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说明利弊型作文对策

作文类型与要求:

以某一事物的优点和缺点为文章的主要内容

以考生的评论或者观点作为全文的结论。

在说明事物的利弊时,应该注意条理性。比如我们可以使用对比法或是枚举

法中的句型来展开短文。

在文章的最后一段表明个人的态度或者看法的时候,最好也能提供相应的理

由或者一些扬长避短的方法来减少事物的负面影响。

这类型的作文的写作可以采用以下的模式:

第一部分:引言。简述标题中涉及的某一事物或现象;

第二部分:优点。例举该事物或现象的优点或积极因素;(这一部分除了可

以独立成段外,也可以与第一部分合为一段,或是与第三部分合为一段)

第三部分:缺点。可以考虑用对比关联词引出该事物或现象的另一面——缺

点或消极因素;

第四部分:考生的个人体会。权衡利弊,阐述个人体会或者如何扬长避短的

方法。

经典句型—说明利弊常用句型

1. With the development of science and technology, … has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

随着科学技术的发展,已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题。

2. As the proverb goes: "every coin has its two sides", ....is no exception.

俗语有云:" 万事万物都有两面性。" ________也不例外。

3. Every thing has a good side and a bad side, and ....is no exception.

万事万物有其两面性,而________也是如此。

4. The discussion as to whether the ... is a blessing or a curse arouses most people's interests. __________是好坏利弊问题引起了很多人的兴趣。

5. ...plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world.

______ 尤为重要而引起当今社会的关注。

6. There comes a question: is it a blessing or a curse.

问题是:____是福是祸?

7. There is no denying that every thing has one more face and ... is no exception.

不可否认,每一件事物都有其两面性,其实,______也不例外。

8. Every thing in the world has its own two sides. Without exception, … has both advantages and disadvantages.

任何事情都有两面性,也不例外,有其优势和劣势(利与弊)。

经典句型—陈述事物优点的常用句型

1. There are several advantages in…. The first /biggest advantage is that…

2. The advantages of … can be seen as follow. First … besides …

3. …is playing an increasing important role in people’s lives. For one thing … For another …

4. As we know, ... bring many benefits and convenience to people.

5. There are no less than three advantages in .. as rendered below.

6. Nothing / Few things / There is hardly anything can equal / match with / be compared with … in terms of …

7. … has a positive impact / influence / effect on people’s lives.

8. For all / In spite of / Despite the disadvantages / side(/adverse) effects, it has its compensating advantages / beneficial effects

9. The merits of this is obvious...

10. As is often pointed out that …, it certainly help people … For all the advantages, it also brings other content that ….

经典句型—陈述事物缺点的常用句型

1. However,…, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. For one thing, …

Besides / For another, …

2. In the meantime, we can not ignore the disadvantages of …

3. However, the negative aspects of … are also apparent / obvious / evident . To begin

with,… To make matter worse,… Worst of all, ….

4. Like anything else, it has also its faults / shortcomings /disadvantages / weakness /

problems / harmful effects.

5. However, like anything else,... has more than one face.

6. However, just as everything has two sides, … also has many disadvantages.

7. As the proverb goes, every coin has its two side, … is no exception.

8. Despite the advantages ... has, some people claim, we shall not lose sight of its adverse

effects on...

9. But its bright side should not keep us from examining its dark side.

10. Of course, nothing in the world is perfect, so is...

经典句型—对比事物利弊的常用句型

1. In my case, the advantages overweigh / carry more weight than the disadvantages.

2. Anyway, I still hold … has more advantages than disadvantages.

3. But for me, I think what is more important is its positive side.

4. With the problems and the benefits …has exerted on us, I think what is more

important is its positive side.

5. However, I still believe … has more advantages than disadvantages.

6. In fact, the advantages of / gained in / derived from … far outweigh / are much greater

than the disadvantages / problems … entails.

7. Serious / High / Great as the problem / cost / difficulty mat be, it almost pales /

disappears into insignificance before / beside / by comparison to / compared with ….

8. But all in all, I would say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. With the

advance of society, if we encourage the merits and eliminate the drawbacks, all people will enjoy a better life.

经典范文(08年6月四级作文)

Recreational Activities

1. 娱乐活动多种多样

2. 娱乐活动可以使人们受益,也可能带来危害

3. 作为大学生,我认为……

范文1:

(1) In people’s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.

(2)Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately. (3) On one hand, recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others. (4) On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying or working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.

(5) As far as I’m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.

范文2:

(1) Accompanying the procession of the reform and opening of our country, recreational activities have become extremely abundant for a large quantity of people. (2) There is a growing concern over the matter among the general public.

(3)For one thing, recreational activities may bring advantages to us, and for another, it may do harm to us. (4)We can list a series of advantages of the recreational activities. (5)To begin with, it can enrich, color, paint and decorate our daily life, and we can find the simple and routine life more interesting. (6)In the second place, without any doubt, the recreational activities are good ways for us to make more friends than before, and we can meet plenty of persons through these recreational programs. (7)Of course, these activities meanwhile bring problems. (8)For example, we will spend much time in taking part in them.

(9)All in all, considering all the above facts, my attitude towards this matter is that recreational programs are beneficial for university students. (10)We should join in more recreational activities.

经典范文:

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Private School. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 当前,社会上有很多私立学校和培训学校;

2. 私立学校的利与弊;

3. 你的看法。

范文:

It can be noticed that a large number of private schools or training organizations become a new landscape in education. When you read newspapers, when you watch TV, when you walk on

the road, you will inevitably see lots of advertisements about private schools. There are private schools mainly dealing with foreign languages, computers, music and sports.

However, is it a good or bad thing to have so many private schools? As a coin has two sides, so are the private schools. On the one hand, private schools can meet the special needs of the society or the particular requirements of people. On the other hand, they often bring people extra burden because of comparison and competition.

When asked to decide whether we should have a society without private schools or a society with private schools, I will not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. Although attending a training course will result in the extra cost or burden, it is of tremendous merits in preparing my work and cultivating my skills.