat races and the boats are in shape of a dragon. That’s also why we call it the Dragon Boat Festival. On that day, children often carry a small spice bag with them.

Do you have any festivals like this?

Love,

Xiaoling

十一、文体娱乐类

Writing 31

为满足人们日益增长的健身需求,我国政府将每年的8月8日定为“全民健身日”。今年的“全民健身日”即将来临,为了让这项活动更加深入人心,某英文报纸举办了一场征文比赛。现在请你以“Let’s Do Sports”为题写一篇短文,向该报投稿。

内容提示:

★Do you think it is important for everyone to do sports?

★What sports do you like? Why do you like it / them?

★Do you often do sports with your friends and parents?

★How often and how long do you do sports?

★How do you feel after doing sports?

要求:

1. 短文词数:80左右;

2. 必须包括上述提示内容, 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥;

3. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分。

Let’s Do Sports

______________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 32

假设你叫李雷,你校英文报纸正在就“My Favorite Sport ”这个话题向全校学生征文,请你写一篇文章向校报投稿。

要求:

1. 词数:80词左右;

2. 语句通顺, 条理清晰。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 33

【范文及点拨】

Writing 31

【思路点拨】

该篇习作要求考生以"Let’s Do Sports"为题, 向一英文报纸投稿。再观察要点提示,考生可以选择从要点提示所给的几个方面展开习作,具体行文如下:

1. 开篇:开篇点明做运动对于每个人来说都很重要。

2. 正文:正文部分可以分为以下几个部分:自己喜欢运动的原因, 自己最喜欢的一项运动, 为什么喜欢这项运动,是否和家人朋友一起运动,多久运动一次和运动后的感受。在处理这部分内容的时候要注意前后的衔接,力求顺承自然。

【满分作文】

Let’s Do Sports

I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also good for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends or my parents in the swimming pool. After swimming, I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more, I can put more energy into my study. So let’s do sports, and we will become stronger and stronger.

Writing 32

【思路点拨】

该篇习作要求介绍自己最喜欢的一种运动,属于记叙文的范畴。因此,具体行文可以这样展开:

1. 开篇引出自己最喜欢的运动。

2. 接着介绍喜欢这项运动的原因。这部分应该为文章的主体部分。如果篇幅允许,可以辅以例证。

3. 最后部分可以选择对全文作一个简短的总结或表达自己良好的祝愿。

【满分作文】

My Favorite Sport

Among all sports, I like playing basket-ball best. Playing basketball is popular with Chinese stu-dents now.

First, it has a lot of fun, so I can enjoy myself. Second, by playing basketball, I can spend more time with my friends. I al-ways play basketball with my friends after school. Finally, the most important thing is that I can learn to work well with others. Playing basketball helps me to understand teamwork better.

As a basketball fan, I hope basketball can become more popular around the world.

Writing 33

【思路点拨】

这是一篇提纲作文。主要写音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响,因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情,全文主要用一般现在时。

【满分作文】

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much

pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

十二、情感与情绪类

Writing 34

假设你是Emma ,你的笔友John 给你写了一封电子邮件,向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示,给Josh 回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法,再给出建议,并适当发挥。 To: Emma@help.com

Subject: Ask for your help

Dear Emma,

I have a problem and I need your help. My parents are really strict and never let me do anything! For example, when I go out with my friend, my mom always asks, "Where are you going? Who are you going with?" My parents want to control everything I do. I try to talk to them, but they don’t listen. They say, "This is our house and these are our rules." Why is it so hard for them to under-stand me?

John 提示:

1. 内容要点:(1)看法:在父母看来, 我们仍是孩子;父母这样做是为了保护我们。

(2)建议:给父母写信谈谈你的想法;主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。

2. 回信应包括以上所有提示的信息,做到行文连贯,不要逐字翻译。

3. 词数:不少于80。开头和结尾已经写好, 不计入总词数。

Dear John,

Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. _______________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

I hope this helps!

