阅读表达改错作文专练
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一:阅读表达

When I met him, I had a lot of anger inside of me. I ’ve lived my whole life in Spanish Harlem ,but in my neighborhood, there are shoot-ups all the time. I know kids who have been shot or beaten up. I have friends who ended up in prison. I could have ended up that way, too , but Mr. Clark wouldn’t let that happen.

Mr. Clark worked long hours, making sure I did my work. My grades rose. In fact, the scores of our whole class rose. O ne day , he took our class to see The Phantom of the Opera , and it was the first time some kids had ever been out of Harlem. Before the show,he treated us to dinner at a restaurant and taught us not to talk with our mouths full. We did not want to let him down.

Mr. Clark was selected as Disney ’s 2000 Teacher of the Y ear. He said he would draw three names out of a hat; those students would go with him to Los Angles to get the award. But when the time came to draw names ,Mr. Clark said , “Y ou ’re all going. ”

On graduation day, there were a lot of tears. We didn’t want his class to end. In 2001, he moved to Atlanta, but he always kept in touch. He started giving lectures about education ,and wrote a best selling book based on his classroom rules, The Essential 55. In 2003, Mr. Clark took some of us on a trip to South Africa to deliver school supplies and visit orphanages (孤儿院) 。 It was the most amazing experience of my life. It ’s now my dream to one day start a group of women ’s clubs ,helping people from all backgrounds.

1. What might be the writer’s genda(性别)? (Not more than 2 words) _______________________

2. What would have happened to the writer without Mr. Clark. (not more than 7 words)

________________________________________

3. what might be The Essential 55 be ? ( not more than 2 words)

__________________

4. . How many students’ names were finally drawn out of a hat by Mr. Clark? (Only

one word) ________.

5 . What is the writer’s attitude towards Mr. Clark? (within 5 words)

_________________________________

6. What doe the writer intend to tell us through the passage? (within10 words) ______________________________________________________

二:改错

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

Looking forward to receive your letter.

三:写作

今年双十一,天猫商城总销售额达350亿,这相当于王府井百货所有门店一年的总销售额。请你围绕此现象,从以下三个方面,用英语写一篇短文。

1. 此现象说明的问题

产生此现象的原因(至少两点)

3. 你对此现象的看法

注意:1. 词数120左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:天猫商城 Tmall

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1. A female

2. She might have put into prison.

3. A book

4. None

5 . She respected/ admired/appreciated him very much./ She speaks highly of him

6. That a good teacher has a good influence on his / her students

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A Possible Version

sales of all the Wangfujing Department stores for a whole year. It shows that the way people buy and sell things is changing and online shopping is becoming increasingly popular.

The reasons why people are crazy shopping online are as follows. For one thing, people can buy whatever they want at a much lower price online and all this can be done by just a click on the mouse. For another, it has become a trend for people to buy things on this special day, so you may find yourself out of date if you don’t do the same.

In my opinion, while online shopping offers us a lower price and a wider variety, we should always buy things we really want and avoid wasting money.