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动静结合

静静结合

As is demonstrated in the charts, the figures present us the information about the (variations/changes and ) comparisons of the units of electricity produced by the

The annotated chart presents us the information concerning the variations and comparisons of .....地点+ 时间

笼统-----具体

动词-----名词

动静结合

动态---主体段落:

单一走势

带有一个转折点

富有变化一条线

简单句

标头:during the first 2-year period, the beef consumption experienced a substantial decline by the extent of (差额)roughly 40 grams from the original data of 220 grams in 1979.

纵轴: the grams of beef consumed presented a downward sloping, with the figures decreasing significantly from approximately 220 grams to 180 grams during the 2 years.

横轴: the period from 1979 to 1981 witnessed/ saw an enormous decline in the beef consumption from approximately 220 grams to 180 grams.

走势: could be found in the beef consumption from approximately 220 grams in 1979 to 180 grams in 1981.

只有一个转折点的复合句

句子, with the following period witnessing a …..

During the first decade, teachers ’ salaries experienced a moderate increase by the extent of 10% to the peak of 50% in 1991, yet the following period witnessing a slight decline to 45%.

句子, after which a reverse tendency emerged, with the figures decreasing back to x.

A gradual rise could be found in the teachers ’ salaries from 40% in 1981 to the

summit of 50% in 1991, after which a revese tendency emerged, with the figures decreasing slightly back to 45% in 2001.

句子( 时间, 走势除外) ,yet ending up with a decline/ rise back to

The teachers ’ salaries present an upward trend before 1991, with the figures increasing steadily from 40% in 1981 to the summit of 50% in 1991, yet afterwards ending up with a fall back to 45% in 2001.

The period from a to c first witnessed a….then a…. in sth.

The period from 1981 to 2001first witnessed a rise then a fall in the teachers’ salaries.

富有变化的一条线:

1. 占比例较大的走势(一半)

2. 特别突出的点(最大值)或者走势 Sth remain stable at x. Sth maintain a leveling tendency at x

Sth wave around x

Sth fluctuate around x.

Apart from the two declines, the goods transported by road, in general, presented an upward slope, with the figures increasing moderately from 70 million tones in 1974 to the peak of nearly 100 million tones in 2002.

After a small rise, the goods transported by water kept a plateau of less than 60 million tones until 1992, with the following period first witnessing a slight decline then a considerable rise to the peak of 62 million tones.

The goods by rail fluctuated around 35 million tones during the 28 years.

After a small rise, the rest years witnessed two plateaus, with the figures being 18 and 21 million tonnes respectively.

Preceded by a small fall, the proportion in Japan remained stable at 3% until 1985, with the following 45-year period witnessing a moderate increase to 10%. Afterwards, the figures experienced a substantial increase to the peak of approximately 27% in 2040

静态----结尾段

共同特征:

From another perspective, it can be observed that

选取最大值:

In 1985, the units of electricity by coal and natural gas constituted the largest proportion, while in 2000 nuclear power substituted them to become the main source for the electricity production.

交点的写法:

There were same percentage/ amount of A and B 时间,with A outpacing B before, while the reverse is the case afterwards.

词:

Surge, boom 迅速上升

, grow, go up, rise, increase, climb

Slump.

Decline, go down, drop, decrease, fall

x>60 2se McD

Significant, substantial, enormous, marked, considerable, dramatic

30<x<60 s g m

Steady, gradual, moderate

X<30 ss

Slight, small

________ sth remained stable at x

There was a leveling off at x in sth.

~~~~~~~~~ wave around x

Fluctuation around x

Plateau at x

Reach a plateau of x

静静结合

静态---主体段落:

数据多

排列: 大---小

分组:明显的划分线

2组 或者 3 组

表格:

大—小

32.14

28.91

18.80

16.36

15.77

分组:明显的数据差距 时间

The expenditure by food, drinks and tobacco varied considerably, ranging from the minimum of 15.77% in Sweden to the maximum of 32.14% in Turkey, with three of the five countries below 20%.

9.00

6.63

6.51

6.43

5.40 Italy ranked the top, at 9.00%. However, the reverse was the case for Sweden bottoming out at 5.40%. A , B and C lied in the middle, with the figures being a, b and c, respectively.

4.35

3.22 3.20

2.21 1.98

, with Turkey ranking the top,

at 4.35%, A ( ) and B ( ) lying in the middle, while C ( ) and D ( ) bottoming out at the lowest level.

Positive correlation

Negative correlation

Apart from Kyoto , there was a positive correlation between the date opened and kilometers of route, with London possessing the earliest date opened (1863) and the longest kilometers of route (394), while the reverse being the case for Los Angeles.

From the chart, we can see that there was no relationship between either the date opened or kilometers of route and passengers per year. However, it does appear the earlier the date opened, the longer the kilometers of route.

There were considerable differences in the figures for the overgrazing. The largest percentage (11.3%) of the land was degraded by the cause. The figures for North America and Europe were relatively lower, being 5.5% and 1.5% respectively.

Deforestation was the most common cause for the land degradation in Europe, with

9.8% of the land degraded by the same way. Less than 2 % of the land was degraded in North America and Oceania.

Over-cultivation is the second common reason for the land degradation in Europe, with 7.7% of the land damaged by this behavior. However, Oceania never involved the cause.

把截然相反的数据分成两组:

The …can be grouped into two distinctive categories, one where A outpaced B, and the other where the reverse was the case. The former group consisted of…. 描述数字

The other category included…… 描述数字