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Everyone has some unforgettable experience. So do I. I will never forget that happened in my first English class. All students became excited when the teacher said that everyone had to sing an English song in the class. And I was the exception because I was too shy. I was so nervous that I would not open my mouth. Just at that time, my English teacher smiled to me, said “Don’t worry. Let's sing together.” All my classmates cheered me up. With the encouragement from her, I was bravely enough to begin my singing. From that experience I know that bravery was the key to success.

【答案】

1.experience —experiences 名词用法错误。此处应为”经历”,是可数名词。

2.that---what 名词性从句连接词用法错误。所发生的事情应为“What happened”。

3. the去掉。in class在课堂上,这是固定搭配。

4.And---But 。从上下文来看此处应是转折关系。

5.would —could 。情态动词用法错误。我因为紧张张不开嘴,而不是不愿意张开嘴,所以要用could not。

6.to---at 介词用法错误。

7.said —saying 此处应用非谓语的动词ing 形式,表示伴随。

8.her---them 代词用法错误。

9.bravely —brave 形容词用法错误。

10.was —is 时态用法错误。