讲义30 作文辅导
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讲义30 作文辅导

2002-2014 上海中考英语作文题目集锦

2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004 Leave School 毕业时分

2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼

2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么

2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪

2011 My Favourite Thing(s ) 我的心爱之物

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信,并给予建议。

2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”.(以“如何保护自己”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文)

2014 This time next year 明年此时

家庭生活作文题材

第一类:(以下题材应以记叙为主)

My mother(father)(写人)

My flat(neighbourhood)(写地方)

My favourite present(写物)

A birthday party/ A trip to…(写事情)

第二类:(以下题材应夹叙夹议,着重写自己感受)

My family life

My thanks to my mother(my father)

第三类(以下题材应以议论为主)

How to spend pocket money

The importance of breakfast

The advantages of doing housework 学校生活作文题材

第一类:

My teacher(friend, classmate)

My school

第二类:

My hobby/My My dream/My school life

第三类:

My view on exams

The advantages of after-school activities

Homework/Sports/Reading

Is it necessary to wear school uniforms

My good (bad) study habits

Less pressure makes better

第四类:

A football match/An interesting lesson

社会热点话题

My view on online games

Mobile phones at school

To be a green consumer

Is a family teacher necessary

Is it necessary to have a net-pal

写作模板

Step 1 审

健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的

人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, 并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 请找出文章要表达的中心,用简要的句子列出

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2.

3.

Step 2 列

• A lot of people travel .

• Some people stay at home.

• Some other people visit friends or parents.

• A few people work.

• Enjoy your vacation.

Step 3 连

(the beginning)How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.

(the body)A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other

people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

(the ending)Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.____________________, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. ___________ some other people visit friends or parents. _____________, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

填写关联词

Dear Mary,

I heard you didn’t do well in English. Here is some advice for you. ________________, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._______, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, ______________________, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have

said is helpful for you.

Step 4 美

改前:

We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.

According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.

Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

改后:

According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “__________________________________________________” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

Is a family teacher necessary

My view on exams

注意句式的多样性

请用十种方法写出 阅读很有趣

1. __________________________________________________________________________

2. __________________________________________________________________________

3. __________________________________________________________________________

4. __________________________________________________________________________

5. __________________________________________________________________________

6. __________________________________________________________________________

7. __________________________________________________________________________

8. __________________________________________________________________________

9. __________________________________________________________________________

10.__________________________________________________________________________

插入适当谚语 As the famous saying goes,“……”

1. 患难见真情

__________________________________________________________________________

2. 只学不玩会变傻子

__________________________________________________________________________

3. 早睡早起使人变得健康,富有和智慧

__________________________________________________________________________

4. 有志者事竟成

__________________________________________________________________________

5. 活到老学到老

__________________________________________________________________________

6. 阅读使人充实

__________________________________________________________________________

7. 失败乃成功之母

__________________________________________________________________________

8. 熟能生巧

__________________________________________________________________________

9. 一分耕耘一分收获

__________________________________________________________________________

10. 母爱像一个圆,它没有起点也没有终点

__________________________________________________________________________

开头----开门见山

结尾---升华主题并点题 (把开头换一种方法写)

1. 锻炼对学生有好处

It is good for us students to take exercise…

_____________________________________________________________________________________________

2. 集中注意力学习

We should concentrate on our studies.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________

3. 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法

Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________

如何写好开头和结尾

1. 开门见山式的开头

文章一开头就可以直截了当交待清楚文章的主题是什么。

e.g.

1) “My life at school”(我的校园生活) :

My life at school is both busy and colorful.

2) “How to be honest”(怎样做到诚实) :

Honesty is one of the best qualities.An honest man is always reliable and can be trusted.

2. 中间段是全文的核心所在。1)意思的完整性2)意思的统一性 3)意思的连贯性

段落首句(topic sentence )取到承上启下的作用,统领核心段。

分层论述,把握好层次间的切换,不能次序颠倒、不顾逻辑的随意乱写。

3. 结尾

1、首尾呼应式的结尾

在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。 e.g.

“Water” (水) :

• 开头:Water is one of the most important natural resources in the world.

• 结尾:In one word, water is so important that we should save as much water as possible in our lives. 要避免同一句话在首尾的简单重复, 没有变化。

2. 自然式的结尾

随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。

eg.

“My last New Year’s Eve dinner”(我的上一次年夜饭)

结尾:We cheered for the New Year’s luck and talked with each other for a long time. It was very late when we got home, but smile on every face and happiness in every heart.

3、含蓄式的结尾

用含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考,但意义却非常之深刻。 e.g.

“My best friend”(我最好的朋友) :

We can live without a brother, but we can not live without friends.