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四级英语作文范文

一My views on Online Shopping

1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚

2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题

3. 我的建议

Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.

Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees comparing with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.

It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgen cy that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.

点评:本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知,因此,考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是,比较特殊的是,题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题,而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以,考生应当审清楚题,在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点,还必须给出相应的缺点。 按照四级作文的要求,考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题;

第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购,分别铺陈其优缺点;关于优点,网购的优点很多,考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述,比如说网购可以节省很多时间;网购可以节省很多成本开支等;其次,缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面;为了不至于跟优点相比,缺点方面太轻,考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点,比如说与传统购物相比,网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣;

第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。

二On Excessive Packaging[过度包装]

Wandering at the supermarkets, you could find that the shelves are filled with fancy and excessively-packaged goods with high price, especially when festivals approach. Although the

government has much concerns over this issue, the phenomena are still common.

The reasons can be listed as follows. First, manufacturers could benefit from the over-packaging. Fancy packaging would increase the price to a large extent, from which they can earn more money. Secondly, some of the goods are brought and sent as gifts to our relatives and superiors. Gorgeously packaged gifts would be more attractive and add “face” to the on e who buys and sends them.

From my point of view, excessive packaging is a waste of resources and money. Most people would throw the package away after they open it, which would lay heavier burden to our environment. To prevent this, every citizen should be aware of the problem, and strict laws must be made or reinforced to restrict the manufactures from excessive packaging.

【解析】本次写作延续了传统的出题方式,即英文题目+ 中文解析,但同时也继续了去年的一点小改动,对字数作了明确的限定。对于考生而言,商品过度包装本身已是日常生活的热点话题,大家比较熟悉,能有较多发挥空间。

在写作过程当中,最重要的是要理清思路,将文章的逻辑关系理清。范文中,作者第一段描述了这一现象;第二段中,开篇便点出了主题,一目了然,列出了出现这一现象的原因;最后一段里,作者发表总结了自己的一些观点。全文条理较为清晰。

其次,在句型方面,建议考生使用长短句交错的方式,这样节奏便较为明朗。

最后,用词方面,文章对“过度包装”使用了多种表达方式,如fancy packaging, luxurious packaging, glorious packaging等等。这样文章便不会显得“干燥”,让阅卷老师怀疑你的词汇量。因此,同学们在平时一定要注意同义词、词组的替换和使用。

三Education Pays

The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high as 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%.

The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their jobs.

This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment.

四The Big is the Little

Nothing can be done except little by little, the French poet Baudelaire Charles once said. Most people, however, often ignore such a truth. So does the little boy shown in the picture. He expresses his worries to his father about disposing of nuclear waste, but is told that he can achieve nothing if he doesn’t empty the dustbin first.

Every single little thing you can do today matters. The truth has been tested for ages, and thousands of great people have set good examples for us. For instance, Leonardo da Vinci, the world-renowned master in painting, starts his career with repeated egg-drawing. Lu Xun, the great man of letters, reminded himself to get up early by inscribing the character “morning” on his desk.

As university students, in my opinion, we should aim high, but at the same time, we shall never measure a task by its size. All in all, only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.

【点评】本次四级作文为看图作文,探讨的话题是“一屋不扫,何以扫天下”。这个话题较为常见,一般考生对此都比较熟悉,所以对考生来说难度不大。一篇好的四级作文,要注意两点:一,要紧扣题目要求;二,要在评论的基础上亮出自己的观点。

范文开头第一句就开门见山,引用名言,亮出观点,简短而有力。紧接着又用图片中所给的故事,作为论据支撑。这样以来,既避免了直接叙述故事带来的突兀感,又使故事更好的支持论点。

第二段作者进一步分析深入论证自己观点。通过中外两个“从小事做起的”伟人的例子做论证,使论点更为饱满,更具说服力。

第三段作者从自身出发,指出大学生对“一屋不扫”应该具备积极的态度。文章最后,以名言作结,切中主题,铿锵有力。

五The Overusing of Cell Phones[过度依赖手机]

This picture portrays such an ironic situation: on the road, stands a man, who is completely concentrating on his cell phone whereas using a stick for direction, which implies the unprecedented popularity or even overusing of cell phones nowadays.

Exaggerated as the picture is , the phenomenon behind it is rather thought-procking. With the development of high-tech equipment, especially smart phones, people in growing numbers tend to become addicted to the excessive use of them. According to a survey carried out in China Daily several days ago, almost 47% of citizens explain that they would experience certain kind of anxiety without cellphones at hand. Meanwhile, the overusing of cellphones, firstly, would exert detrimental impact on the health of us. What’s worse, it would perform a negative character in interpersonal relationship since we have less time to communicate.

Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken. Firstly, certain institutions in

China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive ust of cellphones. Moreover, we ,as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start.

