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2011考研大小作文冲刺和预测 (2010-12-09 17:20:36)

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北京的天凉了,不过还没有雪,喜欢四季分明的感觉,时间真的有加速度。昨天家中的宽带突然不能上了一问才知道我有半年没有交电话月租了,电话都被撤号了。对着联通的姑娘一阵无奈,无奈时间太快了。

12月4日和5日在南京冲刺班全程面授结束了。感谢南京的同学!全国其他一些地方的同学可能听不到我的冲刺课了甚至连视频都可能看不到了,这点是让我遗憾的,只能在这里把我的预测作文给同学们贴出一些来帮助同学们理清思路,重点备考,尤其是在暑假上过我作文课的同学结合我的强化班的讲解,根据这篇范文来复习和冲刺。

另外,特别要提醒同学们的是,看看2010年第一篇文章的最后一个题:答案是b,

the lost horizon in newspapers

绝对不可能是C : mournful decline of journalism

且不说教育部的答案就是b ,原文的标题也是b

就是最起码的做题常识都应该能排除:mournful decline of journalism

journalism 范围过大了,并且就算用journalism 来替换newspaper ,作者也没有说这种decline 是mournful 悲伤的,原文相反说了这个decline 是inexorable 势不可挡的。

正确选项用horizon 代替了scope.

同学们可以对照自己书,纠正下自己的思路。

说说作文吧,先给一个热门话题关于诚信的问题:

第一段:

第一句:

As is ironically shown above ,in front of a pile of so-called “famous brand” fake leather shoes and under a signboard of “honest dealer” stands a business man, asking an old man “what are looking for ” , with a reply from the old man---honesty/credibility .(with the old man replying that I am looking for honesty/credibility.) 第二句:根据情况自己加不加都可以

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Huluwa ” instead.

You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

Dear Pikachu :

It is my great pleasure to congratulate your graduation with high honors from China carton University yesterday, which I learned from Smurf yesterday. Your own intelligence and diligence have earned you this achievement.

I can well imagine how proud of your parents are now, who have been anxiously hoping to witness your brilliant success. As I understand, you will continue studies in the United States soon. I wish you greater success in your studies and research work.

By the way, as the New Year is quickly approaching, I take this opportunity to send my greetings and best wishes to you for 2011. I hope that the coming year will bring a further increase in exchange of culture between our two countries and will enhance our groups’ cooperation.

I sincerely look forward to continued friendly ties with you. With best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

HuLuWa

附:

Dear Mr. Smith

It is a pleasure to congratulate you on your recent promotion to Deputy Managing Director of

ABC Trading Company.

Because of our close association with you over the past ten years, we know how well you are qualified for this important office. You earned the promotion through years of hard work and we are delighted to see your true ability win recognition.

Again, congratulations and best wishes for continued success.

Sincerely yours

Liming

感谢信

Directions:

You have just arrived in the city where your are going to spend 3 years for your master’s degree. You have a lot of preparation to do before the new term starts, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend, Kevin, you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a letter to express your thanks .

Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.

You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

Dear Kevin,

I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you have offered me during the past weeks. I was a perfect stranger when arriving this city, even not knowing the way to the downtown area. As you know this is the first time for me to come up to this big city. I bought a guidance, but there were still difficulties in going around the city. The streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I thank you very much for your kind help. Yesterday I went downtown alone to buy some stationary and other stuff.

Lesson will begin in a few days. I will come over to see you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.

Yours sincerely

Liming

附:可能的素材

Dear wukong ,

I am happy to report that I have fully recovered from my recent surgery and returned to my normal work schedule yesterday.

Thank you for the concern you showed by taking the trouble to wish me well. It was the encouragement I received from friends like you that helped speed my recovery. Your thoughts really meant a great to me. I look forward to thanking you again personally, and maybe enjoying a few drinks together at an early date.

Yours sincerely,

Kevin

同学们,加油吧,kevin 和你永远在一起!!!

我们一直在努力!

2011考研作文预测

(2010-12-21 13:58:31)

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As is shown in the first picture , on a mountain of university tiredly climbs a college student,

almost finishing his journey in the university, and awkwardly and surprisingly finding that he has to climb

another much higher mountain---hunting a job, bus as is shown below, in front of a post board for recruiting government officials stand an ocean of people, with only one in front of the board for hiring waiter. There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper. Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon. 如图第一幅图所示,在求学的大山上,一个学生疲惫的攀爬着,好不容易快到了山的顶峰,却不得不吃惊且尴尬的发现还有一座高很多的山他必须去爬,那就是找到一份工作。但是在另一幅图中我们看到,在招聘公务员的广告牌前面站着一堆人,而在招聘服务员的牌子前却只有一个人。最近报纸上对这样图画的讨论有很多。这些图虽然简单,但是却确实表明了一个发人深思的社会现象。

The pictures tell us the issue of hunting jobs for college students is increasingly and seriously important in current days. What’s more , individuals, organizations and even the whole society have been attaching due attention to this issue. On one hand, when facing the pressure of finding a job, students are struggling painfully. The burden can cause not only depression but also anxiety and such problems as isolation and solitude. One’s thought , creative thinking and exploration spirit, therefore, have been stifled by pursing measurable high scores and various certificates when confronting this harsh reality. On the other hand , that college students fail to change the conventional view on jobs and to adapt their goals to the reality deepens this problem. Were there no prompt and proper solution to this problem, never would we taste the happiness of the harmonious society.