Emma

Writing 35

假设某英文杂志正在就“保持心情愉悦,远离不良情绪”这一话题向中学生征文。请你

以“To Be Happy ”为题,根据下面的要点提示写一篇文章,向该杂志投稿,谈谈你的看法。

内容要点:1. 保持心情愉悦很重要;2. 保持心情愉悦有利于身体健康;3. 心情舒畅

有利于结交更多朋友;4. 高高兴兴才能更好地处理事情;5. 你的感悟(至少一点) 。

注意:1. 词数:80左右(短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数) ;2. 短文须包括所

有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺。

To Be Happy

To be happy is very important to everyone._________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 36

假设你是Joey ,你的笔友Alice 给你写了一封电子邮件,向你倾诉她在新学校的一些烦恼。请你根据来信和提示,给Alice 回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法,再给出建议,并适当发挥。

To: Joey@help.com

Subject: Ask for your help

Dear Joey,

I have a problem and I need your help. My family has just moved to a new place and I have just moved to a new school. I find it difficult to make new friends here. Everyone seems to have his own friends, except me. I feel lonely now. Will you give me some suggestions?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Alice

要点:

1. 和同学步行上学;

2. 多参加课外活动。

要求:

1. 词数:80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;

2. 文章层次清晰, 结构完整。

Dear Alice,

Thanks for your e-mail. I learned that you have some difficulty in making friends in your new school. ____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Joey

【范文及点拨】

Writing 34

【思路点拨】

该篇习作要求为Emma 如何和父母相处这一问题提供建议。具体行文可以这样展开:

1. 开篇:开篇点明收到对方的邮件。

2. 正文:正文部分可分为两个部分。第一部分为对方分析问题, 这里, 可以选择引用自己的例子作为辅助;第二部分为对方提供建议。

3. 结尾:结尾部分表示希望自己的建议对对方能有所帮助。

【满分作文】

Dear John,

Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this. To them, we are still children and they want to protect us.

Sometimes, it’s hard for you to talk to your parents. Here’s an idea: write your mother and father a letter. In the letter, tell your parents what you are thinking about. Then maybe they will understand you better. After your parents read the letter, try to talk to them. In your free time, you’d better do something you can to help your parents. For example, you can help your parents with some housework.

What’s more, you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life.

I hope this helps!

Emma

Writing 35

【思路点拨】

该篇习作属于议论文,因此,在具体行文时需要三要素,即论点、论据和论证。具体写作时可以按照下面的结构进行:

1. 开篇:开篇提出论点——幸福对于每个人来说是非常重要的。

2. 主体:提出了论点,接下来我们就需要使用论据对论点进行论证了。根据要点提示,我们需要使用道理论证来论述幸福的重要性。

3. 结尾:结尾部分可以结合个人生活展开。

【满分作文】

To Be Happy

To be happy is very important to everyone. First, to be happy is good for health. Having a good mood helps build a strong body. Second, when a person is happy, he has more chances to make new friends. Everyone likes to be friends with pleasant people. Finally, to be happy helps people deal with problems better. When a person is happy, he considers things positively.

I will remember the importance of being happy. And most importantly, I will try to be happy as possible as I can.

Writing 36

【思路点拨】

通过分析可以得知,该篇习作要求考生根据已给邮件中的问题给出建议。具体行文可以这样展开:

1. 开篇:开篇点明收到对方的邮件。

2. 正文:正文部分可分为三个部分。第一部分引出问题,第二部分为对方分析问题,这里,可以选择引用自己的例子作为辅助;第二部分为对方提供建议。

3. 结尾:结尾部分表示希望自己的建议对对方能有所帮助。

【满分作文】

Dear Alice,

Thanks for your e-mail. I learned that you have some difficulty in making friends in your new school. I have had the same experience. Once I went to a new school because my father had a new job. I found it hard to be friends with students there. This made me feel bad and I even didn’t like to go to school. I talked about it with my mom. With her help, I made some friends later. Here, I can give you some suggestions. You can go to school with some class-mates on foot. On the way, you can talk about interesting things. You should also take part in after-class activities more. In this way, you can know more people.

I hope these suggestions can help you.

Yours, Joey

十三、语言学习类

Writing 37

假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find Your Own Way to Learn English”的80个词左右稿件向其投稿,介绍你学习英语的体会。

稿件开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

Find Your Own Way to Learn English

There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 38

假设你是某英文网站的英语编辑大卫(David),一位名叫李帅的同学向你请教提高英语口语水平的方法,请你根据以下要点给李帅回一封邮件。除以下外再提出一条建议。

要点:1. 注意发音, 要仔细研究每个单词的发音;

2. 注意模仿, 通过听一些阅读材料或电影对白, 模仿(imitate)其中的语音语调

(tone);

3. 与外国人交朋友, 提高口语水平。

要求:1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;

2. 80词左右(开头及结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;

3. 字迹工整, 语言流畅, 表达正确, 逻辑清晰。

Dear Li Shuai,

I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to improve your spoken English. Here is my advice.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope my suggestions will help you.

