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The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)

The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history bu t it has never been held in china.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of th e Chiese. ()ur government

has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throug hout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shang hai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be go od at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and b ase your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”

2) 产生这一现象的原因

3) 你的看法

Certificate Craze On Campus

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因; 阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。

高分范文

Certificate Craze On Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college st udents. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing,

[2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certi ficate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the em ployment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the ad mission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competi

tion in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certifica tes at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards

[6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qu alifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to ano ther.

[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to cer tificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we shoul d focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical valu e.

【亮点点评】

[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly 意为“随意地,随机地”。

[2]限定词使用恰当,使文章表达更严谨,增强了说服力。

[3]that引导同位语从句,修饰the idea 。

[4]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。

[5]强调句型,此处是强调主语。

[6]which引导非限制性定语从句,充当介词宾语。

[7]用于引出“我”的观点。

[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。

[9]since引导原因状语从句,表示既定的原因,常译为“既然”。

[10]“只是,仅仅”。“而不是”。

佳句临摩

1. 佳句:You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.

临摩:离婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争的事实。

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2. 佳句:Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many em ployers measure a person’s ability.

临摩: 在过去的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步,其中包括健康水平的提高。

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3. 佳句:From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to c ertificates.

临摩:我认为,对于我们来说,更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on t he topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌

2) 产生这种现象的原因是什么

3) 你如何看待这一现象

Students’ Pursuit for F amous Brands

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

The Significance of Expo 2010 Shanghai

So what is the significance of Expo 2010 Shanghai? There is no doubt the Chinese people will present to the world a successful, splendid and unforgettable exposition. Expo 2010 Shanghai China is a great event to explore the full potential of urban life in the 21st century and a significant period in urban evolution. Fifty-five percent of the world population is expected to live in cities by the year 2010. The prospect of future urban life, a subject of global interest, concerns all nations, developed or less

developed, and their people. Being the first World Exposition on the theme of city, Exposition 2010 will attract governments and people from across the world, focusing on the theme "Better City, Better Life." For its 184 days, participants will display

urban civilisation to the full extent, exchange their experiences of urban development, disseminate advanced notions on cities and explore new approaches to human habitat, lifestyle and working conditions in the new century. They will learn how to create an eco-friendly society and maintain the sustainable development of human beings. Expo 2010 Shanghai China will centre on innovation and interaction. Innovation is the soul, while cultural interaction is an important mission of the World Expositions. In the new era, Expo 2010 Shanghai China will contribute to human-centred

development, scientific and technological innovation, cultural diversity and win-win

cooperation for a better future, thus composing a melody with the key notes of highlighting innovation and interaction in the new century.

Expo 2010 Shanghai China will also be a grand international gathering. On the one hand, we shall endeavour to attract about 200 nations and international organisations to take part in the exhibition as well as 70 million visitors from home and abroad, ensuring the widest possible participation in the history of the World Expositions. On the other hand, we will put Expo 2010 Shanghai China in a global perspective and do our best to encourage the participation and gain the understanding and support of various countries and peoples, in order to turn Expo 2010 Shanghai China into a happy reunion of people from all over the world.

In addition, Expo 2010 Shanghai China will offer a wonderful opportunity for cross-culture dialogues. Before the conclusion of the Exposition, a "Shanghai

Declaration" will be issued. This declaration, hopefully a milestone in the history of the World Expositions, will epitomise the insights to be offered by the participants and embody people's ideas for future cooperation and development and extensive common aspirations, thereby leaving a rich spiritual legacy of urban development to people throughout the world.

The Chinese Government will go to great lengths to make Expo 2010 Shanghai China a special event that carries on traditions and opens a new vista into the future. Our motto is: "Keeping in mind the next 60 years' development while preparing for the six months' Exposition." We count on the continuing attention, support and participation of all the peace-loving countries.