图画告诉我们大学生就业的问题在当今越来越重要了。个人,团体,政府甚至是整个社会都很关注这个问题。一方面,当面对找工作的压力时,学生们痛苦的挣扎着。这样的负担不仅给他们带来了抑郁和焦虑的问题,还带来了像孤单,孤僻这样的问题。这样一来,面对这样的残酷现实,一个人的思考,创造性的思维,开拓的精神很可能因为追求可被量化的分数和证书的而被遏制了。另一方面,大学生没有能改变传统的就业观念让自己的目标更贴近现实也进一步的加重了这个问题。如果不能及时和恰当的解决这个问题,我们将不可能实现体会到和谐社会的幸福感。

第三段,同学们可以对照讲义自己组织共性的第三段,我写一个比较个性化的第三段给大家。 What should be done to reverse this situation ? For one thing ,instead of just earning their degrees and high exam scores ,college students are expected to cultivate their potentials such as creation, imagination and coordination . Such qualities , though cannot be measured by their college certificates, really matter in their prospective career. For another thing , the educational institutions are supposed to integrate more practical training in their programs so that more competent college graduates can be produced for our society. Above all ,the new awareness that all jobs are equal in dignity and that fame and excellence can be reached at any occupation should be promoted in the whole society .

如何改变这样的现状呢,一方面学生不只是要注重文凭和分数,学生们还需要培养自己的创造性,想象力和协调能力。这样的素质虽然不能用证书来衡量却在以后工作中非常重要。另一方面,教育机构应该整合课程加入一些实用课程,让学生成为这个社会需要的一员。最重要的是,整个社会都应该认识到:任何工作都是有尊严的,优秀和卓越在任何工作中都能成就。

2011 考研作文预测

(2010-12-22 01:38:06)

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As is ridiculously shown above , in the darkness happily runs a man , shouldering the privacy of the

celebrities as a bomb to attract public’s attention , rushing to the news press, with another one from the news office welcoming his arrival. In the middle of the second picture stands a naked man , astonished by the huge amount of personal privacy pouring out of the mobile phone. There has been a heated discussion about these

pictures recently in the newspaper. Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain

thought-provoking social phenomenon.

如图所示, 黑暗中一个人开心的扛着一个写着名人隐私的炸弹,冲进了报社,而门口的那个人正在欢迎着他的到来。另一幅图的中央站了一个裸体的人,正吃惊的看着从手机的屏幕中涌出的大量的个人隐私。最近报纸上对这样的图片有着热烈的讨论。尽管图画很简单,但是却揭示了某种令人深思的社会现象。

The pictures tell us that the intrusion on other’s privacy and revealing it in the press are not only harmful but also detrimental . what’s more , our society fails to attach due attention to this problem. Firstly, some practitioners of low moral standards in the journalism, however, are tempted to focus on other’s privacy , especially some newsworthy celebrities’ , such as love affairs, family relationship, medical history and its like, to attract more readers to buy their magazines or to increase their website’s PV(page view), and

ultimately to lure more clients to pour money for advertisements. Secondly, The regulator and the authority turn a blind eye to this situation and make it the a real grey area. Furthermore , the public’s aesthetic taste of elegance is still far behind.

这些图画告诉我们窥探他人的隐私并把其暴露于媒体上是非常有害的。我们的社会并没有足够的关注这个问题。首先,有一些道德标准不高的新闻从业者为了吸引更多的读者购买他们的杂志,为了提高他们网站的访问量,并能最终吸引更多的广告客户,他们会去关注其他人的隐私,尤其是有新闻价值的名人的隐私,这些隐私包括绯闻,家庭关系,病史等等。其次,政府和监管者对于这一现象往往是视而不见,这样使其成为了真正的灰色区域。进一步的讲,大众的高雅的审美情趣还远未形成。 In my view , we are deeply convinced that everyone has the right to the privacy , the basic right which should be respected, protected and guaranteed by our laws and regulations under whatever circumstances. Princess Diana shows how bad things could end. It is also imperative that the public’s aesthetic taste be so enhanced and promoted that eventually build up a harmonious scene in which people can enjoy their live tranquilly and .peacefully.

