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2010 英语高考满分作文

作文题目

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

注意:1. 词数:100左右:

2. 参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which ,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

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Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。

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Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

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作文:

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动,志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外,志愿者或做家教,教小孩子阅读、算术,或打扫公园与街道,或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗? 请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。

One possible version

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

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不同人都有着不同的习惯,个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求,写一篇120

字的英语短文,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

1. 介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。

2. 习惯与卫生的关系:习惯是卫生基础; 不好的习惯,会导致一些传染疾病传播,如AIDS ,SARS , H1N1流感等。

3. 你的看法„„。

One possible version

It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.

It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.

Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.

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假如你是李华,你学校内有人得了猪流感,正在接受治疗,你校学生非常害怕,请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?

1. 平时外出戴口罩,少去人群集中的公共场所, 避免接触病人等。

2. 勤洗手,保证充足睡眠,多锻炼多运动等。

3. 词数: 120字左右

4. 文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数

参考词汇: 猪流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

One possible version

We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.

We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.

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注意:1. 信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计算在总词数内。

2. 字数要求: 120左右。

人口膨胀population expansion;过度开发overdevelopment 。

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

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Yours truly

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.

We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment. Yours truly

Li Hua

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低碳经济下的环境保护之一

“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念,最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来:创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态,是指在不影响经济发展的前提下,通过技术创新和制度创新,降低能源和资源消耗,尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放,实现减缓气候变化的目标,促进人类的可持续发展。

Protection of Environment

1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。

2. 为了保护环境,3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。

4. 我的看法。

One possible version

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

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13. 外籍教师Lynne 任教期满准备回国,学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师:

1) .请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实,提醒司机(remind sb. of sth.提醒某人做某事) 。

2) .她之所以要确定一下,是因为太早不好叫出租车。 3) .感谢费心,并感谢一年来的关心。

4) .在学校一年来,生活愉快、难忘,很可能再来。

5) .留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆,希望对学生有用。字数:100—120个词。 Hi, Mr. Li,

Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this. I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesn’t show up. I am sorry to trouble you again. Here I thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school. I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students. Probably I will come back some day. I leave some English books to your library. I hope they will be useful to your students.

Yours

Lynne

14. 假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。

赞成迁出:反对迁出:

①.游客多,交通堵塞①.建于1906年,中外闻名

②.郊区环境好②.搬迁易造成动物死亡

注意:1) .词数100字左右,信的开头已为你写好。

2) .可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3) .参考词汇:郊区—suburb

June 3 ,2005

Dear Editor ,

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing. Yours truly, Li Hua

15. 假设你的英文名为Jack ,是英国诺丁汉大学的中国留学生。你负责为在该校就读的32名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的苏格兰之行,为期7天,请你给诺丁汉的STA (Students ’Travel Agency )经理Phil 发一封电子邮件,联系有关事宜。要点如下:

(1)希望能够派车接送;(2)需要一名说标准英语,并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游;

(3)请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况;

(4)你的联系方式:电子邮箱地址:Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn或电话号码:07747745007 注意:(1)词数:100词左右;(2)开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数;

(3)参考词汇:旅馆住宿accommodation ;旅行日程安排itinerary ;长途客车coach Hi, Phil,

I’d like you to organize a trip to Scotland for us. I have here a group of 32 Chinese students studying in Nottingham University, who want to go on a seven-day tour during the Christmas days.

I hope we can have a coach which will take us to Scotland and then bring us back to Nottingham. We also need a guide who speaks standard English and knows Scotland well. I would be very grateful if you can work out an itinerary as soon as possible and tell me about our accommodation, meals as well as how much each of us has to pay. If you have any information, please either email me to Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn or call me at 07747745007.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours Truly. Jack

16. 加拿大高中生David 在互联网上登出启事notice ,希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是重庆实验中学的李华,请在看到这则启事后,用英文给David 发出一封电子邮件。主要内容包括:

①. 你怎样得知他的愿望②. 你愿意成为他的朋友

③. 你打算如何帮助他④. 你盼望他的回复注意:词数:100词左右

Dear David,

I am LiHua. I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture. I want to be your friend. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you. I was born in Chongqing in 1990,I study in the Experimental Middle School of Chongqing and I am good at English.

