2017。2 温州高考应用文和故事续写写作赏析
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树人中学2016学年第二学期高三英语

晨读材料(应用文赏析三)

使用班级:高三 份数:100

编者: 李小琴 日期:2017年2月28日 班级:______________ 姓名:_______________ 温州二模应用文写作(满分15分)

假如你是张文,,你的美国笔友Jack 一家人要来温州度暑假,特别来信询问特色旅游的情况。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括:1,推荐地点2,推荐理由(次数80左右)

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to know you and your family are coming to Wenzhou for thesummerholiday. Aboutspecialattractions

here,I believe Yongjia is an ideal destination.

With fascinating scenery of mountains and rivers, it is a typical county

where dozens of ancient villages lie . You can not only appreciate the fantastic landscapesbut also enjoy the unique local customs and delicious food. Surely the trip will leave you an unforgettablememory.

Looking forward to your arrival soon!

Best wishes,

ZhangWen 文章电子邮件格式:开头________________________________落款______________________

第一段:____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

第二段好词好句学习和模仿:____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 结尾句:_______________________________________________________________________赏析文章连接词过渡__________________________________________________________ 赏析文章词汇/短语表达的准确性/多样性:________________________________________

温州二模范文故事续写赏析:

didn’t answer. How could she explain about the and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. “But I saw you wearing it yesterday,” reminded him . For a moment remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that. Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless. [78 words]

Jenny slowly to the front. She couldn’t think properly . All round her, a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn’t seem at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker’s encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath. “I’m going to t alk about swimming…” Ten minutes later t he whole class stood up applauding Jenny’s wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source 赏析首段首句连接___________________________________________ 赏析首段最后两句(承上启下)_________________________________________________________ —————————————————————————————

第二段连接句_____________________________________________ 结尾句:____________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 其他值得学习的语言表达:__________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文二: Embarrassed, didn’t say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came ’s voice. “Why is ’s on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared the of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain?” She made a request in a tone of begging. [70 words]

Jenny “How could she make it? We’ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it’s just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. [80 words]

(赏析上文并用下划线标出文章的逻辑,表达等)

听力录音稿:Text 1) W: Oh, no! I’ve left my new hat somewhere.

M: I ___________remember you having it at lunch in the restaurant. You _________ have left it in your _____________.

(Text 2) M: What time is it by your watch? Mine reads 9:15. W: Your watch is ____ hours slow.

(Text 3) M: What do you think about traveling by _______ to France?

W: The kids would love it, but I get ______. The _____ is quicker and goes all the way. That’s the best ______ to see the countryside.

(Text 4) M: What’s wrong, Rachel? You aren’t looking yourself!

W: My mum’s got a job in Liverpool! I’ve finally made _______ after years of _______ here. Now _____ we go again. Why _________my mum have a _____? (Text 5) M: __________at last ! That was the last time we had a holiday in the Lake District.

W: It was beautiful! At _______ it __________snow.

M: I would have __________ snow to ___________ ________. We had never seen the sun there!

(Text 6) W: I wish I could play music like you! When did you learn to play the guitar? M: Oh, I’ve been playing since I was _______, and I’m ______years old now. During that time I learned to play the ______ too.W: What about it? That must be really difficult.

M: In the beginning, it really was, but after a few lessons I got better. Practice _______ perfect, you know. For me, the most difficult is the_____________. I once tried it, but gave up.

(Text 7) M: Hi, very glad to meet you here.

W: Hi, have we met before?

M: Aren’t you the woman who _______ the computer lecture at the city library last winter?

W: Yes, it’s me. You look familiar. Were you there ______________then?

M: Yes, sure. I’m so glad I_______your lecture. And I’ve _______________quite a lot from it.

W: Thanks. It’s also______for me to do something ________in my spare time.

M: Oh, I thought you were an IT engineer or something like an expert in this profession.

W: ___exactly, but I know a bit about computer.

M: I thought that it would be________ for me to learn how to use a computer

_______my age, but now I’m ______ e-mails with my grandchildren. They say I am learning fast and well. It’s the ____________thing after my retirement.

W: That’s great. Giving a lecture after work is a good experience for me, because that is a change of pace from my daytime job as a ______________representative. M: That’s right.

(Text8) M: Hey, Julie, haven’t seen you for a while. How is everything?

W: Hi, Gale. Fine, thank you.

M: Why don’t you travel together with _____ to _____? As you know, Cathy will leave our company next month for further education, so we’ve got a _______ _________ in my car.

W: Thanks, Gale, but I’ve found a suitable_______ partner, Ms. Gomez. She is going to move near my apartment next week. So you see it’ll be_____________________ for a ride.

M: Oh, really? That’s____________bad that you couldn’t join us but it’s good you’re taking a car with her. I used to work with her in the marketing department.

W: Oh, did you? I don’t know much about her, but I know ____ sure that she is ____ late for appointments.M: Yes, right. She was doing well in marketing and popular with the colleagues. W: That’s very nice.

(Text 9) M: Hi! You seem busy.

W: Hi! You can’t imagine what I have to finish by next _______! This literature course is so difficult! I have to read two novels by next _____ and hand in a 3000-word essay by next___________.

M: So you don’t want to come to an exhibition with me this _________?

W: I’d love to, but I’m already behind with my writing class because I had a ____ for a week and missed a few lessons. You seem to have loads of free time.

M: Well, we just don’t have as much academic work as you. My college life is _________ compared with yours. There’re varieties of live performances as an art major.W: Yes. I’m__________ with the life of reading and writing every day. M: Hey. Why don’t we stop talking? Just work now. If you have finished everything by the ______, we could go to that new play.

W: OK. I’ll try. And I don’t want to miss the student party on the ____ so I’d better get working.

(Text 10) M: Today we are visiting Woodhill Shelter -- the most unusual animal shelter in Britain. It ______not house wild animals rescued from zoos or sea creatures from ocean parks. What it does have is a lot of lucky and happy cows, pigs, goats, sheep and chickens rescued from becoming your lunch by animal rights groups.

The shelter was set up by Jill and Ben Smith. Neither of them eats animal products, but lives

instead on a plant-based diet. They say it is a kinder and better way to live. The shelter wasn’t much visited until 3 years after it was built, and now it has large numbers of followers.

All the farm workers are volunteers without _____, but get free lunch and coffee in return for

their work. If you want more information about the farm, you can phone 6978325. And if you want to become a ______, you must visit the website and fill in the online form. Posts are ____accepted because letters are easy to lose.