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原因型作文 P(1) S(1)

Problem (general) S(2)

Problem (specific) P(2) S(3)

Thesis S(4)

Cause I S(5)

Detail 1 S(6)

Detail 2 S(7)

Cause II S(8)

Detail 1 S(9)

Detail 2 P(3) S(10)

Conclusion

例1: Why College Students take a Part-time Job

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of Why College Students take a Part-time Job. You should write about 150 words and base your composition on the following chart and the outline given below:

1. 最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍

2. 为什么大学生要打工

3. 大学生打工的意义

提纲:

正文:

In the past decade, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of college students doing part-time jobs. According to the survey, in 1990 no college students do part-time jobs but the percentage rose to 18% in 1995

and 56% in 2000.

In my opinion, college students take part-time jobs for both economic and social reasons. Most students do these jobs to make an income, which will relieve the burden on their families and make them financially independent. However, other students do part-time jobs to get work experience. By doing so, they have a good opportunity to apply what they learn in class to their jobs. They can also practice their ability of communication, teamwork and so on, which will be helpful for them to find jobs after graduation.

In short, part-time job can benefit college students as long as they can strike a balance between work and study.

In short,

描写数据的句型:

1. According to/ As shown in the chart/graph/table, …

2. The chart/graph/table shows/reveals/suggests that …

3. From the information/statistics in the table/graph/chart, we estimate/can see/conclude …

4. The figure/number/percentage of …compared with those/ that of last year/...

5. The 6 times, as compared with …

6. The figure/number/percentage is twice/4 times/half as much as that/those of 1990.

7. The rate/number is … %, less/more than a half/third of the 1998 total.

8. By comparison with 1990, it shot up /jumped /increased /rose/ decreased /dropped/ fell by …%/from …% to …%/to …%.

9. By 1998, less than/more than/almost/about/over/as many as/nearly three-quarters

of/ …% of/one out of five/one in four/one half of housewives …

10.During the period 1970-1999/From 1910 to 1974/Since 1984/Since the early

1980s, ….

练习:

A Boom in Adult Education

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of A Boom in Adult Education. You should write about 150 words and base your composition on the following chart and the outline given below:

1. 现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或夜校读书

2. 出现这种成人教育热的原因是…

3. 结论

Praise the Power that hath made and preserved us a nation. Then conquer we must, when our cause it is just, And this be our motto: "In God is our trust."

And the star-spangled banner in triumph shall wave, O'er the land of the free and the home of the brave.