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文化火锅既美味又营养(2010年) all kinds of cultures are mixed in one pot, homogenizing(同化assimilating )into a whole part. , While at the same time, cultural globalization is both tasteful and nutritious.

Cultural globalizationthe 21st-century among nearly all the countries, which brings about great benefits. There is no doubt that it is culture that make us a whole society. (如果下一句使用it 开头该使用什么连接词?或者怎么把后面的那句改写成what 开头) it should be observed, of course, that Take Da Shan as an example. To be a Canadian, he 修改:has a large stock of information of Chinese culture , Chinese Kungfu, Lao She ’s works and so forth. It is multi-culture that makes him so smart.

not only enhance our own eyesight to the external world, but also improve native culture. “It 修改:brings coordination programs which are needed a package of deal ___(如何用解决问题这句话改写There has to be coordination programs. What is needed is a package deal.)”(224字)

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1. 在用adv. 描述图画的另一性质。

2.

3.

你帮我看看还有没有别的形容词,副词,然后找出一个最好的,只记住那一个,不然串了。 例如:08年作文第一段:

第一段内容太少,怎么补水?而且第一句话累赘,一般不写。

第一类:正面描述:

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第二段反面写:

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或者to begin with…, moreover…, above all….

我想把这句并进去,不知道写在什么地方,你看看:To be sure, 主题名词has

第三段正面描述:

句出处,不知道该怎么改写用在好的地方).

修改:Recently a national campaign to study adj. 第二段反面描写:

句出处,不知道该怎么改写用在好的地方). Recently a national campaign to 还有些好的段落,你看看怎么合并: