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Ⅱ. 书面表达评分标准:

(一)评分细则

1. 本题总分20分,按5个档次给分。

2. 根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整。

3. 词数少于60或多于120的,从总分中减去2分。

4. 应注意的主要内容:内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构及上下文的连贯性。

5. 如书写较差以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

(二)档次划分

第五档:(18 ~ 20分) 包含所有要点,完全完成了试题规定的任务;有清晰的文本框架,

较多的语法结构和词汇;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全

文结构紧凑, 行文连贯,表达清楚;语言基本无误。

第四档:(14 ~ 17分)基本包含所有要点,遗漏少量次要点,较全面地完成了试题规定

的任务;有较清晰的文本框架,比较多样的语法结构和词汇;行

文基本连贯,表达基本清楚;语言有少量错误。

第三档:(10 ~ 13分)包含大多数要点,基本完成了试题规定的任务;少许语句不通顺,

语言错误较多,但不影响整体理解。

第二档:( 6 ~ 9 分)只包含少数要点,未恰当完成试题规定的任务;多数语句不完整,

语法结构单调,词汇项目有限,语言有较多错误,影响理解。

第一档:( 0 ~ 5 分)只包含个别要点,未完成试题规定的任务;多数语句不完整或意思

不明,内容不连贯,错误很多。

0分:未能传达给读者任何信息;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写

内容无法看清。

2015江苏苏州

六、书面表达(共1题;满分20分)

56.为了配合“足球进校园”活动,你们班开展了一次主题班会.请你以足球迷的身份,根据

(2)短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;

(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息.

参考词汇:梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football﹣themed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.

2015杭州

81.书面表达(根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,内容须包括:对下表中关于(City

宁波市惠贞书院2014学年第二学期3月月考考

书面表达(本题有1小题;共计20分)

目前,环保已经成为社会关注的热点。请结合生活实际,号召人们行动起来,为环保做贡献。请就此为校英语报刊写一篇稿子。

(2)词数:70左右;

(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Now we are faced with serious problems. Therefore, something must be done to help the world._________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Protect the environment, start now!

2015年温州市五校联考九年级(实验B 班)英语试卷

B. (计20分)我校外教Jingkin 要来九(1)班上口语课。假设你是班长,请你在下周的

口语课上向Jingkin 介绍班级情况及同学们对口语课的建议。内容包括以下几个方面:

1) 班级人数(男生24人,女生26人)

2) 同学们的兴趣爱好(男生:球类运动;女生:唱歌、排球)

3) 上周的学校郊游

4) 建议外教谈谈如何提高英语听力及如何与外国人交流。

请根据上面所提供的中文提示完成你的发言稿,内容可适当发挥。

注意:1、词数:100词左右,首尾句已给出,不计入词数。

2、文中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名。

浙江省东阳市歌山一中、六石初中等三中心校2014-2015学年上学期1月联合调研

七.书面表达(20分)

假设我校为了配合创建" 文化校园高效课堂" 活动,最近以" 学生做作业时是

否应该在网上找答案?" 为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成, 但许多

学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示,以“Think

before you search online ”为题用英语写一篇短文。

注意:

1. 词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数; 2. 短文须包括所有要点,不要遂词翻译, 可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺;

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息 Think before you search online

Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2015江苏

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football﹣themed schools by

2020

Thank you for your attention.

【考点】提纲作文.

【分析】这是一篇发言稿,发言的主题是“足球进校园”.根据图表可知此篇书面表达的内容包括:对足球这样运动的了解;包括足球常识和踢足球的好处,至少要有一条自己的观点;描述自己的偶像﹣﹣梅西;谈论自己的梦想.在描述足球和偶像时可用一般现在时态;描述自己的梦想可以用一般将来时态和第一人称.

【解答】One possible version:

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football﹣themed schools by 2020. Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First ,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second ,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health .

I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.

Thank you for your attention.

【点评】书面表达不同于翻译.遇到生词、难句要善于换个角度思考,比如范文中的My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi.也可写成:I want to

be a famous football player like Messi.

2015杭州

【考点】图表作文.

【分析】这是一篇图表作文,要求对City A和City B进行比较,分析利弊,主要时态就可以用一般现在时态,此篇文章的关键就是分析两座城市的利与弊,最后确定一座城市,表格中给出了交通、温度、旅馆、食物以及可做的事情,不需一一描述,关键是要把比较的结果说出来.

【解答】In my opinion City A is a better place to spend my summer holiday.Although the

temperature there is higher,the hotel is less comfortable,and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B,I still choose City A.The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A.I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities.Besides ,it takes us only two hours to fly there,which saves us a lot of time.I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience .

【点评】图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式,显得简洁明了,正被越来越多的各级各类英语考试所采用.图表式作文属于控制性写作的范畴.它控制性强,便于评分.考生应仔细

分析图表,引证典型数据并按提纲要求进行取材与构思.尤其是本篇文章,要求必须分析出一个结果,因此更直接,要求也更高.

慧珍书院

七、书面表达

76. Possible versions:

What We Can Do to Help

We can travel in a green way, such as going to school or work by bus or by bike. Also we can have the habit of turning off the electric products when we no longer use them. It’s also necessary for governments to find out new ways to make energy instead of the old ones that bring pollution to the environment. I think they should stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers because clean water is really important to people’s health.

As a member of the world, everyone should do something for the earch.

东阳

七.书面表达

One possible version:

Think before you search online

homework. But different people have different ideas about it.

Some students agree with it. They sometimes don't know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet, They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, it's easy and it saves time. However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying

the answers won’t improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking. I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the

Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.