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Practice makes perfect. Practice makes perfect.

Unit1课题:英语写作训练

年级二 学科英语 班级 姓名

编写人:王慧 审核人:赵卫华 审批人:_________ 使用时间:________

Learning aims:

1.Know about the structure of the letter of giving advice.了解建议信的结构特点 2.Learn to write the topic sentence of the paragraph.学会写出段落的主题句

3.be able to write some related information according to the topic sentence.能够根据主题句写出一些相关内容。

一,请欣赏下面两篇作文范文

(1)

假设你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封信:

*帮他分析原因*给他提出建议*陈述你帮助他的具体打算 Dear Li Ming,

I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.

I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, you may as well learn to speak Putonghua, well understood by all the Chinese. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.

In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.

I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible. Best regards,

Zhang Hua

(2)

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请根据下列要点写封回信。

要点:1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。 Dear Peter:

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to

watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wish

Li Hua

总结:

1. 请总结出建议信的基本框架:

开头____________________________________________________________ 主体___________________________________________________________ 结尾___________________________________________________________ 2. 划出这三部分

3. 找一找每一段是否有主题句,如果有的话,请划出主题句。

4. 最终总结出开头和结尾段可以_______主题句,也可以______主题句,但主体部分一定___________主题句。

二,根据下面的作文题目,写出你认为合适的段落和每段的主题句。

(1)

假定你收到你的朋友小红的英文来信。她向你请教提高英语写作能力的方法。你给她写回信,信中提出你的看法和具体建议:

1.能力的提高要靠多练。写作能力的提高要靠多写。写得越多,可能写得越好; 2.建议写英文日记。将当日所见所闻用简单的英文写在日记里。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2)

为了迎接即将到来的期末考试,你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信,建议不要取消体育课

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Practice makes perfect. Practice makes perfect.

三,请根据下列主题句,写出一些扩充内容来丰富段落的内容。 1. I will give you some advice on how to get along well with your teacher..

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. I prefer not taking the mobile phone to the school.

___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 3. As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to learn Japanese well.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 课后作业: 1. 抄写第一篇范文:

2. 扩充下面主题句。

附录:

开头常用句式:

1. After I read your letter , I am sorry to know that-------- 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to --------

3. I know you have trouble in--------after reading your letter. 主体部分常用句式:

1. I think it would be more beneficial if you could------- 2. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 3. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that----- 结尾常用句式:

1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 3. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.

4. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.

如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的