漫画作文
初一 散文 1924字 392人浏览 杨炬良

Writing based on cartoons

★ 教学目标

1. To help Ss learn the pattern of describing a cartoon and the writing stages in such a kind of

writing style.

2. To improve Ss’ writing skills.

3. To train Ss’ ability of working in groups and improve their teamwork awareness.

★ 解题指导 漫画作文的写作可以从以下三个方面着手:

第一步:简述画面内容,引出图画主题

仔细观察画面中人物的形体、相貌、表情、语言、动作等,把这些信息连惯性地表达出来。通常用一般现在时态,第三人称。通过漫画所提供的内容,揣摩画意,得出结论。

第二步:分析图画的深层含义

认真分析图中反映的现象,揭示图画要表达的内涵或阐明原因。

第三步:个人总结 (解决方法或观点)

联系实际,在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容,发表自己的看法,可以提出一些建议或发出号召。

★ 佳作欣赏(2011湖南Writing :Section C)

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按如下要求完成一篇短文:

1. 简要描述下图内容,并点名主题;

2. 联系实际,表达该图带给你的启示

注意:1. 词数不少于120个;

2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称

参考范文

The picture shows us a simple(简单的) truth : If too many drops(滴) of water are put together, they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society. It conveys(传达) a message to us: A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related(相关的). Nothing or no one could exist alone.

The picture sets us thinking deeply: our society is made up of many people who have different personalities (个性)and characters. If we want to create a harmonious(和谐的)

society, we must live in harmony(和谐) with others. On the other hand, since everybody is related to others, we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others, which makes it possible for us to enjoy our life to the full.

As far as I am concerned,if every one of us successfully takes our responsibility,our earth will become a lovely home for human being.

★ 写作步骤及现场演练

根据下面的漫画,写一篇漫画作文。

1. 词汇演练

(1)电脑的广泛使用

(2)书写能力

(3) 退化

(4)获得知识

(5)传统的方法

2. 扩词成句——句式演练

(1)似乎人们没有电脑就不能生活、工作或学习。

(2)电脑的广泛使用导致学生用笔书写能力的退化。

(3)在学习中学生依赖电脑如此的多以至于他们忽视了获得知识的传统方法。

1. 词汇演练

(1)带来便利 (2)使得学生在大脑和身体方面更懒惰

2. 扩词成句——句式演练

(1)电脑给我们带来了便利,但它不是唯一的帮助我们的方法。

(2)在我们运用电脑的同时,也应该利用传统的方法去学习。