2014年12月四级英语作文分析

作文题目一:“大学中印象最深的一门课”

第一个,这门课的内容要写出来,比如印象最深的课是英语课,或者印象最深的课“如何做公众演说”,你得把这个课程的内容描述出来,把它的第一点、第二点、第三点,甚至上课的形式,这就是描述。

最后你要做一个论述,说这门课对我产生的影响,以及未来我怎么对待它,这些都需要写。 作文题目二:“大学中影响你最深的一位同学”

这位同学影响你最深,你不能说他对我影响很深,确实他对我产生很深的影响,他对我很重要,这样车轱辘的话反复说是不得分的,是没有意义的。

要点:要把这位同学他影响你的事迹、经历,令你振奋的故事描述和记叙出来。特别像六级考试考的是举例论证。特别像六级考试当中的举例论证,可能考的又是这样的题目。比如说给你一个什么样的观点,Please set some examples to illustrate your point,请你举一些例子来证明你的观点,六级考试是举例的,考例子,要描述的。现在的四级没有说一定要举例子,但是以题目的方式隐性要求你必须写故事、写例子。

比如我们看一下今天公布的范文说影响最深的一位同学,我们对它的描述是有个同学,刚刚开学的时候我们没有什么印象,但是他后来经常迟到印象很深,后来了解是他是跟久病卧床的妈妈一起上学的,为了照顾久病的妈妈所以经常迟到,但是他为了不仅解决了生活和学业的负担,优秀毕业,获得了奖学金。这件事情给我的影响是我们要如何面对压力、我们要有坚持和毅力,包括强大的意志面对生活中的不幸和磨难,这位同学对我的影响是非常深刻的。所以你把这个故事写完以后做一些评论,说他对我的影响是什么。最后还可以说一下我们以后要选择什么样的朋友,这位朋友给了我很深刻的影响,他给我的启发是以后我们要选择真正对我们有影响,有帮助,给我们正能量的朋友。第二段进行描述、记叙,第三段议论。 作文题目三:《A campus activity that has benefited most》——一项对你影响最深刻的校园活动。

第三个题目我们新东方国内考试部有一位教六级的作文老师叫刘杨老师,他写的一篇范文是他有一项活动叫“辩论赛”,他参加了这项活动以后,增加了自信、增加了口才、结交了朋友,这项活动对他影响非常深刻。

你在第二段需要描述一下这个活动的内容;在第三段需要写一下未来你会怎么样让这些类似的大学活动,使你的大学生活变得更加有意义,使你个人变得更加有竞争力。

总结:

1、这三道题目都是第一段引入话题;

2、第二段进行故事内容的描述和记叙;

3、第三段进行内容的提炼、升华和议论。

这就是我们说的目前四级作文,至少我们结合6月份和12月份这两次考试获得了两个启发,也就是我们要记叙和议论的结合。

六The Most Impressing Course in My College Life

印象最深的一门课

During the two years of college life, I have attended many special courses, among which the most impressed one is psychology. I still remembered the days when I was fed up with my major Math, which frustrated me so much. Till I fortunately select one of the most fascinating optional courses lectured by Professor Wang.

Time gone back to the first class of Mr. Wang, I found a little old man came in the classroom with a thick book of psychology. Mysteriously, I first unveiled and explored the myth within it by the vivid demonstration of Mr. Wang, and became fascinated with this course. In the following days, it enclosed an assorted of psychological phenomenon reflected in ordinary people’s daily lives by illustrating examples in reality.

To be frank, it is the psychology class that enlightens my soul of exploring the unknown world and stimulate my desire to learn. And it is no surprise to say that psychology is the most impressing course for me in college.

七The Most Impressive Campus Activity

Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part in last year.

That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and practicing the process of debate. Also, no individual could accomplish the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious than winning or losing.

To be brief, we should participate in more campus activities, not only can we get a better understanding of what we have learnt before, but also make new friends and discover our interests.

写作思路指导:

第一步,确定你印象最深的校园活动是什么。

第二步,该校园活动主题和内容是什么。

第三步,活动的启发和影响。

题型不再局限于纯粹的议论文,而是各个文章体裁夹杂和糅合。要对文章的体裁和相应写法

有全面的理解和掌握。

八How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work and marriage. Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy chil dren’s independence thoroughly.

For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent. The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood. Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.

The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator. And only with parents' trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.

今年的作文主题非常贴近考生的生活,给了考生很大的发挥空间,擅长写日常生活细节的学生可以写上三五个句子勾勒父母对于子女的过度关爱,而擅长逻辑思考的学生则可以更多地阐述父母怎样的行为才可以培养子女独立的品格,而过度宠爱正导致了独立精神的消失。 从具体操作的角度来说,对于基础较为薄弱的考生,这次的考试题目是比较容易套用模板的,

第一段,把现实状况描述清楚;第二段,写清楚父母亲帮助子女独立的策略;第三段,呼吁父母亲多给自己一些自由。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

沪江考前模板专题里面关于解决问题类作文提到了类似的结构:

In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. ----(说明A 的现状) .

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

像这样子的模板能够帮助无话可说,或者说英语表达能力比较弱的同学迅速找到思路,只需要填入关键的字词就可以完成作文。

但是对于能够用流畅的英语表达自己的思路的同学来说,写作如果希望取得比较高的分数,则需要注意语言必须尽可能简洁才能够在规定字数以内说清楚自己的论点,而句子的表达要求,也从有话可说,上升到言之有理,甚至上升到语言精致优美,内在逻辑严密的高度了。 在我们给出大家的这篇范文里面,三段文字结构清晰,语言简明优美又没有落入模板的窠臼,属于在临场作文中的优秀之作。