A generation born in 1990s: pros and cons
Recent years have heard a large number of negative comments on this generation. It’s not rare that some authorities show their concerns on us, who are influenced by the one-child policy and are about to enter society. Indeed, it’s a thought-provokening problem for us and the whole society.
Gone are the days when a kid spend childhood with his or her own brothers and sisters , playing together and helping each other. How to find something to kill time is our particular ability developed from a young age, so the feeling of lonely can not frustrate us much. However, at the same time ,teamwork plays an unimportant role in our early life.
For we are the only child, it’s unavoidable for our parents to pay more attention on us. Sometimes, this attention even transforms into cosset. They unselfishly provide us with a safe environment, which is described as greenhouse. Once more, we are portrayed as the fragile. Properly, the rising number of suicide becomes the best evidence.
The development of the economy gives a rise to money worship and individualism. In such era, we are both the beneficiary and victim. We are able to lead a life closely linked with the world, but we have to undergo the allure of the varicolored world. For many guys give in and become slaves of money, the older generation criticize us for our sharing too much achievements of the technological revolution but devoting nothing. They hold the views that the negative influence far overweight the positive one.
Yes. We have to acknowledge that we have many shortcomings. The era we grow up and the policy we are aimed at directly contribute to what kind of people we are. It’s also right that we confront less obstruction and achieve more opportunity, comparing to the old. But anyway it’s unfair to define that we are the terrible generation.
It ’s beyond our control to decide the environment. However, schools have witnessed countless effort made by us. We never undergo the load from subsistence but always from study. Eager to be the top one also gives us much distressed. Many of us stay the course and become brave,so we are strong-minded rather than fragile.
As for the sheltered upbringing, we appreciate it but we will leave it sooner or later, especially when we go to college, being our own owner. In the university here, we learn to wash clothes, buy bargain goods, manage money and get along with others. Which we didn’t learn before will be learned step by step later.
Some people says that we easily lose our mind facing a great variety of beautiful things.
However, who can keep one’s original thoughts all one’s life? If the answers is not , this weakness is not only belonged to our generation. Therefore, it’s not proper to assess us on this point.
Undoubtedly, as we get involved in society, we will meet more huge challenges.Please believe our ability and we will subsist on an wonderful answer.
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Recent years have heard a massive number of negative comments on this generation. [修改]
∙ [学习提示] 易混词汇: quantity, amount, number , sum 均有“总数，总量”之意。 quantity : 书面用词，指事物的总量和总数量，侧重大批计量，含准确测量的意味。 : 普通用词，与quantity 近义，但强调整体，指把所有数量、重量及度量归并在一起得出的总数。 : 普通用词，指人或物的数目，强调数的概念。 : 普通用词，指简单加算的结果。
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∙ [搭配学习] 动名搭配 hear...number 在教材中出现过 132 次
SeeAlso: try number131, hear bit30, hear act17, hear routine10, hear turn4
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It's not rare that some authorities show their concerns on us, who are influenced by the one-child policy and are about to enter society. [修改]
∙ [其他] about to enter society在本族语中很少使用。
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∙ [搭配学习] 动名搭配 enter...society 在教材中出现过 次
SeeAlso: enter order264, enter club66, enter company25, enter lodge6, introduce society3
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∙ [学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern , thing 均含“事情”之意。 affair : 含义较广，侧重指已发生或必须去做的任何事情或事务。复数形式多指重大或较复杂的事务。 : 通常指较重要或较难而又必须承担的事情，也可指商事。 : 普通用词，着重指一件考虑中的或需要处理的事。 concern : 往往强调与个人或团体利害有直接或重大关系的事。 thing : 用作“事情”解时，词义较笼统、含糊，多用于指不很具体的事。
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∙ [搭配学习] 动名搭配 show...concern 在教材中出现过 次
SeeAlso: express concern8069, show fear166, indicate concern101, show business63, show care48, show worry21, evince concern11
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∙ [批改提示] influence 近义表达有act upon/ affect/ bear upon
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Indeed, it's a thought-provokening problem for us and the whole society. [修改]
∙ [学习提示] 易混词汇: problem , question, issue, matter 均含“问题”之意。 problem : 指客观上存在的、难以处理或难以理解的问题。 question : 通常指用口头或书面提出来要求回答或有待讨论解决的问题。 : 多指意见能达到一致的问题，着重争论或讨论中的问题。 : 含义不很具体，暗示人们考虑和关心的事和话题。
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Gone are the days when a kid spends childhood with his or her own brothers and sisters, playing together and helping each other. [修改]
∙ [动词错误] Gone are 疑似动词连用。
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∙ [批改提示] help 近义表达有support/ assist/ aid
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How to find something to kill time is our particular ability developed from a young age, so the feeling of lonely can not frustrate us much. [修改]
∙ [其他] 请检查our particular ability，本族语中很少使用。
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∙ [其他] lonely 疑为词性误用。
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∙ [批改提示] find 指一般生活中的发现。注意与discover 区别。详情点击
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∙ [批改提示] 查看can not和cannot 的区别。详情点击
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∙ [学习提示] 易混词汇: ability , capacity, capability , genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。 : 普通用词，指人先天的或学来的各种能力。 capacity : 侧重指人的潜在能力，通常不指体力，多指才智，尤指接受与领悟能力。 capability : 多用于人，指胜任某项具体工作的能力，也指本身具有、尚未发挥的潜在能力。常与of 或for 连用。 : 语气最强，指天赋的高度才能与智力。 : 着重指人某方面具有可发展和倍养的突出天赋才能，但语意比genius 弱。 : 正式用词，侧重指令人满意的业务能力与水平，达到胜任某项工作等的要求。 faculty : 指特殊的才能或智力。 gift : 着重个人的天赋的才能或在某方面的显著本领，常暗含不能用一般规律作解释的意味。 : 多指先天或后天习得的运用自如的能力，常暗示接受能力强，能迅速掌握一种学术训练或艺术技巧。
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However , at the same time, teamwork plays an unimportant role in our early life. [修改]
∙ [学习提示] 易混词汇: same , identical, very, equal, equivalent 均含“相同的”之意。 : 可指相同的人或物，也可指在质量、外表或意义等方面相同，但实际上有差别的事物。 : 着重指人或物等在每细节上都完全相同。 very : 侧重指完全同一，没有区别。 equal : 多指在价值等方面相当而不相同的事物。 equivalent : 主要指有同样价值、效力或意义的两种不同的事物。
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∙ [搭配学习] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 次
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