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2016-12-10第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume )。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format )学科&网 注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。

2015书面表达(满分25分)

为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART ”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:

1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。

注意:

1.词数120左右;

2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 Hi Worried.: I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.

Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.

And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Jamie

2014第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

某英文杂志正在举办以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 为主题的征文活动,请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。

内容包括:

1. 采访的对象; 2. 采访的原因; 3. 想提的问题。

注意:

1. 词数120左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4. 短文的标题已给出, 不计人总词数。

A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

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A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 假如你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三考中,放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give the TV, cell, or”为题,写一篇英语短文。

注意:1. 字数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

(2012安徽)

假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。

注意:

1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.词数120左右;

3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 Good Afternoon, everyone. Welcome to our school!

(2011安徽)

某校英文报开辟了一个专栏:Experience 。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以"My Approach to Difficulties in Learning"为题,用英语写一篇短文。谈谈自己的一些做法。 要求:

1.词数100左右;

2. 短文中不能出现本人的相关信息。

(2010安徽)

假如你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell )和网络三个当中,放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give the TV, cell, or Web?”为题,写一篇英语短文。

注意:

1. 字数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

(2009安徽)

假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括: ·认为同学们不必为此苦恼; ·希望能够体谅父母的苦衷; ·建议与父母进行交流和沟通。 注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Good morning, ladies and gentleman,

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries._______________________________________________________________________________

(2008安徽)

假定你是李华,David 是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣,来信向你询问此事。

请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下: ◇ 感谢他的关注。 ◇ 简要介绍相关情况。 ◇ 谈谈你的感想。 注意:

1. 词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好。

2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇:环抱购物袋—environment-friendly shopping bag; 关注—concern.

(2012安徽)

假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。 注意:

1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.词数120左右;

3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 Good Afternoon, everyone. Welcome to our school!

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。 内容主要包括: 1.遵守交通法规; 2.注意举止文明。

注意:1. 词数120左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.短文的题目

已为你拟好,不计入总词数

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On the Way to School

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable efforts on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.

I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.

I hope my behavior will make a difference.

一、词汇准确

【北京卷】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff 将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff 写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff,

I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua [名师点评]

这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的,第一,作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感; 第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落过渡自然,令人耳目一新。

【安徽卷】【试题回放】 假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷】 【试题回放】情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。 注意:词数不少于60 提示词:郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。文章思路清晰,要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷】 【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my o

pinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way. 【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文,要求考生把握好图画内容,发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人,要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。 三. 复合句为写作增色

【全国卷】 【试题回放】 假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly, Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下:

1.自我介绍;2. 信息来源;3. 祝贺生日;4. 感谢照顾;5. 索取照片;6. 合适的结尾。

【全国卷II 】【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:

1.地点:距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间) ,100元/天; 双人间(共15间) ,150元/天; 热水淋浴;3. 餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐) ,咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4. 游泳池:全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意:1. 词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double

person rooms,

with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain. 【名师点评】

本文开门见山,首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式,使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which 引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说,文章句式精炼,是篇不错的满分作文。 积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且非常的愉快。 评析:bring great convenience,带来便利。

【重庆卷】 【试题回放】

据报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中,美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy 收到一封慰问信,就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给Amy 写一封慰问信,主要内容包括: 自我介绍 得知的情况 表示鼓励

打算为她做什么 祝她早日康复 注意:

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。 3. 词数100左右。 4. 请在答题卡上作答。 Dear Amy, I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon. Yours, Li Hua [名师点评]

本文依照要求,涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式,如I ’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等,都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章,行文自然而通顺,值得学习。 积累卡片

好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠 好句1. I

m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌,给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

四. 结构清晰, 句式准确

【江苏卷】 【试题回放】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省1,100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生: u 每天锻炼一小时 u 健康工作五十年 u 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意:

1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。

2、 词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 3、 参考词汇:阳光体育活动——a national student sports program; 教育部——the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now! Thank you! 【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段,前两段叙述,后一段发表观点,典型的作文结构。在句式使用上,作者用法多样,使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。