Yours,

David

Writing 39

假如你是王明,你参加了一个英语培训班。本期课程就要结束了,英语教师让大家对自己这段时间的英语学习进行一下总结。你学会了哪些技能,发现了自己的哪些不足,以后还有什么新的打算等等。下面的提示句会帮助你更好地完成写作。

要求:

1. 紧扣主题, 行文流畅, 有条理;

2. 提示句应该在文中出现;

3. 80词左右。

I had ... time learning English when I ... I have made great progress in ... but I still have difficulties with ... I will ... so that I can ... in the future. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【范文及点拨】

Writing 37

【思路点拨】

通过观察本篇习作给出的背景资料和表格信息,我们可以确定本篇习作要求我们以第一人称写一篇短文介绍自己在学习英语过程中遇到的困难和解决的办法。根据表格第一行给出的信息,我们可以确定本文的时态为一般过去时和一般现在时两种。

1. 通过整合、分析表格给出的信息,我们可以将文章大致分为三大部分:最初的情况(遇到的学习困难) 、现在的情况(运用的学习方法) 和自己的学习体会及心得。

2. 根据表格信息,每个部分还可以分为几个方面。学习困难包括单词拼写、听力差、语法出错和阅读速度慢;学习方法包括记单元词汇表、多听磁带和借书阅读;学习体会则包括学好英语的关键, 专心致志, 自有方法。

另外,我们在安排这些方面时,注意自己语言的运用,不要一味地进行罗列,句子结构也要有些变化。

【满分作文】

Find Your Own Way to Learn English

There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way.

At first, I had many difficulties in learning English. For example, I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.

Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.

The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.

Writing 38

【思路点拨】

本篇习作是文字提示类作文,要求我们根据给出的要点提示,为李帅同学提供提高英语口语水平的方法。题中已经给出了开头,点明了文章主旨和中心思想,同时引出了文章接下来的内容。文章的结构可以根据给出的三个要点提示安排正文的书写。因此,文章正文部分可大致分为三个小点, 即注意发音,模仿以及和外国人对话。然后,根据上下文的需要在文章中加入一些过渡句使文章更加连贯。另外还可以使用first, second 等序数词使文章结构更加清晰。

【满分作文】

Dear Li Shuai,

I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to improve your spoken English. Here is my advice.

First, as you are not a native speaker, you should pay attention to your pronunciation of each single word. You should make sure that you pronounce every word correctly, or you will not be understandable when you say it. Second, you have to imitate how they are speaking. You can read after an audio or a movie dialogue and imitate the tones. Third, I think making some foreign friends is a great way to improve your spoken English.They will correct the way you speak English.

Practice makes perfect. So, it’s important to practice every day.

I hope my suggestions will help you.

Yours,

David

Writing 39

【思路点拨】

该篇习作属于记叙文,根据提示,我们分析得出本文写作需要三个部分:

1. 开门见山。介绍英语学习近况。

2. 文章主体。这部分主要分析自己在英语学习中表现好的原因;同时要指出自己在英语学习方面存在的不足。

3. 结尾。根据自己的表现,给出自己未来学习英语的计划和期望。

【满分作文】

I had a hard time learning English when I first took English lessons. But later

this bad situation changed for the better. (介绍英语学习近况)

My teachers and classmates have given me a lot of help. They have helped me correct my poor pronunciation and improve my reading skills. (老师和同学对我的帮助)

With their help, I have made great progress in reading and speaking, but I still have difficulties with listening. I have found I ’m always unable to understand the differences between two similar phrases and what the foreigners are talking about. (虽然在某些方面有进步, 但仍有不足)

I will continue to learn English with my teachers and classmates, and practice my listening skills, so that I can understand what others are saying in the future. (对自己未来英语学习的期望)

十四、旅游交通类

Writing 40

你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip), 请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。要求:

1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥;

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整;

3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名;

4. 词数:60~80词。(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。)

提示语:walk to Fenghuang Mountain, 10 kilometers away, hard but exciting, the whole day, keep safe, behave, things to take (food, drinks ...) ...

Hello,everyone!

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all.

Thank you!

Writing 41

假设你是某欧洲旅游团的导游,你负责将第二天的旅游行程提前通知旅游团成员。 要求:1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;

2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;

3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) 。

提示语:tomorrow’s journey, take a bus to the Great Wall, hotel, long time, keep safe, enough water

Hello, everyone!

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.

Thank you!