I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails.What’s more, we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese or English and I’ll tell you the customs,the festivals,the foods,etc. of the Chinese. I hope we can keep in touch with each other.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

17. 假如你是一名大学生叫李华,对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见,请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。字数100左右。开头已给出。

学生心态向往城市,不愿下乡。

就业现状城市人才过剩;农村渴求人才。

就业前景农村天地广阔,可施展才华。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city. Yours,

Li Hua

18. 假如你叫王东,你的叔叔三十年前离开家乡去了美国。不久前,他观看China Report节目,得知中国决定加大建设社会主义新农村的力度,感慨万分,于是发了一份e-mail 给你,询问近来家乡的变化情况。请根据email 内容和提示要点,给你叔叔做简要回复。E-mail 开头和结尾已经给出。

日期:20-03-2006

发件人:Wangguifu usa@hotmail.com

收件人:Wangdong_88@l63.com

主题:T0 Xiaodong

Dear Xiao Dong

How are you doing?

The other day when 1 was watching China Report CCTV at home, I was excited to learn that the Chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside. The report at once took my thoughts back to the small village I once lived in.

The houses were old and low. The roads were muddy and narrow. Villagers had to go a long way on foot or by bike in order to do some shopping or see a doctor in town. Because of very small income, villagers lived quite a plain life, even without TV sets or telephones.

How time flies!. It is 30 years since I left my home village. It must have changed a lot. Would you please write and tell me something about its changes?

Remember me to your parents!

Yours ,

Wang Guifu 要点:①.叔叔离家后,家乡变化很大。②.生活条件愈来愈好。

③.房子大而宽敞,许多人住进了设施齐全的公寓。

④.装了电话,买了彩电、洗衣机、冰箱等。⑤.宽敞的道路连接了村庄和城镇。 ⑥.买了拖拉机、卡车和汽车。⑦.学校教育良好。⑧.政府重视农村城市化建设。 要求:1) 、词数:100左右。2) 、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Uncle ,

I’m very glad to receive your email .

Great changes have already taken place since you left , Our living conditions are getting better and better. Villagers have moved into big and comfortable houses, and many live in well-equipped blocks of flats. Almost all have been equipped with telephones . They have not only bought color TV sets , but also washing machines , fridges, etc. Wide roads have been built to connect villages and towns. Some families have got their own tractors, trucks or even cars. Besides, children can now enjoy very good education.

Our government cares very much about the reconstruction of our countryside . We are speeding up the citifying of the villages .

I hope that you and aunt will come back and have a visit to the new village .

Best wishes .

Yours

Xiao Dong

19. 请以宿舍管理委员会的名义写一份通知,2007年4月2日发出。内容如下: ①时间:4月5日晚上7点。②地点:3号楼103房间。

③内容:学生宿舍安全问题:安全用电、火灾应变、防止失窃等。

④参加人员:每间寝室一名同学。

⑤要求:带笔记本,按时到场,做好记录,并传达给室友。

注意:1)通知的格式已经为你写好,不计入总词数;2)词数:100左右。

参考词汇:学生宿舍 dormitory ,盗窃theft (n. )

Notice

A meeting is going to be held in Room 103 of Building 3 at 7 on the evening of April 5. Problems to be talked about at the meeting include the safety of the dormitories, proper use of electricity, what to do in case of fire, prevention of theft and so on. A member of each dormitory is required to be present. They should take notebooks with them and arrive on time. They should take notes carefully and after the meeting they are to inform their roommates of what is discussed and what measures will be taken.

The Dormitory Committee April 2nd, 2007

20. 假如你叫李平,是一位成绩优秀的学生,你班班主任在安排座位时,让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生作同桌,这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响,团活课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下,并说出自己的观点。 赞同反对你的观点

1.人人有长处和不足,成绩差的学生也有可取之处;

2.相互学习,建立友谊;

3.通过帮助学习差的学生的学习从而使他们建立自信。 1.部分学习差的学生常常违反校规校纪,担心自己会受影响,养成坏习惯。

2.老是问问题,使自己不能专心学习。?

注意:1.词数:100~120,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

2.短文需包括表中所有要点,内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇:成绩差的学生:a slower student

Dear Mr. Zhang,

We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.

Some are for the idea. As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all. However, others don’t hold the same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits. Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.

In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together.

Yours,

Li Ping

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