在我看来,我们相信每个人都有权拥有自己的隐私。在任何环境下, 我们的法律和法规都应该尊重,保护,保障这样的基本权利。戴安娜王妃的事例就已经表明了事情会有多糟糕。同样,大众的审美情趣应该得到足够的提升,这样我们才有可能最终形成一个和谐的场景,人们能安静祥和的享受他们的生活。

KEVIN 考研作文预测之四

(2010-12-24 00:29:57)

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As is shown above , on the sky fly a group of doves symbolizing the volunteers who are deeply involved in the shanghai world exposition. In the middle of another picture happily walks a young volunteer, holding a heart shape symbol representing the spirit of volunteer. Just as a proverb says, the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the

newspaper. Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon. 如图所示,一群象征着志愿者的白鸽正在飞想上海世博会。在另一幅图中,一位志愿者正高举着象征着志愿者精神的标志。下面有一行谚语:送人玫瑰,手有余香。

The picture tells us that volunteer spirit is flourishing in china. Nearly 30 million registered volunteers in China have made the outstanding contributions to the relief for the May 12 earthquake ,the success of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games ,and the wonder of Shanghai World Exposition ,which has left a deep impression on the world. After the devastating earthquake hit southwest China's Sichuan Province, more than one million volunteers plunged into relief work within days. They went all out to save the victims, provide psychological counseling and donate money and materials. The spirit of volunteerism featuring altruism and charity is a social concept held by individuals or groups who are willing to help others and improve society without pay. Just as many volunteers said , they cherish the experience and love the volunteer work, which enriches their lives , enlightens them and brings them spiritual wealth.

这两幅图告诉我们志愿者在中国大量涌现。近3000万注册的志愿者在512地震,奥运和当下的世博中都作出了重大的贡献。这给整个世界都留有深刻的印象。四川地震以后,(可以是玉树和舟曲) 他们抢救伤员,提供心理救援,捐钱捐物。志愿者精神就是无私的,为他人的,由个人和团体实施的不计回报的旨在促进社会发展的精神。就如很多志愿者说的,他们珍惜和热爱志愿者的工作。这丰富了他们的人生,启发了他们,给他们带来了巨大的精神财富。

In my view, Chinese volunteers are young, promising, proud and patriotic. Their spirit has not only touched Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. I believe that China is going to have more and more

volunteers, especially the youth. With this spirit ,we are expected to witness a harmonious scene in which the people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

在我看来我们的志愿者确实年轻充满朝气,爱国自豪,这些精神不仅感动了中国人民,还产生了世界性的关注。我相信我们将来还会有更多的志愿者,特别是青年志愿者。有了这样的精神,我们一定能见到一个和谐的景象:人们能最大的享受他们的生活。

2010年12月24日

(2010-12-24 00:51:58)

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这篇作文可以用在科技一类的话题。现代生活的改变,如何去面对科技的作用。

As is shown above , in front of a computer happily sits a teenager ,attempting to work on his homework effortlessly , with the help from the internet finishing the job for him. There has been a heated discussion about this picture in the news paper recently. Simple as the picture is , it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.

如图所示,在电脑前坐着一个年轻人呢,正准备着不花力气就把作业给完成,来自网络的帮助很快就完成了所有的学习任务。最近报纸上对这样图画的讨论有很多。图虽然简单,但是却确实表明了一个发人深思的社会现象。

The picture tells us that our life has been greatly influenced and changed by scientific and technological advances, an integral part to every aspect of modern life. What’s more, individuals , organizations and governments attach due attention to this phenomenon. On the one hand, the progress can enhance people’s

understanding on a subject, improve people’s learning capacity and skills, shrink the distance between cities and even continents ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between

people. Technical advances offer all people in the world a quality of life what was unimaginable when

personal computer first appeared 60 years ago. Our factory hum to the rhythm of robot assembly arms. Our banking is done at automated teller terminals that thank us with mechanical politeness for transaction. Our subway trains are controlled by tireless robot drivers. On the other hand, while computers , as have been mentioned above, help students finish the academic job, but this technology ,at the same time , kills their creative thinking and exploration spirit. The effect of board-dependence brought by it causes the young, nowadays, even can seldom spell correctly, let alone the negative effects triggered by porn movies , violent video clips and their like.

这幅图告诉我们,我们的生活已经被科技的进步极大地影响了我们的生活,科技是现代生活中重要的一部分。个人,组织,政府都很关注这一现象。一方面科技的进步提高了人们对事物的认识,提高了人们的学习能力和技能,缩短了城市和城市之间,甚至各大洲之间的距离。使人和人之间的沟通更加的顺畅。科技的进步给世界人民带来的生活在60年前第一台个人电脑出现的时候是不可想象的。我们的工厂里轰鸣着机器人组装臂的节奏声;我们的银行业务在自动柜员机完成,他们用礼貌的语言感谢我们办理业务;我们的地铁由不知疲倦的机器人司机驾驶。(来自考研文章真题)但是另一方面,虽然计算机在帮着孩子们完成作业,但是与此同时也在扼杀着他们的创造思维和探索精神。多于键盘的依赖使得很多孩子很少能正确的拼写和书写。就更不提由于色情电影和暴力视频带来的负面影响了。 解释:这段写的很长,是作文论据让同学们熟悉和运用的。在考场上不必全写上去

加油背吧!

In my view , while we are enjoying the conveniences of the science and technology, we should keep a

watching eyes on those negative practice, and aim to reduce the problems it has caused. Then the benefits of these advances will out weigh the serious problems.

在我看来,我们在享受科技的便利的时候,一定要小心负面的应用。并且想办法去克服这些问题,这样才能利大于弊。