Writing 42

假设你叫张兵,近日收到美国笔友约翰的来信,请根据下面的来信给他回一封信,为他推荐一种在清华大学游玩的方式。

Hi! Zhang Bing,

I am going to visit Tsinghua University next month. I have learned that it is a very big university. Someone told me that it is good for me to visit it by bike. Is that true? Can you give me some suggestions?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

John

要求:

1. 词数:80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;

2. 文章层次清晰、表达连贯。

Hi! John,

I was glad to hear from you. ___________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Zhang Bing

【范文及点拨】

Writing 40

【思路点拨】

这是一次口头通知的训练,且可以参考提示语进行写作。首先,我们仔细观察给出的提示语内容,了解文章的大概脉络。据观察,文章的主要内容是去凤凰山旅游和一些注意事项。下面我们就来进行具体分析:

开篇:说明通知的意图。在本次写作任务中,开篇应说明此次通知的目的是告知同学们班级即将组织一次郊游活动。

正文:具体介绍郊游活动的内容。包括时间、地点和注意事项等。时间是this Sunday, 要去的地点是Fenghuang Mountain, 需要同学们注意的事情有注意安全, 准备好食物和水等。 结尾:对本次活动的祝愿。

【满分作文】

Hello, everyone!

May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I’ve got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We’ll walk to Fenghuang Mountain. It’s about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we’ll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things.

Take enough food and drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we’ll have a nice trip.

That’s all.

Thank you!

Writing 41

【思路点拨】

本篇习作的体裁是通知,属于应用文。这是一次口头通知的训练,可以参考提示语进行写作。首先,我们仔细观察给出的提示语内容,了解文章的大概脉络。据观察,文章的主要内容是去长城旅游和一些注意事项。下面我们就来进行具体分析:

开篇:说明通知的意图。在本写作任务中,开篇应说明此次通知的目的是告知大家明天的旅游计划。

正文:具体的安排旅行活动内容。包括时间、地点和注意事项等。

结尾:对本次旅行的祝愿。

【满分作文】

Hello, everyone!

Could I have your attention, please? I’m going to tell you about the plan for tomorrow’s journey.

We will take a bus to the Great Wall. The bus will meet us at 7 o’clock in the morning in front of the hotel. As climbing the Great Wall takes a long time, everyone should pay attention to the following things: take plenty of water with you and wear your comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe, because many people visit the Great Wall during this season.

We will have a great time at the Great Wall.

That’s all.

Thank you!

Writing 42

【思路点拨】

由写作要求可以得知,该篇习作要求我们写一封回信。推荐一种在清华大学游玩的方式。具体行文可以这样展开:

1. 开篇:点明话题。

2. 正文:正文部分可以分为两个部分。第一部分介绍清华大学。先给出一个总体的介绍,给出值得参观的理由。第二部分可以为对方提供建议。

3. 结尾:结尾部分表达愿意为对方解答疑问的意愿。

【满分作文】

Hi! John,

I am glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you were going to visit Tsinghua University soon. Tsinghua University is one of the best universities in China. It has a long history and there are many historical buildings in the campus. It is worth visiting.

The campus is very big. Lots of people choose to visit it by bike. However, I suggest that you visit it on foot. Although riding a bike can save a lot of time, you may miss some interesting small places.

If you have more questions, please write to me.

Yours,

Zhang Bing

十五、环境保护类

Writing 43

请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文谈谈水的重要性,以及如何保护水资源和节约用水。 存在问题:树木被大量砍伐;工厂废水、生活污水任意排放;浪费水现象严重。

提示词:plants, animals, humans, cut down, pour, waste, laws, stop, reuse, turn off, tap

要求:1. 词数80左右(文中给出部分不计入总词数) 。

2. 提示词必须全部用上, 并适当发挥。

3. 短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和归属地等信息。

Water is important to all living things.__________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope we can have enough clean water forever.

Writing 44

假设你是刘梅,你校每年都会举行“世界环境日(World Environment Day)”活动。你的笔友凯特(Kate)对此项活动很感兴趣,并向你询问活动情况。请你写信向她介绍你们的活动情况(活动内容见下表) 。

要求:1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数:80词左右(不包含已给的词数) 。

Dear Kate,

You said you wanted to learn something about World Environment Day activities in my school. Now let me tell you what we do.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Liu Mei

Writing 45

地震、海啸和飓风频繁袭击人类,让人们充分意识到保护环境的重要性和紧迫性。低碳生活(low-carbon life)作为一种环保的生活方式,被越来越多的人了解并接受。

请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文谈谈低碳生活对环境的好处,以及如何做到低碳生活。

存在问题:一些人不了解低碳生活;忘记关水龙头和灯开关;使用塑料袋。

提示词:less energy, waste, plastic bag, light, reused

要求:1.80词左右(文中给出部分不计入总词数) ;

2. 提示词必须全部用上, 并适当发挥;

3. 行文流畅, 有逻辑性。

The low-carbon life plays an important part in saving the world. ______________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope we can have a better and healthier life in the future.

【范文及点拨】

Writing 43

【思路点拨】

本习作要求同学们对水的重要性和节约用水表达自己的观点。根据写作提示,我们可以得出本篇习作大致可分为三个板块:一是介绍水的重要性;二是说明现在存在的问题;三是说明我们要节约用水, 保护水资源。具体的行文结构如下:

1. 开篇。开门见山地提出论点——水对于所有生物很重要。不仅是对我们人类, 对自然界中的植物和动物都很重要。

2. 正文。根据所给的背景资料和写作提示, 我们将正文分为两个层次来展开。第一个层次指出目前存在的问题, 进而得出目前水资源的状况令人担忧;另一个层次则应给出如何保护水资源以及节约用水的建议, 可以根据第一个层次中所列的问题相应地提出解决办法(例如, 存在的问题是树木被砍伐, 那么解决办法就是多多植树等) 。

3. 结尾。总结自己的观点或者再次重申自己的观点。

【满分作文】

Water is important to all living things. It’s necessary for all plants. All animals can’t live without water. Humans need water to drink, to cook and to clean. Without water, there could be no life on earth.

But in our daily life, people have cut down too many trees, some factories pour water into rivers and lakes. People use chemicals too much. All these can cause water pollution. Maybe we will be in short of water in the future.

In order to live a better life, it’s time for us to protect and save water. I think we should pass laws against water pollution and stop factories pouring waste water into rivers and lakes. Everyone should remember to turn the tap off when we

leave to save every drop of water. People can collect and reuse water. We’d better plant more trees as well. I hope we can have enough clean water forever.

Writing 44

【思路点拨】

本篇习作是表格提示类作文,要求我们根据图表内容和中文提示写一篇介绍每年在校开展的“世界环境日”活动。我们可以这样安排行文:

根据要点内容进行谋篇布局。我们可以按照活动发生的逻辑顺序安排行文。即,先介绍活动举行的时间和参与人员,这部分我们可以用一两句话带过。随后是文章的重点部分,即活动内容。我们看到活动内容形式多样,这样就要求我们对要点进行合理扩充。最后则是活动目的和感受,这部分也可以一笔带过,表达出此活动对环境保护有好处即可。

【满分作文】

Dear Kate,

You said you wanted to learn something about World Environment Day activities in my school. Let me tell you what we do. On June 5th, all teachers and students take part in many different activities.

Lots of students pick up rubbish in the park and put it into dustbins. Different classes are responsible for different areas of the park. Many students call on people to turn off the lights for an hour. What’s more, we also tell the people around us the importance of protecting the environment.

All these activities are helpful. It helps us understand that we can make a differ-ence to protect the environment.

Yours,

Liu Mei

Writing 45

【思路点拨】

本篇习作是写一篇议论文,要求同学们对低碳生活和保护环境的重要性表达自己的观点。根据写作提示,我们可以得出本篇习作大致可分为三个板块:一是介绍低碳生活的重要性;二是说明现在存在的问题;三是说明我们如何做到低碳生活。具体的行文结构如下:

1. 开篇:开门见山地提出论点——低碳生活在保护环境中的重要性。

2. 正文:根据所给的背景资料和写作提示,我们将正文分为两个层次来展开。第一个层次指出目前存在的问题;另一个层次则应给出如何做到低碳生活和保护环境的建议,可以根据第一个层次中所列的问题相应地提出解决办法。

3. 结尾:表达对实现低碳生活的愿望。

【满分作文】

The low-carbon life plays an important part in saving the world. It means we should live on less energy and make less waste in our daily life.

But a lot of people are not clear about what a low-carbon life is. Some people don’t turn off the tap when they brush their teeth. Some people forget to turn off the light when they leave a room. Some people still use the plastic bags in

supermarkets.

In order to have a low-carbon life and save the world, we need to change our habits. We should increase people’s awareness of the low -carbon life. It is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again. There is one thing we should keep in mind: remember to turn off the lights when we leave a room. I hope we can have a better and healthier life in the future.